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Re: Final Fantasy RP
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"What are you doing?" he asked.
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((Willy-boy you reallyneed to pay attention to the Phoenix Wright RP.))
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"Now head west and you can draw the forces that way as a distraction." What the hell was going on here, didn't he LISTEN TO THE PLAN!
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Re: Final Fantasy RP
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Re: Final Fantasy RP
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"Now if you want to save these people, stay away from the city until all the POWs are out of the city then lead them to safety. Your friends can come with me to help free them but I don't trust you or that beast in you to sneak into the city" he argued keeping eye contact.
"If Deepground is after you or your ability in any way, you coud be putting everyone in unessasary danger." He leaned in close and whispered to Anthony.
"Do you, personally want to be responsible if something happens too your female companion?" He shot a small glance at Mara after that.
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Re: Final Fantasy RP
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Re: Final Fantasy RP
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Re: Final Fantasy RP
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Re: Final Fantasy RP
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Lets also not forget you are a godmodder which is the hugest RP no-no to exist. Your characters are Gary-stu, you're roleplaying is horribly mediocre at best and your surprising plot twists, are not surprising!
The only problem is your plots are actually good. Which to your defense is really enoguh to draw me in and make me interested in RPing. However, wthis RP was a perfect example. Are we RPing Final Fantasy, or are we RPing Chocobo Land?
We can't be funny/cutesy and dark/dramatic at the same time! Lets face it Deepground taking over Midgar is not funny cutesy.
Now lets talk about why I quit the other RP. Seriously I have no idea how anyone else could stand it!
First off the basics of a trial were completely abandoned after you didn't even let the witness testify. Secondly, Why did you need Apollo if you were just gonig to defend yourself?! And when I tried to help you get back on track, you used the fact that you were the judge to wiggle your way out of it! Not t o mention totally abuse me and the other RPers like Minter. (Surprisingly some of us have lives.)
Which is why me and Yuziki left the court and started our own thing. Which brings me too our last point. You cannot just control other peoples OCs, just assuming I took Yuziki-chan as my wife is just not right becuase there was no story! It would be the same as me writing: "Anthony, 3 months later eloped with Old Maid Franziska. They had 12 children, 8 survived."
All I have to say Anthony is read the freaking Rules next time!
Quote:
1: No God-Moding
Lets face it, a story isn't much fun if everyone turns out to be Superman. Everyone has weaknesses, and so your characters should too! Also, remember that this is a group activity, and it's not a good idea to try to make the RP totally about your character.
2: A paragraph please!
This one might be a bit controversial, but stay with me. One sentence posts don't really move the story along, and they're more than a bit bland. And that is why I'm setting the rule to spice things up a little. Remember, the best RP's have depth, and it won't take too much effort to write a paragraph. :D
3: If you have any questions, PM me.
This one doesn't need much explanation, I think. And now here is a little thing which should explain the rules simply, I hope you like it!
The unfortunate ballad of George
Smorgmeister: George began to doggie-paddle through the lush blue ocean. He loved the feel of the sea water in his hair and the salty smell of brine. It was his most favourite place in the world.
Socoblam!: "HEY, I LIKE PIE!"
Smorgmeister: George turned his head towards the newcomer. He seemed to like Pies; which was something George could relate to as he also enjoyed pies. "Do you like Potatoes?" he asked the man.
Socoblam!: I went up to him and stabbed him to death.
Smorgmeister: As George wound his way up to heaven, a thought struck him. All of this could have been avoided if the rules had been followed. Still, at least there were pies and potatoes in heaven.
Socoblam!: Kenji hit me in the balls with a spanner :(
Lets face it, a story isn't much fun if everyone turns out to be Superman. Everyone has weaknesses, and so your characters should too! Also, remember that this is a group activity, and it's not a good idea to try to make the RP totally about your character.
2: A paragraph please!
This one might be a bit controversial, but stay with me. One sentence posts don't really move the story along, and they're more than a bit bland. And that is why I'm setting the rule to spice things up a little. Remember, the best RP's have depth, and it won't take too much effort to write a paragraph. :D
3: If you have any questions, PM me.
This one doesn't need much explanation, I think. And now here is a little thing which should explain the rules simply, I hope you like it!
The unfortunate ballad of George
Smorgmeister: George began to doggie-paddle through the lush blue ocean. He loved the feel of the sea water in his hair and the salty smell of brine. It was his most favourite place in the world.
