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Dawn's Sprites! UPDATED: (July 21, 2010)Topic%20Title
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Hey, I'm Dragonclaw Dawn, and this is my sprite page. And it will be updated when I feel like it. :D Requests are okay, but none too complicated. And sometimes, I'm slow on this, so bear with me.

Spoiler: Updates!
1/14/10: Made topic and added some recolors.
1/17/10: Edit of Ema Skye. Got rid of her bow and accidentally colored part of her hair blue.
1/25/10: Added an OC.
1/30/10: Added Older!Pearly :D
2/1/10: Added a recolored Apollo and a prosecutor.
2/5/10: Added Valkryie's blinking animation and reedited William.
2/7/10: Added a fixed Pearly and an OC, Libby Reid
2/8/10: Redid Libby, and added Trace Lumiens.
2/10/10: New poses.
2/13/10: New poses.
2/21/10: Pink!Paynenette and random OC.
3/7/10: Random witness and background.
3/10/10: Added new OC.
3/12/10: Added Diego bench.
3/13/10: Fix'd Diego and added a couple recolors for a game.
3/27/10: Added a Trucy outfit...
3/?/10: Finished a request.
4/3/10: added a pkmn sprite of Wright
4/30/10: Trace V2 and request finished.


Spoiler: Recolours
I decided to just link them, because I'm having problem resizing them.
Maya recolor - http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/5307/mayarecolor.png
Lana recolor 1 - http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/7955/lanaedit1.png
Lana recolor 2 - http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/7955/lanaedit1.png


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What have I done?!!


Spoiler: Ace Attorney Cast Edits
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Ema in blue glasses and she's dyed her hair too.

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Pearly older!
I think I fixed the hair, but here's Pearly again.
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Trace V2
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Spoiler: Libby Reid
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My first try

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And a better reedit.

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Spoiler: OCs that stay here until I give them more than one pose
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Spoiler: Diego Armado
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Spoiler: Trucy outfits
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Spoiler: AA Pokemon Sprites
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Spoiler: Mini-sprites
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Aaaaandd, we can't forget the evidence.
Spoiler: Evidence
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Spoiler: Locations
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Comments and crits are welcome here. :D

Spoiler: And a little note
I don't mind if you use my sprites, but ask first, and you have to have a reason first too. Also, the one background in the location section is okay if you want to edit it or use it for something.


Spoiler: If you want to make requests...
I'm taking requests, and depending on the request, I'll either do it or not. So request away if ya want!


So... Requests are ON

Spoiler: Finished requests
Image Rook W. as requested by DarkCoffeeJazz
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Red Godot sheet - godot_125

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Wow, they are very good, the recolour is very very good , but they looks so small :eh?:
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Cool, but they're too small
also, remember to save in .PNG format
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Thanks guys.
And Auraion, they are in PNG format. And can someone tell me how to get rid of the black and white bg in GIMP?
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Good start but don't use a thumbnail for the image itself.

--GIMP--

Removing black backgrounds


1. First go to Layers and click Alpha Layer or what ever it is called.
2. Click the Fuzzy wand tool and click on any white area
3. Press Ctrl+x
4. Repeat for all non-transparent areas.

See Percei's guide for more details.
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Update! First edit...

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Dragonclaw23 wrote:
Update! First edit...

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haha i like this sprite... she's cute
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It's an update!

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I might need to work on him more, but here it is. :D
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My first attempt at an Older Pearly.

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Dragonclaw23 wrote:
My first attempt at an Older Pearly.

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Nice but the shading on the hair needs work and use different eyes as she is too young in that sprite.
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Older Pearly actually looks pretty good. Her face hasn't changed at all, but chances are that's how Pearly will end up.

The magatama looks really cool. I keep staring at it. :eh?:
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UPDATE! I was erm, evil to Polly. :gant:

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I updated with a blinking animation and redid my William Sprite.
Ugh, I hate doubleposting by the way. Sorry.
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Dragonclaw23 wrote:
My first attempt at an Older Pearly.

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Wow, that Older Pearly looks great! It's clean, and the shaping is done quite well. One thing I would say is to shade the hair a bit better, and it looks great from there!
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Thanks guys for all your comments!

I've cleaned up Pearly's hair a little, and changed the color of the bang.

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Also, I give you an OC, Libby Reid!


