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All added some fanart, a wallpaper, and some Dahlia cosplay.
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The only negative criticism I can give is the grammar. I'm guessing that it was typed in one sitting, since at the beginning, most of the grammar is correct. Near the end, it's still understandable, but it's far from perfect.
Anyway, I can say from reading this that I will almost surely be reading any essays that are submitted. I enjoyed it.
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. About the grammar, well, my first languaje is not English so I'm sure it has mistakens or strange constructions here and there. If the beginning is better it's only because it was written earlier, and I spell-checked and changed it more times than the end. But if it's understandable, that's enough for me.
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I hope all the essays will be as good as yours.
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. About the grammar, well, my first languaje is not English so I'm sure it has mistakens or strange constructions here and there. If the beginning is better it's only because it was written earlier, and I spell-checked and changed it more times than the end. But if it's understandable, that's enough for me.Oh. I didn't know your original language wasn't English. In that case, you did great.
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But where is it? It's not on the Cosplays page...
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Haha, I still love Daft Punk <3
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I might have a kick at an essay next week, Croik.
It's the holidays then.
I'm not going to be here very often anymore.
More Caffeine Please :D
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More Caffeine Please :D
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