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HELLO! and welcome to, GOLDEN LUXRAYS SPRITES~

Thank you for checkin' out my sprite page! hope you like them!! any comments will be nice thx.

if you would like to use one of my sprites then you are more than welcome, all i ask is for a little credit. if i have made a request fior somene then please give credit as normal, if i have made someone a sprite please dont not take it without asking the requester, and giving me credit, thank you hope you like my sprites and sure do hope to get some requests.

REQUEST ARE ON.
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i will do 5 requests at a time, and i will do OC's please do request and dont be shy :3.
1.romeo-max X reg
2.marry- polly X kav
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5.
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request, sure if you really want (only OC thought :payne: )
new!
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thats 'shades' ( im not sure if that going to be his name or not.... you may sugest if you please) and you can see he looks like a shady charceter his usaly sarcasict and thats all i got :3 hope you like :keiko:
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new sprity white~~~~~~~~~
Spoiler: older pearl 'bout 20 or so :D
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'satsuma'
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and more of her in other poses

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NEEEWWW SSPPPRRIIITTEEE~~
Spoiler: franny aged 8 and her mother.
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newist sprite
frankenstein LARRY!! teehe
Spoiler: hope you like it, this one for once i like :3
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please tell me wich one you like most pleaassseeee thx


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new sprite
ZOMBKAY (teehee)
ok ok, i now its not my best, but i couldnt think what more to do with a zombie... :/ any ideas people?
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It does look alot like Saffron
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It's pretty good for a first sprite. I don't know what to say about it right now but at the moment, it's pretty good.
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Dark Coffee Drinker wrote:
It's pretty good for a first sprite. I don't know what to say about it right now but at the moment, it's pretty good.

he he thx
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Golden Luxray wrote:
Dark Coffee Drinker wrote:
It's pretty good for a first sprite. I don't know what to say about it right now but at the moment, it's pretty good.

he he thx


Your welcome! Does your editing program have a magic wand tool in it?
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Dark Coffee Drinker wrote:
Golden Luxray wrote:
Dark Coffee Drinker wrote:
It's pretty good for a first sprite. I don't know what to say about it right now but at the moment, it's pretty good.

he he thx


Your welcome! Does your editing program have a magic wand tool in it?


well i was useing paint becuase my manga studios doesnt have a peipet (as far as i know..)
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Good for a start.
I think she needs darker shading and outlines.
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Good for a start.
I think she needs darker shading and outlines.

ill get right on it ;)
(but may i ask darker shading everywhere? or one place?)
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It's only good cuz you used your tablet... hmmph.

Nah I kid. It is good for a first time spriter, and the advice I gave on MSN yo have put into use, just I think Her waist goes in very quickly! This isn't too much of a problem now I think about it (April May)....but it is worth considering fattening her up a bit
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ok i made her dress darker...should i dont the faces and arms too? '.';; hope you like.
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HELLO again....
(SORRY FOR DOUBLE POST!)ive made a new OC sprite :D hope you like it and any comment will be helpful.(as far as i know theres no one with a ponytail and a stripy sirt.)
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(as far as i know theres no one with a ponytail and a stripy sirt.)


Apart from Penny =P

Nah but that's pretty good, definitely your best so far =D you just need more shading on the shirt.
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Thats really cool! Like Looby said I think the shirt needs a tad of work. Shading, and also the lines on her shirt are perfectly straight. I think It could look nicer if the stripes curved where her curves would be. It is a nice character though!

Although she looks like the design I was using for our defence attorney for our not-planned yet comic. Grr.
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.:looby:. wrote:
Golden Luxray wrote:
(as far as i know theres no one with a ponytail and a stripy sirt.)


Apart from Penny =P

Nah but that's pretty good, definitely your best so far =D you just need more shading on the shirt.


thx (and thx to you romeo) well i put more shadng on and did her with crossed arms, hope you like.
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UPDATE! :3
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Not a bad partner for Ursula (WHOBYTHEWAYNOONEHASCOMMENTEDONWOEISME) jk

Nah seems interesting, however I think his hair/face needs changing because he seems like Young Klav with a tophat and suit...I think different hair, more face edits could make him a bit better
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Not a bad partner for Ursula (WHOBYTHEWAYNOONEHASCOMMENTEDONWOEISME) jk

Nah seems interesting, however I think his hair/face needs changing because he seems like Young Klav with a tophat and suit...I think different hair, more face edits could make him a bit better


well i did some diffrent coloured hair, but im not sure with ic the best HELP XD. anyways here it is
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also becuase i did not know what to improve on 'shade' i made another :D
and once again i fail at hair :will: anyway here she is, she has not name...
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That latest sprite look alright, pretty good work. :phoenix:

Hair can be tricky, I'm not too good at it myself, but I'd say try not to shade and highlight in big solid blocks, try to break them up a little. (In fact you could use this rule while shading just about anything.)

