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W-WHAT?!
KINGDOM HEARTS

Nvm, let's get back to PW, shall we?
As I already said, from the first look I though they were together.
And from case to case, I figured out that I was right :acro:
Hm, I was thinking about this recently...
What moment of P\M did you like the most?
For me it was the end of 2-4, no doubt. It was so.... magical. Can't explain this. I think I cried.
And the photo of Phoenix and Maya and Pearl... man.... I think this photo is my favorite from all the pictures that I liked.

If I played Kingdom Hearts, or even liked it, it would screw me up too much to play PW. (How is it a keyblade if it's a rod with two key bits shoved out the end? I prefer keybludgeon, thank you!)

Anyway, I've considered P/M to be canon since 1-4, when they both get so broken up over Maya leaving to train. No one gets that broken up over a friend or acquaintance, I can tell you. I mean, Maya was crying and Nick was refusing to take cases, left and right, though he needed the money so badly, because Maya wasn't by his side, and there's no way he could take on a case without Maya. It was just too hard an idea to grasp for him, so he turned people down. (Of course, Ema, blah blah blah...)
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Yeah, 2-4 was a pretty big deal. Oddly, 2-2 was the thing that made me believe in P/M.

It's not at all odd. That's when the writers start raising them as a potential couple. Since Maya is now an 'adult'. [Enter Pearl as well..]
But GS2 is clearly building on the 1-4 'train station scene' between them...
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I'd have to say one of my favorites is this scene in case 2-2.
Spoiler:
Phoenix: I'll be back later, Maya. In the meantime, please make sure you prepare it, OK?
Maya: Huh? "It"? What is "it"?
Phoenix: The document requesting me to be your attorney, of course.
Maya: ...! But...
Phoenix: What's wrong?
Maya: Are you sure? I mean, I'm guilty! I'm a murderer!
Phoenix: No one's decided that yet.
Maya: But I did! I killed that person... with these... two hands...!
Phoenix: That's enough, Maya.
Maya: It's hopeless! If you defend me, you'll lose, I'm sure...
Phoenix: Stop it!
Maya: ... ...Help me... Nick, help me... I'm scared...
Phoenix: Don't worry, I will. When is the trial?
Maya: It sounds like tomorrow.
Phoenix: (As usual, zero prep time...) Alright. I'm going now.
Maya: Wait.
Phoenix: ...?
Maya: This jewel... This is called a Magatama. It's a magical charm and it's always protected me. Give this to Pearly... And I'm sure she'll lend you her spiritual powers.


I swear, the powerful emotion in this trilogy is part of what makes it three of my favorite DS games ever. ./'


Yay, another 2-2 fan! I just love that case... (For the Phoenix-Maya stuff, and yes, the 'powerful emotion', and that scene, not as much the 'case')

Actually, the big tear jerker for me in 2-4 is not the reunion, it's this one:
Spoiler: 2-4
+++ The door +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
+
+ Pearl:
+ There's a little door for Shoe
+ in this big door.
+
+ Phoenix:
+ I'm sure Maya used this door
+ to shove this out there...
+ I'm sure it was her!
+
+ Phoenix:
+ (Every time you give me some
+ piece of evidence, it's always
+ the most crucial piece.)
+
+ Phoenix:
+ (This time too, I'm sure...)
+


But the picture of the reunion in 2-4 is the best pic in the games.

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Shiki's link is in his sig, as is mine! *points* Though there have been a lot of good fanfics in your absence.
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I really really like 2-2 :D
But no doubt, I liked P\M moment at 2-4 the most.
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Aw, I wanted to say something lately to you guys...
I'm sorry.You guys must hate me, because I'm a fangirl and at...
And you know, when I saw you guys, I just got on fire. I think this club is great, and finally, someone who likes P\M as me... it was wonderful, so I left the wrong impression. I must've really got you guys annoyed... so sorry.
I think you guys are great, and I don't want you guys to look at me as just a stupid fangirl. I'm not just a fangirl, I can be totally normal when I want. So sorry :sadshoe:
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I'm sorry.You guys must hate me, because I'm a fangirl and at...
And you know, when I saw you guys, I just got on fire. I think this club is great, and finally, someone who likes P\M as me... it was wonderful, so I left the wrong impression. I must've really got you guys annoyed... so sorry.
I think you guys are great, and I don't want you guys to look at me as just a stupid fangirl.

