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I was able to get someone to do most of the bench sprites, however I still need Lana pointing, and Lana as the bench assistant (similar to Maya and Mia).
Once you're free, and the sprite sheet is finished, I'll show you what's been done.
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Cheryl's Normal Pose
Cheryl's Smug Pose
Cheryl On Her Bluetooth, the second one is he gesturing while on the phone.
Cheryl's Sad Pose
Cheryl's Angry/Nervous Pose
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If these are the sprites of Case 1's defendant, then something funny is going on. DeMatador was on Ace Fancase the other day...and you've been asking Bad Player for the script so putting the pieces together, is it possible that we will see Case 1 of PV: AA be released sometime in the next two months?!
The only thing that stands out for me is the use of Alita for her face. It's really easy to recognize so maybe use Adrian's mouth and eyes instead since they would compliment the hair...I think. But other than that, it's great! Is the base scratched or based off Franziska by any chance?
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And Tap... well, I'm not telling ;P
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New older Gumshoe, "That's CHIEF to you, pal!"
Sprites Used: AAI Gumshoe Headshot, Gumshoe, Furio Tigre, Damon Gant, Marvin Grossberg. Colors: Mike Meekins, Hobo Phoenix, Apollo Justice, and Quercus Alba.
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*chief.
That's a good older Gummy, he looks even more lovable.
Good job on mini Klav, I bet that was a pain in the arse.
see how it withers before my flower of justice
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He really wasn't too challenging, but some things really got annoying, like his hair, I hated his hair.
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New older Gumshoe, "That's CHIEF to you, pal!"
Sprites Used: AAI Gumshoe Headshot, Gumshoe, Furio Tigre, Damon Gant, Marvin Grossberg. Colors: Mike Meekins, Hobo Phoenix, Apollo Justice, and Quercus Alba.
very nice work on the older gumshoe perc...although he seems odd looking in blue for some reason...thats just me though still really like it :D
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But there was one tiny thing that bothered me...
I hope you don't mind me pointing it out...
I really liked your Katrina sprites, but what bothered me was when you look at her first sprite, she looks perfectly fine and very good.
But when you look at her Objection sprite...well, her breast on the right side is too big compared to how they were in the other sprites.
That's all I wanted to point out.
Otherwise, keep up the awesome work! I love your sprites!
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Anyway I've done some cleaning up of Older Gumshoe, still not done so not transparent.
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Ah, that's understandable. Breasts can be hard to work with.
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Looking forward to more!
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Finished with all my changes to Older Gumshoe, they're subtle differences but compared to the original some become very abvious and I'm quite proud of this NOW finished result.
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Dan Cobbler; a nice, smooth sprite; I think his clothes could use some darker shading so there would be more contrast. The main problem is his body - it is really, really small, especially in comparison with his head. I'd suggest you reference his body type off from Armstrong and start working from that.
Next, older Gumshoe. The sprite is very polished and pleasant to look at. However, take note of his shoulders. As we all know, Gumshoe is a rather wide and broad-shouldered man, yet, surprisingly, the older version's body looks very sleek, more suiting someone like Phoenix or Edgeworth. I made a comparison of the Gumshoe as shown in the game and your older version, so you can see it better.
The other thing is, his right shoulder is noticeably longer than the left one. It makes the sprite look rather... uneven, for lack of better words. It's not a major mistake and it shouldn't be hard to fix, but it's rather jarring.
I hope you will find my tips helpful. Again, keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you. :)
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Either way, I'm no pro and anatomy seems to be my Achilles' heel. The main problem with Cobbler is I wanted him to look short but that led me to disporportion his body. But either way, every character for the game is going to get at least one clean up or redo. Thanks for all the tips Kaitou :)
I'll get to work on Gumshoe now.
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Hopefully finished, widened the shoulders as per suggestion and made the shading more uniform throughout then smoothed out some rough lines.
I'd say
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It's a bit flashy atm.
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EDIT: Ok how's this?
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yours___________________________________Edit
this is how I would go about making a tie :P
anyways sorry that i cant really explain it but I hope it helps. :)
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Don't worry. Anatomy isn't easy, but looking at your sprites, you seem to have a rather good grasp on it; with enough practice you won't be making these little mistakes. ;3 Also, flipping your picture horizontally usually helps you notice the errors you've made; I'm not sure if it works as well with sprites, though.
You're welcome! I'm glad I was of any help. :) And the redone older Gumshoe looks really awesome now <3
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Maybe bit Marioish, but...Meh...Perfect :3
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now i remember
i thought it was insanely funny
and im wondering,is that the only pose you have?
if not,do you think i could use him for a small parody comic im working on?
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New OC, Osias Bengal, a character from Case 5 of my fangame.
He's not 100% done, because on the sleeves and furry part of his jacket there are supposed to be black tiger stripes, but I couldn't get them to look right so I figured I'd just post what I have at this moment.
Thanks to foxxis forher Shi-Long Lang sprite.
Ingredients: Diego Armando, Shadi Smith, Apollo Justice, Klavier Gavin, Larry Butz, Shi-Long Lang by foxxis, Byrne Faraday. Colors: Ema Skye, Romein LeTouse, Diego Armando, Tyrell Badd.
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.... Payne on Mia's body O__o ... XD
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New OC, Osias Bengal, a character from Case 5 of my fangame.
He's not 100% done, because on the sleeves and furry part of his jacket there are supposed to be black tiger stripes, but I couldn't get them to look right so I figured I'd just post what I have at this moment.
Thanks to foxxis forher Shi-Long Lang sprite.
Ingredients: Diego Armando, Shadi Smith, Apollo Justice, Klavier Gavin, Larry Butz, Shi-Long Lang by foxxis, Byrne Faraday. Colors: Ema Skye, Romein LeTouse, Diego Armando, Tyrell Badd.
OMG that has to be the sexiest OC i've ever seen haha. D:
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Fabulous. Not seen a lot of black sprites, this is really good.
see how it withers before my flower of justice
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Any and all critique is much obliged.
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just my own thoughts...I'm liking the fact your trying to change up from the apollo face and whatever you decide to do...good luck :)
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Thanks for the advice cold, the whole thing just makes his face... normal, especially compared to the other one.
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Um....do a sprite of me? XD Nah, just kidding. Keep it up~
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A new point sprite, not quite sure but something seems slightly off, but it could just be me.
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A new point sprite, not quite sure but something seems slightly off, but it could just be me.
His right arm is bent the wrong way. If it's in he pocket, it's more natural for it to bend toward his body. If his hand it going out from his side it shouldn't bend so much. (Or it should bend forward)
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A new point sprite, not quite sure but something seems slightly off, but it could just be me.
Maybe it's his left eye, they kinda are kinda looking at different angles.
Edit: It's the shading between the eyebrow and the eye what makes it look that way.
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A new point sprite, not quite sure but something seems slightly off, but it could just be me.
The neck looks a little weird imo
it seems like a fusion of Phoenix's and Apollo's neck
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And UF, he's actually holding his arm at his side, a bit behind his back.
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I was playing with it when I realized what was glaring at me was he lacked a forehead and was thus inproportionate with the the other pose, I fixed and also tweaked the eyes a bit more.
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