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PHoenix/Iris day on the twelfth! Judging by your Avatar, I think that you're a wonderful artist.

So welcome!!!!!!!!!!
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PHoenix/Iris day on the twelfth! Judging by your Avatar, I think that you're a wonderful artist.

So welcome!!!!!!!!!!


awesome! I'll draw a special pic just for that day!!
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awesome! I'll draw a special one just for that day!!


Hooray! More stuff for September 12th! :butz:

although I still think that P/I day should've been in February....
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Mmrph! Yep! I'm glad we finally have an active artist for contributions. I'm sure they'll be great. In fact, I'm going to check them out right now!
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Welcome, R.M.! It's a pleasure to meet you. I saw your art and it's very pretty. I look forward to seeing more.

And, Sarahsuke, your friend's fic is excellent. Sadly, as I'm no artist, I don't have an account on DA, so I can't leave the review there. If he posts it on FF.net or here though I promise him a full review. Please do tell him that he's a talented writer though and the characters are very nicely handled. In short, it's an excellent story and I hope that he'll write more.

I'm sorry to hear that that things have gone poorly for you, JasmineJustice. I dearly hope that you feel better soon. Don't worry about anything else. Just take care of yourself. That's all that matters.



Anyway, I'm late to the game, but I have a progress report for P/I day. The fic I'm working is done. It's not good, but it's at least finished, so now I can go back and try to fix it up some. I'm rather pleased that I managed to get anything written at all, to be quite honest. I'll try to get it up Saturday, although I work that day, so I may post it late that day unless I can post it before work.
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DId you hear that? Mia_Fey wrote a new fic@!
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Why am I so anticipatory? Because her fics are amazing. I exaggerate not.
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Hey guys, I'm not going to be able to get anything up for P/I day on Saturday :larry: . I won't have access to my computer since I'm heading to a museum for one of my classes for most of the day. I'll try to get stuff posted on Sunday, though.

I'll just wish you all an early Happy P/I day then!

Oh, and I can't wait to read your fic Mia! :will:
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Mia_Fey wrote:
And, Sarahsuke, your friend's fic is excellent. Sadly, as I'm no artist, I don't have an account on DA, so I can't leave the review there. If he posts it on FF.net or here though I promise him a full review. Please do tell him that he's a talented writer though and the characters are very nicely handled. In short, it's an excellent story and I hope that he'll write more.
He says that he'll consider refining it and posting it on FF.net if there's enough of a demand for it, as fics on dA tend to go unnoticed.

I won't be able to do anything for P/I Day, but said friend has given me a request to draw the couple, and the time to complete the picture will vary depending on whether I can get my tablet to work at my aunt's house or not.
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Ahctung...finnaly finished my attempt at fanfiction. I don't like it, but I never have that high opinon of my works anyway.
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I plan to upload my fan fiction to FF.net later today... :meekins:

I'm afraid to put it here because it's sorta 'M-ish' :hotti:

EDIT: POSTED IT A DAY EARLY JUST IN CASE. =D
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Good progress to everyone. Reading that one-shot I "was" working on well I'm not going to finish it because I don't have any motivation at the moment to do a one-shot when I have three chaptered stories I really need to work on. I don't have any time to write anything else Feenris like for the day tomorrow so too bad.
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Now all I need is for someone to fill that request I wrote and I'm set for P/I Day! :maya:
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My friend has uploaded his revised fic to FF.net, just in time for the big day!
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Hallo! Big FeenRis fan here! Made a long fanfic(46 chapters long) and plan to post all of them! HOORAY FOR FEENRIS DAY!!

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wow, P/I Day is tomorrow! Wow I hope I have enough time to read everyone's fanfiction. oh and thank you Mia_Fey!

I am now just putting the finishing touches on my Phoenix and Iris drawing, and hopefully I can get to my friends house tomorrow and use her scanner. HOPEFULLY!
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Oh boy! Tomorrow's the big day!

AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO'S SUPER PSYCHED?!?


VHT said that he can't be here until later tomorrow, so he said I should watch over P/I day...although I didn't know anybody really had to... :eh?:
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Happy Phoenix/Iris Day, doodz. :ayame:

nothing to contribute beyond support as usual, sadly
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Happy P/I day guys. Looks like I was able to be around just in time. Already shown it earlier but here's my fic you guys. =D
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5335056/1/Atonement
Later on tomorrow, I think I'll be back reading your fics.
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ImageHAPPY P/I DAY!!Image

And now for my meekly offerings.
First off. My sig includes 2 new ones. Based on songs in this new P/I Youtube playlist. It contains every P/I vid on Yt, plus several songs that work for the pairing. Browse through your P/I fanart while listening to them :godot:
The list also includes this new P/I vid' i made. It uses the song Painted Heart by Jane Zhang (includes the translated lyrics in the description :minuki: ).

