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Author:  Croik [ Sat Oct 13, 2007 9:08 pm ]
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Our first essay contribution is up! Aijiru wrote an examination of Godot (spoilers GS1 through 3).

All added some fanart, a wallpaper, and some Dahlia cosplay.

Author:  luckyhitmaster [ Sat Oct 13, 2007 9:44 pm ]
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I just spoiled the third game pretty badly for myself, but I have to say, it was a very well-done essay. It goes very deep and claims nothing that is arguable as true. Aside from examining Godot, it makes a good point on how the characters in the series are very human, and not just a certain way to make a cheap story for a video game.

The only negative criticism I can give is the grammar. I'm guessing that it was typed in one sitting, since at the beginning, most of the grammar is correct. Near the end, it's still understandable, but it's far from perfect.

Anyway, I can say from reading this that I will almost surely be reading any essays that are submitted. I enjoyed it. :godot:

Author:  Aijiru [ Sat Oct 13, 2007 9:59 pm ]
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Thanks to Croik for publishing this, and thanks for the feedback too :will:. About the grammar, well, my first languaje is not English so I'm sure it has mistakens or strange constructions here and there. If the beginning is better it's only because it was written earlier, and I spell-checked and changed it more times than the end. But if it's understandable, that's enough for me.

Author:  Elriel [ Sat Oct 13, 2007 10:41 pm ]
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Good job! I love how you describe him and I really like the ending.

I hope all the essays will be as good as yours.

Author:  luckyhitmaster [ Sun Oct 14, 2007 12:28 am ]
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Aijiru wrote:
Thanks to Croik for publishing this, and thanks for the feedback too :will:. About the grammar, well, my first languaje is not English so I'm sure it has mistakens or strange constructions here and there. If the beginning is better it's only because it was written earlier, and I spell-checked and changed it more times than the end. But if it's understandable, that's enough for me.

Oh. I didn't know your original language wasn't English. In that case, you did great.

Author:  Takuya [ Sun Oct 14, 2007 4:56 am ]
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Dahlia Cosplay = Must see

But where is it? It's not on the Cosplays page...

Author:  Elriel [ Sun Oct 14, 2007 8:59 am ]
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Here you have all the photos: 1, 2, 3 and 4.

Author:  Bangvang [ Sun Oct 14, 2007 10:08 am ]
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It was a good read, and I'd never have even guessed that it was written by someone who's native language wasn't english.

Author:  Takuya [ Sun Oct 14, 2007 3:15 pm ]
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Elriel wrote:
Here you have all the photos: 1, 2, 3 and 4.


Whoa, those are awesome. =D

I especially like the first 2. ^^

Author:  Trabztress [ Sun Oct 14, 2007 3:27 pm ]
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@Aijiru: You can write AND do graphics. You, my friend, are GREAT!

I might have a kick at an essay next week, Croik.
It's the holidays then.

Author:  Rina-chan [ Sun Oct 14, 2007 11:14 pm ]
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I'm curious as to why my fanwork wasn't accepted for posting.

Author:  Croik [ Sun Oct 14, 2007 11:21 pm ]
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Rina you can contact me in an email about that. I can't quite remember what you might have submitted, off the top of my head.

Author:  Rina-chan [ Sun Oct 14, 2007 11:28 pm ]
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Sent, thank you.

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