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| Author: | Dawn [ Fri Jan 15, 2010 12:19 am ] |
| Post subject: | Dawn's Sprites! UPDATED: (July 21, 2010) |
Hey, I'm Spoiler: Updates! Spoiler: Recolours Spoiler: Ace Attorney Cast Edits ![]() Trace V2 Spoiler: ![]() Spoiler: Libby Reid Spoiler: OCs that stay here until I give them more than one pose Spoiler: Diego Armado Spoiler: Trucy outfits Spoiler: AA Pokemon Sprites Spoiler: Mini-sprites Aaaaandd, we can't forget the evidence. Spoiler: Evidence Spoiler: Locations Comments and crits are welcome here. :D Spoiler: And a little note Spoiler: If you want to make requests... So... Requests are ON Spoiler: Finished requests |
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| Author: | Raul Paz [ Fri Jan 15, 2010 12:26 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! |
Wow, they are very good, the recolour is very very good , but they looks so small
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| Author: | Auraion [ Fri Jan 15, 2010 12:27 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! |
Cool, but they're too small also, remember to save in .PNG format |
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| Author: | Dawn [ Fri Jan 15, 2010 12:29 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! |
Thanks guys. And Auraion, they are in PNG format. And can someone tell me how to get rid of the black and white bg in GIMP? |
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| Author: | Tap [ Fri Jan 15, 2010 12:29 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! |
Good start but don't use a thumbnail for the image itself. --GIMP-- Removing black backgrounds 1. First go to Layers and click Alpha Layer or what ever it is called. 2. Click the Fuzzy wand tool and click on any white area 3. Press Ctrl+x 4. Repeat for all non-transparent areas. See Percei's guide for more details. |
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| Author: | Dawn [ Mon Jan 18, 2010 2:19 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! |
Update! First edit... Spoiler: Edit |
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| Author: | Auraion [ Tue Jan 19, 2010 6:01 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! |
Dragonclaw23 wrote: Update! First edit... Spoiler: Edit haha i like this sprite... she's cute |
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| Author: | Dawn [ Mon Jan 25, 2010 5:47 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! UPDATED: 1/17/10 |
It's an update! ![]() I might need to work on him more, but here it is. :D |
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| Author: | Dawn [ Sun Jan 31, 2010 12:53 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! UPDATED: 1/25/10 |
My first attempt at an Older Pearly. Spoiler: |
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| Author: | Tap [ Sun Jan 31, 2010 1:06 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! UPDATED: 1/25/10 |
Dragonclaw23 wrote: My first attempt at an Older Pearly. Spoiler: Nice but the shading on the hair needs work and use different eyes as she is too young in that sprite. |
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| Author: | Ace Fresca [ Sun Jan 31, 2010 1:07 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! UPDATED: 1/30/10 |
Older Pearly actually looks pretty good. Her face hasn't changed at all, but chances are that's how Pearly will end up. The magatama looks really cool. I keep staring at it.
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| Author: | Dawn [ Tue Feb 02, 2010 2:04 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! UPDATED: 1/30/10 |
UPDATE! I was erm, evil to Polly. ![]()
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| Author: | Dawn [ Sat Feb 06, 2010 4:03 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! UPDATED: 2/1/10 |
I updated with a blinking animation and redid my William Sprite. Ugh, I hate doubleposting by the way. Sorry. |
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| Author: | Meenyman [ Sat Feb 06, 2010 4:27 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! UPDATED: 2/1/10 |
Dragonclaw23 wrote: My first attempt at an Older Pearly. Spoiler: Wow, that Older Pearly looks great! It's clean, and the shaping is done quite well. One thing I would say is to shade the hair a bit better, and it looks great from there! |
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| Author: | Dawn [ Sun Feb 07, 2010 10:56 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! UPDATED: 2/1/10 |
Thanks guys for all your comments! I've cleaned up Pearly's hair a little, and changed the color of the bang. ![]() Also, I give you an OC, Libby Reid!
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| Author: | Auraion [ Sun Feb 07, 2010 11:38 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! UPDATED: 2/1/10 |
Dragonclaw23 wrote: Also, I give you an OC, Libby Reid! ![]() She could be less Adrian-like. hehehe i like pearls. |
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| Author: | Dawn [ Tue Feb 09, 2010 12:22 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! UPDATED: 2/7/10 |
Thanks Auraion! So taking your advice, I tried to make Libby less 'Adrian-like' so maybe, it's better. Really depends on your opinions though. ![]() She might be a defendant in my sprite comic... if I ever get around to making it... And a defense attorney by the name of Trace Lumiens.
