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Author:  Jintor [ Sat May 05, 2007 8:28 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Phoenix Wrong: UPDATE!

RevFirst wrote:
Manfred is meant to remain idle for the music and sequence to capture the viewers. Otherwise, he would be doing some random animation during this if it was up to you. Do you have any clear suggestion of what Manfred should be doing at the time? The echoes are meant to remain in that length unless it would seem sort of boring. Trust me I've tried it. The only problem I'll admit facing is 3) and I'll need to rebalance this out on the next update.


Ok, i guess only the volume issue is left then. > >

Just watching it again, the only real problem i see is about 3 seconds of transition while the camera is zooming in after he slams his fist. It looks as though he should be doing something, but since I don't know what it is, meh.

Oh, and I've sent in Edgeworth's lines in... Unnamed 27? I think.

Author:  Deefunx [ Sat May 05, 2007 1:32 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Phoenix Wrong: UPDATE!

RevFirst wrote:
Wizard Anon wrote:
Pearl Mr. Nick, I'm bored!
Nick I'm busy. Go write to Santa or whatever 8-year-olds do nowadays.
Pearl Okay. (writes) Dear Santa, Please send me a baby brother. Signed, Pearly
A few days later...
Pearl Mr. Nick, Santa wrote me back!
Phoenix What did he say?
Pearl He said, "Send me your mother." What does that mean?
Ack
Pearly

I love but will it work in this project? You decide!


I think it should be added in, you might want to re-balance the court to investigation scenes. Therefore they arent just court jokes, you can have some random ones. (Like thats our Larry.)

Author:  The Sandwich [ Sat May 05, 2007 1:34 pm ]
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There's actually a couple that are gonna be set outside the courtroom. It's just the parts Rev and I are pickin usually are the courtroom ones.

Author:  Deefunx [ Sat May 05, 2007 1:36 pm ]
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Yeah, I just think that theres a missed opportunity.

Spoiler: gs3


Maybe a take off of that for something >.>

Author:  The Sandwich [ Sat May 05, 2007 1:46 pm ]
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A blank spoiler tag in a missed opprortunity? Beef

Author:  Deefunx [ Sat May 05, 2007 1:49 pm ]
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DarzieP wrote:
A blank spoiler tag in a missed opprortunity? Beef


Guh? Ack Its a link ;D

Author:  The Sandwich [ Sat May 05, 2007 1:50 pm ]
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Yeah, but links go invisimable when they're spoiler tagged, so excuse me. Godot And it isn't really funny, it's in GS3 is it not.

Author:  Deefunx [ Sat May 05, 2007 1:55 pm ]
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Sound clip and explosion are. A bunch of parodies where Godot explodes >.>

Nick objection
Godot boom

Like a tagline >.>

Author:  T3h_Waffleman [ Sat May 05, 2007 5:56 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Phoenix Wrong: Next Gen.

More comic genius:

Spoiler: GS4 characters but no spoilers but I'm afraid of banning
Minuki Hey, Odoroki! Watch me pull a rabbit out of my hat!
Odoroki Not this again...
* Minuki pulls Hobohodo out of her hat*
Minuki Whoops, wrong hat!

Author:  Mikker [ Sat May 05, 2007 6:42 pm ]
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woah, Rev. Never seen that. Just saw it on the forum and though it was funny XD

I'm not sure, does Minuki have a pull-out-of-hat animation? I guess that would be a requirement...

GS4 jokes could be done easily, though. Heres a cheap one.

Hobohodo : ...

Garyuu : So... how are you gonna get the truth out of him?

Odoroki : With my PASSIONATE HEART BURNING RED! (some epic-making, like reverb or something, soundeffect on the BURNING RED, while on the speedlines background)

*silence*

Kyouya : .... thaaat's nice. I think I'll have to plead 'Not Guilty' then.

Odoroki : Really?!

Kyouya : No.

Of course, that's a heckload of new sprites to make for a single spoof.

Author:  T3h_Waffleman [ Sat May 05, 2007 7:13 pm ]
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After the credits:

Hobohodo And that's how I became a hobo!

Odoroki What? That was just a bunch of poorly made, unfunny skits about nothing!

Hobohodo I'm...staying silent about that...

Odoroki But-

Hobohodo SILENT!

Author:  Wizard Anon [ Sat May 05, 2007 7:20 pm ]
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You will see this on all of my posts. I used this account when I was 13-14 and some of the content I am not happy about. I am sorry to anyone who read my posts and was rightfully offended by any of it. I will likely not use this website again, just FYI.

