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Author:  Romeo [ Tue Nov 17, 2009 5:27 pm ]
Post subject:  New stuff! Romeo's sprites.
WELL HELLO THERE


And welcome to my spritey sprites

ORIGINAL CHARACTERS

Spoiler: Saffron V.2
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I changed hair, colours, and fixed the heights, hope you like~


I Love this one. Oh, and I give credit to GoldenLuxray for drawing the character first, but I assure you this sprite was made by me!

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Spoiler: TOTALLY not an Alvin and the chipmunks rip-off...
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His name is Alvin Smarts. It was originally Alex Smarts but that's too obvious, no? Anyway he's assistant to a a lawyer I'm still designing.

He's 17 years of age and is a real smart alec. He enjoys stating random facts just for 'the fun of it'. Although he is a major help on the case, it's hard to tell if what he says is random or has a hidden meaning.


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Spoiler: Lawyer called Ursula >.<
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ALL of her is scratched. Well, the body used to be Apollo's, but I have edited it so much you can't exactly call it that anymore ¬_¬

Spoiler: Her Personality, etc.
Ursula is not a bright girl, but what she has got is a superb trait of logic and common sense. She uses these two together to help win cases. She only wants one thing: The guilty party to be convicted and found and she will stop at nothing to find the awnsers.


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Spoiler: Me!
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Its myself for DCD's 'Court records the game.' Go and have a look if you want.
Everything here scratched by mouse on paint, except the arm holding the DS. I think you know where thats from, hehehe... ;~;

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Spoiler: Random AAI OC?
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Felt like spriting, this is the result...not bad, eh? Edited Shih-na, if you couldn't tell already. I'm thinking maybe she's a movie star?

Some of the bodies are scratched, if you are interested ask which ones.
No requests yet, not that anyone would want to request lol.
Author:  Meenyman [ Tue Nov 17, 2009 11:22 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Owlies Sprites (Unamed OC and Al Askar!)
These are pretty good, for a start.
I think the head for Al Askar looks awkward, but I think with some more practice, you'll do a lot better!
Keep up the good work Scarred_owl, I look forward to see you improve! :godot:
Author:  Romeo [ Wed Nov 18, 2009 7:42 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Owlies Sprites (Unamed OC and Al Askar!)
Meenyman wrote:
These are pretty good, for a start.
I think the head for Al Askar looks awkward, but I think with some more practice, you'll do a lot better!
Keep up the good work Scarred_owl, I look forward to see you improve! :godot:


Thanks. Yeah, Al does look a bit weird. Getting the proprortions right is my worst thing, so thats what I'm trying to improve on.
Author:  SnowWright [ Mon Jan 11, 2010 2:33 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Owlies Sprites (Unamed OC and Al Askar!)
They're both good, but my favourite sprite's the 2nd one
Author:  Romeo [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 2:01 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Ok, Now I have tried everything. *ROMEOS SPRITES*
OMG NEW STUFFS! I DELETED THE OLD RUBBISH! HEHEHE
Author:  Dawn [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 2:31 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Ok, Now I have tried everything. *ROMEOS SPRITES*
Hm... *goes blind*

They are good, but... not without their faults.

The colors are too bright and blend in with the background. The white can be changed to a type of off-white, and the blue could be a bit darker. I think outlines could be lighter, and more complete. Shading needs work. (I know, I stink in that area too...)

Those are good for a starting spriter, and keep on practicing!
Author:  Romeo [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 4:29 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Ok, Now I have tried everything. *ROMEOS SPRITES*
Thank you for the advice. I will get to darkening the blue down a bit, I thought it was too light...I will try to work on shading later.
Author:  Dark Coffee Drinker [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 4:42 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Ok, Now I have tried everything. *ROMEOS SPRITES*
I like the OC and it's a nice start.

The things that you can improve are:

1. Like Dawn said, the colors are a bit too bright and blend in with the background.

2. The sprites seem to be at different hights.

3. Some of the out lines disappear and seem to get very pixely and choppy in some areas.

4. The head looks strange on the scream (?) pose.

5. The hair is a bit messy. Try using more smooth shading on it.

6. Try not to make the size of her keep changing. It looks weird when you animate it.

Try to do these things and I think it will be great!

