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Demeter Sabre Sprites (Update: 25:8 Retro?
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Requests are OPEN
If you really want one...
Things you should know:
1) I'm only just getting used to editing PW sprites.
2) I have a knack of over-doing or under-doing shading and then it ends up looking crud.
Anyway, onwards to the sprites!
Updates
Spoiler:
Original Characters
Alexander Ennius
Spoiler: WIP
Demeter Sabre
Spoiler: Younger Demeter - Sprite (WIP)
Spoiler: Rough Character Sketch
Black Snake/Cyan Gotica
Spoiler: Rough Sketch
Gina Oro
Spoiler: Sprite (WIP)
Evidence
Spoiler:
Well, thanks for looking!
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Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites
The Sharp End of the Law
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My 'To do' List
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- Finish young Demeter sprite (Re-started!)
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- Begin Black Snake sprites
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Requests:
None yet. Please feel free to ask for one unless I state otherwise.
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Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites
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First Gina Oro sprite completed!
Comments will be very helpfull.
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Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites (Update: 2-5)
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I found the same problem of the shoulders in Gina Oro's sprite. Another flaw I see on it is that the shading on the sleeves looks pretty strange. Try looking at other sprites to have an idea on sleeve shading. Oh, and she also looks too small in comparison to her in-court small sprite.
As for Black Snake, well... I haven't got any ideas for him, actually.
Well, I hope what I said was useful, and I'm looking forward to your future works.
Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites (Update: 2-5)
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Hm, yeah, I guess you're right. Gina's shoulders are still a little too closed up, but then again that may be to do with her pose, as her shoulders are brought forward slightly and so may look closer together. Yeah, I realise that, but I guess I just kind of wanted to get at least one full sprite up for people to look at. I'm going to go back and see what I can do to improve it, probably a little more blending of the different shades... Maybe.
Also, I now I need to add in her shawl. As you can plainly see it's on her in-court sprite but not her full one. That was just a silly mistake on my part.
Well, thanks for the comment, Hybrid. It helps.
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Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites (Update: 2-5)
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Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites (Update: 2-5)
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L_093 wrote:
Hi dude, I examined your Gina Oro sprite, it looks great, if you are a starter.
Thanks, I'm glad you think so 'cause I've always thought that your sprites are awesome.
L_093 wrote:
... the sketches, well the design looks great too but if you are planning to make 'em an sprite, well thats gonna be a pain in the. . . hands...
Nice to know you think they look good in the design stages.
Yeah, I know what you mean. I am really dreading getting to work on Black Snake because there is just so much to include, but luckily I won't have to animate any mouth movements as he wears that mask... All the same it will probably take me ages, yeah.
L_093 wrote:
... keep the good work , and welcome to the spriting thing.
Thank you very much!
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Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites (Update: 2-5)
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Here is (what I've got so far of) Alexander Ennius! The star of my uncoming Sprite Comic!
(Nothing here is final and is more or less a rough copy!)
Okay, yeah it's Daryan mixed with Diego and a bit of Apollo for those bangs. All I need help with is: What I should do for the rest of his hair?
None of the colours are final, but I really want to sort this out. Once I know what his hair looks like I can draw out the Box Art for the Sprite Comic I'm making staring him. So, the sooner the better!
Any ideas!?
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Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites (Update: 5-5: ALEXANDER ENNIUS!)
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Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites (Update: 2-5)
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Demeter Sabre wrote:
Okay, he's nowhere even close to being finished, but I need a little bit of help: I just want some ideas of what to do next.
Here is (what I've got so far of) Alexander Ennius! The star of my uncoming Sprite Comic!
(Nothing here is final and is more or less a rough copy!)
Okay, yeah it's Daryan mixed with Diego and a bit of Apollo for those bangs. All I need help with is: What I should do for the rest of his hair?
None of the colours are final, but I really want to sort this out. Once I know what his hair looks like I can draw out the Box Art for the Sprite Comic I'm making staring him. So, the sooner the better!
Any ideas!?
Here is (what I've got so far of) Alexander Ennius! The star of my uncoming Sprite Comic!
(Nothing here is final and is more or less a rough copy!)
Okay, yeah it's Daryan mixed with Diego and a bit of Apollo for those bangs. All I need help with is: What I should do for the rest of his hair?
None of the colours are final, but I really want to sort this out. Once I know what his hair looks like I can draw out the Box Art for the Sprite Comic I'm making staring him. So, the sooner the better!
Any ideas!?