Author:  Android 21 3/7 [ Sun May 06, 2007 12:16 am ]
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Can I request that you do Unnamed 15 next? It just looks like fun!

Author:  The Sandwich [ Sun May 06, 2007 12:17 am ]
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We'll see bout that. Rev and I are gonna have a talk bout what to do next. Emo von Karma is a time whore.

Author:  Android 21 3/7 [ Sun May 06, 2007 12:18 am ]
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okay. Take your time.

Author:  RonStarwind [ Sun May 06, 2007 3:28 am ]
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I sent in my lines for part 30 to both of you.

Author:  RevFirst [ Sun May 06, 2007 4:28 am ]
Post subject:  Phoenix Wrong: NG UPDATE!

*yawn* I've worked real hard to keep the promise.
I'm so sleepy, I'll reply to your posts and update the script some other time.
Till then... *falls asleep*
Spoiler: Emo von Karma (Incomplete ~ 3rd Update)

PS: I'm not so confident about the lip-syncing (when Manfred sing).
If you see a problem, inform me and I'll fix it.

Author:  fapman [ Sun May 06, 2007 5:18 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Phoenix Wrong: NG UPDATE!

RevFirst wrote:
Spoiler: Emo von Karma (Incomplete ~ 3rd Update)

PS: I'm not so confident about the lip-syncing (when Manfred sing).
If you see a problem, inform me and I'll fix it.

The synching seems fine to me. I also like how you've made the screen vibrate as von Karma does his classic headbang.

Author:  Jintor [ Sun May 06, 2007 5:49 am ]
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That's awesome.

Author:  Deefunx [ Sun May 06, 2007 9:25 am ]
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That is amazing xD '10 minutes later' rofl.>.>

Author:  Firelight Cascade [ Sun May 06, 2007 3:51 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Phoenix Wrong: UPDATE!

RevFirst wrote:
Burning Rain wrote:
This spawned today at school talking to my friend Keon.
ACE NINJA PHOENIX WRITE
OBJECT! *In ninja outfit* Objection *Throws several kunai at Miles*
Edgeworth *Also in ninja jammies* Objection *Throws shurikan at Phoenix*
*Kunai and shurikan are about to hit their marks*
:udgy: *leaps out of nowhere* OVERRULED!!!! *Throws a giant cheesy-looking ball of exagerated DBZ lightning at Phoenix and Edgy*
Ack Wacky Edgy OH SHIT!
(note) Try to make the Judge sound really cheesy and loud like the IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAND!!! line. ;)

LOL That's a good one but the ninja out is a bit much. The cheesyness and weapons are fine but the Judge should throw his gavel like an idiot. Will this work? Eh?


I guess it will work fine. For this one I don't really care if you do it or not. It was pretty much Keon's fault. xD

Author:  Mad Surge [ Sun May 06, 2007 6:25 pm ]
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10 minutes later! Lol
I love the headbang thing and how Karma annoys Nick to death. And the lip-synch is perfect, so don't bother yourself anymore with that.
I still think though that you should put the Godot part, just to put an end to the skit

Author:  Android 21 3/7 [ Mon May 07, 2007 1:32 am ]
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Hey, can I suggest something from my fanart thread?

Ack Godot raises a good point! What are we going to do?
Maya Fey I'll call my sis!
Godot (Look at them sweat it out over there. They have no chance.) *chugs his coffee* (Maybe I should do my "Ha ha! I Win, Maruhodo" dance in the defence lobby after-
Maya Fey --> Mia Maya
Spit
Mia Maya Godot again huh?
Nick Yeah. I don't get what this guy's problem is! It's like he has a personal grudge against me or something!
*sceen pan to Godot!*
Godot *faints*
Ack Is... Is he okay?
Mia Maya I'm sure he's fine...
:udgy: Since the prosecution is out of commission I declare the defendant, "Not Guilty!"

*a little later*
Godot CURSE YOU MARUHODO!
Ack Come on, Maya! Time to go!
Maya Fey Aww! But I wanted to do my "In your Face, Godot!" dance!

... Oh goodness. Is that too long?

Author:  Trilroy [ Mon May 07, 2007 1:42 am ]
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What's Karma singing in that, anyway? Karma Scream

Author:  The Sandwich [ Mon May 07, 2007 1:44 am ]
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Trilroy wrote:
What's Karma singing in that, anyway? Karma Scream


A German rock song called "Du Hast" by Rammstein. I have it funnily enough, for my bro. I also supplied the sound effects and logo which may be in the update.

