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And welcome to my spritey sprites
ORIGINAL CHARACTERS
I Love this one. Oh, and I give credit to GoldenLuxray for drawing the character first, but I assure you this sprite was made by me!
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Some of the bodies are scratched, if you are interested ask which ones.
No requests yet, not that anyone would want to request lol.
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I think the head for Al Askar looks awkward, but I think with some more practice, you'll do a lot better!
Keep up the good work Scarred_owl, I look forward to see you improve!
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I think the head for Al Askar looks awkward, but I think with some more practice, you'll do a lot better!
Keep up the good work Scarred_owl, I look forward to see you improve!
Thanks. Yeah, Al does look a bit weird. Getting the proprortions right is my worst thing, so thats what I'm trying to improve on.
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They are good, but... not without their faults.
The colors are too bright and blend in with the background. The white can be changed to a type of off-white, and the blue could be a bit darker. I think outlines could be lighter, and more complete. Shading needs work. (I know, I stink in that area too...)
Those are good for a starting spriter, and keep on practicing!
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The things that you can improve are:
1. Like Dawn said, the colors are a bit too bright and blend in with the background.
2. The sprites seem to be at different hights.
3. Some of the out lines disappear and seem to get very pixely and choppy in some areas.
4. The head looks strange on the scream (?) pose.
5. The hair is a bit messy. Try using more smooth shading on it.
6. Try not to make the size of her keep changing. It looks weird when you animate it.
Try to do these things and I think it will be great!
(BTW, love the Heather avatar.)
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The Hair is difficult to do, Yes. It's my main problem. The scream pose is where she goes a bit demented, her face is meant to look all weird and creepy. If you were referring to the one with the had near her mouth, thats yawning. She titls her head back in that one.
Oh and thankee for the advice but seeing as these were all done on Paint, I have no intention of animating them anytime soon. When I get a laptop then maybe I can but for now still poses....
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Yeah, I suggest just opening a sprite that's hair looks the same and maybe try to incorperate those elements into your sprite. Practice makes perfect! Also, I was talking about the one with the hands on the side of her head. So the demented one.
You could go to the request form and ask for someone to animate it. I do that due to the fact that my GIF software leaves a troublesome black background around the sprites.
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Some critique:
She is bet rough on her head. Like, on the hair. (I screw up on hair so I'm learning too)
The second sprite: Her body kind of got stretched out and her eyes don't blend
The 6th sprite (the yawning one?): Her mouth looks irregular.
In general: Her chest crack doesn't blend well.
I love the character though! And good from some made from scratch! Just fix the few things and you might want to save as PNG (if you haven't) and get rid of the white background! But enjoy yourself most of all!
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in the 2nd one: to me i think he breasts get bigger in this one but in the one shes yawning in they seem to get smaller, that and what everyone else said (i dont want to repat '~') your doing wel. :3
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Anyway, These sprites are nice, I only think the lines are strange
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Oh yeah, didn't recognize it. It's only spoilerish when you know what it is I think
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I am right now giving her better hair and darker colours, also working on the height issue.
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The boobs look sometimes a little bit too saggy for my taste (mostly in the first and fourth sprite)
Also I would advise you to redo the outlines to give the sprite a clearer figure.
Well, although I am still not really good in the art of shading myself I still suggest that your sprite still needs some darker shades in some parts.
But overall it's a nice start and the outfit and hairdo of the sprite give her an unique note. Sorry for my harsh critiques I hope you aren't offended I just want you to improve
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It wasn't going to be the final version and getting crit from a great spriter such as yourself is really good and I hope to put it into use.
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its good for your fisrt coustum sprite! 
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Body scratched, hair scratched, made on paint. Face=Mayas, edited.
May make some more poses soon....tell me what you think.
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A suggestion I would give is to make the outlines smoother, but I think it's just me being picky.
You did pretty well on the shading.
You should make more poses, keep up the good work!
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And a new sprite! Have a look I am proud of this one!
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This is probably my best so far. I say that every time but it's true i get better each time I try.
Thats me... With my DS... Made for DCD's 'Court records: The game', you should go and check it out, and even if you don't want to be in it, then you could help with anything you like.
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Yeah, been a while since I updated. I tried to clean up as best as I could, and made my pupils bigger, i hoped this would give more of an AA feel to it...did it work? ;-;
Yet again, most of it scratched with a mouse. All of it in some cases.
And I should give golden Luxray thanks for creating the DS that i put ontop of my character and added pictochat.
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