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Hi. This is PBJ with my Sprite comic: Draco Regh: Ace Attorney. The story takes place in the year 2013, 3 years before the first PW game (12 years before AJ). It follows the story of Draco Regh, a rookie defense attorney from Grossberg And Co. Law Offices.
Intro
#1 - Idle Chitchat
#2 - Guess who...
Day 1, Pre-Trial
#1 - The Attorney's New Clothes
#2 - Wall #4: Broken!
#3 - Meeting the Defendant
Day 1, Trial Former
#1 - First Penalty Already!?
#2 - Flashback and Evidence
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This Sprite Comic is brought to you by Trial And Co.!
[jingle]Giving you a more brighter day![/jingle]
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Anyway, looks interesting and can't wait to read more!
But in all honesty, META humour sucks.
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Looks interesting. Two suggestions:
(1) Don't begin/end the textboxes with "..." when the message has to span more than one, just when a character pauses. They're mostly used when a character pauses, so having a ton of them means a ton of mental pauses when I read, and really disrupts the flow of the story. It's especially okay since this is a sprite comic and not a game; in a game, the player may not understand the first part of the sentence and then not remember it when looking at the second half. But here they can just glance an inch to their left to read the first part of the sentence again.
(2) I like Kristoph's close-up sprite, but the colors don't match his regular sprite... =\ He's very blue in your sprite, while his suit is typically more lavender. Always use the eyedropper tool when recoloring sprites into sprites of other characters!
Credit to Evolina for the sig+avatar!
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But like DL said, remember the mouth-moving! It's your friend!
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But like DL said, remember the mouth-moving! It's your friend!
DL hey? I like it FA wait if you where a radio station you'd be FAFM
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....Hang on, wasn't this a topic about a sprite comic? I- *Shot by moderator*
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....Hang on, wasn't this a topic about a sprite comic? I- *Shot by moderator*
*RELOADS* I borrowed Croiks gun
The defense is So Zetta Slow!
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Oh yeah, about the comic. It looks interesting, but, the only problem I have is with Kristoph's close-up. While it looks good, the colors are messed up. Kristoph is more of a purple color, while the sprite is blue. (Unless of course, that's the point, XD) Other than my
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Good update, glad to see less ellipses. It's a real good thing b/c your font is so big, so it would've taken up that much more room...
Credit to Evolina for the sig+avatar!
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Try using 'Lucida Sans' as the font. Size 8 on paint.
I hate Klaviema >_>
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Credit to Nadindi for the awesome sig! :D
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In his Sprite Comic? I couldn't find any links to any fonts
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Francais - hmm kristoph looks the same as AJ
Carlos - Like wise
Shono- Kristoph?
artemis- No kristoph again!
kristoph Gavin- ... pretty much said it all there.
roxain finch- No Kristoph!!!!!!!
Draco- Hmm... he hasn't changed an inch since AJ time... I know!
kristoph kills people and sucks all the youth out of them... yep that must be it.
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kristoph kills people and sucks all the youth out of them... yep that must be it.
That reminds me of a picnic I once went on....Ah, good times....
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In his Sprite Comic? I couldn't find any links to any fonts
Oh, his Sprite thread, sorry >_<
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For the next strip and on, I'm using that font.
And update.
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Credit to Evolina for the sig+avatar!
OBJECTION! BOTH ATTORNEYS ARE AWESOME!
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Only complaint so far. Can't comment on the trial until we know something about it.
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