Author:  LySs [ Mon May 07, 2007 1:45 am ]
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Trilroy wrote:
What's Karma singing in that, anyway? Karma Scream

"Du Hast" by Rammstein
http://www.esnips.com/doc/126c315e-a30d ... ---Du-hast

Author:  RevFirst [ Mon May 07, 2007 4:48 am ]
Post subject:  Phoenix Wrong: NG UPDATE!

(Sorry about that.
Fixed the post.)
TA-DAH!
Constructive criticism is welcome. What part shall I do next?
Spoiler: Emo von Karma (Complete!)

Anyway, I'll update the script in the next update. Promise.
You people seem to love Wizard Anon's idea so it will be inclucded.
Till then, it's time for the overdue replies!


Android 21 3/7 wrote:
D: Do you accept bribes? I'm just kidding. I know my voice acting needs work. I need more practice. Von Karma I always practice when my sister steals my computer. It makes her leave sooner!

LOL No need to practice, your voice is great and this is what makes it so hard to decide.
I must think hard and be fair...

LySs wrote:
Wacky Edgy W-What makes you think that?? *shify eyes*
Got any evidence to support this claim?
I loved that one! Definitely do it! Edgy
That and I'd really love to do Pearl's lines if this part is added :D

Captain Obvious: OMG! LySs is a Phoenix/Maya supporter! Look at the sig- *shot*
Anyways, you should go record those lines...

Deefunx wrote:
I think it should be added in, you might want to re-balance the court to investigation scenes. Therefore they arent just court jokes, you can have some random ones. (Like thats our Larry.)

True. Animating this with the courtroom setting would just be silly. Detective Gumshoe

Deefunx wrote:
Yeah, I just think that theres a missed opportunity.

Maybe a take off of that for something >.>

I've seen people sending in ideas that are too complicated but isn't this one... Too simple?
It would seem too much of a Phoenix Wrong ciché, sorry.

T3h_Waffleman wrote:
More comic genius:

Spoiler: GS4 characters but no spoilers but I'm afraid of banning
:minuki: Hey, Odoroki! Watch me pull a rabbit out of my hat!
Odoroki Not this again...
* Minuki pulls Hobohodo out of her hat*
Minuki Whoops, wrong hat!


Same as Mikker, does Minuki even have an animation for this? Minuki
PS: Great work on the Odoroki voice.

Mikker wrote:
woah, Rev. Never seen that. Just saw it on the forum and though it was funny XD
GS4 jokes could be done easily, though. Heres a cheap one.
Hobohodo : ...
Garyuu : So... how are you gonna get the truth out of him?
Odoroki : With my PASSIONATE HEART BURNING RED! (some epic-making, like reverb or something, soundeffect on the BURNING RED, while on the speedlines background)
*silence*
Kyouya : .... thaaat's nice. I think I'll have to plead 'Not Guilty' then.
Odoroki : Really?!
Kyouya : No.
Of course, that's a heckload of new sprites to make for a single spoof.

Thanks. Also, I get what you're saying about GS4 jokes but this one seems to lack something...
I can't put my finger on what that is...

T3h_Waffleman wrote:
After the credits:
Hobohodo And that's how I became a hobo!
Odoroki What? That was just a bunch of poorly made, unfunny skits about nothing!
Hobohodo I'm...staying silent about that...
Odoroki But-
Hobohodo SILENT!

LOL Can that even count as satire? (Matt Engarde say so.)
I may add that to the list.

Android 21 3/7 wrote:
Can I request that you do Unnamed 15 next? It just looks like fun!

Mmm. I don't see why not. Let's give it a day for people to decide.

DarzieP wrote:
Emo von Karma is a time whore.

Now, I ain't sayin the part's a time-digger (When I'm in need)
But it ain't messin with no lame animator. (It steal my time)


RonStarwind wrote:
I sent in my lines for part 30 to both of you.

OMG! I actually got the file. Guess you've permanently fixed the problem. Gant

fapman wrote:
The synching seems fine to me. I also like how you've made the screen vibrate as von Karma does his classic headbang.

Thanks. I thought I took some real risks there... Guess it payed off! Redd White

Jintor wrote:
That's awesome.

Thanks. I'm happy to have fixed the errors that have bugged you.

Deefunx wrote:
That is amazing xD '10 minutes later' rofl.>.>

Thanks. I must have been high when thinking that up. (Metaphorically so people doesn't get the wrong idea...)

