Court Records https://forums.court-records.net/ |
|
FenrirDarkWolf's Sprites (Updated Nov 1, 2020) https://forums.court-records.net/viewtopic.php?f=12&t=19661 |
Page 1 of 5 |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Fri Aug 06, 2010 4:54 pm ] |
Post subject: | FenrirDarkWolf's Sprites (Updated Nov 1, 2020) |
This thread contains sprites that I've made for some reason or another. Use with credit. Old thread Quote: Canon character sprites Spoiler: Penny Nichols extra poses Spoiler: Lisa Basil extra poses Spoiler: Turner Grey extra poses Spoiler: Maggey Byrde extra poses Spoiler: Extra witness sprites Spoiler: Candice Arme Spoiler: Gregory Edgeworth Spoiler: Buddy Faith Spoiler: Simon Blackquill Quote: OC sprites Spoiler: Miranda Zarday Spoiler: Abandoned free to use sprites Spoiler: Geoff Quote: Kain Lewis: Ace Attorney sprites Spoiler: Kain Lewis Spoiler: Leon "Leo" Terra Spoiler: Mako White Spoiler: Kim Greylek Spoiler: Victims free to use |
Author: | Zinle [ Fri Aug 06, 2010 5:13 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Gregory Edgeworth zoom sprite |
Well...If this is a first try; good try, but needs some training. I'd suggest using Edgeys backhair and adding Phoenix's face and forehead to that. Unfortunantely, you have to scratch the class's but like allready said: Good try. |
Author: | Louise [ Fri Aug 06, 2010 5:27 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Gregory Edgeworth zoom sprite |
I think you should spend a little time looking at other sprites to learn shading and lines and stuff. You could be great, all you need is practice 8D |
Author: | End Quote [ Fri Aug 06, 2010 7:32 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Gregory Edgeworth zoom sprite |
I though to say you could use and edit Payne's glasses for it, but that lame piece of prosecutor doesn't have a close up... |
Author: | Louise [ Fri Aug 06, 2010 7:55 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Gregory Edgeworth zoom sprite |
Well I think young!Klavier has a close up. Yeah it's sunglasses but you get the idea. |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Sat Sep 04, 2010 6:29 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: My Sprites |
Thanks all you guys,I tried all of that,and now it looks...okay,well thanks for all the help! ![]() Though,are they that bad,besides them above,no one else has commented? ![]() |
Author: | Little Magician [ Wed Sep 08, 2010 5:38 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites |
Race for the Turnabout: Very good! I really like the victims int he background. The only thing that needs to be fixed, IMO, is the white line/dots around Derek. Other sprites: Buddy Faith does need some fixing. I think that the hat needs to be shaded, the face needs a mouth, and the shirt needs to be a little clearer. But it's still nice. ![]() Front view Nick is very good! I think that the colour of his face and hands are a little pale, though. And, for the third Phoenix, his eyes are little to small - it needs to be a bit bigger, I think. Witness sprites: I always thought Derek had a large white lab coat [Like Ema], but I'm not sure about that. Lawyer Nick is very good! ![]() Official art edits: Buddy Faith has a white outline around him - that's the only thing that really needs to be fixed. Some shading for him would be good, though. Jake Marshall also has tiny whtie dots around him, and also, the uniform [hat and cape] are too pale compared to his sleeves and shirt. OCs: The first Haden Orwell sprite, his left arm needs to be joined correctly to his shoulder... I don't know how to explain it, but it looks odd. His other arm is a bit to thin and rounded. The second one is pretty good! The third one looks a little like a front-view sprite [of Sahwit?] and his head. The mouth looks a little odd, too. I'm sure you'll be able to fix it, though ![]() End long paragraph. I hope you don't think I'm harsh; your sprites are really good. ![]() |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Wed Sep 08, 2010 11:09 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites |
Spoiler: Very long paragraph Ehh,sorry about those dots,GIMP fails getting rid of them. ![]() ![]() And I have no earthly idea how to make eyes,and a mouth from the co-concil POV. ![]() ![]() ![]() Will fix soon. ![]() |
Author: | Dark Coffee Drinker [ Sun Sep 19, 2010 7:16 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated/Ini Miney:Ace Attorney} |