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| Author: | Auraion [ Tue Feb 09, 2010 3:37 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! UPDATED: 2/7/10 |
Dragonclaw23 wrote: Thanks Auraion! So taking your advice, I tried to make Libby less 'Adrian-like' so maybe, it's better. Really depends on your opinions though. ![]() She might be a defendant in my sprite comic... if I ever get around to making it... And a defense attorney by the name of Trace Lumiens. ![]() They're cool!! *Thumbs up* Tracey's hair is awesome. |
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| Author: | Dawn [ Thu Feb 11, 2010 12:15 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! UPDATED: 2/7/10 |
Thanks Auraion. And there's yet another update. Spoiler: New poses I changed this post so you could see what I added. |
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| Author: | Dawn [ Sun Feb 14, 2010 4:16 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! UPDATED: 2/10/10 |
Gah! Stop making me doublepost! But I give you another update. New poses for Libby and Trace. Spoiler: |
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| Author: | Auraion [ Sun Feb 14, 2010 4:24 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! UPDATED: 2/13/10 |
I didn't see the last update, but it's cool. Haha, small coincidences with the "Thinking pose" lol Dragonclaw23 wrote: Spoiler: About this one, I suggest that you change her eyes to make her look more "Surprised" She looks like she's yawning Keep up your work! |
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| Author: | Dawn [ Sun Feb 21, 2010 3:29 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! UPDATED: 2/13/10 |
Just two updates. I'm lazy like that, and I don't get around to sprite until the weekends. Spoiler: And a question, should Panye be PINK or PURPLE? Edit: Here's what the dragon pin supposed to look like.
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| Author: | Chloe [ Fri Mar 05, 2010 12:18 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dragonclaw's Sprites! UPDATED: 2/21/10 |
They're cute. The Payne one made me lol. |
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| Author: | Dawn [ Mon Mar 08, 2010 12:52 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dawn's Sprites! UPDATED: 2/21/10 |
I'm still alive, don't worry! Here's an edited version of the Hickfield clinic, which has no people, or even looks like an hospital, and a random witness that forgot to redye his hair. ![]()
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| Author: | Untaken Fingerprint [ Mon Mar 08, 2010 1:43 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dawn's Sprites! UPDATED: 2/21/10 |
Dawn wrote: ![]() Usually there's a a bit of transparency to the monocle/glasses type things, but otherwise he looks very christmas-y. PS. I love your attorney Design. |
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| Author: | Dawn [ Mon Mar 08, 2010 2:37 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dawn's Sprites! UPDATED: 2/21/10 |
Untaken Fingerprint wrote: Dawn wrote: ![]() Usually there's a a bit of transparency to the monocle/glasses type things, but otherwise he looks very christmas-y. PS. I love your attorney Design. Thanks, and I didn't add transparency because I wanted the monocle to cover one of his eyes. And I made up a story about Christmas and him that I'm not going to say here... and I'll redo my Case 1 witness for my sprite comic. |
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| Author: | Dawn [ Thu Mar 11, 2010 12:38 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dawn's Sprites! UPDATED: 3/7/10 |
Just one new sprite. Spoiler: |
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| Author: | Ben Credable (PI) [ Thu Mar 11, 2010 12:51 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dawn's Sprites! UPDATED: 3/10/10 |
Thw're all looking really good Dawn. I can't wait to see them in the Sprite Comics. |
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| Author: | Dawn [ Fri Mar 12, 2010 4:53 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dawn's Sprites! UPDATED: 3/10/10 |
Thanks Ben. Anyways, I'm working on the DA:AA game for now, and tried my hand at a Diego bench sprite. Spoiler: Yes, I know he's on the wrong side, but... it's just a first try. Problems with it: hair and face. |
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| Author: | Zinle [ Fri Mar 12, 2010 4:58 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dawn's Sprites! UPDATED: 3/10/10 |
Is here a nice way to say this? The face sucks...Sorry but that's at least my opinnion. This is what you could try: Don't try to scratch his nose and add him two eyes. Instead, try using Phoenix's eye(s) and his nose on that face. That SHOULD do it. |
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| Author: | Dawn [ Sat Mar 13, 2010 11:10 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dawn's Sprites! UPDATED: 3/10/10 |
Took your advice, and fix'd the sprite, Zinle. Looks better, but something's bothering me about his forehead...