Burning Rain wrote:
I guess it will work fine. For this one I don't really care if you do it or not. It was pretty much Keon's fault. xD

I'm just glad that there wasn't any problems... Though, I still tempted to make a cheesy Judge. :udgy:

Mad Surge wrote:
10 minutes later! Lol
I love the headbang thing and how Karma annoys Nick to death. And the lip-synch is perfect, so don't bother yourself anymore with that.
I still think though that you should put the Godot part, just to put an end to the skit

Thanks. Phoenix
The reason I didn't add the Godot/Pacman joke is because noone has sent in any voice clips for him. People overlooked this multiple times, I even showed the wanted line. Sorry.

Android 21 3/7 wrote:
Hey, can I suggest something from my fanart thread?
Ack Godot raises a good point! What are we going to do?
Maya Fey I'll call my sis!
Godot (Look at them sweat it out over there. They have no chance.) *chugs his coffee* (Maybe I should do my "Ha ha! I Win, Maruhodo" dance in the defence lobby after-
Maya Fey --> Mia Maya
Spit
Mia Maya Godot again huh?
Nick Yeah. I don't get what this guy's problem is! It's like he has a personal grudge against me or something!
*sceen pan to Godot!*
Godot *faints*
Ack Is... Is he okay?
Mia Maya I'm sure he's fine...
:udgy: Since the prosecution is out of commission I declare the defendant, "Not Guilty!"
*a little later*
Godot CURSE YOU MARUHODO!
Ack Come on, Maya! Time to go!
Maya Fey Aww! But I wanted to do my "In your Face, Godot!" dance!
... Oh goodness. Is that too long?

That's a lengthy one but still funny. I'll try to do something about this when I update the script. Dr. Grey



COOKIES ALL AROUND!
Image

Author:  fapman [ Mon May 07, 2007 4:54 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Phoenix Wrong: NG UPDATE!

RevFirst wrote:
Which part shall I do next?


Unnamed Part 10...either one. Any objections?

P.S.: The ending was a bit unexpected, but hey, it works perfectly. I will definetely fear Emo von Karma.

Author:  Mikker [ Mon May 07, 2007 7:29 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Phoenix Wrong: Next Gen.

yeah Rev, my though exactly, kind of cheap. I was gonna add an air guitar before Kyouya says no, but really!

This one also striked me as being good material.

IagotheParrot wrote:
Judge : Hello, court. It's 12:00. The weather today is sunny. The jury left the court an hour ago after the trial of Michael Meekins, found not guilty for the murder of Lana Skye when Prosectuor Skye herself ran into the courtroom herself yelling, "I'm alive! I'm alive, you idiots!"


A little editing and I think it works, just like that.

Author:  Jintor [ Mon May 07, 2007 10:48 am ]
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I like it. But staring at a talking head might be a little weird. Doing anything with the camera while the judge is doing his little monologue?

Author:  The Sandwich [ Mon May 07, 2007 11:23 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Phoenix Wrong: NG UPDATE!

fapman wrote:
P.S.: The ending was a bit unexpected, but hey, it works perfectly. I will definetely fear Emo von Karma.


Me and Rev talkin at 2am cause unexpected results...trust me.

Author:  Mikker [ Mon May 07, 2007 11:25 am ]
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Jintor wrote:
I like it. But staring at a talking head might be a little weird. Doing anything with the camera while the judge is doing his little monologue?


I think it could be done with having Edgeworth on a studio with payne glasses - like in that GS4 commercial.

Of course, having some spoofiness with having it look like a television channel, like having a badge with a giant '4' on it in the cornor, and have the diffrent firm names with their up and downs in the lower bar. And an image of Lana with a quote below it. Kinda like that.

It could go something like this:

Image : Goodmorning, viewers. It's 12 AM, and we have exciting news on the trial ageanst Mike Meekins in the murder case of Lana Skye.

Image : Mike Meekins has been found 'Not Guilty', after Lana Skye herself ran into the courtroom shouting "I'm not dead! I'm not dead, you morons."

Image : We have a reporter on the stage, live, from the courthouse.

??? : Mr. Payne, What has happened in this trial?

Payne : We're currently in the middle of investigating what happened, but I can say that we are currently suspecting that the Autopsy repport has been faked.

Image : It was not possible to get a comment from the defense attorney, mr. Phoenix Wright, but he was quoted to have said "Thank god nobody died this time, I'm sick of all these murders."