Um, I doubt anybody felt that way, I sure didn't. We're very happy to have a P/M 'fangirl'. :butzthumbs:
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Justis is taking a leave of absence :oops: I assume he'll have finished the fanfic by the time he comes back, so let's look forward to it.
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icer wrote:
BlackWiddow wrote:
I'm sorry.You guys must hate me, because I'm a fangirl and at...
And you know, when I saw you guys, I just got on fire. I think this club is great, and finally, someone who likes P\M as me... it was wonderful, so I left the wrong impression. I must've really got you guys annoyed... so sorry.
I think you guys are great, and I don't want you guys to look at me as just a stupid fangirl.

Um, I doubt anybody felt that way, I sure didn't. We're very happy to have a P/M 'fangirl'. :butzthumbs:
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Justis is taking a leave of absence :oops: I assume he'll have finished the fanfic by the time he comes back, so let's look forward to it.


Thanks for the comment :maya: It cheered me up.
About the fanfic, oh well. I'll be looking forward for it :edgy:
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yeah, I certainly don't find you annoying, BlackWiddow :keiko: I'm a giant fangirl too, so I'm always saying silly fangirly things all the time X3;

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Awesome work dude, you just earned yourself another favorite. XD


woo, thanks a bunch! I'm glad you liked it. (shamless self-plugging really DOES work :D)
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Ohyeasshh... justis! I am lookin' forward to his fic... Maya with her love potion for Nick. :acro: (I hope the potion is not self made by her, else we'll see a funeral in this fic :larry: )
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BlackWiddow did not find you anoying at all :D i work at a school i deal with anoying on a daily basis, you are no where close to that :grey:



also ya Justis :sadshoe: i wanted to read that :larry:
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also ya Justis :sadshoe: i wanted to read that :larry:

Well he'll be back in ~2 days I think.

And yes DarkWobbuffet, I agree with you. I decided today that that part in 2-2 is my favourite scene in the series. :larry:

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Spoiler: 2-2
Phoenix: I'll be back later, Maya. In the meantime, please make sure you prepare it, OK?
Maya: Huh? "It"? What is "it"?
Phoenix: The document requesting me to be your attorney, of course.
Maya: ...! But...
Phoenix: What's wrong?
Maya: Are you sure? I mean, I'm guilty! I'm a murderer!
Phoenix: No one's decided that yet.
Maya: But I did! I killed that person... with these... two hands...!
Phoenix: That's enough, Maya.
Maya: It's hopeless! If you defend me, you'll lose, I'm sure...
Phoenix: Stop it!
Maya: ... ...Help me... Nick, help me... I'm scared...
Phoenix: Don't worry, I will. When is the trial?
Maya: It sounds like tomorrow.
Phoenix: (As usual, zero prep time...) Alright. I'm going now.
Maya: Wait.
Phoenix: ...?
Maya: This jewel... This is called a Magatama. It's a magical charm and it's always protected me. Give this to Pearly... And I'm sure she'll lend you her spiritual powers.


And how they both get all emotional too. Awww. And his defense makes no rational sense yet. It's purely on their belief in each other.
It's also an exact parallel opposite to the fake 'Dollie partnership' thing in 3-1 as well, BTW... Truth vs Lies!
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Hm, good question. I'd have to say one of my favorites is this scene in case 2-2.

Spoiler:
Phoenix: I'll be back later, Maya. In the meantime, please make sure you prepare it, OK?
Maya: Huh? "It"? What is "it"?
Phoenix: The document requesting me to be your attorney, of course.
Maya: ...! But...
Phoenix: What's wrong?
Maya: Are you sure? I mean, I'm guilty! I'm a murderer!
Phoenix: No one's decided that yet.
Maya: But I did! I killed that person... with these... two hands...!
Phoenix: That's enough, Maya.
Maya: It's hopeless! If you defend me, you'll lose, I'm sure...
Phoenix: Stop it!
Maya: ... ...Help me... Nick, help me... I'm scared...
Phoenix: Don't worry, I will. When is the trial?
Maya: It sounds like tomorrow.
Phoenix: (As usual, zero prep time...) Alright. I'm going now.
Maya: Wait.
Phoenix: ...?
Maya: This jewel... This is called a Magatama. It's a magical charm and it's always protected me. Give this to Pearly... And I'm sure she'll lend you her spiritual powers.