And a couple of pic's. The 1st one is only Iris, but i've never posted it before and wanted to:
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(I wanted to make the 2 kids Pearl and Cody, but they didn't work). No other GS character makes a better angel. She fits the role perfectly :ayame: .


The 2nd pic' is of something i did just for P/I day, which involved purchasing something. It doesn't quite fit my Iris one because it was made for another body style.
That's right, it's "those" :godot:
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My :phoenix: and :ayame: MLP's. They actually made a wedding dress for one back in the 80's (part of a set). I browsed Ebay to see if there was such a thing, and found there was. And i managed to snag one. Shoes were included but they wouldn't fit.

I have no regrets doing this. :franny:


Finaly i've bumped my P/I fanfic.
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Happy Phoenix/Iris days all! ^_^

There are some nice contributions so far. This day should be fun!

Welcome, kenneth3k1! It's nice to meet you. I look forward to more fics from you. ^_^

I'm glad that your friend decided to post his fic on FF.net, Sarahsuke. I don't have work tomorrow, so I'll write the review then when I have the time to put some thought into my review. :)

Anyway, thanks for the kind words, guys, but don't get too excited my fic isn't particularly good. Still. I hope you all enjoy. Be aware that it's still fairly rough, but I wanted to get it up today, so I apologize in advance for any mistakes.


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Iris could only smile as she let herself into the apartment that she shared with her new husband and daughter. She and Phoenix had been married for almost six months now and they had been the most blissful of her life. That’s not to say that they did not fight now and then, as they certainly did, but they could always manage to work things out before too long.

As she entered the apartment, Iris glanced around excitedly, hoping that Phoenix had come home early, but the quiet of the apartment told her that her hopes were in vain. Feeling a bit disappointed, a small frown creased her face, but it didn’t last for long. She couldn’t imagine that there was anything right now that could shake the happiness she felt at this moment. Not after she had just discovered that she was pregnant.

Laying her hand gently on her stomach, Iris’s smile broadened as she imagined the small child growing inside of her. Her eyes again darted hopefully towards the door, as though she could get Phoenix to arrive through a sheer act of will. When Phoenix still didn’t arrive, Iris sighed with an impatience that surprised her. Although normally a very patient woman, she couldn’t wait to tell her husband the news. He had always been so excited about the idea at the times when they had discussed it.

And once he knew, they could tell Trucy who would be out of her mind with joy. She had been pestering them since they had gotten married to give her a little brother or sister, but Iris wanted to tell Phoenix first so that they could tell Trucy together. So, at least for tonight, Trucy was staying at Kurain with Maya and Pearl.

Sighing heavily, Iris walked into the next room and settled down at the large desk inside it. Reaching into the black bag beside the desk, she pulled out some blank paper to try to write out the next day’s lesson plan for the class that she taught, but her mind refused to cooperate. She was simply too excited to focus on anything else at that moment.

After an hour of working, Iris had finally managed to, at least, get an outline written, so that she would at least not be completely unprepared for the following day. Pregnant or not, her students still needed her attention. As happy as she was at the news, she adored her students and it would be hard to leave them when the baby was born. With that thought, Iris quickly scribbled a note to herself as a reminder that she needed to let the school know and start looking for a good substitute for her students.

After that was done, Iris stood up to stretch her legs. The sound of her stomach growling shocked her a bit. She was always so hungry these days, but, admittedly, that actually made sense now that she knew that she was expecting. After all, she was eating for two now.

Smiling at the thought, she walked into the kitchen to make herself a sandwich, wondering about the best way to tell Phoenix when he got home as she walks, but she didn’t have much time to contemplate the issue before she heard a key in the door.

Crying out happily, Iris rushed to the door to meet him.

Phoenix walked in, a tired look on his face, but his eyes brightened when he saw her standing there.

“Hi, Rissy,” Phoenix smiled, leaning down to kiss her lips gently. As they parted though, a concerned frown crossed his face. “Is something wrong, dear?”

Surprised by his question, Iris’s eyes opened wide as she quickly tried to reassure him. “No- no, of course not. Why would there be?”

With a wiry smile on his face, Phoenix teased, “You just aren’t usually standing at attention by the door, my love.”

