...Hopefully someday... xD
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Location: Suomi, Finland, Perkele!
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You might wanna edit Machis face bit less round to make it more adult like.
Roundish face is usually more child/teen-ish like thing look.
And maybe clean a bit those lines on his jacket (at places it meets his arm)
just so it doesn't look all that line-ish, if you know what I mean.
Olgas on the other hand need a lot more work really.
You got rid of the boobs, but...That's not all that makes a female. :P
First; now he needs a chest, since it looks like she has those hints of "saggybags" now.
And you need to edit her curves more, that *** needs some editing too.
And the biggest complain I have of it; the face. All too feminine.
Longer his face a bit and the thing you need to edit the most; the eyes.
Also; shortening her hair a bit wouldn't hurt either.
Yup yup.
The Zomcies are the best ones here.
Nothing major to nag about, so I'll just jump to the next ones.
Well...There's really not much to say of these Rons really.
The hair's different, but...That's pretty much it.
Meh...Pretty nice, but improving still needed, umm, gal?
Keep at it. <3