For example, on your lastest sprite. Her ponytail/bun (I don't know what to call it. :bellboy: ) wouldn't really be completely in the shade. It rises above the top of the head, therefore light would be able to reach it, as such you would have highlights - depending on where the light source is.

Hope that helped. :gant:
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thx yh this will help me and ill get on straight away (btw its a bun ;D)
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Golden Luxray wrote:
thx yh this will help me and ill get on straight away (btw its a bun ;D)


No problem. :will:
Yeah, I thought it was, but I wasn't sure.
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~NEW SPRITE!~
Spoiler: older pearl 'bour 20 or so :3
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I like the concept of Pearl as a police woman. I am sure you will improve greatly in time. =>
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I like the concept of Pearl as a police woman. I am sure you will improve greatly in time. =>


thankies!!! i hope i do improve in time :3 glad you like the idea of pearls being a police woman for no reason i just though of it hehe :pearl:
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uuuppppppddddaaaaatttteeee!!!!!
just call her 'satsuma'
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Golden Luxray wrote:
HELLO!
Thank you for checkin' out my sprite page! hope you like them!! any comments will be nice thx.
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request, sure if you really want (only OC thought :payne: )
new!
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thats 'shades' ( im not sure if that going to be his name or not.... you may sugest if you please) and you can see he looks like a shady charceter his usaly sarcasict and thats all i got :3 hope you like :keiko:
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new sprity white~~~~~~~~~
Spoiler: older pearl 'bout 20 or so :D
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'satsuma'
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woooohhhhppppps sorry doubel ^^;;;;;;;;
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QUADRUPEL POST
I am shocked.

Satsuma looks nice, but something is off. I'm not a sprite expert so I atcually have no idea what it is, but just...something. It's probably not even there but...

Anyway, keep up good work. Try to do more poses of older pearl or shades, other than make a lot of new sprites.
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Your sprites look good!
but they lack a dark outline and the shading colours look a little to close together.
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Make them more distinct like this:

Good work though!
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Romeo wrote:
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I am shocked.


Satsuma looks nice, but something is off. I'm not a sprite expert so I atcually have no idea what it is, but just...something. It's probably not even there but...

Anyway, keep up good work. Try to do more poses of older pearl or shades, other than make a lot of new sprites.

errrrr derp attack >< sorry for many posts ehehehe....he..
anyways thankies yh i guess i should do more for older pearl....
BUT I DID KNOW WHAT TO DO COS NOONE TOLD ME :larry:
jks anyways i may redo her better and more poses and sterf
but yh thx also
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yh ill get on it hmm i could just do a hole diffrent colour for the back ground :keiko: but yh THANKS EVERYONE!
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YAYSENS MORE BAD SPIRTE~~~
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That last one was quite good. My only quaint is that the skin colour isn't the same in all frames. ;)
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Coming along well!
I like the positions of your character,
It just seems a little rough around the edges, neaten that up and they'd look even better!
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That last one was quite good. My only quaint is that the skin colour isn't the same in all frames. ;)
hehe yh :nick-sweat: i just didnt know wich i should do draker....or lighter
also does it look too much like young franny?

@SuperAj3
thx, yh i do agree, the edges are rough ill get on it.

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So far I like your sprites, but in my eyes they lack kind of, I dunno clean outlines (sorry if that ain't the right word). Also there is a contradiction between your Oc Satsumi. The skin colors of the far left and the skin colors from the others ain't the same. Also it seems weird to me that you used in the darker skinned one a Kay-face and in the others lil-Fran faces. Perhaps it is just me but looks kinda weird to me. But as I know you well you'll improve on everything no matter what may come along your way. The oftener and more you do it the more you improve on your sprites. Keep that work up ;)
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thx cp i will get straight onto it :D but i made my first animation ever and i thought i would show it to you guys : Image i know its really fast '~' and well pretty bad but yh i though i would share it with you guys :3
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i made it slower and know she talks :3 its preeeeeettttyyyy bad ^^;; FORGIVE MEEE

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better, more realistic, however her nose moves up in the last frame XD

other than that good keep up the good work.
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Romeo wrote:
better, more realistic, however her nose moves up in the last frame XD

other than that good keep up the good work.


lol true i didnt even see that XD but ill fix it for you :3
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Lol, I didn't even notice that nose change. xD
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