I got a couple of ideas for him but first i would like to ask your permission to show you my ideas
if you like them you use them to edit the OC to the way you think it looks better to you
, of course only if you give me permission (sorry for my bad english , im still learning)
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Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites (Update: 5-5: ALEXANDER ENNIUS!)
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Hybrid~Fusion wrote:
Well, try to make either the rest of the hair straight, or, if you want to complicate things a bit, try making his hair spiky, but still short. Those are the only ways I can picture him in my head right now.
Makes sense, yeah. I would put Godot's hair on but... well, I've already used his body.
L_093 wrote:
I got a couple of ideas for him but first i would like to ask your permission to show you my ideas
if you like them you use them to edit the OC to the way you think it looks better to you , of course only if you give me permission
(sorry for my bad english , im still learning)
if you like them you use them to edit the OC to the way you think it looks better to you
, of course only if you give me permission (sorry for my bad english , im still learning)
Yes, I'm fine with that. Go ahead! I look foreward to seeing your ideas.
(It's alright.
)
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Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites (Update: 5-5: ALEXANDER ENNIUS!)
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For the CyberGoth dude, think his last name should be 'Gotica', because thats spanish for gothic. His first name could be Cyan, a play on the word Cyber.
So Cyan Gotica? IMO, it's a pretty dumb name.
Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites (Update: 5-5: ALEXANDER ENNIUS!)
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I hope you like it
:D
Spoiler: Alexander Ennius
Just need to fix the borders on the downside
If not ill continue with more designs :D
See ya later
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Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites (Update: 5-5: ALEXANDER ENNIUS!)
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L_093 wrote:
Well i finished one of my ideas , but i read that it would look a lot like Diego / godot...
Yeah, I guess I should have made that clear at the begining. Oops. XD
L_093 wrote:
so i desided to modify the jacket and add some kristoph suitwings and recolour the original hair and make it look like lights, the Luke Atmey style
I hope you like it
:D
Just need to fix the borders on the downside
If not i'll continue with more designs :D
See ya later
I hope you like it
:D
Spoiler: Alexander Ennius
Just need to fix the borders on the downside
If not i'll continue with more designs :D
See ya later
Acctually... I kind of like that! Looks pretty stylish.
The hair looks pretty good, although I think I may want to change the colour of it: something a little different, maybe... Actually that goes for the whole colour scheme, as it's still not final, but anyway.
Thanks so much for that bit of help L_093!
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Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites (Update: 5-5: ALEXANDER ENNIUS!)
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Demeter Sabre wrote:
Requests are OPEN
If you really want one...
hehe i would like to ask you for a request
well actually i like the goth style too, i was wondering if you can make a street magician front sprite using apollo head, , body with the trucy cape and hat, the colors would be black and white, and some makeup un the eyes .
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Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites (Update: 5-5: ALEXANDER ENNIUS!)
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Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites (Update: 5-5: ALEXANDER ENNIUS!)
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Romeo wrote:
I think these sprites are well made, Gina looks like a very interesting character.
For the CyberGoth dude, think his last name should be 'Gotica', because thats spanish for gothic. His first name could be Cyan, a play on the word Cyber.
So Cyan Gotica? IMO, it's a pretty dumb name.
For the CyberGoth dude, think his last name should be 'Gotica', because thats spanish for gothic. His first name could be Cyan, a play on the word Cyber.
So Cyan Gotica? IMO, it's a pretty dumb name.
Oh, yeah and thanks very much Romeo!
To be honest - I don't know what other people think, but - I really like that name! I think it has a nice little ring to it. I'm thinking I might end up using it!
Thank you!
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Demeter Sabre wrote:
Are we talking something like that Miguel Garcia I spotted one your page? :D
Well actually yes , he is gonna be Miguel Partner :D
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Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites (Update: 5-5: ALEXANDER ENNIUS!)
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L_093 wrote:
Demeter Sabre wrote:
Are we talking something like that Miguel Garcia I spotted one your page? :D
Well actually yes , he is gonna be Miguel Partner :D
He he, I thought as much.
Okay, I'll get to work on it. :)
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Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites (Update: 5-5: ALEXANDER ENNIUS!)
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Well, it's been a while, but I'm back.
I kind of took an unschedualed break from the site and couldn't find the time to check back. I've had a lot going on, so spriting had to be put to one side for a while, but now I'm back.
Now! Back to the sprites!
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Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites (Update: 25:8 Retro?
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Nice job! I also like the evidence you've made! :D
Re: Demeter Sabre Sprites (Update: 25:8 Retro?
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Oh, yeah, that.
It... still needs work, but I'm hoping it'll turn out okay.
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