I swear, the powerful emotion in this trilogy is part of what makes it three of my favorite DS games ever. ./'

Also, I enjoyed that scene in 3-3 where Phoenix sees Maya in a waitress uniform. A shame I can't find the script for that scene.

Seconded. I love those moments too. I'm replaying that 2-2 at the moment. =D
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Shiki? Posting a fic update? OMG!

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<3
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Pearly went back to Kurain and won't be back for a week. I'm down at the convenience store. Be back soon for lunch.
Love you lots,
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Aww love it.
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Thanks a lot to all of you :D
I really appreciate it :acro:
Anyway, back to P\M...
Shiki, haven't read all of your fics yet, but I read the "Please teacher!" one. Man, your writing is one of my favorite kind. A lot of detail. Good stories :D
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But no doubt, I liked P\M moment at 2-4 the most.
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Aw, I wanted to say something lately to you guys...
I'm sorry.You guys must hate me, because I'm a fangirl and at...
And you know, when I saw you guys, I just got on fire. I think this club is great, and finally, someone who likes P\M as me... it was wonderful, so I left the wrong impression. I must've really got you guys annoyed... so sorry.
I think you guys are great, and I don't want you guys to look at me as just a stupid fangirl. I'm not just a fangirl, I can be totally normal when I want. So sorry :sadshoe:
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Justis, what about today's fanfic? :larry:


Gah! I'm Sorry. I was gone for the weekend so I couldn't get back sooner...

Ignore me! I tend to let whatever is on my chest out at the slightest opportunity. Ya seem pretty likable to me, so I'm sorry if it felt like I was trying to chase you off.
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I really really like 2-2 :D
But no doubt, I liked P\M moment at 2-4 the most.
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Aw, I wanted to say something lately to you guys...
I'm sorry.You guys must hate me, because I'm a fangirl and at...
And you know, when I saw you guys, I just got on fire. I think this club is great, and finally, someone who likes P\M as me... it was wonderful, so I left the wrong impression. I must've really got you guys annoyed... so sorry.
I think you guys are great, and I don't want you guys to look at me as just a stupid fangirl. I'm not just a fangirl, I can be totally normal when I want. So sorry :sadshoe:
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Justis, what about today's fanfic? :larry:


Gah! I'm Sorry. I was gone for the weekend so I couldn't get back sooner...

Ignore me! I tend to let whatever is on my chest out at the slightest opportunity. Ya seem pretty likable to me, so I'm sorry if it felt like I was trying to chase you off.


Thanks ^.^
You don't need to say sorry, it's really OK(It was not just you, BTW. I guess my self-hateness just got over me.)

Back to P\M...
I played for my brother half of the first game, it's a long story why
Anyway, I really really love this case suddenly xP
It is the start of Maya and Phoenix together, and they trusted each other with no problems. I see that romantic.
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Aww, come on, guys. I post an update, get a bunch of additional views, but not ONE review or comment? D:
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Well, I'm back. From my unexpected, unannounced, irreversible vacation...courtesy of the mods...

And with my infamous return, I bring with you a slightly more famous gift: An update!

It's good to be back.

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Aww, come on, guys. I post an update, get a bunch of additional views, but not ONE review or comment? D:


thought i did :yuusaku:

oh well i liked it thought it was good like all of your work
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I had a weird dream of Phoenix & Maya...

But it was 2 nights ago, and I've pretty much forgotten it by now. : (

@BlackWiddow: What are you talking about? When it comes to P/M fangirls, the louder and crazier the better. But ONLY when it comes to P/M fangirls. The rest scare me.
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I had a weird dream of Phoenix & Maya...

But it was 2 nights ago, and I've pretty much forgotten it by now. : (

@BlackWiddow: What are you talking about? When it comes to P/M fangirls, the louder and crazier the better. But ONLY when it comes to P/M fangirls. The rest scare me.


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I usually don't feel comfortable commenting on someone's work, because I've never finished one of my own...

