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Tophat_guy's sprites!Topic%20Title

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I've decided to redo all my sprites. I quit for a long time, but I'm trying to get back into it. They are not exactly in ace attorney style though. I removed the most of the old sprites. I'm not really planning on doing anything with these, but maybe one day. Please take a look!
Spoiler: OC's
Here is a redone Protagonist. It still needs some work. But I think it is defiantly an improvement
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Here is the next one, this time a prosecutor. I'm not as happy with his face as I am with the other guy. :yogi:
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I think I might put up some descriptions for these guys soon.
Made from scratch on gimp. I forgot where I got the colors though.


Here are some more sprites but these are just random.
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Sweater girl is just a design I had in my head for awhile. This Von Karma looking sprite is based of some concept art I saw.

Thank you for looking! :phoenix:


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BUMP FOR UPDATES :megaphone:
Yeah maybe I should of waited till some one commented, but I just finished fine tuning him and I was eger
Please comment I really do need your advice.
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I recommend you shouldn't bumb for updates, just state it in your subject like I do. It's kind of trollish if you do. Just my opinion
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Quite a few people to multiple post in this section. Personally I think it's ok if it's been more than 24 hours but then.... I don't make the rules :B

Just don't do 5 posts in a row in the same day, that's annoying as fuck. Bitches need to learn how to use the edit button.


Aaaanyway, cute sprites tophat. Some weird proportions but very nice for scratched sprites!
Imagesee how it withers before my flower of justiceImage

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I recommend you shouldn't bumb for updates, just state it in your subject like I do. It's kind of trollish if you do. Just my opinion

ahhh so sorry I hope you know it wasn't in my intention to be a troll. It was just akward timing on my part I guess.

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Aaaanyway, cute sprites tophat. Some weird proportions but very nice for scratched sprites!

Thanks a lot .:looby:. :edgy: yeah the proportions on the dectives sholders are strange. I tried to have him be very close to ace attorney style and they normally have big sholders, but I think I went over board and thus made his arms too long to :/

anyway thanks for the comments!
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Okay I'm back! School started up and that slowed me down but alas I have new sprites!
Okay first up! Prometheus's objection sprite.
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Theres a few things I don't like about this one like I think the head is WAY to small,but I put it up anyway :/
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Next is this new character still thinking on the name. Image
I like her I think it fits with the others good. She a prosecutor and going to soon be the next chief prosecutor however you would never play aginst her. She would be the mentor character to Prometheus too.
Please comment! :D
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*Sigh* Triple post

Okay guys this is going to sound bad but here I go.
Its obvious these sprites aren't that popular by the number of posts. It's okay though I know things are slow what with people still coming back to the form after it shut down, but I does mean I won't be as fast in making them. Don't peg me as a comment begger or anything, because I'm trying not to sound like one. Anyway I think I might take a breif hiatuse from spriting because of this huge project my teacher dumped on me. (I still will have time to get on the form for the most part.)

Sooooooooooooooo anyway I have somp W.I.P.s to put here
Spoiler: What time is it?
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yeah I'm not a huge fan of this show I was just bored
it's crappy due to lazyness

Spoiler: The Hobo is Back!
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Yeah if this was a game the first case could be him taking the bar exam and he would look like this untill the second case when he gets his badge back or something, I don't kown. More to come on these I'm trying to make a sheet I have all the pointing sprites done so slowly but surley right?


All for now Please comment!
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I quite like the hobo-wright lawyer one! :D

The lawyer looks really good especially for a scratched sprite. Something bothers me about his right eye (left to us), but I can't place it. The shading is also really good, considering it's MS.Paint.

The prosecutor lady looks the oddest to me. Some of her proportions are a little strange, such as she has very broad shoulders for a woman, and her waist comes in very fast and comes out very slowly, which kind of makes her boobs look too big. I think if you fix the waist on that and make it longer and come in more slowly and then make the hips come out a little faster then she'll look great.

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Prometheus (?) Objection sprite, his eyes are still focused as if his head didn't move at all, while everything else did.
And other than that and the whole "proportions" shpeal, good job. Very cartoony (I hope you don't hate me for saying that... I like cartoons.)
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Well I'm back. I have kinda fallen behind on my sprites after giveing most of my energy to my school work and social life (and more recently been investing any free time in minecraft.) But the funny part is the thing I'm going to update I made a long time ago and just never uploaded it here. Now on to the sprites.
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The prosecutor lady looks the oddest to me. Some of her proportions are a little strange, such as she has very broad shoulders for a woman, and her waist comes in very fast and comes out very slowly, which kind of makes her boobs look too big. I think if you fix the waist on that and make it longer and come in more slowly and then make the hips come out a little faster then she'll look great.

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How is this i moved the shoulders in (which was a choir and a half) and spread out her waist and a few other tweaks
Also I played around with an old sprite today and I got this.
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Oh, by the way
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Prometheus (?) Objection sprite, his eyes are still focused as if his head didn't move at all, while everything else did.
And other than that and the whole "proportions" shpeal, good job. Very cartoony (I hope you don't hate me for saying that... I like cartoons.)
I'm not sure what you mean about the eye but it doesn't matter because I think I'm going to try to redo that sprite. also yes they are suppose to look cartoony
Thanks for reading :phoenix:
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A bit pillow shaded, but very good for a scratch sprite, nonetheless.
My Court Records Family?

