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Author:  MiaFeyFan [ Mon Aug 16, 2010 5:53 pm ]
Post subject:  TAKE THAT! MiaFeyFan's Sprites

Welcome!


[center]This is my sprite center. I am new at spriting so constructive criticism is appreciated.But no being rude for no reason!

THE SPRITES:

Sprite Edits:
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Mia wearing a red shirt instead of the black one
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How Mia might have looked when she was a spirit medium

Sprites together:
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Coffe Bump XD
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Godot: Your NOT leaving me again!
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Just a cute little Franny X Adrian sprite ;)


I will add more when i have the time to make more. Thanks for coming! :uramidn:

Author:  Golden Luxray [ Mon Aug 16, 2010 6:03 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: TAKE THAT! MiaFeyFan's Sprites

these are good for first sprites , but i have only been spriting for a week so i cant really say much.
i can see you are using plaint on these so what i would do for most of them is not have such a think line one the one with godot and maya i would try to make his arm smaller seeing as it as big as her and your last one is good but fran seems to be missing some of her body(where shes behind adrain) apart from that good work and keep it up i hope to see more from you.:)

Author:  Louise [ Mon Aug 16, 2010 6:12 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: TAKE THAT! MiaFeyFan's Sprites

Well I hope you don't think I'm being rude when I say you need to keep practising. On some there are complete parts of the body missing O_o

You can only get better :think:

Author:  MiaFeyFan [ Mon Aug 16, 2010 6:20 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: TAKE THAT! MiaFeyFan's Sprites

.:looby:. wrote:
Well I hope you don't think I'm being rude when I say you need to keep practising. On some there are complete parts of the body missing O_o

You can only get better :think:

I don't think your being rude at all! Thanks,I will defiantly keep practicing ^^

Author:  Meenyman [ Mon Aug 16, 2010 8:17 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: TAKE THAT! MiaFeyFan's Sprites

These aren't the best sprites on the street, but that doesn't mean it can't be improved.

Like what looby said, some of their parts are missing, those should be filled up.
Also for the one where Mia is wearing a red shirt, the outline should look less rough and more clean. The lines aren't that thick.

Keep practicing, learn from your mistakes, and let's see what masterpiece you can come up with.

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