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If you don't like spoilers, leave now! You have been warned!

Anyway, I was bored so I decided to start writing the script for 'Turnabout Memories' since the rom has leaked early. I've only started it mind and got up to the part where Mia has to chose the correct cause of death.

Only problem was no$gba crashed when I loaded up a snapshot and I'm having problems saving. I'm looking into that. I haven't tried the other DS emulator let.

I'll work more this tomorrow. If anyone wants to continue writing up the script, be my guest. I have no problem with you doing that. Also feel free to spot errors I may have made.

But on with the script.


Spoiler: Turnabout Memory Script - Part 1
Episode 1
Turnabout Memories

...*hufff*...*huff*...

Argh!
How did I get in this mess?

Why...? Why did I do that...?

That girl...
You shouldn't see her anymore.


Hey!
Its none of your business!

I'm telling you for your sake.
If you continue to see her,
it's going to be bad news.


You're lying!

Just listen to me.
There's something you need
to know about that girl... ...


Stop it!

D-Don't talk about her like
that!

It-It wasn't me!
I-I d-didn't...

I didn't do it!


-- 5 Years Earlier --
Mia Fey
2nd Trial



April 11, 9:40 AM
District Court
Defendant Lobby No. 3


Mia
(Whew, it's finally time...
I'm kind of nervous...)


???
*Ah-HHHEM!*

Mia
Oh! Mr. Grossberg!
Good morning!

Grossberg
Ah, Mia.
Please calm yourself down!

Grossberg
You're going to get yourself
arrested for suspicious
behavior, you know.

Mia
What are you talking about!!
I am relaxed, Mr. Grossberg!!
Look at me, I'm relaxed!!

Grossberg
*Grrmmphh*
L-Let go of my lapels!

Grossberg
Hmph... You obviously
haven't got the temperament
to be a lawyer.

Mia
I, err... I'm so sorry!
It's just that I'm so
nervous today...

Grossberg
Oh, that's right.
This is your first time in the
big leagues, isn't it?

Grossberg
Well never fear my dear.
I, Marvin Grossberg, am
at your service!

Mia
Umm, actually this is my
second time in court...

Grossberg
Still, you surprised me...
What, with your earnest
request last night...

Grossberg
"Let me handle this case!"
you suddenly said. And quite
forcefully, too!

Mia
I just found out yesterday.
About the case, I mean.

Grossberg
What?
And you've already learned all
the relevant facts?

Mia
Well about that... You see...
I mean, of course I have!
I think.

Grossberg
Oh dear...

Grossberg
In any case, you don't let our
client see you're so nervous.

Grossberg
There, you see that poor
young man over there?
That's our client.

Nick
*cough* *sniffle*
Good morning there everybody!

Mia
Good morning...
(try to keep smiling, Mia)

Phoenix
I, err, I just want to say...
I'll give it all I've got!

Phoenix
Yup, it'll be fine!
No prob!
*cough* *achoo* *achoo*

Mia
Oh, what's wrong?
Do you have a cold or
something... Mr. Wry?

Phoenix
Actually, it's Wright... Like
the flying brothers... People
screw it up all the time.

Phoenix
And yes I have a cold.
That's what this mask is for.

Phoenix
My doc says this way, I won't
give it to anyone else...
Be kind to others, he says...

Mia
Right, Mr Wright!
You have nothing to fear
in court today!

Mia
If you are truly innocent...
I promise I will save you!

Nick
Nnnnggghh... P-Please
l-let go of my shirt...
*gough*

Mia
(That's right, he's the one
on trial, not you! He's the
one who should be nervous!)


Mia
(You need to stay stong for
your client, Mia!)


Mia
My name is Mia Fey.
I'm still pretty new at this
lawyer thing...

Mia
The first time I appeared in
court was a year ago.

Mia
But that trial traumatized me
so badly, I thought I'd never
set foot in another courtroom.

Mia
It's been one year since then
and well, here I am again.

Mia
But this time...
This time I'll win.

Mia
For my client...
And for myself.


April 11, 10:00 AM
District Court
Courtroom No. 2


Judge
Court is now in session for
the trial of Phoenix Wright.

Mia
The defense is
ready, Your Honor!

Payne
The prosecution is
ready, Your Honor.

Judge
The defense today is...
Ms... Ms... Mia Fey, was it?

Mia
Y-Yes, Your Honor.
Is there a problem?

Judge
I was under the impression
that Marvin Grossberg was
to be leading the defense.

Mia
Yes! Well, you see...

Mia
Mr. Grossberg had...
A-A bit of an emergency...

Judge
Emergency?
But isn't that him standing
there right next to you?

Mia
Yes, well...

Judge
You... You're just a rookie.
Are you sure you can really
handle this?

Mia
(Don't let him scare you, Mia!
Give him your toughest look!)


Mia
Of course, Your Honor!
...
I think.

Judge
Hmm...

Judge
Well, Mr. Payne.
Your opening statement,
please.

Payne
Well, well, well...

Payne
I can't believe a veteran like
me has to spend his time baby-
sitting a new defense lawyer.

Mia
...!

