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I've had this put aside for a while so I decided to post it here and see what people think. I've drawn a couple others but I don't know if i'll post them right away or not. Depends on the peoples reaction I suppose xD

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Nice one for a first comic. I give this an...

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Heehee! Poor Apolly! :odoroki:
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Verdict: Fair
Comment: Next time, try to put the text a bit farther than the edges of the dialogue box. (esp. seen in: Phoenix's first dialogue box)
And make sure the alignment is centered (esp. seen in: Slacker Phoenix's first dialogue box)

Once you've arranged the dialogues' texts properly, the comic would be better. Ganbare~

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Haha Apollo made me lol, nice comic.
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