Socoblam!: "HEY, I LIKE PIE!"
Smorgmeister: George turned his head towards the newcomer. He seemed to like Pies; which was something George could relate to as he also enjoyed pies. "Do you like Potatoes?" he asked the man.
Socoblam!: I went up to him and stabbed him to death.
Smorgmeister: As George wound his way up to heaven, a thought struck him. All of this could have been avoided if the rules had been followed. Still, at least there were pies and potatoes in heaven.
Socoblam!: Kenji hit me in the balls with a spanner :(
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Re: Final Fantasy RP
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Skeledude12 wrote:
Not to mention you seem to merrily barrel through reality like some sort of Rhino in a hamster ball. If one of us tries to make a plot change, not to worry your character always seems to have a magic fix-it-all solution!
Lets also not forget you are a godmodder which is the hugest RP no-no to exist. Your characters are Gary-stu, you're roleplaying is horribly mediocre at best and your surprising plot twists, are not surprising!
The only problem is your plots are actually good. Which to your defense is really enoguh to draw me in and make me interested in RPing. However, wthis RP was a perfect example. Are we RPing Final Fantasy, or are we RPing Chocobo Land?
We can't be funny/cutesy and dark/dramatic at the same time! Lets face it Deepground taking over Midgar is not funny cutesy.
Now lets talk about why I quit the other RP. Seriously I have no idea how anyone else could stand it!
First off the basics of a trial were completely abandoned after you didn't even let the witness testify. Secondly, Why did you need Apollo if you were just gonig to defend yourself?! And when I tried to help you get back on track, you used the fact that you were the judge to wiggle your way out of it! Not t o mention totally abuse me and the other RPers like Minter. (Surprisingly some of us have lives.)
Which is why me and Yuziki left the court and started our own thing. Which brings me too our last point. You cannot just control other peoples OCs, just assuming I took Yuziki-chan as my wife is just not right becuase there was no story! It would be the same as me writing: "Anthony, 3 months later eloped with Old Maid Franziska. They had 12 children, 8 survived."
All I have to say Anthony is read the freaking Rules next time!
Lets also not forget you are a godmodder which is the hugest RP no-no to exist. Your characters are Gary-stu, you're roleplaying is horribly mediocre at best and your surprising plot twists, are not surprising!
The only problem is your plots are actually good. Which to your defense is really enoguh to draw me in and make me interested in RPing. However, wthis RP was a perfect example. Are we RPing Final Fantasy, or are we RPing Chocobo Land?
We can't be funny/cutesy and dark/dramatic at the same time! Lets face it Deepground taking over Midgar is not funny cutesy.
Now lets talk about why I quit the other RP. Seriously I have no idea how anyone else could stand it!
First off the basics of a trial were completely abandoned after you didn't even let the witness testify. Secondly, Why did you need Apollo if you were just gonig to defend yourself?! And when I tried to help you get back on track, you used the fact that you were the judge to wiggle your way out of it! Not t o mention totally abuse me and the other RPers like Minter. (Surprisingly some of us have lives.)
Which is why me and Yuziki left the court and started our own thing. Which brings me too our last point. You cannot just control other peoples OCs, just assuming I took Yuziki-chan as my wife is just not right becuase there was no story! It would be the same as me writing: "Anthony, 3 months later eloped with Old Maid Franziska. They had 12 children, 8 survived."
All I have to say Anthony is read the freaking Rules next time!
Quote:
1: No God-Moding
Lets face it, a story isn't much fun if everyone turns out to be Superman. Everyone has weaknesses, and so your characters should too! Also, remember that this is a group activity, and it's not a good idea to try to make the RP totally about your character.
2: A paragraph please!
This one might be a bit controversial, but stay with me. One sentence posts don't really move the story along, and they're more than a bit bland. And that is why I'm setting the rule to spice things up a little. Remember, the best RP's have depth, and it won't take too much effort to write a paragraph. :D
3: If you have any questions, PM me.
This one doesn't need much explanation, I think. And now here is a little thing which should explain the rules simply, I hope you like it!
The unfortunate ballad of George
Smorgmeister: George began to doggie-paddle through the lush blue ocean. He loved the feel of the sea water in his hair and the salty smell of brine. It was his most favourite place in the world.
Socoblam!: "HEY, I LIKE PIE!"
Smorgmeister: George turned his head towards the newcomer. He seemed to like Pies; which was something George could relate to as he also enjoyed pies. "Do you like Potatoes?" he asked the man.
