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- you should add comic navigation above each page for easier skimming, as well as underneath like you already have
- the fact that the text in your credit bar isn't aligned evenly is very irksome
- times new roman is a really lacklustre choice of font for this genre and medium
- dafont has a decent list of free comic-type fonts you could use for different of situations, something with a variety of weights
- i might suggest something like komika display for dialogue text and something like arfmoochikncheez (as opposed to (eugh, gross) cooper black) as a sound-effect font
- it also has a bunch of bitmap fonts that you could consider for game-text/narration/whatever
- i won't say much about the artwork, except this: keep working on your proportions cuz sometimes they look a bit wonky
- although you have improved your colouring/shading since comic #1, always keep your light source in mind when shading for each panel
- uh that's all for now i think
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* As for the navigation at the top, it was my own personal choice, but I'll reconsider since I've heard it mentioned a couple of times, so thank you for that!
* The text in the bar below, ha ha, I'm still trying to figure out the whole website biz, and seeing as I've never done one before and don't really have time to mess with it now, yeah.... I'm sorry it's a little irksome and as soon as I have time to go around and fix it, I will. Same for the navigation if I decide to that as well!
* I'm curious where you're seeing TNR? The site is in Arial, the dialogue is done in Cambria Math. Are you talking about the title of each comic? I've tried messing around with different fonts to find to see what I liked best, but nothing I could find, I really liked at the top. I guess it's a matter of personal preference. I can check again, especially since you kindly gave me a link to some new fonts, so I can check those out.
* I'll be honest right now, I think komika display is downright ugly. Again, personal preference. The one you mentioned for sound effect font, however, isn't a bad choice at all. Honestly though, I'm wanting to try to wean out the SF font all together for myself as I "hopefully" get better at drawing sequences and such.
* As for the drawing, I only know all too well how much I suck at proportions. I never once took any drawing classes, and only self taught myself, so still trying to learn all this stuff is tough for me. It's hard not getting any proper references and I'd honestly love the chance to take proper drawing classes to improve on my art. I am trying though and I'm very well aware of where my shortcomings are right now, so thank you!
* Thanks too for seeing that I'm improving, it makes me feel better to hear that from someone else! Glad you mentioned the whole lighting/shading thing too, I challenged myself in making a issue dedicated totally to that, which will be up in a couple of weeks. Hope it came out nice!
Again, thanks a lot for the criticism, these are the kinds of posts I appreciate most as I enjoy the feedback and like to get general ideas on how I can try to improve the comic. The website thing is probably gonna be the end where I'm not very adept at handling all too well. Honestly, I'd love to find someone to handle all that for me, but I'm not made of money and I don't have a steady income right now to afford all that. I am doing my best though to try to improve on my comics, to make them more visually appealing and such, so I hope that as time goes on, that will show. Thanks so much for your input.
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and the thing i mentioned about the text in your credit bar, i meant in the bar you've got at the bottom of each comic, where it says the copyright thing and stuff.
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Also, speaking of bad guys, a new profile has been added to the mix! Introducing Shasta!
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Pierre wrote:
Man I saw the profile and I'd hoped "Man a cool Monk Party Member" then I saw she was a villain. S'always a shame when you get a cool villain that you know you'll have to kill at somepoint. Bravely Default is RIFE with that.
I love games with cool Monk party members, probably because I love the raw damage they always dish out! That being said, I've got plans for different party members, so I hope it'll be something to look forward to. I haven't seen much myself about Bravely Default, but I'm really interested in getting it once it comes to the states.
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Man I saw the profile and I'd hoped "Man a cool Monk Party Member" then I saw she was a villain. S'always a shame when you get a cool villain that you know you'll have to kill at somepoint. Bravely Default is RIFE with that.
I love games with cool Monk party members, probably because I love the raw damage they always dish out! That being said, I've got plans for different party members, so I hope it'll be something to look forward to. I haven't seen much myself about Bravely Default, but I'm really interested in getting it once it comes to the states.
Really should, it's like Square made a nice older FF game and did it well.
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Tried experimenting with the lighting in this issue. Hope it looks okay, I know I still have a huge way to go when it comes to improving!
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dullahan1 wrote:
I was reading on a translation site that funnily enough, it wasn't a translation mistake, but that line was actually in the Japanese release. Heard they fixed it for the HD remake though. That line still makes me laugh!
I dunno I could totally buy it was a line from some dumb kid as intended especially if he ain't mastered English yet.
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I've also went ahead and added a new profile card for these new characters since we'll be seeing a bit more of them.
Hopefully, I'm planning on trying to get around to uploading more sketches in the future as well as wanting to try to work on the site some, so hopefully that'll come around in the following months! I'm just hard pressed for time at times.... and I'm not so adept at working on sites! D=
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General Luigi wrote:
Let me guess: Strife and Luna will wind up inexplicably in a relationship by the end despite being shown to have no chemistry whatsoever.
It's like you've played an RPG before!!! =O
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General Luigi wrote:
Admittedly, my RPG experience is somewhat limited, but I'm pretty familiar with the more common clichés.
As much as I LOVE Chrono Trigger, I'll admit that Crono and Marle felt forced for a while during the beginning, if only because they were complete strangers. Even worse in Chrono Cross with Serge and Kid. At least in that era, Final Fantasy IV did it very well and at least it was believable and didn't interfere with the main plot.
Anyways, coming live with an update with #49! Our first boss battle! How could our heroes, or any outside force, possibly ruin this?
Also, it's just a lil' bit of an update, but I've updated the world map on the site to show the new location Strife and co. have reached. Been wanting to get to this part for a while, so I hope you guys enjoy and as always, thank you guys for reading! =) Sorry I haven't done more, but as busy as I've been as of late, I've been lucky to finish an issue a week at times.
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dullahan1 wrote:
Issue 50, titled Victory!, is up! I want to say, thank you very much to those who have been reading this comic thus far, I'm really happy to have made it to issue 50, I didn't even think I'd make it this far to be honest. Hope you enjoy it, I'm really happy with this issue and I hope you will be too.
Hahaha nice XD Starting to think Lance has an innate advantage in this world when even enemies fail to understand the game logic and he knows it inside and out.
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Spoiler: RPG Hero Extra Issue
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In any case time for the Princess to develop white magic it seems.
Also General it'd be extremely Golden Sun if this was a fight they were meant to lose and THEN they turned out to not be the actual protagonists.
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I apologize for not having an update for the past 2 weeks. Between being out of town and being really sick, I didn't have much chance to get anything up. Anyways, thanks for reading. And Pierre and Luigi, I really appreciate your constant feedback. I appreciate it!
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I hope he gets out ok.
The idea that villains and monsters get little experience points after every battle is hilarious.
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General Luigi wrote:
There's a part of me that's expecting Luna to tell the soldiers what happened, but there's another part of me that expects Luna to remain silent for some stupid reason--or that the soldiers won't listen to her if she does say something.
Well... considering how competent the soldiers have been before...
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I'm also hoping that I'll be able to continue posting every Friday since getting a full time teaching job, since I was told I'll probably be doing extended days during most of the year and even Saturday school. I've got a decent backlog for now, but I'll try my best to stick to the schedule I have.
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