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Let's Write A Story
What's a Court Records?
Gender: Male
Location: Probably Earth
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Make sure you read what other users post carefully, so that you can accurately continue the story.
If you want to make a note somewhere in the story (for example, somebody forgets about something or messes up the continuity), use a spoiler tag.
I'll be putting out parts of the story whenever we have enough material. Fanfiction.net DeviantArt
I'll start:
Phoenix woke up extremely early one morning sweating. He rapidly blinked before opening his eyes and staring at the ceiling.
"I got to stop watching those horror movies with Maya." he said, "I don't know how many more nightmares I can take."
The man tried to get back to sleep, but it just felt impossible. The strangest thing is he felt like he was being watched. As if there was another presence inside his bedroom.
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I've felt worse.
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Location: I'm at soup.
Rank: Ace Attorney
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"Dammit, it's way too early for this."
"It's never too late to learn that growing old doesn't have to mean growing up. Stay curious, stay weird, stay kind, and don't let anyone ever tell you you aren't smart or brave or worthy enough." -Stanford Pines, Gravity Falls
Re: Let's Write A Story
What's a Court Records?
Gender: Male
Location: Probably Earth
Rank: Prosecutor
Joined: Sat Jun 14, 2014 3:20 am
Posts: 623
"Maya, this better not be one of your pranks... again!" exclaimed Phoenix.
Unfortunately, something hit him hard on the head, and he passed out.
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Gender: Male
Location: Japan
Rank: Decisive Witness
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Posts: 175
'Where am I?' he thought. 'Who did this, why do I smell something like… beer?'
In desperation, he bunny hopped his way around. A slender hand pushed him back.
"Help! Anyone?" Phoenix called.
"Silence," said a deep voice.
He removed the blindfold. An odd scene greeted Phoenix's eyes: he was in a dusty bedroom, Steel Samurai posters plastered all over, a shocking pink bed just to the right, with a cute desk on the other side. A man stood in the corner… a butler?
"DeKiller?" Phoenix gasped. "Why…?"
DeKiller remained silent. Staring Phoenix down, he kneeled and plucked Phoenix's attorney badge off.
"You won't be needing this." He placed it by an especially lavish Steel Samurai figure.
"DeKiller, where am I?"
"In my ro… my nieces room."
Phoenix tried asking more questions, but DeKiller wouldn't budge. He shook his head and walked out, telling Phoenix to behave. The sound of a lock clicking could be heard, followed by distancing footsteps. Phoenix glanced around the room again; he needed to find a way out, or at least grasp at what was going on. He hopped to the door and used his chin to push the handle down. It stayed rigid. He moved to the window next.
'Here goes nothing.'
He slammed his head into it. Nothing. He tried again. A small crack formed. The same felt true for his skull though. He took a deep breath and went in for a final plunge. The window shattered, leaving Phoenix tumbling through the air.
Re: Let's Write A Story
In Justice We Trust
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Okay, so much for trying to escape, he thought. Still, de Killer must need me alive if he bothered to patch me up.
Phoenix looked to the window he had broken. De Killer had boarded it up.
Darn. I guess I can't bet on some passer-by hearing me call for help, either.
He took a deep breath and sighed. It appeared all he could do was wait for de Killer to explain things to him.
I'll always love you, Max.
Re: Let's Write A Story
What's a Court Records?
Gender: Male
Location: Probably Earth
Rank: Prosecutor
Joined: Sat Jun 14, 2014 3:20 am
Posts: 623
He realized he was alone and in great danger. Phoenix knew he'd have to investigate his surroundings on his own. But what? What could he do? He scanned the room, and found a piece of paper on the floor that looked as if it had been ripped out of a notebook. But he was stuck.
"What am I going to do?" he whispered to himself.
After what felt like hours, he was able to free himself, but he was still thinking about everything.
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"Who could be at this hour..? And why are they banging at the door so loudly? Urp... I hope it's not him or the house lady again..." while he was wondering, Phoenix was very near towards the door.
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Beware of the Dog
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Slowly, he started to recognise it. "Pearls? Is that you?" he called out in shock. "Mister Nick! What are you doing here?" "That's what I should ask you!", Phoenix answered, both confused and worried, "Are you okay?" "Don't worry about me, Mister Nick! I'm alright, but Mystic Maya... she has disappeared!" "What?!", Phoenix shouted out, realising that his head was still hurting from hitting the glass.
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Happy Maria
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"Oh,I don't think you two are going anywhere ."
Re: Let's Write A Story
What's a Court Records?