Giggling a bit, Iris kissed him. “I’m sorry if I scared you. Actually though, there…” The words died in her throat as nervousness suddenly rushed through her. What was the best way to tell him? Mysteriously, fear seized her in that moment as her mind raced, besieged by a number of questions, her breathing quickened and her throat tightened despite her efforts to calm herself. W-What if he really didn’t want this child? They had discussed the topic a bit, but they always talked about as though it would happen some time in the future… was now too soon?

“Yes?” Phoenix asked, concern flickering in his gentle blue eyes as he watched her.

“I’m just being silly,” Iris told herself sternly, but when she opened her mouth to tell him, the words refused to come. Instead, she said, “Oh, nothing. It’s silly.” Turning away, she walked into the kitchen. “You must be starving. What would you like to eat?”

“I-I don’t know, Iris,” Phoenix responded, clearly surprised by the quick change of topic. “I’m not really that hungry.”

“Oh?” she asked, keeping her back turned to him as she spoke. She couldn’t bring herself to meet his eyes just yet; not until she had figured out what she wished to do. Opening the refrigerator, she asked, “How about I make us something light then? I could just make a quick salad or sandwiches or…”

Her voice trailed off as Phoenix wrapped his arms around her waist and kissed her neck. “I’d rather know what you were going to say earlier.”

Iris fell silent for a moment. She… she was being foolish. In her heart, she realized this. It was her mind that was causing these problems, always looking for potential troubles.

Happiness had never lasted in her life. She could still remember all those carefree moments in Kurain before her father dragged her and Dahlia away from the only home they’d ever know and dragged them apart, never to see one another again or so she had believed. At the time, she had truly thought that her world had come to an end, but, with Bikini’s help, she had managed to pick up the pieces. Then there was the joy of being reunited with her sister that was destroyed when she saw what Dahlia had become and then when she finally, truly lost her forever. She had tried so hard to save her sister, but she had failed; a failure that still haunted her to this day. Surely, she wasn’t entitled to such happiness. Although she tried hard not to think about her, a part of her desperately feared what was to come. How long would her joy last this time? How long before she lost all that she loved yet again?

“Rissy, please talk to me,” Phoenix plead softly. “What’s wrong?”

Closing her eyes, Iris took a deep breath and turned to face him. As she opened her eyes and met his gaze, she swallowed hard and grabbed his hand, leading him over to the couch in the next room.

She loved him. That was all that she really knew. Perhaps this would last forever and perhaps it wouldn’t, but she couldn’t live her life in fear. It wasn’t fair to Phoenix or to Trucy or… or to herself.

Taking another deep breath, Iris squeezed his hand tightly and said, “Feenie, I-I’m pregnant.”

Fearfully she glanced at Phoenix’s face to see his reaction and relief flooded her as she realized that she’d had nothing to worry about. The look on his face was one of shock quickly being replaced by delight.

“R-really?” he whispered, his hand tightening around hers. When she nodded, he smiled broadly and kissed her. “That’s wonderful, Rissy. Have you been to see the doctor yet? Does Trucy know?”

“Yes, I went today,” she told him happily. Moving closer to him, she rested her head on his shoulder. “He says the baby is healthy. He asked me to come back in next week for an ultrasound. And, no. Trucy doesn’t know yet. I wanted us to tell her together. She’s staying at Kurain tonight.”

Phoenix smiled, “Good. We’ll tell her tell her when she gets home tomorrow. Do you mind if I go with you to the doctor’s office?”

Iris smiled, cuddling closer to him. “No, I don’t mind at all. In fact, I’d really like it if you’d come with me.” Closing her eyes, she sighed blissfully and whispered, “I love you, Feenie.

Wrapping his arms tightly around her, Phoenix said softly, “And I you, Rissy. And I you.”

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HAPPPY FEENRIS DAY!!!

To celebrate Feenirs day I of course made an extra long chapter to my fanfcition. Here's the link to it.

present-testimony/love-and-laugh-feenris-romantic-comedy-t16944.html

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Happy Feenris Day!

Anyway, I posterd a fanfiction, but it's not my best work.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5370266/1/First_Meeting

Nor is it very long, but...yeah....Happy Feenris Day.
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Mia_Fey - I love Iris switching from thinking Phoenix will be totally happy to not ready for this child. Perhaps it's just the pregnancy hormones acting up but I felt it was nice to see that thought from Iris. Phoenix is just very nice towards Iris after he hears the news. I just like the little details of what will happen during the pregnancy like Iris needing to find a new teacher to sub for her, that I felt was important to mention. I quite enjoyed it.
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I agree completely platinum Skye/ Derek! I can totally see Iris going into a different thought proses, I'm so happy to know that I'm not the only person out their was a pregnant Iris! Does this story continue if it does GO ON GO ON!
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I just love expecting Iris. Sweet interaction and realization.
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HAPPY PHOENIX AND IRIS DAY!!!