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Dragonclaw23 wrote:
Also, I give you an OC, Libby Reid!
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She could be less Adrian-like.
hehehe i like pearls.
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Thanks Auraion!

So taking your advice, I tried to make Libby less 'Adrian-like' so maybe, it's better. Really depends on your opinions though.

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She might be a defendant in my sprite comic... if I ever get around to making it...

And a defense attorney by the name of Trace Lumiens.

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Dragonclaw23 wrote:
Thanks Auraion!

So taking your advice, I tried to make Libby less 'Adrian-like' so maybe, it's better. Really depends on your opinions though.

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She might be a defendant in my sprite comic... if I ever get around to making it...

And a defense attorney by the name of Trace Lumiens.

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They're cool!!
*Thumbs up*
Tracey's hair is awesome.
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Thanks Auraion.

And there's yet another update.

Spoiler: New poses
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I changed this post so you could see what I added.
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Gah! Stop making me doublepost!

But I give you another update. New poses for Libby and Trace.

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I didn't see the last update, but it's cool.
Haha, small coincidences with the "Thinking pose"
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About this one, I suggest that you change her eyes to make her look more "Surprised"
She looks like she's yawning
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Just two updates. I'm lazy like that, and I don't get around to sprite until the weekends.

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That shiny thingy that's pinned on her shirt's supposed to be a shiny dragon pin. Except, there was no room for the wings. :panye:


And a question, should Panye be PINK or PURPLE?

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Here's what the dragon pin supposed to look like.

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They're cute.
The Payne one made me lol.
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I'm still alive, don't worry! Here's an edited version of the Hickfield clinic, which has no people, or even looks like an hospital, and a random witness that forgot to redye his hair.

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Dawn wrote:
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Usually there's a a bit of transparency to the monocle/glasses type things, but otherwise he looks very christmas-y.

PS. I love your attorney Design.
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Usually there's a a bit of transparency to the monocle/glasses type things, but otherwise he looks very christmas-y.

PS. I love your attorney Design.


Thanks, and I didn't add transparency because I wanted the monocle to cover one of his eyes. And I made up a story about Christmas and him that I'm not going to say here... and I'll redo my Case 1 witness for my sprite comic.
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Just one new sprite.

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The Potatoe's NOT a lie!! *cheers*

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Thw're all looking really good Dawn. I can't wait to see them in the Sprite Comics.
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Thanks Ben.

Anyways, I'm working on the DA:AA game for now, and tried my hand at a Diego bench sprite.

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Yes, I know he's on the wrong side, but... it's just a first try.

Problems with it: hair and face.
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Is here a nice way to say this?
The face sucks...Sorry but that's at least my opinnion.

This is what you could try:
Don't try to scratch his nose and add him two eyes.
Instead, try using Phoenix's eye(s) and his nose on that face.
That SHOULD do it.
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Took your advice, and fix'd the sprite, Zinle. Looks better, but something's bothering me about his forehead...

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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Compare it to frontal one,
then imagine him sideways,
then remember there's an aid version
compare that and this one
edit like that ^^
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>.> Well the bump button appeared. Just didn't know what the heck would happen. Anyways, I'm back to spriting after a long month with a particularly evil solo that I just did today, and then there's a report that I have to hand in.

And... just to polish up a bit, here's a edited Trucy.

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So, can anyone give me a bit of an advice on shading and anything else you see wrong?

(Sorry if I sounded grumpy, I'm tired right now.)
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I'm far from being an expert, but a few things do catch my eye... Her clavicle is shaded a little too much, making it look like she's severely straining her neck muscles. Her upper arms are virtually unshaded, which makes where they're shaded from the cloth of her shirt look almost beveled. Kind of like she's wearing shoulder length flesh-colored rubber gloves, actually. Maybe I'm just imagining it, you should get other opinions before trying to change that.

The big one, though, is the lighting. Looking at her clothes, the light source is directly to the left. Looking at her face, the light source is directly to the right. Looking at her arms, the light source is directly above. You should make sure that the shading on entire body is consistent with its perceived light source. I hope that helps you!
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I was wondering if you could help me out with something. Thanks in advance, whatever you decide.

