right. the first part you will recognise... its from the game. though i wrote the second part...
is it okay? yes, i know it already has another part... i just wanted to try it myself.
GUITAR SERENADE
sugar sugar
oh that night in you embrace
when you stole away the keys
my heart held onto so tight
(pleasure) pleasure
but a fleeting melody
it wraps itself around me
and now through the air i fly
woh, woh
burning on in my heart fire
burn my love away all away
like a bullet of love fire
take my life away all away
guitar guitar
up together to the sky


murder murder
why did you choose to come here
when the night stole him away
music covering the crime
destruction
but a ruined melody
it wrapped itself around me
and now covering the crime
no,no
tearing through all of my heart
tear my love away all away
a pistol shooting his heart
take his life away all away
pistol pistol
down together to my hell



so what d'ya think???? also, i would like it hear how it sounds, but i cant sing. is there anyone who can sing it for me???? it has exactly the same tune as the first verse.

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omg that sounds so gudd!, ..but soz when i sing i sound like a cow :(

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So the second half is her calmly singing about brutal murder softly?

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kinda. i thought if the second half is sung slightly lower, more quitely, but with a powerfull edge, it would sound dangerous and almost said to something that isnt there.(didthat make sense?) also thaks guys.

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i think i get how you want it to be, but i cant sing.honestly, i am awful.
great lyrics BTW!!!

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thankyou!

i still need to find someone to sing though.

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