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My first time spriting with a PW base. I luff the Trauma Center series, so I kinda took Mia and tried to edit her into Angie. However, I kinda messed up the style on the suit, and had to convert the entire thing to a style similar to the official TC: UtK artwork.
I had to cut the skin down to 3-4 shades, which I think looks rather choppy. I like how her blouse came out, but that's essentially it. And I just don't like something about her bangs. >: Does anyone think I should try to make her a witness instead of an attorney?
There's something about this that just looks masculine. I can't tell what it is. The face also came out horrendously (though I guess that's what happens when you convert 6+ shades down to 4).
And (this has been bugging me), should I try to make her boobs a bit smaller? I already cut down Mia's a bit, but they still look a bit big.
Any crit is helpful. The more detailed the better.
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Are you talking about her bangs or her other hair?
I actually got lazy when getting to the bangs, and just copy/pasted/recoloured them from another sprite I made. >> I should go try to redo those.
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I love you for ripping these.
So damn much.
I was actually taking the colours from her SO palette. D:
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I love you for ripping these.
So damn much.
I was actually taking the colours from her SO palette. D:
Yes, that... scary Angie. Sorry, SO scares me. But I'll get it when it comes out in Australia! And I love you for trying to make her.
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Angie form what i can see is both younger, shorter and thinner than Mia/Phoenix. Also, the lines you've made are a little thick. try to anti-alias it so the lines aren't 2 pixels thick of one colour.
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If you make witness Angie, ti should be better because it is easier to do angles.
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I can see nothing false.(Maybe,because i'm damn bad at editing sprites
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