Author:  Android 21 3/7 [ Mon May 07, 2007 10:07 pm ]
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Agia Shock Larry PHOENIX NOOOOOOO

Author:  The Sandwich [ Mon May 07, 2007 10:11 pm ]
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Android 21 3/7 wrote:
Agia Shock Larry PHOENIX NOOOOOOO


That was the lovechild of a conference at 2am and coffee.

Author:  Arruruerie [ Mon May 07, 2007 10:14 pm ]
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Mikker wrote:
yeah Rev, my though exactly, kind of cheap. I was gonna add an air guitar before Kyouya says no, but really!

This one also striked me as being good material.

IagotheParrot wrote:
Judge : Hello, court. It's 12:00. The weather today is sunny. The jury left the court an hour ago after the trial of Michael Meekins, found not guilty for the murder of Lana Skye when Prosectuor Skye herself ran into the courtroom herself yelling, "I'm alive! I'm alive, you idiots!"


A little editing and I think it works, just like that.


Ack Really? I'm glad someone liked it! And...

Quote:
: Goodmorning, viewers. It's 12 AM, and we have exciting news on the trial ageanst Mike Meekins in the murder case of Lana Skye.

: Mike Meekins has been found 'Not Guilty', after Lana Skye herself ran into the courtroom shouting "I'm not dead! I'm not dead, you morons."

: We have a reporter on the stage, live, from the courthouse.

??? : Mr. Payne, What has happened in this trial?

: We're currently in the middle of investigating what happened, but I can say that we are currently suspecting that the Autopsy repport has been faked.

: It was not possible to get a comment from the defense attorney, mr. Phoenix Wright, but he was quoted to have said "Thank god nobody died this time, I'm sick of all these murders."


I like.

By the way, these are so funny. I love both the original Phoenix Wrongs and these creative animated ones. The Milkshakes and Emo von Karma scenes are my faves so far.

Author:  T3h_Waffleman [ Mon May 07, 2007 10:22 pm ]
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Thanks about the voice, and you should do 15. I wrote it, you know. *smug*

Author:  Jyuni [ Tue May 08, 2007 12:24 am ]
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I really think the HoboNick and Odoroki skit at the end is hilarious. (SILENT!) You guys are doing a really awesome job on this.

Author:  Jintor [ Tue May 08, 2007 7:02 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Phoenix Wrong: Next Gen.

Mikker wrote:
Jintor wrote:
I like it. But staring at a talking head might be a little weird. Doing anything with the camera while the judge is doing his little monologue?


I think it could be done with having Edgeworth on a studio with payne glasses - like in that GS4 commercial.

Of course, having some spoofiness with having it look like a television channel, like having a badge with a giant '4' on it in the cornor, and have the diffrent firm names with their up and downs in the lower bar. And an image of Lana with a quote below it. Kinda like that.

It could go something like this:

Image : Goodmorning, viewers. It's 12 AM, and we have exciting news on the trial ageanst Mike Meekins in the murder case of Lana Skye.

Image : Mike Meekins has been found 'Not Guilty', after Lana Skye herself ran into the courtroom shouting "I'm not dead! I'm not dead, you morons."

Image : We have a reporter on the stage, live, from the courthouse.

??? : Mr. Payne, What has happened in this trial?

Payne : We're currently in the middle of investigating what happened, but I can say that we are currently suspecting that the Autopsy repport has been faked.

Image : It was not possible to get a comment from the defense attorney, mr. Phoenix Wright, but he was quoted to have said "Thank god nobody died this time, I'm sick of all these murders."


Even though it was incredibly cool before, adding the extra bits just made it 45.653 times cooler.

I want Payne's voice for this! (If they're doing this!)

Author:  LySs [ Wed May 09, 2007 1:41 am ]
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Rev and Darzie: My lines for Pearl have been sent.
If they need to be done over, just let me know Larry

Author:  IZSBHR [ Wed May 09, 2007 2:27 am ]
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A little idea I had...

Sal : (sweating)Alright, I confess, I murdered Grossburg!

Phoenix : (triumphant) OK, why?

Sal : (thinking) He was beating me in "Most disturbing obese man" polls.

Edgeworth : (shocked)Wait, he was murdered?

Phoenix : (quizecall) What did you THINK?

Edgy : I was sure his stomach exploded.

Maya Fey : (remeniscient) Ah, Grossburg. You will be missed about as much as... Stalin. (annoyed) Wait, not even.

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