My Court Records brother is Apollo72 , and my dear mother and father are yuzikichan0 and Inquisitor Amakiir !

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tophat_guy wrote:
Oh, by the way
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Prometheus (?) Objection sprite, his eyes are still focused as if his head didn't move at all, while everything else did.
And other than that and the whole "proportions" shpeal, good job. Very cartoony (I hope you don't hate me for saying that... I like cartoons.)
I'm not sure what you mean about the eye but it doesn't matter because I think I'm going to try to redo that sprite. also yes they are suppose to look cartoony
Thanks for reading :phoenix:

To be honest, I don't know what I meant about the cartoony thing. I really don't. But the eyes are off-center, is what I meant. I was being too vague at first, and for that, I apologize.
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(I think the court records is starting to come back to its former glory)
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A bit pillow shaded, but very good for a scratch sprite, nonetheless.

Wait pillow shaded? :yuusaku: I forgot what that ment, if someone could explan it that would be great. I would like to work on this guy because he is starting to grow on me.

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But the eyes are off-center, is what I meant. I was being too vague at first, and for that, I apologize.

Ahh no need to apologize, but thank you for clearing that up. I will keep that in mind when I redo that sprite!
By the way I'll be working on a new (well my first) spriting project, to celebrate
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Neku Sakuraba's apperance in KH:3D

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Ain't bad at all,got ideas,ok art,8.5/10
ummm could you tell me how to make the images/gifs show up? :eh?:
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JustinLiberty wrote:
Ain't bad at all,got ideas,ok art,8.5/10
ummm could you tell me how to make the images/gifs show up? :eh?:

Upload it to Photobucket, then click the IMG link it gives. It auto-copies, then just paste in a post. BAM you've just uploaded a picture
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First update in a long time. Going to redo all my sprites. Here is the first one.
Spoiler:
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Here the protagonist! I don't have a definite name for him yet. He still needs some work. I tried to make him look like an improved version of the original. here is the comparison.
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I think its defiantly an improvement.

Thank you for visiting! More will be here tomorrow hopefully. :phoenix:
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He looks younger. Almost three or five years. XD
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Yeah, he does look a lot younger, but I think I like him better that way.
Here the next sprite as promised.
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I think I like the coat but I'm not as sure about the face. He's supposed look really laid back and informal, so I didn't give him a tie and had him leave his coat on. I'm also unsure if I like the shading or not. He is a little unfinished at the bottom, but most of that will be covered up. I got the colors from Gregory, Badd, Lana, Kristoph, and Morgan.
I might build up and put a few more sprites all at one time up next!
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The problem with the shading on this fella is that you can't see it. This is for two reasons which compound each other.

Let's compare and contrast with Gummy's AAI sprite.

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Gummy's coat has two shades to it-- one where the light hits it, and one where the light doesn't. There's a clear contrast between the two shades-- the second is noticeably darker than the first.

With this other guy, you've also got two shades going on, but they're practically identical. In addition, they're not placed in accordance with a light source. Rather, the darker shades seem to be lining the outlines. This tends to rob an image of the contrast that makes it pop.

The only other thing is that he looks very similar to that other guy you just posted.
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tophat_guy wrote:
First update in a long time. Going to redo all my sprites. Here is the first one.
Spoiler:
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Here the protagonist! I don't have a definite name for him yet. He still needs some work. I tried to make him look like an improved version of the original. here is the comparison.
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I think its defiantly an improvement.

Thank you for visiting! More will be here tomorrow hopefully. :phoenix:

That's a good improvement! It looks really good!
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tophat_guy wrote:
First update in a long time. Going to redo all my sprites. Here is the first one.
Spoiler:
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Here the protagonist! I don't have a definite name for him yet. He still needs some work. I tried to make him look like an improved version of the original. here is the comparison.
Image
I think its defiantly an improvement.

Thank you for visiting! More will be here tomorrow hopefully. :phoenix:

That's a good improvement! It looks really good!
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That's a good improvement! It looks really good!

Thank you!
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With this other guy, you've also got two shades going on, but they're practically identical. In addition, they're not placed in accordance with a light source. Rather, the darker shades seem to be lining the outlines. This tends to rob an image of the contrast that makes it pop.

The only other thing is that he looks very similar to that other guy you just posted.

Thank you for the critique! I defiantly see what your saying now. Once I either make or find a better color pallet I'll redo his shading entirely. I think I need to make in more of an AA style instead of an AAI using only 3 or 4 colors and that should help maybe. I didn't notice him looking like the other guy until now but yeah I see than now. I think might change his hair color and his facial expression to look a little more malicious and sleazy. Thanks for the advice! :phoenix:

Anyway! Here are some new random sprites I did.
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Franziska's older sister, based on some concept art I saw. I have mixed feelings on how this turned out. I like it generally but there are defiantly are some things that annoy me about it...
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I like this sprite a lot more but I dunno, I think the shading may be off. Shading is really not my strong suit

Thank you for looking!
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I think the biggest problem with your sprites, looking at all of them side by side, is that they all have identical eyes. All small, practically the same shape, with just the color of the iris changing.
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