In Texas, you can't say anything till you've done it. :texasman:
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In Texas, you can't say anything till you've done it. :texasman:


Is that one of your rules? :godot:

Yeah, I liked it as well.
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Ack! Double post, but for good reason! I just noticed tghat today was silentxfilmstar's birthday! And you thought I wouldn't notice, didn't you? Sorry, but I check the b-day list every day! :redd:

HAPPY BIRTHDAY! :cookie:


Thank you very much, justis!! I know it's totally late, but I just saw that you wrote that :knock-knock:

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Sora doesn't like Kari in KH2? What? Dangit.
No human being is asexual. That's just scary. Just saying.

Umm, actually, people can be "asexual". It's not like they don't have any parts down there, they just don't like either boys or girls, there's nothing wrong with that.

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The most?? Uhhh... I think it was in 2-4, 3-3 and 3-5. I couldn't stop smiling at the part where Maya was dressed as a waitress, I don't remember all that happened.... D: kekeke!! Pretty much everything in 3-5 and a lot in 2-4(the picture Maya drew of Phoenix is a BIG example :D) made me like P/M more and more XD I played JFA first, so when I saw how Maya and Phoenix interacted together, I thought that they liked each other. My sister did too, but then she started liking P/E... :\
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I was just thinking 'it will be ages till I write another fanfic' and then I suddenly had to write this one. It's pretty cliched but, I don't really care right now :sad-maya: Since it's not really up to being posted on ff.net or anything, (or the fic topics on this site, and I haven't sorted them out yet) I'll just post it riiight here. [Haha sickfic. And they just need some decent scene over this anyway.]
Spoiler: Set just after 3-5. Fluff and sap warning. :edgy:
Maya silently observed the guests at Tres Bien, after some hours of celebrations following the State Vs Iris of Hazakurain case.

Nick appeared to be enjoying himself, animatedly conversing with Edgeworth, and Larry and Gumshoe (who were even more animated, apparently somewhat drunk.) Pearl had fallen asleep, neatly curled up in a corner with some kind of travel pillow provided by either Edgeworth or Franziska.

Maya hoped nobody had noticed her uncharacteristic lack of appetite for the food tonight, (but this was Tres Bien, so there were plenty of alternate excuses for not eating anything.) Spoiling her cheerful veneer with tears had never been a threat – it was easy to project a fake smile over the dull haze where she could not have cried even if she’d wanted to. She’d tried to delude herself it was just lingering physical distress, but - suddenly, she simply had to leave. She exited the restaurant unnoticed and unannounced.

Maya paced unseeingly in the direction of Gourd Lake Park. There was no longer possibility of conscious denial of that most hideous of emotions – grief.
It had caught her off-guard – she hadn’t even known her mother, didn’t know her when she stared her in the face.

The grief she’d felt over Mia, of course, too had been brutal, but the exact emotion had been obscured, wrapped up as it was in fear at her murder charges and situation and directly followed by fear for Phoenix at his own murder framing in helping her. Then she’d channelled Mia, and even though she hadn’t seen her, it made her feel the connection wasn’t lost, so her death was easier to deal with. Mia wasn’t totally gone.

But Maya knew better than to expect her mother to communicate from the afterlife. If she hadn’t wished to interact with Maya when they stared each other in the face, she certainly wouldn’t desire belated association from beyond the grave.

Maya circuited the lake, near-oblivious to the shimmering surface and muddy shore. Actually, just suddenly leaving Pearly and Nick like that wasn’t very responsible. But somehow she couldn’t bring herself to return or call to explain. Maybe someone would notice she left anyway, and understand.

Sure enough, eventually Nick called her phone.

“Um, Maya, did you go home?”

“I went for a walk. To Gourd Lake,” she explained.

“Are you okay?”

“Yeah.” It wasn’t as definite-sounding as she’d intended.

“D..do you want to be alone?” queried Phoenix, evidently arranging his words awkwardly. “Or do you want me to come by on my way home?”

“To the lake?”

“Yeah.”

“What about Pearly?”

A pause.

“Edgeworth has agreed to look after her.”

Great, Nick was probably worried about her. And yes, of course she wanted to see Nick. Oh well, it was Pearly who was the main person she had to stay ‘unaffected’ around. Besides, it was better he could ease his fears by ‘checking up’ on her, instead of imagining the worst.

“If you like..”

“I’ll see you there.”