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| Author: | Zinle [ Sun Mar 28, 2010 3:04 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dawn's Sprites! UPDATED: 3/13/10 |
Compare it to frontal one, then imagine him sideways, then remember there's an aid version compare that and this one edit like that ^^ |
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| Author: | Dawn [ Sun Mar 28, 2010 3:07 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dawn's Sprites! UPDATED: 3/13/10 |
>.> Well the bump button appeared. Just didn't know what the heck would happen. Anyways, I'm back to spriting after a long month with a particularly evil solo that I just did today, and then there's a report that I have to hand in. And... just to polish up a bit, here's a edited Trucy. So, can anyone give me a bit of an advice on shading and anything else you see wrong? (Sorry if I sounded grumpy, I'm tired right now.) |
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| Author: | Chesu [ Sun Mar 28, 2010 4:45 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dawn's Sprites! UPDATED: 3/13/10 |
I'm far from being an expert, but a few things do catch my eye... Her clavicle is shaded a little too much, making it look like she's severely straining her neck muscles. Her upper arms are virtually unshaded, which makes where they're shaded from the cloth of her shirt look almost beveled. Kind of like she's wearing shoulder length flesh-colored rubber gloves, actually. Maybe I'm just imagining it, you should get other opinions before trying to change that. The big one, though, is the lighting. Looking at her clothes, the light source is directly to the left. Looking at her face, the light source is directly to the right. Looking at her arms, the light source is directly above. You should make sure that the shading on entire body is consistent with its perceived light source. I hope that helps you! |
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| Author: | DarkCoffeeJazz [ Tue Mar 30, 2010 10:53 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dawn's Sprites! UPDATED: 3/27/10 |
I was wondering if you could help me out with something. Thanks in advance, whatever you decide. Spoiler: By the way, he uses Godot's jawline, but the rest of the face was from Wright, sans edits I did to eyes, nose, etc. Spoiler: Reference |
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| Author: | Dawn [ Tue Mar 30, 2010 10:57 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dawn's Sprites! UPDATED: 3/27/10 |
DarkCoffeeJazz wrote: I was wondering if you could help me out with something. Spoiler: By the way, he uses Godot's jawline, but the rest of the face was from Wright, sans edits I did to eyes, nose, etc. Spoiler: Reference Sure, I can do it. Anyways, for the beard, it'll be easier if we keep it at a goatee size so it doesn't really clutter the face. I'll get working on it over spring break. (which is a couple days away, so don't worry!) |
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| Author: | DarkCoffeeJazz [ Tue Mar 30, 2010 11:02 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dawn's Sprites! UPDATED: 3/27/10 |
Quote: Sure, I can do it. Anyways, for the beard, it'll be easier if we keep it at a goatee size so it doesn't really clutter the face. I'll get working on it over spring break. (which is a couple days away, so don't worry!) Oh, and I edited my post before I saw yours, but if you could do a matching Profile Icon as well, that'd be great. But it's not required since Profile Icons are easier to do. (Yeah, Phoenix's Profile Icon would be best for that I think). Whether you animate his pose to talk as well is up to you, but as long as I have the sprites I can animate it myself, so don't worry about that too much. Oh yeah, and the beard is supposed to be the chin part of the goatee, but you can make it as short as you want. This guy's name is Rook Weslayen, by the way. Again, thanks in advance. :D |
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| Author: | Dawn [ Wed Mar 31, 2010 9:02 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dawn's Sprites! UPDATED: 3/27/10 |
Hmmm... well, might as well post my first try here, Coffee, so here it is. Spoiler: Is that about right? |
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| Author: | DarkCoffeeJazz [ Wed Mar 31, 2010 9:46 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dawn's Sprites! UPDATED: 3/27/10 |
Dawn wrote: Hmmm... well, might as well post my first try here, Coffee, so here it is. Spoiler: Is that about right? That actually looks pretty good. For his hair, it would be cool if you could add a slight sideburn that stops about the level of the bottom of his ear. But that's the only addition to his hair I'd like. As far as his hairline goes, less of those triangles would be better. I'd like a smoother hairline. The rest looks good to me, for a first try sprite. His face needs to be a bit sharper I think. Like his nose. I want him to stand out from Phoenix in the end. Other than that, everything else seems to be fine. (yeah, I know, it's a first try sprite, so of course it'll bear resemblances to the base sprite, haha.) Now that I see what kind of undershirt you're using, I think maybe something should be there. A loose, red tie might work. Loose, like in the style of Gumshoe and Spark Brushell. The color red could be the same red as Diego's shirt. However, that's not required and I could always add it myself later. This is just me voicing my thoughts. Thanks in advance, the work you've done so far is awesome and I appreciate it all. Can't wait to see the updated sprite. By the way, Ceres has a few Diego Bench sprites you could take a look at, for a reference as far as the forehead and face fits on Diego. Of course I'm not encouraging theivery, naturally. But personally, I think he has the proportions down. I think I put a link in the DA: AA game thread, if you want to take a peek. |
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| Author: | Dawn [ Wed Mar 31, 2010 10:00 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dawn's Sprites! UPDATED: 3/27/10 |
Thanks, I thought I would post what I had so far, and then ask you for the details to make it better. I'll add the tie and color it a darker red than the Diego palette I have now. As for the Diego bench sprites, I'll start it over... say, about... summer vacation? Technically, the only things that are keeping me going till then is pretzels and AAI's soundtrack. |
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