I still see it. Get the URL of the edited picture, edit your post, and replace the old picture's URL with the new one.
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| Author: | _Krystal_ [ Wed Jan 21, 2009 7:02 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-21-09 |
Got a new page! |
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| Author: | Freyarule [ Wed Jan 21, 2009 8:35 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-21-09 |
Yay! Krystal is adorable ^^ ah turkey, my new favourite xD |
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| Author: | Bad Player [ Wed Jan 21, 2009 8:36 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-21-09 |
But... the "d" is silent in "Godot" while it is pronounced in "God"... |
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| Author: | _Krystal_ [ Wed Jan 21, 2009 8:47 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-21-09 |
Freyarule wrote: Yay! Krystal is adorable ^^ ah turkey, my new favourite xD Thanks! Turkey IS my favorite! And chicken salad. Bad Player wrote: But... the "d" is silent in "Godot" while it is pronounced in "God"... I thought Godot was pronounced Goh Doh. So the "D" can't be silent, or his name would be Goh, because the T is silent...right? I could be wrong. You're probabley right. |
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| Author: | General Luigi [ Wed Jan 21, 2009 9:39 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-21-09 |
Keep an eye on the names you put over the text boxes. In one panel, you had Phoenix saying what I imagine you intended for Krystal to say. |
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| Author: | _Krystal_ [ Wed Jan 21, 2009 9:57 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-21-09 |
Darn! I promised myself I wouldn't do that...all fixed. Thank you! |
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| Author: | General Luigi [ Wed Jan 21, 2009 10:06 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-21-09 |
I still see a slip-up. It's on the fifth page. |
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| Author: | Hybrid~Fusion [ Wed Jan 21, 2009 10:39 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-21-09 |
The comic is good, but I think there's something missing. Maybe some more...action? Change of scenery? I can't really put my finger on it ,though. |
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| Author: | General Luigi [ Wed Jan 21, 2009 11:12 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-21-09 |
Patience. Some works are better off starting without a bang. |
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| Author: | _Krystal_ [ Wed Jan 21, 2009 11:40 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-21-09 |
General Luigi wrote: I still see a slip-up. It's on the fifth page. Really? I found one but I fixed it and it shows up fixed to me...it's the dialogue that starts with "Lukesy", right? It used to say Phoenix but now it says Krystal. General Luigi wrote: Patience. Some works are better off starting without a bang. Yeah! I promise, there will be action really soon! I actually already made some of the action-y parts but don't want to release all my pages at once... |
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| Author: | The Tragic Clown [ Thu Jan 22, 2009 12:04 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-21-09 |
You should have mentioned you were making a comic in one of your posts... I like the dialouge very much so far, it's very Phoenix Wright-ish, and I really enjoy how you've captured the essential cutness that preludes every case in the game! I can't wait to see the plot! Also, Luke and Krystal are absolutelly adorable. |
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| Author: | _Krystal_ [ Thu Jan 22, 2009 12:39 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-21-09 |
Thank you so much for the praise! *dances in the Luke praise* I promise that the plot WILL surface soon! |
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| Author: | General Luigi [ Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:06 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-21-09 |
_Krystal_ wrote: Really? I found one but I fixed it and it shows up fixed to me...it's the dialogue that starts with "Lukesy", right? It used to say Phoenix but now it says Krystal. That's the one, but on my end, it's still showing up as being said by Phoenix. Though you edited the image, did you upload the edited one to a hosting site and replace the old image with it? |
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| Author: | _Krystal_ [ Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:11 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-21-09 |
Yup. I can see it now. It says Krystal... |
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| Author: | General Luigi [ Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:40 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-21-09 |
I still see it. Get the URL of the edited picture, edit your post, and replace the old picture's URL with the new one. |
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| Author: | _Krystal_ [ Thu Jan 22, 2009 9:52 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-21-09 |
Ok, that should've fixed it. Btw, a new page is up! |
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| Author: | General Luigi [ Thu Jan 22, 2009 10:34 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-22-09 |
There we go. Гм... And now the plot finally shows itself. |
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| Author: | _Krystal_ [ Thu Jan 22, 2009 10:40 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-22-09 |
Yup! *BumbumBUM* 
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| Author: | Vordox [ Fri Jan 23, 2009 2:51 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-22-09 |
... Okay that was sudden.. O.o MORE! Give us MORE!(1 Comic a day is fine!) |
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| Author: | _Krystal_ [ Fri Jan 23, 2009 10:02 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-23-09 |
Page number 7 is up...I feel accomplished... |
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| Author: | YggdrasilsSword [ Sat Jan 24, 2009 2:22 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-23-09 |
Pretty nice sprite comic. Luke Atmey seems to have become a more lovable character than I could possibly have imagined. By the way, if the "D" in Godot was silent and the "T" wasn't, his name would be pronounced "goat." |