Um... Did you ask Jaywind if you could use his Ini sprite? |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Mon Sep 20, 2010 5:17 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated/Ini Miney:Ace Attorney} |
Dark Coffee Drinker wrote: Um... Did you ask Jaywind if you could use his Ini sprite? Yes,yes I did,I asked him if it was okay to use it after I figured out where it was first was.(Thanks Tap!) |
Author: | Dark Coffee Drinker [ Mon Sep 20, 2010 5:38 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated/Ini Miney:Ace Attorney} |
BuddyFaith wrote: Dark Coffee Drinker wrote: Um... Did you ask Jaywind if you could use his Ini sprite? Yes,yes I did,I asked him if it was okay to use it after I figured out where it was first was.(Thanks Tap!) Okay, well that's good. Anyway, I will give some criticism - Greg - Well, it's a start. The dots for the shading are a bit weird but I think this has some promise to it. The hair needs a bit of work and so do the glasses. You need to change the face around a bit to make him look less like Phoenix. Ini - The Objection pose looks... ...Awkward to say the least. And the arms seem a bit wonky on her "Airhead" pose. Buddy Faith - ... ...Well... ... ![]() Phoenix Front - The lapels look a bit too much like the De Killer's ones and the tie could use some work. Here is some examples of what the lapels and tie should look like - Spoiler: Suit Lapels Spoiler: Tie Also, there are some loose pixels near the thinking and hand to face pose too. Payne - Looks fine! ![]() Derek Stilles - Not enough shading and had pure black lines. Lawyer Nick at the stand - The legs have red lines and it has some pure black outlines. It is not good to use pure black. Hayden Orwel - The first pose looks fine but the hand on desk and the Turner Gray pose are pretty messed up. Also, the design looks too much like Phoenix. I would suggest maybe changing the design a bit. Sprite of you - Looks too much like Kristoph. Maybe frankensprite a bit to turn it into a sprite of your own. And judging by your profile I don't think that you would be that tall at 13. But I think you could change it up a bit. These are okay for a start and there is a lot of room for improvement. Keep going at it! |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Wed Sep 22, 2010 3:52 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 9/21/10} |
Update-Fixed Mr.Orwell ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Sat Sep 25, 2010 3:20 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated/Ini Miney:Ace Attorney} |
Dark Coffee Drinker wrote: Sprite of you - Looks too much like Kristoph. Maybe frankensprite a bit to turn it into a sprite of your own. And judging by your profile I don't think that you would be that tall at 13. But I think you could change it up a bit. These are okay for a start and there is a lot of room for improvement. Keep going at it! Thanks, and you'd surprised how tall I am, last time I check I was at least 5' 3", so if we can deduce that Kris is at least 5 ft., I could be that tall, but since they didn't give us official heights for AJ characters, so yeah. Dark Coffee Drinker wrote: Ini - The Objection pose looks... ...Awkward to say the least. And the arms seem a bit wonky on her "Airhead" pose. Well, I had to splice Godot's arm and had to recolor and take some parts off, and her dancing-like pose, she's supposed to be on one of her tilt part. ![]() Dark Coffee Drinker wrote: Buddy Faith - ... ...Well... ... ![]() It's better than my first try, though that one was a custom, no other sprites used for it. Spoiler: Buddy |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Wed Sep 29, 2010 3:53 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 9/28/10} |
UPDATE! ![]() ![]() ![]() Comments and critiques approved and appreciated. |
Author: | nudalman [ Wed Sep 29, 2010 11:53 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 9/28/10} |
BuddyFaith wrote: UPDATE! ![]() ![]() ![]() Comments and critiques approved and appreciated. Good job, these are by far your best sprites, although Buddy's hair is a little wonky. Also, you might want to change the smile, it looks too much like Portsman's still. Well, anyways, I definitely see improvement! |
Author: | Dark Coffee Drinker [ Wed Sep 29, 2010 8:22 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 9/28/10} |
