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| Author: | lapis lazuli [ Wed May 21, 2008 11:53 pm ] |
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Feel free to post any original poems of yours. Please use the spoiler tag so we don't waste room and please put the poem title (if any) and whether it is appropriate for younger age groups. Thank you so much... was that too much? And yes, I'll post a poem of mine after this short introduction of my poetry beginnings. Oh, and you don't have to do this, either. :) Well, my English teacher had told me to enter this Walt Whitman poetry contest because she thought that I was an exceptionally talented writer. So I typed up a rough draft and she loved it so much that she mailed it in without my permission. Yeah...I was pretty irritated at her for that, but I quickly got over it. This was in February of this year, by the way. After writing the Walt Whitman poem, I then decided to write up some more poems to show to my teacher. I think she's become a little obessive after them and I don't know whether that's a good thing or not. Anyhow, I began to type up thirty-five poems in one and a half months. And that is how I became an unofficial poet. Enjoy! Spoiler: The Floating Moon; Appropriate-Yes Questions? Comments? Criticism? By the way, I have my own style of poetry, so please don't mention how a sentence may go onto the next line or why there's no periods. Thank you! |
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| Author: | vhunter13 [ Thu May 22, 2008 1:08 am ] |
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Cool poem ^^ Can we post poems in other languages?, cause I made some poems in spanish |
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| Author: | Comfortably Numb [ Thu May 22, 2008 1:50 am ] |
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Wow! I really loved your poem. It felt so nature-ful. Ok, so that's not really a word, but |
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| Author: | kristophlover967 [ Thu May 22, 2008 2:18 am ] |
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I've always written dark poetry, but I haven't written anything up in quite a while. There's nothing sexual or dirty, but they are pretty serious, so I'm giving you fair warning like I should. I'll stick them in spoiler tags. I've always been more of a free-form person, as well. If you like reading that kind of stuff, by all means, go ahead. I'll post my two 'best' works up here. The first one I edited because it was suicidal. The focus has changed quite a bit. Spoiler: Spoiler: A Night in Blackwater Park |
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| Author: | Comfortably Numb [ Thu May 22, 2008 3:26 am ] |
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...I just finished typing this. Literally. XD Poems seem to come to me at the weirdest times. Anyways, it's pretty short, so enjoy~ Spoiler: goodbye I tried not to make it TOO hard to understand. But if you don't like it, just let me know so I can make it better. =) P.S. Sorry, I don't really use capitalization in poems for some reason. It just doesn't look right to me. XD Not that I have a problem with anyone else doing it, though. It's just my style, y'know? |
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| Author: | lapis lazuli [ Thu May 22, 2008 6:48 pm ] |
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Thank you all! :D @vhunter13—Yes, you can post poems in other languages. It would be very interesting. @kristophlover967—Dark poetry is a favorite of mine, because of the nature that we humans really have. The whole world is obscure one way or another, but there's always room for light to seek in. I enjoyed both of your poems very much. They're both very passionate. @Comfortably Numb—Honestly, I loved it. Haha, it's fine. Without capitalization, it actually makes your poem even better. ^_^ I typed up a new poem yesterday. Enjoy! Spoiler: Artemis |
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| Author: | vhunter13 [ Thu May 22, 2008 7:05 pm ] |
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yay great poem, I really like greek mithology and here is a work of me, I know its short and creepy in someways but I wanted to post it Spoiler: Untitled poem in spanish |
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| Author: | lapis lazuli [ Thu May 22, 2008 7:39 pm ] |
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Thank you. Your poem was a great one. It's not at all too short; poems are never "too short or too long". It being in Spanish adds to the factor of amazing. |
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| Author: | polkadot [ Thu May 22, 2008 7:46 pm ] |
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Spoiler: |
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| Author: | lapis lazuli [ Thu May 22, 2008 8:10 pm ] |
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Those are types of Japanese poetry, right? They resemble a haiku in many different ways, except that they are not about nature, but they aren't always about nature either. They were all good though. |
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| Author: | vhunter13 [ Fri May 23, 2008 9:45 pm ] |
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ok I got 2 ones I just recovered (I lost them^^U) Spoiler: Untitled (I'm not good with titles, ok?) and here's the other one based on cthulhu ^^ Spoiler: "El despertar de Cthulhu" |
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| Author: | Furtzy [ Sat May 24, 2008 1:52 pm ] |
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Oh wow. You guys are good. I can write a poem about anything really... But I prefer it to rhyme. Here are a couple of mine. Spoiler: "Imagination" Spoiler: "A Collection of Haikus That Aren't About Nature... :S" |
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| Author: | lapis lazuli [ Sat May 24, 2008 10:07 pm ] |
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Ooh, haiku! They are all wonderful without having nature in them. =) |
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| Author: | Shiki Tohno [ Mon May 26, 2008 4:20 am ] |