Socoblam!: I went up to him and stabbed him to death.
Smorgmeister: As George wound his way up to heaven, a thought struck him. All of this could have been avoided if the rules had been followed. Still, at least there were pies and potatoes in heaven.
Socoblam!: Kenji hit me in the balls with a spanner :(
Lets face it, a story isn't much fun if everyone turns out to be Superman. Everyone has weaknesses, and so your characters should too! Also, remember that this is a group activity, and it's not a good idea to try to make the RP totally about your character.
2: A paragraph please!
This one might be a bit controversial, but stay with me. One sentence posts don't really move the story along, and they're more than a bit bland. And that is why I'm setting the rule to spice things up a little. Remember, the best RP's have depth, and it won't take too much effort to write a paragraph. :D
3: If you have any questions, PM me.
This one doesn't need much explanation, I think. And now here is a little thing which should explain the rules simply, I hope you like it!
The unfortunate ballad of George
Smorgmeister: George began to doggie-paddle through the lush blue ocean. He loved the feel of the sea water in his hair and the salty smell of brine. It was his most favourite place in the world.
Socoblam!: "HEY, I LIKE PIE!"
Smorgmeister: George turned his head towards the newcomer. He seemed to like Pies; which was something George could relate to as he also enjoyed pies. "Do you like Potatoes?" he asked the man.
Socoblam!: I went up to him and stabbed him to death.
Smorgmeister: As George wound his way up to heaven, a thought struck him. All of this could have been avoided if the rules had been followed. Still, at least there were pies and potatoes in heaven.
Socoblam!: Kenji hit me in the balls with a spanner :(
((Man you guys seem to judge a book by its cover even if we never met in real life. Those that judge a book by its cover should really need to take a good look in the mirror. Thats my rule. And I SAID SORRY you nimwitted bafoon! if you do not believe me check the posts on the RP!))
((OH for the record, Willy-boy you ignored Yuzi's posts as well so you shouldn't be talking. And due to the fact that you two broke one of my rules Abotu Lets have fun" -.- So stfu and You know what LET'S ALL JUST RESTART ALL OVER AGAIN! WILL THAT MAKE THE LOT OF YA'LL HAPPY?!))
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Re: Final Fantasy RP
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Book by its cover? I'm not judging you idiot! I'm judging your RP skills, which suck! No I don't ignore Yuziki-chan, Leon's character ignores Mara. Which is PART OF THEIR STORY! You STFU Anthony. Grow the F up and start acting your age!
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The problem is, you keep acting flippant towards any critique or comments. You can't just say "LET'S ALL JUST RESTART ALL OVER AGAIN! WILL THAT MAKE THE LOT OF YA'LL HAPPY?!" because we've already done that once (throwing away a page or two of posts...). There's no way we can keep restarting whenever things get tangled up and it doesn't do any good if the initial problem that caused a restart in the first place persists.
You said Skele broke the rule about having fun and "judging" you but ignoring the fact you can't make someone have fun (which is a result of things outlined in Skele's critique), it's all straight forward critique that explains why exactly he has a problem with your RPing style nothing that talks about your personal self.
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So My adivce is to take our words and use it to improve in spots your not good at in RP, not everyone is good at first or even for awhile, but with practice and a open ear you can be a really good roleplayer. But im sorry to say if you keep up how your acting and being now, you wont be a good role player and sometimes its better to stop when ahead which I dont want you to do, just want you to get better.
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winged cloud wrote:
your no relevance comments you make.
Anthony wrote:
I've been Rping since.. I say like 11 years old or was it 14.... no 15 years old.
See there you go again. I didnt ask when you started role playing. It doesnt matter when you started, what does matter is your not very good right now. Just practice and listen to our advice and suggestions.
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Re: Final Fantasy RP
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Anthony wrote:
((Do you see me complaining abotu the way you guys RP? No. Then its none ofyour buisness how I RP..... Just leave me alone. ))
))Usually, how people RP isn't much interest but it DOES become the business of people you RP with if it affects the flow of the RP. For example, I was in an RP once where one of the guys always wrote in first person POV and since it got confusing with the way he did it, the GM asked him to switch to third POV like the rest of us. For reasons already said, it affects the rest of the RP and how the rest of the players have to react so yes, it would be considered our business to a degree IF there's a legitament reason for it.
EDIT: Probably last post on the matter (and probably this thread).
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I have it when people argue like this. It brings up some bad memories.....
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