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I was wondering if you could help me make a defense attorney sprite, from the bench pov of course. It'll just be his normal standing pose (you can even make him talk if you want). Using Wright as a base, he has a brown open coat, with a white T-Shirt inside that. Instead of the hand/arm at the hip like Phoenix has, however, I want both his arms down at his sides for his normal pose. He also has very short black hair, a matching beard on his chin, and has the same earrings Godot does on his right ear (the one facing you as the player). He also has blue eyes. Here's a reference from the only picture that survived the tragic data loss of his sprites. Feel free to use it if you want as just guidelines. I plan on using him as an OC in a fangame, but I'd like to see what you can do with him first. Then maybe I could take it from there (like, I totally suck with hair and shading it). Oh and feel free to make the beard as short as you want, if you accept this request. Oh, and if you do this, a matching Profile Icon would be great, but it's not required.


By the way, he uses Godot's jawline, but the rest of the face was from Wright, sans edits I did to eyes, nose, etc.
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DarkCoffeeJazz wrote:
I was wondering if you could help me out with something.

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I was wondering if you could help me make a defense attorney sprite, from the bench pov of course. It'll just be his normal standing pose (you can even make him talk if you want). Using Wright as a base, he has a brown open coat, with a white T-Shirt inside that. Instead of the hand/arm at the hip like Phoenix has, however, I want both his arms down at his sides for his normal pose. He also has very short black hair, a matching beard on his chin, and has the same earrings Godot does on his right ear (the one facing you as the player). He also has blue eyes. Here's a reference from the only picture that survived the tragic data loss of his sprites. Feel free to use it if you want as just guidelines. I plan on using him as an OC in a fangame, but I'd like to see what you can do with him first. Then maybe I could take it from there (like, I totally suck with hair and shading it). Oh and feel free to make the beard as short as you want, if you accept this request.


By the way, he uses Godot's jawline, but the rest of the face was from Wright, sans edits I did to eyes, nose, etc.
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Sure, I can do it. Anyways, for the beard, it'll be easier if we keep it at a goatee size so it doesn't really clutter the face. I'll get working on it over spring break. (which is a couple days away, so don't worry!)
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Sure, I can do it. Anyways, for the beard, it'll be easier if we keep it at a goatee size so it doesn't really clutter the face. I'll get working on it over spring break. (which is a couple days away, so don't worry!)


Oh, and I edited my post before I saw yours, but if you could do a matching Profile Icon as well, that'd be great. But it's not required since Profile Icons are easier to do. (Yeah, Phoenix's Profile Icon would be best for that I think). Whether you animate his pose to talk as well is up to you, but as long as I have the sprites I can animate it myself, so don't worry about that too much.

Oh yeah, and the beard is supposed to be the chin part of the goatee, but you can make it as short as you want.
This guy's name is Rook Weslayen, by the way. Again, thanks in advance. :D
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Hmmm... well, might as well post my first try here, Coffee, so here it is.

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Is that about right?
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Hmmm... well, might as well post my first try here, Coffee, so here it is.

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Is that about right?


That actually looks pretty good. For his hair, it would be cool if you could add a slight sideburn that stops about the level of the bottom of his ear. But that's the only addition to his hair I'd like. As far as his hairline goes, less of those triangles would be better. I'd like a smoother hairline. The rest looks good to me, for a first try sprite.

His face needs to be a bit sharper I think. Like his nose. I want him to stand out from Phoenix in the end. Other than that, everything else seems to be fine. (yeah, I know, it's a first try sprite, so of course it'll bear resemblances to the base sprite, haha.)

Now that I see what kind of undershirt you're using, I think maybe something should be there. A loose, red tie might work. Loose, like in the style of Gumshoe and Spark Brushell. The color red could be the same red as Diego's shirt. However, that's not required and I could always add it myself later. This is just me voicing my thoughts.

Thanks in advance, the work you've done so far is awesome and I appreciate it all. Can't wait to see the updated sprite.

By the way, Ceres has a few Diego Bench sprites you could take a look at, for a reference as far as the forehead and face fits on Diego. Of course I'm not encouraging theivery, naturally. But personally, I think he has the proportions down. I think I put a link in the DA: AA game thread, if you want to take a peek.
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Thanks, I thought I would post what I had so far, and then ask you for the details to make it better. I'll add the tie and color it a darker red than the Diego palette I have now.

As for the Diego bench sprites, I'll start it over... say, about... summer vacation? Technically, the only things that are keeping me going till then is pretzels and AAI's soundtrack.
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