Gender: Male
Location: Probably Earth
Rank: Prosecutor
Joined: Sat Jun 14, 2014 3:20 am
Posts: 623
"Now, now," he said, "I need you to behave yourself."
"How about YOU behave YOURSELF!?" exclaimed DeMasque, "You've been VERY naughty."
DeMasque ran toward deKiller, who was quick enough to kick him right where it counts. Phoenix tried running for the door, but DeKiller stuck a leg out and tripped him. DeKiller then proceeded to tie both of them up together.
"DAMMIT!!!" exclaimed Phoenix.
Spoiler: Let's Not Forget About This
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Happy Maria
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"Nick,you had one of your aneurysms again. But you woke up with this in your hand." She pulled out the same paper that was in that room. "Give me that!"
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Crushing on the prosecutors
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"Er, wasn't she poisoned, by, um, poison?"
Re: Let's Write A Story
What's a Court Records?
Gender: Male
Location: Probably Earth
Rank: Prosecutor
Joined: Sat Jun 14, 2014 3:20 am
Posts: 623
"I...I can't say." answered Maya.
"Please, Maya," responded Phoenix, "just tell me."
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Happy Maria
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Shy guy
Gender: Male
Location: Inside the mirror
Rank: Suspect
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Phoenix begins to think to himself. If he can figure out the secret he's trying to hide from himself, he can probably break the lock and get out of the bed. Although if this is his own lock, doesn't that mean he's subconsciously keeping himself from remembering, and keeping himself in the bed? Maybe breaking the lock isn't such a good idea after all... but he gets the feeling something bad will happen if he doesn't catch up to Maya.
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Happy Maria
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Re: Let's Write A Story
Shy guy
Gender: Male
Location: Inside the mirror
Rank: Suspect
Joined: Thu Feb 25, 2016 9:57 am
Posts: 43
The memory comes rushing back to him. This feeling of loneliness... This must have been what his most recent client felt, when...
When he'd failed to find him innocent.
*sound of lock breaking and chains retracting*
"That's right. I... I failed him." Phoenix mutters to himself, too shocked to get out of bed even though he now could. "That explains why I was repressing that memory..." The piece of paper had looked familiar, and now he was fairly certain it was related somehow. No wonder Maya had looked so dismayed when she read whatever was on it, and no wonder she desperately didn't want him to read it also. Even still, he now felt an even greater need to catch her and find out what she was hiding. No more running from the truth!
With new resolve, Phoenix jumps out of the bed and gets ready to move.
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Happy Maria
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Re: Let's Write A Story
Shy guy
Gender: Male
Location: Inside the mirror
Rank: Suspect
Joined: Thu Feb 25, 2016 9:57 am
Posts: 43
Despite being on the third floor, Phoenix gets lucky and lands on a hedge outside, thus taking no damage from the fall. He quickly rolls off and runs in a direction at random, not really sure where Maya would have gone.
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Happy Maria
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Re: Let's Write A Story
What's a Court Records?
Gender: Male
Location: Probably Earth
Rank: Prosecutor
Joined: Sat Jun 14, 2014 3:20 am
Posts: 623
“Hey, pal!” he said, “You seem to have gotten yourself into a lot of trouble, haven’t you?”
“I guess so.” responded Nick.
“Come with me.” instructed the detective.
“Y-yes, sir!” Phoenix responded, nervously.
The two of them ran off, away from the hospital, both of them holding hands. Behind them, men in black were chasing them. Phoenix was confused about everything that was going on and just had to wonder what the detective knew, and why he was only now starting to feel awkward about holding Gumshoe’s hand. He wasn’t sure. Did he like touching his hand?
Phoenix shook his head as the two of them ran as far away from the hospital as they could, soon making it out into the streets. Looking around, they couldn’t see the men that were chasing them earlier. They stopped running, and Phoenix felt like he could pass out at any minute. He had to know, just what was going on? He looked at Gumshoe, hoping the detective would somehow have all the answers.
Re: Let's Write A Story
Shy guy
Gender: Male
Location: Inside the mirror
Rank: Suspect
Joined: Thu Feb 25, 2016 9:57 am
Posts: 43
Re: Let's Write A Story
What's a Court Records?
Gender: Male
Location: Probably Earth
Rank: Prosecutor
Joined: Sat Jun 14, 2014 3:20 am
Posts: 623
"You don't remember!?" responded Gumshoe.
"I've been locked in a room and tied down for God knows how long." answered Phoenix, "I just remember I was defending him... and I lost."
"Do you believe that Hotti's son is innocent?" asked Gumshoe.
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