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My first ever sprite comics

Sun Dec 09, 2007 10:51 pm

DramaticaXIV2

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Family Cosplay!
Godot can't feel Christmas cheer. Not nearly as humorous as the last one, or it might be, I just delivered it into a comic wrong.

I'd put more, but I'm in a hurry.

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Last edited by DramaticaXIV2 on Tue Dec 11, 2007 8:27 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Re: My first ever sprite comic

Sun Dec 09, 2007 11:10 pm

SerenityBlue

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Not too bad. It's a bit rough, but it's your first try after all. My motto has always been: If the idea behind it is amusing enough then it's always worth making. And this idea was amusing.
One thing I would suggest, pick a lighter colored text if you don't intend on using word bubbles or a box background.

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Re: My first ever sprite comic

Mon Dec 10, 2007 8:35 pm

Engarde's_Shoe

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Kinda nice. I <3 :pearl:

Re: My first ever sprite comic

Mon Dec 10, 2007 8:38 pm

DramaticaXIV2

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I was originally planning to use the real PW boxes, but It got a bit annoying and I don't have the power of transparency. I'll try and improve it.

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Re: My first ever sprite comic

Mon Dec 10, 2007 10:17 pm

Nego

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It's cute, although I don't like about Pearls so much. Like SerenityBlue already said, you could improve the text colour by making it lighter.

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Re: My first ever sprite comic

Tue Dec 11, 2007 12:09 am

SerenityBlue

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Making it bold also helps. I didn't always have the power of transparency either. I can tell from the edits that you're using bitmap. That's fine for a starter, but you'll want to upgrade sometime soon. I personally use the GiMP because I'm poor and can't afford to buy photoshop.

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Re: My first ever sprite comic

Tue Dec 11, 2007 4:39 pm

DramaticaXIV2

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Actually, I'm using Paint PNG format. I'll check it out though.

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