Luckily I am here at my friends house now and that I was able to finish my drawing on time. I usually do not color my artwork, but I tired my best just for this very day!! Hope his scanner shows good enough quality. Enjoy!

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Hope you guys like it!I do not have time to read the fanficton, but later today I will try to read all of them!

YAY P/I!!!!! :phoenix: :ayame:
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SUPER ULTRA MEGA HAPPY FEENRIS DAY!

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! ALL THESE CONTRIBUTIONS ARE EXCELLENT MASTERPIECES! =D

No one filled my request for today. :payne:

But I still wrote a fanfiction which I uploaded yesterday. :ayame:

http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/story/ ... id=5369663

Only problem is, I think it's kinda suckish.... :payne:
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Yaragorm wrote:
SUPER ULTRA MEGA HAPPY FEENRIS DAY!

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! ALL THESE CONTRIBUTIONS ARE EXCELLENT MASTERPIECES! =D

No one filled my request for today. :payne:

But I still wrote a fanfiction which I uploaded yesterday. :ayame:

http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/story/ ... id=5369663

Only problem is, I think it's kinda suckish.... :payne:



Hey, it's a heck of a lot better than my contribution.
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Yaragorm wrote:
SUPER ULTRA MEGA HAPPY FEENRIS DAY!

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! ALL THESE CONTRIBUTIONS ARE EXCELLENT MASTERPIECES! =D

No one filled my request for today. :payne:

But I still wrote a fanfiction which I uploaded yesterday. :ayame:

http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/story/ ... id=5369663

Only problem is, I think it's kinda suckish.... :payne:


I liked the one-shot you made. I just felt it would have been nice to see some of Iris's POV of being expecting triplets when she had to abandon Phoenix and go into labor without a father. I also don't see Phoenix thinking Iris looks like the motherly type. I felt the reaction of Iris hearing about Phoenix's "daughter" was nice.
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Platinum Skye wrote:
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SUPER ULTRA MEGA HAPPY FEENRIS DAY!

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! ALL THESE CONTRIBUTIONS ARE EXCELLENT MASTERPIECES! =D

No one filled my request for today. :payne:

But I still wrote a fanfiction which I uploaded yesterday. :ayame:

http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/story/ ... id=5369663

Only problem is, I think it's kinda suckish.... :payne:


I liked the one-shot you made. I just felt it would have been nice to see some of Iris's POV of being expecting triplets when she had to abandon Phoenix and go into labor without a father. I also don't see Phoenix thinking Iris looks like the motherly type. I felt the reaction of Iris hearing about Phoenix's "daughter" was nice.


Yeah I kinda need more practice for this stuff... :payne:

Maybe next year I'll revise it... :eh?:
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I'm so back! Just in time it seems!
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ill make a siggy tomorrow -_-
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This is all I can contribute

My ongoing fanfic, chapters 9-11. Read just those, sorry.

Thar's the best I can't do!


