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ZOMG!!!!111!!!! I MADE MY OWN SPRITE!Topic%20Title
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GIGGIDY.

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Yeah I did ^_-
Here it is...

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She is...
Spoiler:
Name: Marissa Hargreaves
Age: 23
Occupation: Prosecutor/Actress
Misc Facts: Engaged to Edgeworth, she is a very kind woman who can be two faced when in court. She is friends with Franziska Von Karma. She became a prosecutor at 20.
Family: Parents died in car crash a year ago. Other than that... none.


And a part of my fanfic.

If you can help me in any way, post here... Comments are helpful =]
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The foxy ladies can't resist my sandwich

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While it's fairly basic in it's construction, your recolour is very nice and the C+P is very good. Nice work.
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GIGGIDY.

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DarzieP wrote:
While it's fairly basic in it's construction, your recolour is very nice and the C+P is very good. Nice work.


Yay! Thankies... So, it wasn't that bad?
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TABLET GET!

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Well, there's not much I can say on the sprite, because there seems to be a lack of creativitiy. I mean, it seems like you pasted Lana's head on Mia's body, and done some recolour. The sprite isn't bad, because of the lack of actual editing. To maybe fix this, you could think of how more unique your character could be. Like a different hairstyle or colour, or change the outfit to make it even more different! I'll look much better then (in my opinion of course ^^)

Some other things I noticed was that you never recoloured the bottom of the outfit (Intentional or not, I'm not sure ^^). Oh, and if she's not a Fey, then why does have the Magatama? You could probably change it in to a star or something, that would look cool!

(By the way, this was all in good mind. I'm not bringing you down, I'm just trying to help you, since you did ask ^_^ I like to help and give opinions!)
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Thanks Croik! <3 You're the best! And Congratulations to everyone!
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The foxy ladies can't resist my sandwich

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Not at all. You C+P was nice and clean. If this is your first, it's far better than a lot of firsts I've seen.
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I agree with Darzie! ^_^ It's a great first!
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Thanks Croik! <3 You're the best! And Congratulations to everyone!
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Phoenix Wright is generally a bad thing to start doing custom sprites with. Try custom 8-bit mega man robot masters. The size limitations, and general un-need of quality makes it easier to begin spriting more complex stuff like Phoenix Wright. Just a suggestion :sawit:
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True that, Mikker. I'm not really a spriter, but back when I was like, twelve, I did a few (really bad, I might add) MM sprites. It's a good place to start. (What's with Capcom and sprites? :eh?: )
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Shake it up, baby, now, TWIST AND SHOUT!

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Um, I like the recolour, very nice rich purple. The creativity is a bit lacking, but it is a solid start.
Only thing I would say structually, is the head looks off-center with the body.
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Am I allowed to smoke in court?

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Dahahaha, She reminds me so much of my OC! 83
That's pretty good for a first timer sprite, you managed to keep the colours stable. She's really cute. It gets alot easier once you get used to it.

One thing I would suggest though is to get rid of Megatama (In case you don't know, it's the little 9-looking thingy on her neck.)
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The Magatama lets it down.

If that was gone, it would be much better.
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Don't even get me started. Gumshoe rocks

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Heh heh heh. I had my own way with it.
LOOK AT MAH SPRIGHT COMIC
Why does this always happen?
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Most concerned citizen out there.

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Not bad. Keep up the good work.
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*headdesk*

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You're doing a good job! Keep practicing!
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ya, you should change Lana's head a bit XDD
buuuutt since you got her sprite from Master Riku, I don't think you're planning on repairing it.
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