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Author: | Aviv [ Wed Aug 13, 2008 4:19 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Awesome! Although, in S4, the first panel in the last row, WHERES THE BENCH D: |
Author: | Greeny [ Wed Aug 13, 2008 4:31 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
!!!!!!! WHO TOOK MY BENCH!!! WAS IT YOU?!? EDIT: Fix'd. |
Author: | DramaticaXIV2 [ Wed Aug 13, 2008 6:39 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
It still doesn't come up when I click on it. Maybe you can put it in Image spoiler tags for us who can't. Wait, I'm a bit hypocritical there, seeing my Edward Pruvve topic. I might add images to that later. |
Author: | Ceres [ Wed Aug 13, 2008 6:52 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
aaw, i wanted to (not) see the missing bench. |
Author: | Sphinx [ Thu Aug 14, 2008 10:38 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
I love your comic thusfar only thing I can't stop looking at is how you replaced: ' in a sentence with `, so it's like ya`ll instead of ya'll... :O It gets me the goose bumps. O.o |
Author: | Greeny [ Thu Aug 14, 2008 2:59 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
I dunno, I just use that PW font from somewhere 'round here. |
Author: | Ceres [ Sun Aug 17, 2008 12:08 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Hey Greeny, When can we expect a new page? |
Author: | Greeny [ Sun Aug 17, 2008 12:53 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Hmmm... Ah, you're right. Although I still need a few things; evidence and such. I'm a bit lazy so if I do it myself it'll probably not get done anytime soon. I might need a first rate spriter to do it for me... Hmmmm.... |
Author: | Greeny [ Tue Aug 19, 2008 5:40 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Two new panels! :) Absolutely no storywise progress. :( We're getting there... >_> |
Author: | DramaticaXIV2 [ Wed Aug 20, 2008 10:50 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
YAY! I can finally see it! Yeah, nice comic. Goes possibly slower than the AA series, which I like. Also, very nice sprite. Very interesting to hear the thoughts of someone like that. |
Author: | Greeny [ Wed Aug 20, 2008 6:16 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
I added another panel! I finally have all the graphics I need, so it won't take me long to make more! EDIT: Waiting's not in my dictionary. I added scene #9 - which is actually a collection of shorter panels. |
Author: | Greeny [ Fri Aug 29, 2008 1:21 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Updated. New panel coming soon. |
Author: | Allan's Aokage [ Fri Aug 29, 2008 3:41 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Very good comic so far. I look forward to seeing more of your comics, Greeny. |
Author: | Greeny [ Fri Aug 29, 2008 4:13 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Why look forward when you can have more NOW! Scene #13 finished. Can anyone figure out what happened yet? ;) |
Author: | Ping' [ Fri Aug 29, 2008 4:16 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
I don't have a clue, but I liked the scene. Francis Equitas: Ace Poet :) |
Author: | Allan's Aokage [ Fri Aug 29, 2008 5:12 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
I think I've got it figured out, but I'll wait until everything is done before I speak my suspicions. |
Author: | DramaticaXIV2 [ Fri Aug 29, 2008 5:31 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
I've got a good idea of what happened, but like Allan, I'll stay silent until it's confirmed. |
Author: | Bad Player [ Fri Aug 29, 2008 5:40 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Just read it all right now, and I have no idea what happened! ^_^ It's really good :) Better than most other sprite comics. Just about all the sprite comics I've read have been: Lawyer: ZOMG me nervous! Phoenix/Kristoph: Chill. Lawyer: Kay! Phoenix/Kristoph: Ecce! Your client! (only 'cause of 'equitas' >.>) Client: GAAAHH I'M DOOMED!! Lawyer: Don't worry! I'll save you! [Court opening] Payne: HA HA HA! Go, decisive witness! [Decisive witness gives testimony] Lawyer: Objection! [insert contradiction relating to the murder weapon and/or autopsy report here] Optional Lines: (Decisive Witness: Fine. I'll tell you really happened. [Insert 'plot twist' here, like a diff murder scene] Lawyer: Objection! [insert another irrelevant contradiction here]) Decisive Witness: Gah! I confess! Lawyer: Yay! ^^ Phoenix/Kristoph: ZOMG j00 r teh awesomez!! Of course, we haven't seen any contradictions yet, so you might be one of those people that makes stupid contradictions... (no offense. by stupid I just mean that the lawyer points out the contradiction, and then something is revealed that is totally irrelevant to the contradiction. Like, "But there were two gunshots!" "Fine, fine. I did meet with the victim on that day!") But I doubt it, since it all seems really good ^_^ The fake objections was a nice touch :) 1 criticism: NO STEPLADDER GAG?!?! *takes a deep breath* I guess there's still plenty of time left in the case, and since it seems it'll come up soon, I'm sure it'll happen. (it better *deathglare*) |
Author: | Greeny [ Fri Aug 29, 2008 7:11 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