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| Author: | General Luigi [ Sat Jan 24, 2009 2:41 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-23-09 |
Amusing. I get the feeling Krystal will be the source of plenty of laughs. On a different--though still relevant--note, I find it odd that Krystal has her arms crossed when she's crying. |
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| Author: | _Krystal_ [ Sat Jan 24, 2009 2:44 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-23-09 |
Really? I thought that most people crossed arms when they cried. (I do *_*) It closes off the body and makes a person unnapproachable, which is what most people would want if they're sad...at least that's just me... |
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| Author: | General Luigi [ Sat Jan 24, 2009 2:48 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-23-09 |
I guess I'll take your word for it, considering how long it's been since I last cried. |
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| Author: | Vordox [ Sat Jan 24, 2009 6:06 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-23-09 |
Oy Luigi, be nice to the people, manly tears exists. :P As for the sprites, I guess Crossed Arms can be self supporting during hard times that makes people cry. =P For Comic: Don't even piss off a woman. It'll hurt. :P |
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| Author: | _Krystal_ [ Sat Jan 24, 2009 1:16 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-23-09 |
General Luigi wrote: I guess I'll take your word for it, considering how long it's been since I last cried. That sounds like something Chuck Norris would say in Walker Texas Ranger. No joke. |
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| Author: | _Krystal_ [ Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:05 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-24-09 |
Alright, new page up! Sorry it's late at night, but I was so busy today, it totally slipped my mind! I gots a new belt in Martial Arts! Woo000t. |
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| Author: | General Luigi [ Sun Jan 25, 2009 4:43 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-24-09 |
Congratulations. If I may ask, what martial art? |
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| Author: | _Krystal_ [ Sun Jan 25, 2009 6:58 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-24-09 |
Kyuki-do. It's only 40 years old, but It's really cool. It's a korean MMA with traditional japanese weapons. I like it a lot, but it kinda stinks because it takes about 10 years to get a black belt, because it's important to the creator that the only black belts in the federation are ones who really care about. I think that's good though. |
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| Author: | _Krystal_ [ Mon Jan 26, 2009 1:00 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-25-09 |
New page up. Phoenix is pissed... |
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| Author: | General Luigi [ Mon Jan 26, 2009 2:28 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-25-09 |
I saw. Considering that we never get to see Phoenix meet a client who he believes from the start to be guilty, I can understand why he seems a bit out of character. |
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| Author: | Greeny [ Mon Jan 26, 2009 6:02 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-25-09 |
He doesn't have that much reason to believe Atmey is guilty, now does he? |
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| Author: | _Krystal_ [ Mon Jan 26, 2009 12:34 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-25-09 |
Well, he's never had a client who has been guilty of murder before. Should I change it? Considering I have more of the comic done though based on this, it would probabley make the comic worse or at least less interesting. As long as the people are in character though, I guess it doesn't matter if the plot is bad, because it's the characters that make the Phoenix Wright games. ^_^ |
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| Author: | Vordox [ Mon Jan 26, 2009 2:58 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-25-09 |
Correct. And hey, Even Phoenix is human, he does wrong and he's only been pissed a few times before. never in the game though to this part. Still internesting. And now that he said "no" What should he do ...Hmm. |
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| Author: | _Krystal_ [ Mon Jan 26, 2009 10:14 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-25-09 |
Vordox wrote: Correct. So I need to redo the page? |
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| Author: | _Krystal_ [ Mon Jan 26, 2009 10:35 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-26-09 |
A new page is up, and I officially regret doing this comic. Wo0t! |
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| Author: | General Luigi [ Tue Jan 27, 2009 12:49 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-26-09 |
Why do you regret it? Turned out to be more work than you thought it would be, or just got bored? |
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| Author: | Caelestis [ Tue Jan 27, 2009 1:13 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-26-09 |
_Krystal_ wrote: A new page is up, and I officially regret doing this comic. Wo0t! Aw, don't say that!  I've been looking at your comic and I really like it so far! I think your characterization has been pretty good so far. You don't need to rewrite it to make it so Phoenix isn't as "mean" or whatever. It adds conflict and interest. I wouldn't worry about it; it works well.Keep going! Don't get discouraged!  P.S. if I was completely off as for your reasoning for "regretting" making the comic, please disregard the message, except for the last part 
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| Author: | Vordox [ Tue Jan 27, 2009 1:37 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-26-09 |
Fourth wall breakdown Eeek! And no Correct is that he's supposed to be a human as well. And then Out of Character isn't "rare" at all. :) |
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| Author: | _Krystal_ [ Tue Jan 27, 2009 1:46 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout Copycat:Updated 1-26-09 |
No, but this year I took a BRUTAL academic schedule, and now I'm at Martial arts two nights a week and ACT prep one night a week...but I don't want to lag behind on the comic... |
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