(BTW, love the Heather avatar.)
Author:  Romeo [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 4:59 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Ok, Now I have tried everything. *ROMEOS SPRITES*
I'm working on height issues as well... Problem is some I traced over Regina, some I scratched. Like I say, I will work on that later. As I speak I am recouloring her with better colours.

The Hair is difficult to do, Yes. It's my main problem. The scream pose is where she goes a bit demented, her face is meant to look all weird and creepy. If you were referring to the one with the had near her mouth, thats yawning. She titls her head back in that one.

Oh and thankee for the advice but seeing as these were all done on Paint, I have no intention of animating them anytime soon. When I get a laptop then maybe I can but for now still poses....
Author:  Dark Coffee Drinker [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 5:23 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Ok, Now I have tried everything. *ROMEOS SPRITES*
Oh I see. But, the color thing needs to be fixed.

Yeah, I suggest just opening a sprite that's hair looks the same and maybe try to incorperate those elements into your sprite. Practice makes perfect! Also, I was talking about the one with the hands on the side of her head. So the demented one.

You could go to the request form and ask for someone to animate it. I do that due to the fact that my GIF software leaves a troublesome black background around the sprites.
Author:  sparkleranger78 [ Mon Aug 09, 2010 10:59 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Ok, Now I have tried everything. *ROMEOS SPRITES*
These are good for a start!

Some critique:

She is bet rough on her head. Like, on the hair. (I screw up on hair so I'm learning too)

The second sprite: Her body kind of got stretched out and her eyes don't blend

The 6th sprite (the yawning one?): Her mouth looks irregular.

In general: Her chest crack doesn't blend well.

I love the character though! And good from some made from scratch! Just fix the few things and you might want to save as PNG (if you haven't) and get rid of the white background! But enjoy yourself most of all!
Author:  Golden Luxray [ Tue Aug 10, 2010 10:58 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Ok, Now I have tried everything. *ROMEOS SPRITES*
good work romeo, i know i was working you when we where doing this and probly shouldf have said some stuff when i saw it but here are something now

in the 2nd one: to me i think he breasts get bigger in this one but in the one shes yawning in they seem to get smaller, that and what everyone else said (i dont want to repat '~') your doing wel. :3
Author:  Romeo [ Tue Aug 10, 2010 11:36 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Ok, Now I have tried everything. *ROMEOS SPRITES*
Thanks all of you guys for commenting I do appreciate it~I did save as PNG...I can't rid the white background either, I only use paint, I could make it another colour but transparrency is something I couldn't be able to do.
Author:  End Quote [ Tue Aug 10, 2010 11:46 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Ok, Now I have tried everything. *ROMEOS SPRITES*
Uhm, what's the GS3 spoiler in the sprites?

Anyway, These sprites are nice, I only think the lines are strange
Author:  Romeo [ Tue Aug 10, 2010 11:51 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Ok, Now I have tried everything. *ROMEOS SPRITES*
The GS3 Spoiler is...

Spoiler: duh
Her 'demented' pose is just a cover of Ghost Dahlia's scream pose. I thought it may be considered spoilerish...I guess not so.
Author:  End Quote [ Tue Aug 10, 2010 11:53 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Ok, Now I have tried everything. *ROMEOS SPRITES*
Romeo wrote:
The GS3 Spoiler is...

Spoiler: duh
Her 'demented' pose is just a cover of Ghost Dahlia's scream pose. I thought it may be considered spoilerish...I guess not so.

Oh yeah, didn't recognize it. It's only spoilerish when you know what it is I think
Author:  Romeo [ Tue Aug 10, 2010 11:56 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Ok, Now I have tried everything. *ROMEOS SPRITES*
I guess so....I will still keep it up there for the sake of it

I am right now giving her better hair and darker colours, also working on the height issue.