But there was a stepladder gag! ...A subtle one. And there is a contradiction hidden somewhere you should be able to see yourself... Heheheh. DramaticaXIV2 wrote: I've got a good idea of what happened, but like Allan, I'll stay silent until it's confirmed. PM it to me, I'm interested in your thoughts. |
Author: | DramaticaXIV2 [ Fri Aug 29, 2008 7:22 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
BTW, there's a typo in Scene 13. Marshall says "holding a bloddied piece of wood" when it should be bloodied. Now I'm looking for that contradiction. I must. It is my purpose in life. |
Author: | Greeny [ Fri Aug 29, 2008 8:14 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Haha, you'll be looking a very long time for it. Hint: the contradiction is 'somewhere', not necessarily where it's supposed to be. |
Author: | Bad Player [ Fri Aug 29, 2008 10:10 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Hmmmmmmm.... I can only think of two things, really. One is just something I noticed and the other may not be a contradiction at all ^^' Spoiler: oh, and I forgot to say this in my first post... Mike Darke was brilliant xDDD |
Author: | Greeny [ Sat Aug 30, 2008 12:56 pm ] |
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New scene! Woo. |
Author: | Ping' [ Sat Aug 30, 2008 12:59 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
You're so good you're starting to get on my nerves. |
Author: | Bad Player [ Sat Aug 30, 2008 3:27 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Still don't know what happened... WITHOUT MY COURT RECORD I'M NOTHING!!!!! ;-; |
Author: | Greeny [ Sat Aug 30, 2008 7:47 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
OH NOES FILLER! ...Oh, wait, it's just a bonus scene. :D With a totally irrelevant name, nonetheless. |
Author: | DramaticaXIV2 [ Sat Aug 30, 2008 9:47 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Nice, fitting name for the filler. |
Author: | Bad Player [ Sat Aug 30, 2008 10:15 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
*eats bonus* bleh! *spits it out* me want real comic!! although emo!Francis was tasty ^_^ Oh, and still no idea what's going on ^_^ |
Author: | Greeny [ Sun Aug 31, 2008 12:56 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Update! We finally reach a climax! Spoiler: |
Author: | Bad Player [ Sun Aug 31, 2008 2:29 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Heh. More or less ^^' but MY GOD that would be A LOT of blood spray for ONE NAIL O_O |
Author: | Ping' [ Sun Aug 31, 2008 3:06 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Loved it ^^ |
Author: | Greeny [ Sun Aug 31, 2008 4:12 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Bad Player wrote: but MY GOD that would be A LOT of blood spray for ONE NAIL O_O If you check scene 9 somewhere, Payne and Gumshoe explain that the nail hit a vital spot. Meaning a LOT of blood spray. |
Author: | Bad Player [ Sun Aug 31, 2008 7:04 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Only if he removed the nail >.> (which I guess he did) But even if a lot of blood came out, that doesn't mean it had to be at such high a velocity that it hit the plank from where ever it was o.o ('cause I doubt he would just hold it an inch away from the wound so it could get all bloody) owait... that's wuts supposed to happen, but what didn't happen, so it actually wasn't that much blood spray, but was supposed to be, but it's not, so it's okay, and did that make any sense? ... Whatever, I'll just wait patiently for the next part ^_^ and i hope jake ain't the killer :( I didn't really like him, but I don't want him to be a murderer and get sent to jail. I hope he's just an Angel Starr =\ (they witness something that makes them believe that some random person is the killer) |
Author: | Greeny [ Mon Sep 01, 2008 2:33 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Nobody beats my update speeds. NOBODY!!!!! Yeah, scene #16 brings this case's end nearer. Now all that remains is... The big turnabout! Next part or the one after that. Though be wary that after that, case 2 will take a very long time to prepare. Both plot and resources must be ready to build a good case. |
Author: | Allan's Aokage [ Mon Sep 01, 2008 4:59 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
It is surprise. There's no Z in surprise. |
Author: | DramaticaXIV2 [ Mon Sep 01, 2008 5:05 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Allan's Aokage wrote: It is surprise. There's no Z in surprise. Maybe it's the American spelling? I'm to lazy to do research. |
Author: | FoolMeNever [ Mon Sep 01, 2008 5:26 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
DramaticaXIV2 wrote: Allan's Aokage wrote: It is surprise. There's no Z in surprise. Maybe it's the American spelling? I'm to lazy to do research. The American spelling is surprise, XD Also, great addition |
Author: | Bad Player [ Mon Sep 01, 2008 5:51 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
You make me feel bad about me! I still don't get any of it D: The only thing I can think of is... Spoiler: |
Author: | DramaticaXIV2 [ Mon Sep 01, 2008 6:01 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Francis Equitas: Ace Casanova (and Attorney) |
Bad Player wrote: Spoiler: Come on, we all know it's Kristoph. JK, that's a likely story, but as you said, there may have been more blood. |
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