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.:Lux's Sprites [»Updated! 3/2/10 New OC!]Topic%20Title
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Hello! Seems you've found your way to my sprite page.
I still consider myself as a beginner so sorry for the n00by sprites. 8D. Critique/suggestions/advice is loved.

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.:Viola Edits
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.:Franziska (Alternate Outfit)
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.:Pearl Edit
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.:Maya Edit (3-5)
I still need to change her magatama color.
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Image .:Unnamed Attorney (Work in Progress) (Name Pending)
Hes mostly made from scratch except for his arm (Apollo's) and head and hair (Kristoph)
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.:Courtroom Overview (W/ Unnamed Lawyer)
I made this when I took a break from making the attorney. (His base is Apollo's) I'm not sure if they are all in the right positions. Especially the jury. Also, can anyone help me animate the jury?
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Based on young!Ema mostly and I custom-made most of it except for the notepad, vest, ribbon, and skirt.
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.:Namine (Kingdom Hearts)
The only thing thats bothering me is the face (of course :payne:) and her left arm. Its looking a little chubby. lol.
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Re: Thesoulle's SpritesTopic%20Title
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Well, since they're simple edits, there's not much I can say. Well, the only problems I see is the shading on her hair (that you said you were horrible at, but, from the looks of it, it could be worse). "With the Headband" has the problem of there not being much darker shading on the inside, which would be below the headband. As for "Without Bandages", there is a lot of dark shading on the top of the head. She could use a lttle bit more clear color there. But, since you're a beginner, I can forgive you. Time and practice bring better results.
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Not bad :jake: but the highlight on the front of her hair looks a bit out of place. Placing more highlights in other places should even it out though.
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I totally agree with the above two posters. Considering you are a beginner, it's still a good effort. Of course these sorts of things take time and I guarantee if you stick at it you'll improve and learn the ways of shading. Good job and keep us posted with more sprites! :phoenix:
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Thank you for the feedback everyone!
I'll keep working on sprites, see if I improve or not. :pearl:

Cardiovore, I greatly admire your sprites. I hope that I can make my sprites like yours.
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The Unnamed attorney seems interesting. :phoenix:
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Agreedo.
It'll be interesting to see complete version.
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Well, the sketch of the attorney seems to be pretty good, but, as the others said, it'd be interesting to see the complete, colored version.
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No too bad, but like the others said, I'd add more light colors to Viola's un-bandaged hair.
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I'll continue to work on it and post up the finished one of the unnamed lawyer. :garyuu:
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No too bad, but like the others said, I'd add more light colors to Viola's un-bandaged hair.

I was thinking that also as I thought there was too much dark on her hair. I'll go and edit that later.
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Added in a Franziska sprite I edited. Hopefully I can get my OC up and colored. :garyuu:
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Franny looks pretty nice. As you've already said, her shoulders still need a little bit of work, but except for that, it is pretty good. As for Naminé (Who'd ever imagined I'd find a KH fan around here) , it's a good idea for now. She still needs work on her shading, and at her face and arms. But it looks nice. Let's see how this is going to turn out.
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The trouble with Franny's shoulders I find to be the lack of shading.
Her right shoulder (our left) could use a little more shading than the other to suggest that it's a bit more distant.
Apart from that, it's a great look for her. Well done! :garyuu:
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Hybrid~Fusion wrote:
Franny looks pretty nice. As you've already said, her shoulders still need a little bit of work, but except for that, it is pretty good. As for Naminé (Who'd ever imagined I'd find a KH fan around here) , it's a good idea for now. She still needs work on her shading, and at her face and arms. But it looks nice. Let's see how this is going to turn out.

I was bored out of my mind when I made Naminé. (You could call me a KH fan) I'll be sure to work on it. :garyuu:
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The trouble with Franny's shoulders I find to be the lack of shading.
Her right shoulder (our left) could use a little more shading than the other to suggest that it's a bit more distant.
Apart from that, it's a great look for her. Well done! :garyuu:

Yes, GIMP was acting mean to me when I was editing her. I'll be sure to work on her more. Maybe add a few more things to her outfit. :will:

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I'm not sure what style to pursue for this one. The first one, I think is AJ styled and the other one is PW styled. Please tell me which one I should pursue on and any improvements for both of them. Thank you. (:
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It's a good starting point.
And you will know the truth...and the truth will set you free.
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Well yeah, he looks good. I wonder how it will look like after some shading...
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The first one needs darker shading.
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Hybrid~Fusion wrote:
Well yeah, he looks good. I wonder how it will look like after some shading...

Auraion wrote:
The first one needs darker shading.

Yes, yes. And heres what I've been up to. Its my first blinking sprite ehe. His shading still bothers me and theres some parts I want to fix still, but I just wanted to show you guys how much I've been working on it. :yogi:
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Well...Good for you; I guess.
It's not bad, but still need some work though.

And btw...Why it has over 140 colors already?
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Zinle wrote:
Well...Good for you; I guess.
It's not bad, but still need some work though.

And btw...Why it has over 140 colors already?


Thank you Zinle. And what do you mean by having over 140 colors? :eh?:

Also, added some new edited sprites.

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I still need to change the color of her magatama. :sadshoe:
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Well...Good for you; I guess.
It's not bad, but still need some work though.

And btw...Why it has over 140 colors already?


Thank you Zinle. And what do you mean by having over 140 colors? :eh?:


Um, Zinle is referring to that you've already added the basic colour to it but it happens to have more than 140 unique colours. Since you use a very basic palette for first colouring scratch sprites, you should have something like 8-12 colours only.

I'll give you an example with a scratch sprite I've been slowly working on. Look at the second image and feel free to check the amount of colours in the second sprite. It has about 12 basic colours from the palette I've picked. I think this is what Zinle is meaning.

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I think I haven't commented but nice sprites :)
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^
Ok, I didn't understand a half ya wrote on there,
(Propably because I was too lazy to read only half of it)
but something like that, yes.

Also...UI'd suggest using even a bit brighter colors on the suit.
It's bit too dark.
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Ok, I didn't understand a half ya wrote on there,
(Propably because I was too lazy to read only half of it)
but something like that, yes.

Also...UI'd suggest using even a bit brighter colors on the suit.
It's bit too dark.


What I type at night is much different then what goes through my head. Aha, uh yeah, to simplify, select 8-12 very basic colours and then create your palette from them. Save in .gif at the start as well. It helps later on :)
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Zinle wrote:
Also...UI'd suggest using even a bit brighter colors on the suit.
It's bit too dark.

Alright. I'll keep that in mind when I re-edit him. Thanks. :redd:

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What I type at night is much different then what goes through my head. Aha, uh yeah, to simplify, select 8-12 very basic colours and then create your palette from them. Save in .gif at the start as well. It helps later on :)

Ohh! Thanks for explaining Tap. :D
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Added new OC. :D [Sorry for double-post]
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Based on young!Ema and made most of the outfit except for the ribbon and the vest. Also used Ema's notepad.
Advice/critique/suggestions are loved. (Even if they're harsh. :sadshoe: )
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The left arm seems a little odd.
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The bottom of the sprite is a bit bright... maybe it's supposed to be like that?
But apart from that and the shape of the left arm, she looks amazing. Good job!
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