BuddyFaith wrote: UPDATE! ![]() ![]() ![]() Comments and critiques approved and appreciated. Front Cammy and Rhoda look fine but I need to critique Buddy a bit. First, the hat isn't shaded at all and it really needs to be. Second, it looks too much like Portsman Third, the white pixels everywhere are a problem Fourth, the tie and the And finally, the hair does not connect to the head and it needs more shading. Fix those things and you are set! |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Thu Sep 30, 2010 2:19 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 9/28/10} |
Dark Coffee Drinker wrote: BuddyFaith wrote: UPDATE! ![]() ![]() ![]() Comments and critiques approved and appreciated. Front Cammy and Rhoda look fine but I need to critique Buddy a bit. First, the hat isn't shaded at all and it really needs to be. Second, it looks too much like Portsman Third, the white pixels everywhere are a problem Fourth, the tie and the And finally, the hair does not connect to the head and it needs more shading. Fix those things and you are set! Thanks for the help, I've been using Paint.Net, instead of my usual GIMP, will fix. The hair though? I really didn't edit much of the hair though, since Portsman and Buddy have almost exactly the same hair color. |
Author: | nudalman [ Thu Sep 30, 2010 11:05 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 9/28/10} |
The hair has to go down to his neck at the back. |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Thu Sep 30, 2010 10:58 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 9/28/10} |
UPDATE! Tried to fix Buddy. ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Author: | Dark Coffee Drinker [ Thu Sep 30, 2010 11:29 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 9/28/10} |
BuddyFaith wrote: UPDATE! Tried to fix Buddy. ![]() ![]() Well... It's better. But, there are still some things wrong with it. 1. The hat's shading is WAY off. It needs to be coming from the same light source as the rest of the sprite. Plus it's not as smooth as AAI shading. 2. The hair looks better but is still to Portsmanesque. It needs to come out from the bottom of his hat in the front and needs to be more shaggy. Spoiler: Like this - 3. Still some white pixels and I can see some pink left over from Portsman. 4. Eyes still look like Portsman's. 5. The tie's shading is off and so is the overall shape. Fix those things and you are set! |
Author: | Chloe [ Fri Oct 01, 2010 8:13 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 9/30/10} |
They're good for a start. Keep working on the shading. :) |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Sun Oct 03, 2010 12:57 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 9/30/10} |
UPDATE! Better Buddy: ![]() Grey Edits: ![]() ![]() |
Author: | nudalman [ Sun Oct 03, 2010 1:00 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 10/2/10} |
1. Okay, Buddy's hair and hat are better, but he looks like he has some mental disease. 2. No one could ever have such a tiny and straight arm. |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Sun Oct 03, 2010 2:49 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 9/30/10} |
Chloe wrote: They're good for a start. Keep working on the shading. :) Shading, my worst enemy. nudalman wrote: 1. Okay, Buddy's hair and hat are better, but he looks like he has some mental disease. 2. No one could ever have such a tiny and straight arm. Mental disease, care to elaborate for me? All the other arm sizes looked wonky, so yeah. |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:18 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 10/2/10} |
Legal double post. UPDATE! Front Young Franziska ![]() ![]() Atmey without his ring made for The Pezman. ![]() |
Author: | nudalman [ Mon Oct 04, 2010 1:01 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 10/3/10} |
Ok, first off, I read my previous post, and realized that I sounded like a total jerk, especially considering how you have been nice to me, so sorry Buddy. Second, I was tired and cranky, so I probably said something I didn't mean. What I should have said is that the eyes are blurry and look unfocused, the nose is a different colour, and the mouth looks weird. Here's a tip: until you're a master spriter, try taking a similar mouth position and putting on your sprite. Hope that helps, and if you fix those things, your sprite will look just fine! |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Mon Oct 04, 2010 1:27 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 10/3/10} |
