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Author:  Lycoris Maida [ Fri Apr 18, 2008 7:04 pm ]
Post subject:  Comments on a beginner's work?
She's my only OC, Lycoris Maida/Kiridashi Kamisori.
The one on the left, I think I did shortly after last year's OC contest. The one on the right is the same character seven years later, in the Apollo Justice timeline.
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As far as the second one goes, I used Adrian for the body, Apollo and Ema for the sleeves, Lana's face, and a combination of Klavier, Franziska, Wocky, and Mia for the hair. I don't think I used much more than Ema, Franziska and Penny Nichols for the first one...

So what do you think? These are the only sprites I've ever done--I'd probably do more if they didn't take me so long. I'd really like other people's opinions on them.

EDIT: Oh, yeah...the second one was supposed to be holding something, but it wasn't working out the way I wanted, so it's likely I'll edit it in later.
Author:  G.Gustice [ Fri Apr 18, 2008 7:21 pm ]
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They are awesome!I like the 2nd one^^.
Author:  Lycoris Maida [ Fri Apr 18, 2008 7:22 pm ]
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Thanks a lot, I just finished that a few minutes ago. I worked hard on it, so I'm glad you like it.
Author:  root_beer_junkie [ Fri Apr 18, 2008 9:41 pm ]
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...I could never do this good... =_=
Author:  The Sandwich [ Fri Apr 18, 2008 9:48 pm ]
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The eyes look a little weird. I'm not sure if it's the colour, or the shading. Otherwise, it's good.
Author:  SilentBobX [ Fri Apr 18, 2008 10:07 pm ]
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The eyes look a little weird. I'm not sure if it's the colour, or the shading. Otherwise, it's good.


My guess would be the Color choice. I think it might also be the Pupils (Little black dot) I'de get rid of that. Also, there doesn't seem to be any shadowing underneith her crevet. ( Frannies's tie thingy )
Author:  Lycoris Maida [ Fri Apr 18, 2008 10:48 pm ]
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Thanks a lot, guys, her eyes always kinda bugged me too.
....And now I know why the frilly thing never quite looked right either. *facepalm*
I'll get to fixing all that soon.
Author:  Leila-Zero [ Fri Apr 18, 2008 11:57 pm ]
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Wow, these look absolutely FABULOUS! :pshhh:
Nice work ^^
Author:  Lilith [ Sat Apr 19, 2008 12:04 am ]
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Awesome! ^^ I love them! Looks like you really put effort in them *coughunlikecoughmecoughcough* Mind if i PM you asking for a few tips later? :)
Author:  Lycoris Maida [ Sat Apr 19, 2008 1:07 am ]
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@Leila: Thanks a lot, I appreciate it. x3
@Lilith: Um...wow, you want tips from me? Your sprites look a lot better than mine, but PM me and I'll do what little I can. :edgy:
Author:  Lilith [ Sat Apr 19, 2008 1:16 am ]
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Like i said, your sprites actually have dedication and effort. I just do sprites for fun (i don't mean to be ungrateful to all these lovely persons that praise me in my thread), but, as i said, your sprites are escencially better than mines. That's my story and i'm sticking to it, dammit! :karma-scream:


....whoops, sorry. Got carried away :oops: i'm having some problems with my PMs right now, so i'll pm you tomorrow :3 thanks for your time! :that-b-word:
Author:  Lycoris Maida [ Sat Apr 19, 2008 1:18 am ]
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^///^ Thanks.

AND YEAH YOU STICK TO THAT STORY WHY DON'T YA. xP
Author:  Zinle [ Sat Apr 19, 2008 6:26 pm ]
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I like both ^_^
Author:  Lycoris Maida [ Sun Apr 20, 2008 6:05 pm ]
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Thanks!
I really appreciate everyone's comments, you're all really nice. I just really hope that I can be as good as some other sprite editors I've seen around this forum.
Author:  Lottie [ Mon Apr 21, 2008 7:49 pm ]
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Nice work :keiko:
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