Payne
Don't worry little girl.
It will all be over soon.

Mia - B
(What was that all about?
Was he trying to trash-talk
me?)

Payne
Now then, I'd like to proceed
with a summary of the events
of the day in question.

Payne
The incident occurred on
the campus of Ivy University.

Payne
The murder victim was a
student named Doug Swallow.

He was a fourth year student
studying Pharmacology.

Judge
Hmm... It sounds like he was
a very bright young man.

Payne
Yes, well, next we have a
photo taken at the scene of
the crime.

Payne
Students discovered the scene
shortly after the murder. They
found the victim's bode...

Payne
...and the defendant , who had
obviously bungled his gateway.
They then called the police.

Judge
Hmm... That certainly makes
the defendant look very
suspicious indeed.

Judge
Very well.
The court accepts this photo
into the record as evidence.

Crime Photo 1 added to
the Court Record.


Judge
By the way...

Judge
I can't quite tell the cause
of death
from this photo.

Payne
Hee, hee, hee...

Payne
Your reputation for sagacity
is well-earned, Your Honor.

Payne
The truth is that this victim
died a rather unusual death.

Mia
An unusual death...!?

Judge
What do you mean, Mr. Payne!?

Payne
Well...
Perhaps the defense would
like to take this question.

Mia
Huh...!?

Payne
A simple question. I thought
I might loosen you up a bit.

Payne
I am a genteel-man, if you
will.

Mia
Um, a what?

Mia
(Stand up to him, Mia!
Show him what you're made of!)


Grossberg
Ah, a perfect opportunity!
Well, what was it? The cause!
Go on!

Grossberg
...

Grossberg
...Please say you know at
least this much.

Mia
I-I'm so sorry...
I-I didn't get a chance to
read through the whole file.

Grossberg
*groan*
My haemorrhoids are beginning
to act up...

Grossberg
Now see here!

Grossberg
The details of the case are
filed under the Court Record.

Grossberg
But you knew that already
didn't you?

Mia
(AH! The Court Record! I think
I can see that by touching the

Court Record Button...)

Grossberg
All of the weapons we need can
be found in the The Court Record.

Grossberg
Take a good, hard look at the
data there and think carefully
before you answer, m'dear!

Mia
Y-Yes, sir!
I'll do just that!

Mia
(I've got to stay calm!
I can't let that prosecutor
get the better of me!)


Mia
(The Court Record... OK, let's
take a look! I just touch the

Court Record Button here...)

Judge
Now then, would the attorney
for the defense please answer
the question?

Judge
What was the cause of death?

Select your answer

- Asphyxiation

- Electrocution

- Hypothermia


[choose Asphyxiation]

Mia
Well... I think you'll find
it was a case of asphyxiation.

Judge
Hmm...
Asphyxiation, huh?

Grossberg
M-Mia!
What are you saying?

Mia
Well it's stuffy in here!
I can hardly breathe.

Grossberg
No one's asking how you feel!
Please, make sure to properly
read the Court Record!

Mia
I-I'm so sorry!
I'll take a better look!

Mia
(Hang in there, Mia! Open
the
Court Record with the
Court Record Button...)

Judge
Hmm... I'll ask you once again.

(script to be continued)


Spoiler: Evidence
Attorney's Badge
Type: Other
One of my
possessions.
Poof of my profession.
The first and last time I
used it was a year ago.

Doug's Autopsy Report
Type: Reports
Received during the
preliminary hearing.
Date and time of death: 4/9
at 3 PM. Cause of death was
a fatal electric shock.

Crime Photo 1
Type: Photograph
Submitted as evidence
by Prosecutor Payne.
The crime took place behind
an Ivy U. building. Touch
the Check button for details.


Spoiler: Profiles
Marvin Grossberg
Age: 61
Gender: Male
My superior and the head
of Grossberg Law Offices.

Phoenix Wright
Age: 21
Gender: Male
My client. A third year art
student at Ivy University.
He currently has a cold.

Doug Swallow
Age: 22
Gender: Male
The victim. He was a
fourth year Pharmacology
student at Ivy University.

Dahlia Hawthorne
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Phoenix Wright's girlfriend.
Dated the victim Doug Swallow
up untill eight months ago.

Winston Payne
Age: 49
Gender: Male
The prosecutor for this trial.
A veteran lawyer with
a little too much confidence.
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When you're finished, do you think you can send me the script as a .doc .html? I'd appreciate it :D
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Speaking of scripts, I'm sorry I haven't submitted a revised version of 2-2 yet. I've been on the fence deciding if I should reformat the whole script or follow the ones for 1-4, 1-5, and 2-1.

I'm still on Day 1 Investigation but I'm almost finished. I'm trying to find the right order to put the text in, since some instances allow you to trigger sequence 'X' before sequence 'Y'.
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Re: Turnabout Memories Script (SPOILERS!) (Working on)Topic%20Title
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Croik wrote:
When you're finished, do you think you can send me the script as a .doc .html? I'd appreciate it :D

Sure. Is there any format I need to stick to and I can I use my own format?
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The format you're posting it with here is just fine :D
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