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If you want to use one of my edits, just ask.
I'll have to work on that.
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Great start, although I advise you to use a lighter shade of blue, but other then that, great starter sprite.
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Great start!
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I don't really know what else to say but I'd suggest mixing a few more sprites in there. Like I said though, it's nicely done.
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Wow, great edit. I recommend further frankensteining on the face, maybe give her different eyes (eyes have the biggest impact on an OC), great update, can't wait to see more.
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A tip: If you want to make a sprite that seems very original, I suggest you move on to the stage where you Frankenstein a bunch of different little parts, and then use the appropriate edits to make sure that your OC looks clean!
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Anyways, new sprite added.
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I notice you're fond of using the bow from Franziska's sprite. xD
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That bow is actually one of my favorite sprite bits. It's classy, but not too classy, so it's perfect for just about any type of sprite, attorney or civilian.
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She looks like she had a hard day at work (but looks VERY good).
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Very, though the yellow clothing looks like rubber and the pants seem to be ON the white shirt, not backwards. But that's okay, it means you only need to edit, not redesign.
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Very, though the yellow clothing looks like rubber and the pants seem to be ON the white shirt, not backwards. But that's okay, it means you only need to edit, not redesign.
Thanks for the advice. I just decided to make a new one rather than attempt to salvage the first one.
I think the reason that the yellow clothing looked rubber was the white highlights. They needed to have been a bright yellow rather than white.
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Very, though the yellow clothing looks like rubber and the pants seem to be ON the white shirt, not backwards. But that's okay, it means you only need to edit, not redesign.
Thanks for the advice. I just decided to make a new one rather than attempt to salvage the first one.
I think the reason that the yellow clothing looked rubber was the white highlights. They needed to have been a bright yellow rather than white.Your iteration of her looks VERY different, but it's still her.
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Eugh.
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Yep, it's her alright, but as you mentioned, the face looks different (she looks older). Why don't you try drawing older characters to see how well you can nail them?
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They resemble the art style of CGi games (Zelda comes to mind).
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It kind of reminds me of Layton actually. xD The minimalist shading, at least.
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It kind of reminds me of Layton actually. xD The minimalist shading, at least.
Good point, it also resembles that.
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Zoom in and ya guys see a LOT of those transparent lines everywhere.
Also; it has around 3800 colors, so what it mostly need is LOT more cleaning.
But no worries though Kim. That's pretty basic mistake around here as I've seen.
People don't seem to realize that you also need to clean the work after just resizing it,
which I myself learned from the try and error too.
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Also, I seem to have figured out why the face wasn't looking right. Apparently I was placing the eyes too high up and they're not round enough for her age. AA sprites seem to have eyes that get smaller and less round as the characters age.
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And I can't make male sprites (btw your sprites are pretty awesome!). Every time I try to do something with any of the guys, it comes out all "BLArrghh".
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Guys I'm okay with, but it's bit harder to edit females.
Dunno.
Hmm...I take you'r using photoshop?
I'm afraid I have no experience from that, since I use Gimp.
But I suggest ya read this topic since it has all those basic tricks.
...Or then ya learn from trial and error, like I do lol (too lazy to read anything)
One thing I suggest ya to do is trying to find your own style and comparing your works to other people works.
For example; (hope ya guys [ceres & cold] don't mind me using ya cheaply as an example. Take this as a...free advertising)
EMT...It's hard to give advices out of blank! :D
I'm more suited to just critisize really...Just post and we'll work it step by step,
I guess.
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And yet, there's a limited number of colors on each one, even though Cold's looks like it has more (when it really doesn't, it just has "HOLYMOMMAS" amount of shading going on versus the other two...)
I think looking at other people's works will help with my coloring issues.
(Also, new sprite added.)
I'd say
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Adding the shades under her b...chest. (Don't know why I don't like to say the b-word at all these days...)
You see how the shades go on her face? Her left side of the face is ponted to light source,
and you need to edit the shades of the body same way.
Try comparing this to Iris, for example.
Also...Try zooming to her arms and you see another problem.
Try editing the lines so they'd look smoother. Same thing with the shirt.
For comparison (of what I mean), take a closer look to those three examples above.
Yeah, it's time consuming, but makes the sprites look better.
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Explain it better, plz. :D
Umm...You see, these two ya posted recently were bit different fro your usual style.
For example the prosecutorya had was more like how I likee to do my sprites so...Decided to go with oldies lol.
Ummmm...*think something man! Quick!!*
Oh! I'd love to chat more 'bout this, but...You know...LoL Championships. iG is playing. And later Azubu, soooo...Seeya! *wiuh*
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Anyways, I've been asked to work on a sprite sheet/set thingy for someone. It's gonna be awhile before the next sprite.
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this image looks odd i think... parts of some color...
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