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Sorry for the general tackiness, it was done on MS paint by me.

Are there any improvements I could make? (other than getting a sense of humour)

Spoiler: 2-4
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Spoiler: 2-4 again...
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Speech bubbles would help ^^

Also; use MSPaint as an excuse and I'll kill you ^^

I did laugh ever so slightly at the joke.
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Fine, changed my excuse...

Thanks for the advice.

I spent about 10 minutes trying to find the speec boxy thingy, but couldn't find it. Had a quick look just now and found it straight away... :headbang:
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:matt: Heyy, I love this!!!

*adds to favs*

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Hey, that was pretty fun! Love the Monty Python reference. I put my comics together using MS Paint for the most part, and they turn out fine, so you definitely can't use that as an excuse. ^_^ Nice work, I'll check back.
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I got to say, I liked it alot. However, I always prefer talking sprites when there is text. With that I mean sprites with their mouth open. That's something you could think about adding to the next comic.
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I didn't use talking sprites on the first one because I just copied and pasted them straight from the animations page, which is why Dahlia has her eyes half closed.

Anyway, thanks for the help.

I finally got round to making another. I know the glass needs work, but can you think of anything else?
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One question: So what was in that glass? I am very curious :o
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I don't know. Depends on which blend Godot was drinking that day.
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oh haha i get it! ewww
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