***

It wasn’t hard for Phoenix to find Maya’s small figure slowly tracing the edge of the lake.

The dull look of grief in her eyes somehow made her look much older and tore at his heart.

Her attempt at a smile to match her greeting to him spectacularly failed.

Maya, you don’t have to fake it, Phoenix groaned internally. Maya must have noticed his incredulity, because she again fell into dull subduedness.

“I’m okay,” she reassured. “You can go back to the others, and Pearly..”

“It’s okay,” confirmed Phoenix, “Edgeworth is going to look after her. Unless you.. want me to leave…”

“No, No! I mean, not unless you want to.”

They meandered slowly, Maya’s eyes silently fixated to the ground. Suddenly she stopped dead. “I.. I think I should get home, if you don’t mind.” Her hand moved unthinkingly to finger her head. Phoenix internally panicked, recalling how Dahlia had thwacked her with that horrible-looking staff, and he couldn’t begin to comprehend what overextended channelling stints wrought on the body…

“I’ll walk you home,” Phoenix offered, affixing her with a cautious eye as they set off in the direction of Maya’s apartment.

Maya’s pace progressively slowed as they slowly progressed. “I’m fine!” she reassured to Phoenix’s concerns. “I’ll just need to lie down..”

Maya staggered directly to her bedroom and flopped lifelessly on the bed. Phoenix perched awkwardly in the doorway, unsure of what protocols he should adhere to with his assistant – he didn’t usually visit her own tiny apartment, let alone her bedroom. But her breathing was shallow and rapid, her body listless. She was clearly quite unwell.

“Do you need a doctor?” he queried, recalling how she’d only recently been released from hospital. [And so had he, he recalled, clutching his own aching head.]

“No,” murmured Maya, without opening her eyes. “Hot.”

Perhaps she has a fever, speculated Phoenix, stepping into the room and kneeling to her side. Even before his hand could contact her forehead he sensed the heat radiating out of it.

Now what did they do for fever? At the hospital, they’d given him some kind of drip…

“I’m getting you a glass of water,” he explained.

Upon his return with the water, Maya shifted herself to drink it, then sank back against the bed, energy spent. Now, pills to reduce fever… Phoenix trawled her bathroom cabinet, but there didn’t seem to be any.

“I’m just going out to get something for your fever,” Phoenix explained.

“Nick… right..” Maya muttered vacantly.

With a last searching backward glance, Phoenix hurried out.

Still, it was around 15 minutes before his successful return, pills in hand.

Things had clearly degenerated in the meantime.

Maya clung limply but determinedly to the edge of her bed, eyes sparked with petrified wildness. “Nn..noo!” she muttered.

“Maya?”

“W.. what’s going on?”

“Maya, it’s me. Here, take this,” directed Phoenix, offering the pill.

Maya merely buried herself against the bedhead.

Why is she trying to kill me?”

“Maya! It’s Nick!”

“Nick?”

“Eat this! Please! It’ll make you feel better!”

With a flash of lucidity, Maya gulped the pill, then again impaled herself against the bedhead, her eyes manic and unseeing.

“You’re only dreaming,” Phoenix attempted to explain, but Maya did not appear to notice him. Seized with concern at her evidently petrified figure, he laid his hand calmingly against her back.

Maya turned her head, evidently recognized him, and lurched toward him in frenzied relief.

“Nick! Nick, is that you? She’s trying to stab me! No! Run away! She might try and stab you too!”

Maya thrashed away from him and shook frenetically as she collapsed against the edge of the bed, exhausted.

“Maya.. Maya.. It’s over now..” Gently but firmly his hands moved to catch her and avert her sliding off the bed.

“But it’s real!” demanded Maya, her body a mass of tension. Then as if signalled by the touch of his hand again on her back, she ceased resistance and sank limply into him.

“She died, didn’t she,” gulped Maya, subdued, barely a whisper. “My mother died. Why.. why didn’t I know her when I saw her? And I saw… I saw…” She trailed off, incapacitated, her body again wracked with shivering. Phoenix gulped back nausea. First Mia, now her mother… He enfolded Maya tightly to him, uncaring that it was by far the most intimate altercation they had ever had, and stroked her quivering body till it finally stilled.