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Phoenix lifted his eyelids.
“Ow…” he thought. “I wonder what happened.”
“Hey, pal! You okay now?” Came the voice of Gumshoe.
“Uh, yeah…what happened?” Phoenix asked.
“You passed out when you saw the receipt!” he chuckled. “You know” he said thoughtfully, “That amount of money takes me two months to earn, pal. You shouldn’t be so extravagant.”
“Oh yeah…” Phoenix thought. “I got a little to caught up with Iris there…”
“H-hi Feenie!” Iris greeted him. “Y-you passed out there.” She was still wearing her dress, and Phoenix could not help but to goggle at her, causing her to blush madly.
“Oh yeah…” he said. “I did pass out…hehe”
Iris walked by him and gave him a hand up, and then handed him a glass of water, pivoting back and forth a little, as if eager for appraisal.
“Thanks” he said, and downed the glass in one shot. “Ah, that feels better.” Then, noticing her awkwardness, he commented. “You still look as stunning as ever…”
She blushed even more, and it seemed that wasn’t what she was after.
“O-our d-date…”
“Oh right!” He smacked his forehead. “R-right! I…where should we go?”
“A-are y-you…”
“Why don’t we go for a swim?”
“A-ah! I-I…have to change again?” she complained.
“Why not?” he suggested. “There’s a water park not far from here.”
“O-oh…well…i-it’s just that…it’s nine o’clock, and I don’t think it would b-be open…”
“Gah!” he thought. “Phoenix! Get ahold of yourself!” He shook his head quickly and then asked Iris again. “W-well…uh…where’d you like to go?”
She thought for a moment, and then came up with the answer. “B-boat ride?”
“I know just the place!”
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After explaining the story of Miles Edgeworth to her, Phoenix led Iris onto one of the boats, now completely free due to the arrest of the caretaker.
As she got in, she couldn’t help but to continue to grill Phoenix about the case itself.
“S-so…Mr. Edgeworth was accused of murder in this very lake?”
“Yeah…” he answered rather unenthusiastically. He wasn’t too keen on discussing the situation any further than it needed to be discussed.
“A-and…there’s a dead body in this l-lake?” she asked, appearing quite frightened.
“N-no!” Phoenix hastily answered. “Nothing like that! The police removed it a long time ago!”
“O-oh…” she said, appearing rather relieved. “A-and…”
“L-look, Iris…that case…I’d really rather not discuss it right now.”
“O-oh…” she said. “I-I understand…”
“It’s not you, it’s just that…that case really…scarred me a bit…”
“O-oh…y-yes…”
“But…” he turned to her and tried to smile. “We could talk about the—“
“Feenie?”
“Yes?”
“D-do…you s-still love me?”
Phoenix jolted. He wasn’t expecting that question, and certainly had not prepared an answer for it. Did he still love Iris? The answer was right in front of him, yet he could not grasp it. Obviously, he was still going out with her, even going out of his way for her…but to say love?
“I-I…”
At his hesitation, Iris turned away.
“I-Iris…it’s not like that!”
She began to cry.
“I-Iris!” He tried to console her. “I-I…love you…” he spouted waveringly.
The crying didn’t subside, but it seemed, his wavering answer actually helped to exacerbate the sobbing.
“O-oh…”
Phoenix felt his heart ache. “Phoenix! How can you be so heartless!” he chided himself. “She’s crying her heart out over you…and you can even say ‘I love you’ to the woman you love!”
“I love her…” he repeated. “I-I…I really do? Is this what it means to love? To have your heart ache when they’re uncomfortable? To enjoy catering to their every whim? To stand by and comfort even in the worst of times?” He wrapped his arms around Iris. This time he wouldn’t vacillate.
“I love you” he whispered into her ear. “I really do…you are the light of my life, the blue of the sky, the beauty of the lake, the fire of the sun, the fragrance of Iris’…and every other flower I’ve seen” he said. “Except dahlias” he thought.
Iris turned around to face him, and looked him in the eyes. Phoenix looked firmly on. After locking eyes for five minutes, she gave a little sigh and fell into his arms.
“Th-that’s…good…”
“Now I have a question, Iris.”
Looking mildly surprised, she looked back up at him. “Y-yes?”
“Do you still love me?”
She didn’t answer, and instead smiled and buried her face into his chest again. They stayed that way for the next few hours, in each other’s embrace, in the boat drifting slowly in the sparkling and glossy surface of the water, reflecting the beautiful silver moonlight.
She didn’t need to answer.

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So many fanfic's to read, so little time :sadshoe:
Nonetheless that's been the #1 contribution today :edgy:
And there's still plenty of time left in P/I day. I mean here there's 4 hrs left. 6 on the west coast.

Oh and keep tabs on the P/I playlist because as i find them i'll add more songs (in fact i just added 1 more :pearl: ).
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Oh boy oh boy oh boy!

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Ah, P/I day is coming to a close...everyone made beautiful contributions and the day was a complete success. :edgy:

EXCEPT I DIDN'T GET MY REQUEST FILLED. :nixiesob:

CONGRATZ ON A JOB WELL DONE!!! :phoenix: :ayame:
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baawwwww! i missed Feenris Day... :larry:
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ALL GLORY TO THE HYPNOWAKANA.
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Croik wrote:
Less talk about masturbation, more on topic plz.

Ya made my day, boss :gant:

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Can't believe I missed the day...
And what I was doing yesterday?
...NOTHING!!...And I still missed it...
[I feel your pain, inu.]

Meh...
I guess I'm gonna just do some PI sprite work then...
...!...Ide got already.
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no one likes my drawing? :nixiesob:
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no one likes my drawing? :nixiesob:


Meh likes it!

And you should make sure that link in your sig works properly.
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R.M. wrote:
no one likes my drawing? :nixiesob:


Meh likes it!

And you should make sure that link in your sig works properly.


thank you! and got it to work now!
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