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I love constructive criticism more than anything, so please feel free to give helpful feedback!
(newer ones are at the top)

20091210 - First OC sprite
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Referenced the female sprites from AJ to get her proportions right, but I don't mind if she doesn't follow the Phoenix Wright style.


20090301 - Dorimaga Franziska x 2, + lawyers from Gokusen and NANA
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Shinohara-sensei and Yasu~


20090123 - ["Rock"] Max, Daryan, Klavier
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- Max as glam rocker (credits to Obsidian Dawn for animal pattern). He has perfect 'hair band' tresses too. I tried changing the color, but his original hot pink pwns all the other hues I had in mind.
- Daryan was supposed to be a punk rocker. I think he's just rocker now.
- I was gonna glam Klavier out too but then I decided to use him to showcase the guitar instead. Damn, he has a strong pinky finger (I suck at guitar hero)!


20090118 - Larry, Viola, Franziska
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- Larry in a new work outfit (I did this for laughs)
- Viola healthy
- Franny in a towel wrap (I was going for a situational sprite, but then I used a courtroom sprite, oops)


Teen Pearl (It was my first attempt at AA sprites, so it has its flaws.)
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I know there's weirdness around the forehead/eye area, but I don't plan on revamping this anytime soon. I'd rather get some of my other ideas out of the way first.
I made this before I figured out how to do pixel stuff in PS (uncheck anti-alias, oooh, duh *smacks head* :yogi: )


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I hate Klaviema >_>

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Wow, these are great! I love the hotdog suit :godot:
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"Hot Dog Suit = Samurai Dogs Outfit". These are very well made, specially the healthier Viola. (My favorite was Franny with the towel wrap...:hotti:)
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Btw, you can post your sprite cup entries :godot:
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Haha, I still love Daft Punk <3

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These are really good!

My favourite is Larry. XD
But you've done a really good job of taking off Viola's bandage too. ^_^

(Sorry, I'm not very good at concrit on sprites :P)
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Ok, as you wanted criticism I'm more than willing to give it. Your sprites are well made a clean. the shading on Larry is particularly good. The only criticism I have is Viola's left eye when blinking, there's a strange black part on the side.
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WOW. This is...utterly amazing. Do you take requests?
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I'd say

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Wow, these look great! Can't wait to see more.
( and yes, you may post your entry, even if you did make the finals, post away. :P )
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Haha fantastic I love the hotdog! And Franny in a towel lmao

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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Hmmm...Here is an idea:
What you get if you compare:
- First game
- Fourth Case
- Part whit missile
- Hot dog larry

Well? That'sright!
Better keep the santa suit on, mah boi.

That hottie doggie is epic win.
Full of it.
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RandomJibberish wrote:
Btw, you can post your sprite cup entries :godot:


Posted. It's older Pearl, circa AJ.

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Ok, as you wanted criticism I'm more than willing to give it. Your sprites are well made a clean. the shading on Larry is particularly good. The only criticism I have is Viola's left eye when blinking, there's a strange black part on the side.


Ah, precise, thanks! I fixed it and added some jaw movement too.
I also fixed a stray pixel I found on Franziska's elbow and some other minor edge pixels.
(lol I'm a bit OCD about details aren't I?)

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WOW. This is...utterly amazing. Do you take requests?


I haven't done any before but I'm certainly willing to try!

I can't guarantee good results though, especially if I have to deal with my weaknesses (ugh, fingers :meekins: ).
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No DSis in the courtroom please.

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Haha these are pretty nice.
Larry made me lol
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OMG teen Pearly is as cute as little Pearly I love love love!!!!!!!

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These are great (I like the Larry one)
Yes you do need to clean up Teen Pearl a bit
you want the face preportion more like this:
(This is a older Pearl I made ages ago)
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Thanks Christie so much for Pearl which I adopted from her :3 Yay Christie
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Love it! She's gotta be the third best game character ever (after Maya and Phoenix) X^)
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Purple Angel wrote:
These are great (I like the Larry one)
Yes you do need to clean up Teen Pearl a bit
you want the face preportion more like this:
(This is a older Pearl I made ages ago)
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thats the one i edited on :P
...ow right...and great sprites btw
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sasaee wrote:
I'm new to Ace Attorney spriting, but it's gotten addictive. I hope they're not unoriginal or anything.

I love constructive criticism more than anything, so please feel free to give helpful feedback!
(newer ones are at the top)

Larry in a new work outfit (I did this for laughs)
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LMAO trying to improve his Samurai Dogs buisness eh?

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Viola healthy
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I wondered what she'd look like without her head bandage.

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Franny in a towel wrap (I was going for a situational sprite, but then I used a courtroom sprite, oops)
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"Foolish fool! How dare you catch me like this!"

sasaee wrote:
Teen Pearl (It was my first attempt at AA sprites, so it has its flaws.)
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I know there's weirdness around the forehead/eye area, but I don't plan on revamping this anytime soon. I'd rather get some of my other ideas out of the way first.
I made this before I figured out how to do pixel stuff in PS (uncheck anti-alias, oooh, duh *smacks head* :yogi: )


" I can slap you a lot harder now Mr. Nick. So you better love Mystic Maya!"

