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| Author: | Mulawinn [ Thu May 20, 2010 8:31 am ] |
| Post subject: | Mulawinn's Sprites |
As you can tell from the title, I made some sprites. )Spoiler: Edits Spoiler: Edits with Case Spoilers Spoiler: OCs Spoiler: AAI Re-Sprites and AAI OC's Spoiler: Shout Bubbles Spoiler: (Possible) Fan Game Sprites/Sheets And that's all I made for now, (If they look horrible, PLEASE tell me how to improve them!) ~Mulawinn |
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| Author: | Coffee Prosecutor [ Thu May 20, 2010 5:31 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mulawinn's Sprites |
They look good but: The face of Pearls creeps me somehow and the Bunny on Zak's shoulder looks kinda off |
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| Author: | Mio Shugyoku [ Fri May 21, 2010 9:37 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mulawinn's Sprites |
Nice sprites. But there are some things to point out... I'm gonna have to agree with Coffee Prosecutor. The older Pearl kinda creeps me out too...and the rabbit is off on Zak. Mostly because under it, it got cut off, so it looks like it has no body. o_o The Luke Atmey is good, but the problem is, is that you can see where you took the monocle and ring out. The finger that the ring was on is thinner and I can see the shape of the monocle, where you edited it out, around his eye. The Marvin Grossburg one would be really great! If only...you got rid of the fat under his chin. Since he's supposed to be slimmer (and hit body looks more in shape) he shouldn't have any fat under his chin/on his neck. I think the third outfit for Adrian Andrew's is your best one. ![]() Keep it up!
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| Author: | Mulawinn [ Fri May 21, 2010 12:05 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mulawinn's Sprites |
Mio Shugyoku wrote: I'm gonna have to agree with Coffee Prosecutor. The older Pearl kinda creeps me out too...and the rabbit is off on Zak. Mostly because under it, it got cut off, so it looks like it has no body. o_o The Luke Atmey is good, but the problem is, is that you can see where you took the monocle and ring out. The finger that the ring was on is thinner and I can see the shape of the monocle, where you edited it out, around his eye. Hey, thanks for the heads up! I'll try and edit them then post their re-edited sprites here... Although, with Atmey, the monocle part was intentional. It was meant to show off the mark his monocle leaves by keeping it on 24/7. His finger was a pain for me since I am a beginner at sprite edits ![]() For Zak, That was an accident And for Pearl, I meant to show her biting her lips while smiling, but it failed... And for this last statement, I just need to tell you that I obviously use the comma too much.
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| Author: | Meenyman [ Fri May 21, 2010 6:07 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mulawinn's Sprites |
These are pretty good sprites, especially the Pearl and Luke Atmey one. Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing more! |
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| Author: | Hybrid~Fusion [ Sun May 23, 2010 12:56 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mulawinn's Sprites |
Hmm... pretty nice sprites you've got there, my friend. The only strange things I see are Pearly's face, which shouldn't look too childishly, and DesireƩ's goggles, which should be rounder. I'll be sure to keep an eye on this. |
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| Author: | Mulawinn [ Tue May 25, 2010 11:51 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mulawinn's Sprites |
I added some new sprites, but I need suggestions, if that's allowed. If it is, then could you please give me a suggestion on a sprite I should do next? I'm out of ideas. ~Mulawinn |
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| Author: | Hybrid~Fusion [ Wed May 26, 2010 12:59 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mulawinn's Sprites |
Welp, it's hard to comment on simple recolors/edits. Santa Udgey looks pretty funny, though his hat(?) lacks shading, I'd suggest a little bit of work in there. And Payne in Blue needs blues outlines, the gray ones just don't go well. Since you've been doing quite well on your sprites, if you want a suggestion of mine, you should begin frankenspriting a little bit more, and see if you can come up with an OC of your own. |
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| Author: | Mulawinn [ Sun May 30, 2010 5:46 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mulawinn's Sprites |
Um, sure! Thanks for the tip... I already have an OC on ImageShack so i'll just put that in there.
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| Author: | Hybrid~Fusion [ Sun May 30, 2010 7:04 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mulawinn's Sprites |
Nice sprites there, and a funny "Do-fuss" indeed. Still, Lawis's mouth looks pretty strange, and Do-fuss right pocket needs a better shading. |
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| Author: | hoshihoshi [ Mon May 31, 2010 7:34 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mulawinn's Sprites |
*A* You must have epic amounts of patience to do all these. I am in awe. Keep it up mmkay? 8D |
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| Author: | Louise [ Mon May 31, 2010 10:48 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mulawinn's Sprites |
Your older Pearl is a bit creepy, and I don't get the random bit of hair going across the top of her forehead, but the rest are pretty good. And is it just me or is Grossberg's head blurry... |
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| Author: | Mulawinn [ Thu Jun 03, 2010 2:12 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mulawinn's Sprites |
Ok, so I recently got AAI (Fine, maybe two weeks ago or so, but i'm on case four!) And I LOVE it! ![]() Seeing as how I love to make sprites, I will start making some AAI Re-Sprites and my own AAI OC's soon! (And yes, I will be alert with the spoiler rules, as I always try to be!)
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| Author: | Coffee Prosecutor [ Thu Jun 03, 2010 4:25 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mulawinn's Sprites |
Mulawinn wrote: Ok, so I recently got AAI (Fine, maybe two weeks ago or so, but i'm on case four!) And I LOVE it! ![]() Seeing as how I love to make sprites, I will start making some AAI Re-Sprites and my own AAI OC's soon! (And yes, I will be alert with the spoiler rules, as I always try to be!) ![]() you don't need to Spoiler rules have been lifted 3 days ago |
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| Author: | Mulawinn [ Mon Jun 07, 2010 12:07 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mulawinn's Sprites |
Ok, i'm running out of ideas... so, i'm planning to make those "shout bubbles". Do they count as sprites that I can post in this thread? |
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| Author: | Coffee Prosecutor [ Mon Jun 07, 2010 3:44 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mulawinn's Sprites |
Mulawinn wrote: Ok, i'm running out of ideas... so, i'm planning to make those "shout bubbles". Do they count as sprites that I can post in this thread? yes it does count as sprite(kinda) so feel free to post them
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| Author: | Mulawinn [ Sun Aug 01, 2010 3:43 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mulawinn's Sprites |
Well, i'm back to spriting, and I thought of making a fan game... So, my next few sprites will be featuring my (best) OC yet, Aaron Vance (who is also a coffee aficionado)! P.S. His Sprites will be arranged under a new category named "Fan Game OC(s) (Defense)" others will be under "Fan Game OC(s) (Prosecution)", "Fan Game OC(s) Witness" and so on and so forth... P.P.S. Did you notice how I've arranged everything? |
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| Author: | Coffee Prosecutor [ Wed Aug 04, 2010 6:00 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mulawinn's Sprites |
The new sprites look good, you took a long break but at least you did something, and it paid off Keep that good work up, dude^^ |
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| Author: | Mulawinn [ Thu Aug 05, 2010 11:04 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mulawinn's Sprites |
Coffee Prosecutor wrote: The new sprites look good, you took a long break but at least you did something, and it paid off Keep that good work up, dude^^ Thanks, although I don't think it could be considered a "break" i've been caught up with school work, that's all. (Yes, School is happening in my country) And, i'm not allowed to use the computer on school days (excluding Friday). |
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