“You should get some rest,” he directed, noting the manic eyes and burning of fever had begun to leave her.

“Don’t leave me,” she pleaded.

“I won’t. Ever.” Phoenix gulped his conviction without conscious thought. Still with Maya in his arms, he slid down against the bed, guiding her head to the pillow.

“I’m sorry, Nick. I was supposed to try to be strong…”

“We’re partners,” corrected Phoenix. “I’m supposed to help you so you can be strong to everyone else..”

“We’re still partners? I thought Sis left..”

“Of course.”

“But I didn’t help you. I just made a problem again…"

“You helped me more than you’ll ever know,” muttered Phoenix.

“Huh?”

“Get some sleep. You’ll feel better after.” He wrapped his arms more firmly around her. Maya inclined her head closer toward him and obeyed in closing her eyes.

“And I just made that Iris go to jail,” she murmured a few minutes later without opening her eyes. “I’m sorry, Nick. I thought..” She ceased ability of continuation.

“Maya, I said we were partners. That’s your answer.. on that one…” Here it was Phoenix who couldn’t continue.

But no verbal response from Maya was necessary. Phoenix felt the body in his arms relax in entirety and drift into unhindered slumber.

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I had a weird dream of Phoenix & Maya...

But it was 2 nights ago, and I've pretty much forgotten it by now. : (

@BlackWiddow: What are you talking about? When it comes to P/M fangirls, the louder and crazier the better. But ONLY when it comes to P/M fangirls. The rest scare me.


Aww,that's too bad- about the dream. I'm sure I had a lot of MayaXNick dreams, I just can't remember them xD
Right now I need to be satisfied with day dreams about MayaXNick. Oh well.
And thanks for the comment :maya:
Well, I AM a loud one, so I guess I'm okay
Thanks guys, all of you really cheered me up :acro:

Back to my vid(who is not ready yet. Sorry guys.)
Well, too much homework, dang it. Yesterday I did homework for 5 HOURS!!!! HOLY*$#$^!@% :beef:
At least my friend gave me a beautiful song to put in the vid. At least my 1 week vacation start on Friday, so I guess the video will be posted next week.
If you have any sources to give me of P/M photos, or even a single photo, post it here or send me a message please. I'm lookin for the best pictures for this Vid :D
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Icer's Fic: Awesome! I never tire of Nick taking care of Maya. I really like how you showed how traumatized Maya was, in ways I'd never have thought of. Very good!

As for your video, if you're looking for pictures, you've definitely come to the right place. I really only specialize in fics, so I'm afraid I can't help you, but there are a lot of people who love P/M pics that can help.
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I was just thinking 'it will be ages till I write another fanfic' and then I suddenly had to write this one. It's pretty cliched but, I don't really care right now :sad-maya: Since it's not really up to being posted on ff.net or anything, (or the fic topics on this site, and I haven't sorted them out yet) I'll just post it riiight here. [Haha sickfic. And they just need some decent scene over this anyway.]
Spoiler: Set just after 3-5. Fluff and sap warning. :edgy:
Maya silently observed the guests at Tres Bien, after some hours of celebrations following the State Vs Iris of Hazakurain case.

Nick appeared to be enjoying himself, animatedly conversing with Edgeworth, and Larry and Gumshoe (who were even more animated, apparently somewhat drunk.) Pearl had fallen asleep, neatly curled up in a corner with some kind of travel pillow provided by either Edgeworth or Franziska.

Maya hoped nobody had noticed her uncharacteristic lack of appetite for the food tonight, (but this was Tres Bien, so there were plenty of alternate excuses for not eating anything.) Spoiling her cheerful veneer with tears had never been a threat – it was easy to project a fake smile over the dull haze where she could not have cried even if she’d wanted to. She’d tried to delude herself it was just lingering physical distress, but - suddenly, she simply had to leave. She exited the restaurant unnoticed and unannounced.

Maya paced unseeingly in the direction of Gourd Lake Park. There was no longer possibility of conscious denial of that most hideous of emotions – grief.
It had caught her off-guard – she hadn’t even known her mother, didn’t know her when she stared her in the face.