nudalman wrote: Ok, first off, I read my previous post, and realized that I sounded like a total jerk, especially considering how you have been nice to me, so sorry Buddy. Second, I was tired and cranky, so I probably said something I didn't mean. What I should have said is that the eyes are blurry and look unfocused, the nose is a different colour, and the mouth looks weird. Here's a tip: until you're a master spriter, try taking a similar mouth position and putting on your sprite. Hope that helps, and if you fix those things, your sprite will look just fine! It's okay, anyway back on topic, thanks for the tips, the mouth was actually taken from one of Portsman's frames. |
Author: | nudalman [ Mon Oct 04, 2010 1:32 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 10/3/10} |
Well, then I think the problem is that it doesn't match the shape of the surrounding cheek... >.< It's difficult. I'll show you whenever I get on my computer. I'm using my I-Pod right now. |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Mon Oct 04, 2010 1:36 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 10/3/10} |
nudalman wrote: Well, then I think the problem is that it doesn't match the shape of the surrounding cheek... >.< It's difficult. I'll show you whenever I get on my computer. I'm using my I-Pod right now. Okay, it would be much appreciated. |
Author: | Dypo [ Mon Oct 04, 2010 6:08 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 10/3/10} |
Buddy's hands look like they're not connected to his arm. Must be because you edited Portsman's gloves away. They still look like gloves. xD But that's just my two cents on the matter. :D |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Fri Oct 08, 2010 11:50 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 10/3/10} |
UPDATE! ![]() I tried to fix his hand and tie. |
Author: | Dypo [ Fri Oct 08, 2010 2:00 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 10/3/10} |
Buddy, one thing you have to keep in mind when shading is that there will be lighting which will affect the shading. Here, I made an example for you: ![]() Also note that he now has the three thingeys of hair poking out from underneath his cap. Aside from that, you fixed the tie quite nicely, I daresay. ![]() EDIT: I just noticed I forgot to make it transparent. That's what you get for trying to bite off more than you can chew. ![]() |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Sun Oct 10, 2010 2:43 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 10/3/10} |
Buddy update(hopefully last): ![]() w/ coat now(it's crap, I know ![]() ![]() |
Author: | Zinle [ Sun Oct 10, 2010 11:17 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 10/9/10} |
Buddy isn't too chubby person, but he's not an anorectic either. Feed him a little please ^^ |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Sun Oct 10, 2010 7:43 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 10/9/10} |
Zinle wrote: Buddy isn't too chubby person, but he's not an anorectic either. Feed him a little please ^^ I know, that's why its crap, but every other size I tried, his head wouldn't fix on, his head was too small, but I'll try. ![]() EDIT:UPDATE:New pose for Phoenix: ![]() ![]() |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Sun Oct 17, 2010 5:23 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 10/15/10} |
UPDATE:New OC/Made from scratch, thus why it sucks. Name:Lil Himigami Age:18(Same time as Hayden) Female A young college student, studying to be a artist. ![]() |
Author: | SuperAj3 [ Sun Oct 17, 2010 5:57 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 10/17/10} |
for a scratch sprite it's good, but the anatomy is off. fix the tiny arms, and it'll look better! |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Sun Oct 17, 2010 7:15 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 10/17/10} |
SuperAj3 wrote: for a scratch sprite it's good, but the anatomy is off. fix the tiny arms, and it'll look better! I know the arms were too small, but I've already started animating it so, plus I fixed up the colors a bit. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Author: | Auraion [ Sun Oct 17, 2010 4:29 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 10/17/10} |
To be honest, I think she looks too small for a courtroom sprite, unless she's from rozen maiden. But what am I saying?, I've never made a sprite from scratch. |
Author: | FenrirDarkWolf [ Sun Oct 17, 2010 4:36 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: BuddyFaith's Sprites{Updated 10/17/10} |
@Auraion Yes, I do fear i made the head to small. EDIT:UPDATE!:Mad: ![]() ![]() |
Page 1 of 5 | All times are UTC |
Powered by phpBB © 2000, 2002, 2005, 2007 phpBB Group http://www.phpbb.com/ |