Excelent job on all of them. Pearl could use a little improvement (of all the sprites making an older Pearl seems to be the hardest. I guess it's just the way her face is).
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Purple Angel wrote:
These are great (I like the Larry one)
Yes you do need to clean up Teen Pearl a bit
you want the face preportion more like this:
(This is a older Pearl I made ages ago)
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her face looks really good! pearl has her features close together, so it was kinda hard to extract them and space them correctly.

for some reason, i didn't even think about using iris's body. instead, i used some weird combo of trucy's face outline and squished/tilted maya's body to match trucy's body, then drew over it (since trucy and pearl should be the same age, i figured they should be the same size). lol, i put way too much effort into that one.
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I updated with 'rocked out' versions of Max, Daryan, and Klavier.
And I use the term 'rocked out' very loosely. :rock'n:
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Blue badger guitar needs strings ^^
But Maxie is pretty nice though.
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Zinle wrote:
Blue badger guitar needs strings ^^
But Maxie is pretty nice though.


but...it looks like a gutair from guitar hero (points to the colors at the top >.>)...if it is you might wanna add the strumming bar :P (if its an actual guitar you might wanna change that and take zinles advice)
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The goutar looks a bit low down...

Good, though. :godot:
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No DSis in the courtroom please.

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Bahah nice guitar Klavi =D
I like the sleeves on Daryan, just fix up the arms a bit...
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Well, those last ones were just amazing. I can't wait to see more.
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Lol Guitar Hero. That's epic.
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Klavier is holding a guitar hero controller, if the colorful fret buttons didn't give it away. I would've added more features, but I wasn't sure if i should mess with the Blue Badger's face (my wii controller has a button near the top that would've made the BB look like he had a mole). See, if I add the strum bar, the BB looks like a panda... or Hitler, if you look at it long enough?

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i tilted the guitar here; does it look better?
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SupwithyouSammie wrote:
I like the sleeves on Daryan, just fix up the arms a bit...

lol, I was fixing Daryan over days, so I'm sooo tired of looking at him right now :haha: . I thought he'd look better if he had muscles, but I can't quite get the proportions right. Can anyone point me to a good reference pic of a slightly muscly arm? I've tried googling it, but all I get are pics of very thick guys flexing their biceps.


btw, here's a draft sprite for genodragon1's fan game:
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Det. Alvin Simons
He's wearing an inverness cape, but it looks like it can easily be mistaken for a sleeve. and the lines near his cheeks are his cheekbones (to make him look more gangly).

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Wow, these are amazing! I really like the rock sprites.

Keep up the great work!
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Sherlock Holmes! :gant:
C'mon ya gotta admit that much ^^
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sasaee wrote:
Purple Angel wrote:
These are great (I like the Larry one)
Yes you do need to clean up Teen Pearl a bit
you want the face preportion more like this:
(This is a older Pearl I made ages ago)
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her face looks really good! pearl has her features close together, so it was kinda hard to extract them and space them correctly.

for some reason, i didn't even think about using iris's body. instead, i used some weird combo of trucy's face outline and squished/tilted maya's body to match trucy's body, then drew over it (since trucy and pearl should be the same age, i figured they should be the same size). lol, i put way too much effort into that one.

Yes that makes sense - Trucy and Pearl would be same age - and my one is adultish Pearl...
Thank Cold52. I tried to make a older Pearl like you - couldn't do the face so Cold52 edited it :draw:
And I think your teen Pearl is lovely (and you can never put too much effort into something :yuusaku: I think..)
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LMAO I love the Klavier Guitar Hero one!
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*dusts off sprite topic*
Updated with Dorimaga Franziska x 2, + lawyers from Gokusen and NANA.

The Franny ones are a bit old (based on the Dorimaga Fanbook), so I added Shinohara-sensei (Gokusen) and Yasu (NANA) to spice things up with their... pointing.

And since I don't want to bump two threads with the same thing, I'll be posting genodragon1's Det. Simons in his thread, and slipping them in my own when I have other sprites to update with.

I think I'll give OC sprites a try now.
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The ones with Franziska von Karma are hilarious and the one with teen Pearl is SO CUTE!!! I really mean it, it's cute.
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@ Zilne: That's the point. Some of my comedy takes influence from Mel Brooks who'd name a character for just one joke in the entire film. Allow me to quote:

Dark Helmet:
What's the matter, Colonel Sanders? Chicken?

Anyways, more on subject (so this post isn't just a shameless plug/Mell Brooks fanboying) I really like the Guitar Hero sprite. XD

It's almost as if Capcom made that Klavier pose to say: "Hey, put stuff in his hands."
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to genodragon1: Nice use of Spaceballs quotes.
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Wow! your sprites are fantastic! can i use the Detective? Please :3
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Lamoir wrote:
Wow! your sprites are fantastic! can i use the Detective? Please :3


1.) Don't necro threads.

2.) Det. Alvin Simons would be my character, partner. :jake: But to save you some time: no. He's not for outside use at this time.

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Wow these are really well done!! :godot:
I love the older Pearl, her face needs a bit of work, but I dunno how.
Pearly has such a strange face... It's hard to recreate it on othoer sprites. :P
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genodragon1 wrote:

1.) Don't necro threads.

2.) Det. Alvin Simons would be my character, partner. :jake: But to save you some time: no. He's not for outside use at this time.


1.) What is Necro?!?

2.) Ok i use them not.
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Lamoir wrote:
1.) What is Necro?!?

2.) Ok i use them not.

It means youve revived an old topic...unless the person who started the topic revives it please dont post in it :P
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Cold52 wrote:
Lamoir wrote:
1.) What is Necro?!?

2.) Ok i use them not.

It means youve revived an old topic...unless the person who started the topic revives it please dont post in it :P

For example
Don't go posting in here
It was in the last page :D
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