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Yeah, so I wrote a few a while ago. Spoiler: "Why" Spoiler: "Sounds of Me" |
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| Author: | lapis lazuli [ Tue May 27, 2008 8:16 pm ] |
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I wrote a poem in literally five minutes for my baby sister, Alita, because it was her birthday. Spoiler: Happy Birthday This next one is about, um...child abuse, I suppose. If you really read the words carefully, it will become more clear. I think...I hope. Spoiler: Between |
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| Author: | Furtzy [ Tue May 27, 2008 8:20 pm ] |
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I'm kinda jealous... Of your amazing poetry skills. ^o^ One of my poems won a competition once, though, so I must be alright. XD |
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| Author: | lapis lazuli [ Tue May 27, 2008 9:35 pm ] |
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Really? I don't think I have a brilliant poetic skill. I'm just an amater, but thank you very much. ^_^ |
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| Author: | RazeTora [ Tue May 27, 2008 11:03 pm ] |
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I, ah, got to read this one at Poem in Your Pocket Day in Bryant Park, Manhattan. I personally think it is made of fail, but I'll share it anyway. Because my mom had the nerve to frame the damn thing..... Spoiler: Dark |
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| Author: | lapis lazuli [ Tue May 27, 2008 11:38 pm ] |
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Honestly... it was wonderful! Your poem reminds me greatly of Nyx, the Greek goddess of night. :) |
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| Author: | RazeTora [ Tue May 27, 2008 11:48 pm ] |
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Wow...really? ^///^ Thank you very much! |
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| Author: | lapis lazuli [ Wed May 28, 2008 8:13 pm ] |
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Yes, really. You're very welcome! I've written up another poem. This one is about a fictional character, not an OC or someone from a book or picture. I'll post two different ones. Spoiler: Ice Queen Spoiler: Ruby |
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| Author: | alastair-e [ Thu May 29, 2008 8:06 pm ] |
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vhunter13 wrote: yay great poem, I really like greek mithology and here is a work of me, I know its short and creepy in someways but I wanted to post it Spoiler: Untitled poem in spanish I actually understood most of that.I guess my Spanish doesn't suck as bad as I thought. I was wanting to write a poem in French. Maybe I can use this as my excuse to. |
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| Author: | Nemesis [ Sun Nov 01, 2009 8:54 pm ] |
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Sorry for bumping a quite old and forgotten thread but I would like to show you guys some of my little poems I wrote some time ago. I think that's better than starting a new thread just for my poems, right? Anyway, here they are: Spoiler: Who.. Spoiler: You and Me To be honest, I don't like the first poem that much but people seem to like, I don't get why but okay. The second one is well, I wrote it because I felt like it. Was quite fun to write and I liked the idea that was in my mind... erm, questions, criticism, suggestions or something like that? |
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| Author: | Hylian100 [ Sun Nov 01, 2009 10:47 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: *Poetry Thread |
A quickie I did for English homework: Spoiler: New Town |
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| Author: | Badskull [ Mon Nov 02, 2009 8:03 pm ] |
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Spoiler: in spanish "Las Flores Malsanas"/"The Flowers of Evil"/"Les Fleurs du Mal" Inspirated by Charles Baudelaire's poetry in his book "Les Fleurs Du Mal". Spoiler: in spanish "El Amor Sangra"/"Love Bleeds" A poem inspirated by masochism. |
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| Author: | Romeo [ Sat Nov 07, 2009 10:18 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: *Poetry Thread |
Yay, poetry! Let me show you my poem on the animals swapping skin~did this 3 or so years ago, was about 10, 11. Spoiler: Nonsense poem about animals in the wrong skin |
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| Author: | Furtzy [ Sun Nov 08, 2009 7:30 pm ] |
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Spoiler: Wow, my older poems were kinda fail. |
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| Author: | Acey Enn [ Mon Nov 09, 2009 5:47 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: *Poetry Thread |
Oh man guys, I must show you a poem I wrote last year for English class. The assignment was that we had to create a modern-day pilgrim for The Canterbury Tales, writing it in the style of the poem. People have told me that mine is hilarious, so...yeah. Spoiler: The Actress |
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| Author: | Romeo [ Mon Nov 09, 2009 7:45 am ] |
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Anna Cassidy wrote: Oh man guys, I must show you a poem I wrote last year for English class. The assignment was that we had to create a modern-day pilgrim for The Canterbury Tales, writing it in the style of the poem. People have told me that mine is hilarious, so...yeah. Spoiler: The Actress That's good. That's REALLY good. Made me laugh anyway~ |
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| Author: | JasmineJustice [ Tue Nov 10, 2009 11:57 pm ] |
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I generally write poems as lyrics, not intended to be read in a flat tone...keep it in mind. Spoiler: Unspeakable Yeah....not my best work. |
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| Author: | AoN [ Thu Nov 12, 2009 11:38 am ] |
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Wow, Spoiler: Nature: A Poem |
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