Spoiler: Work in Progress
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I used Trucies colours for her clothes, and you may not notice at first but the white on her gloves is slightly off the normal white. Her Hair is derived from Machi, I cannot make my own hair yet so she is stealing his for now.
Author:  Romeo [ Wed Aug 11, 2010 7:54 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Ok, Now I have tried everything. *ROMEOS SPRITES*
Sorry for the double post, but we have an updated Saffron! Please check the first post for it, andleave a comment if you can. Any tips and crit are welcome!
Author:  Magic Monkey [ Wed Aug 11, 2010 8:30 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Saffron V.2 is now here~Romeo's Spritey Sprites!
I would love to give a comment on your updated work but unfortunately the first post spoiler-tag is messed up, could you please fix it? :udgy:
Author:  Romeo [ Wed Aug 11, 2010 8:32 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Saffron V.2 is now here~Romeo's Spritey Sprites!
Ahh thank you magic monkey for telling me that I will fix the mess up~

Edit: FIX'd
Author:  Magic Monkey [ Wed Aug 11, 2010 8:57 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Saffron V.2 is now here~Romeo's Spritey Sprites!
Well, not bad for the start and for a sketched sprite still there are some things others mentioned before...the anatomy or proportions are sometimes a bit messy, especially the arms, well but hands and arms are difficult so I know it takes a lot of practice to make them look good I think. :eh?:
The boobs look sometimes a little bit too saggy for my taste (mostly in the first and fourth sprite) :godot:
Also I would advise you to redo the outlines to give the sprite a clearer figure. :phoenix:
Well, although I am still not really good in the art of shading myself I still suggest that your sprite still needs some darker shades in some parts. :edgeworth:

But overall it's a nice start and the outfit and hairdo of the sprite give her an unique note. Sorry for my harsh critiques I hope you aren't offended I just want you to improve :sadshoe:
Author:  Romeo [ Wed Aug 11, 2010 9:37 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Saffron V.2 is now here~Romeo's Spritey Sprites!
No problems Monkey!
It wasn't going to be the final version and getting crit from a great spriter such as yourself is really good and I hope to put it into use.
Author:  Dämon [ Sat Aug 14, 2010 8:04 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Saffron V.2 is now here~Romeo's Spritey Sprites!
good frankensprite! it is calling like this? :yuusaku: its good for your fisrt coustum sprite! :garyuu:
Author:  Romeo [ Sat Aug 21, 2010 9:42 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Saffron V.2 is now here~Romeo's Spritey Sprites!
Okay, now I have something new to show

Spoiler: TOTALLY not an Alvin and the chipmunks rip-off...
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His name is Alvin Smarts. It was originally Alex Smarts but that's too obvious, no? Anyway he's assistant to a a lawyer I'm still designing.

He's 17 years of age and is a real smart alec. He enjoys stating random facts just for 'the fun of it'. Although he is a major help on the case, it's hard to tell if what he says is random or has a hidden meaning.


Body scratched, hair scratched, made on paint. Face=Mayas, edited.
May make some more poses soon....tell me what you think.
Author:  Meenyman [ Sun Aug 22, 2010 1:11 am ]
Post subject:  Re: New MALE!Assistant?~Romeo's Spritey Sprites!
That's quite a good sprite, considering how most of it has been done by scratch.
A suggestion I would give is to make the outlines smoother, but I think it's just me being picky.

You did pretty well on the shading.

You should make more poses, keep up the good work!
Author:  Romeo [ Sun Aug 22, 2010 1:05 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: LAWYER~Romeo's Spritey sprites.
Thanks Meeny, I will make more emotions and poses of him later.

And a new sprite! Have a look I am proud of this one!
Author:  Romeo [ Wed Oct 13, 2010 7:39 am ]
Post subject:  Re: New Lawyer~Romeo's Spritey sprites.
I have something new for you all

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This is probably my best so far. I say that every time but it's true i get better each time I try.
Thats me... With my DS... Made for DCD's 'Court records: The game', you should go and check it out, and even if you don't want to be in it, then you could help with anything you like.
Author:  SuperAj3 [ Wed Oct 13, 2010 8:09 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Me!~Romeo's Sprites
Work looks good!
only thing is it's messy around the edges. neaten all your lines and edges up and they'd look perfect!
Author:  Romeo [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 8:40 am ]
Post subject:  Re: More of myself~Romeos sprites
Spoiler: big sheet
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Yeah, been a while since I updated. I tried to clean up as best as I could, and made my pupils bigger, i hoped this would give more of an AA feel to it...did it work? ;-;

Yet again, most of it scratched with a mouse. All of it in some cases.
And I should give golden Luxray thanks for creating the DS that i put ontop of my character and added pictochat.
Author:  Romeo [ Mon Jul 11, 2011 9:19 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: More of myself~Romeos sprites
sorry for the DP, but to be fair it WAS a year ago

NEW SPRITES!
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