The grief she’d felt over Mia, of course, too had been brutal, but the exact emotion had been obscured, wrapped up as it was in fear at her murder charges and situation and directly followed by fear for Phoenix at his own murder framing in helping her. Then she’d channelled Mia, and even though she hadn’t seen her, it made her feel the connection wasn’t lost, so her death was easier to deal with. Mia wasn’t totally gone.

But Maya knew better than to expect her mother to communicate from the afterlife. If she hadn’t wished to interact with Maya when they stared each other in the face, she certainly wouldn’t desire belated association from beyond the grave.

Maya circuited the lake, near-oblivious to the shimmering surface and muddy shore. Actually, just suddenly leaving Pearly and Nick like that wasn’t very responsible. But somehow she couldn’t bring herself to return or call to explain. Maybe someone would notice she left anyway, and understand.

Sure enough, eventually Nick called her phone.

“Um, Maya, did you go home?”

“I went for a walk. To Gourd Lake,” she explained.

“Are you okay?”

“Yeah.” It wasn’t as definite-sounding as she’d intended.

“D..do you want to be alone?” queried Phoenix, evidently arranging his words awkwardly. “Or do you want me to come by on my way home?”

“To the lake?”

“Yeah.”

“What about Pearly?”

A pause.

“Edgeworth has agreed to look after her.”

Great, Nick was probably worried about her. And yes, of course she wanted to see Nick. Oh well, it was Pearly who was the main person she had to stay ‘unaffected’ around. Besides, it was better he could ease his fears by ‘checking up’ on her, instead of imagining the worst.

“If you like..”

“I’ll see you there.”

***

It wasn’t hard for Phoenix to find Maya’s small figure slowly tracing the edge of the lake.

The dull look of grief in her eyes somehow made her look much older and tore at his heart.

Her attempt at a smile to match her greeting to him spectacularly failed.

Maya, you don’t have to fake it, Phoenix groaned internally. Maya must have noticed his incredulity, because she again fell into dull subduedness.

“I’m okay,” she reassured. “You can go back to the others, and Pearly..”

“It’s okay,” confirmed Phoenix, “Edgeworth is going to look after her. Unless you.. want me to leave…”

“No, No! I mean, not unless you want to.”

They meandered slowly, Maya’s eyes silently fixated to the ground. Suddenly she stopped dead. “I.. I think I should get home, if you don’t mind.” Her hand moved unthinkingly to finger her head. Phoenix internally panicked, recalling how Dahlia had thwacked her with that horrible-looking staff, and he couldn’t begin to comprehend what overextended channelling stints wrought on the body…

“I’ll walk you home,” Phoenix offered, affixing her with a cautious eye as they set off in the direction of Maya’s apartment.

Maya’s pace progressively slowed as they slowly progressed. “I’m fine!” she reassured to Phoenix’s concerns. “I’ll just need to lie down..”

Maya staggered directly to her bedroom and flopped lifelessly on the bed. Phoenix perched awkwardly in the doorway, unsure of what protocols he should adhere to with his assistant – he didn’t usually visit her own tiny apartment, let alone her bedroom. But her breathing was shallow and rapid, her body listless. She was clearly quite unwell.

“Do you need a doctor?” he queried, recalling how she’d only recently been released from hospital. [And so had he, he recalled, clutching his own aching head.]

“No,” murmured Maya, without opening her eyes. “Hot.”

Perhaps she has a fever, speculated Phoenix, stepping into the room and kneeling to her side. Even before his hand could contact her forehead he sensed the heat radiating out of it.

Now what did they do for fever? At the hospital, they’d given him some kind of drip…

“I’m getting you a glass of water,” he explained.

Upon his return with the water, Maya shifted herself to drink it, then sank back against the bed, energy spent. Now, pills to reduce fever… Phoenix trawled her bathroom cabinet, but there didn’t seem to be any.

“I’m just going out to get something for your fever,” Phoenix explained.

“Nick… right..” Maya muttered vacantly.

With a last searching backward glance, Phoenix hurried out.

Still, it was around 15 minutes before his successful return, pills in hand.

Things had clearly degenerated in the meantime.

Maya clung limply but determinedly to the edge of her bed, eyes sparked with petrified wildness. “Nn..noo!” she muttered.

“Maya?”

“W.. what’s going on?”

“Maya, it’s me. Here, take this,” directed Phoenix, offering the pill.

Maya merely buried herself against the bedhead.

Why is she trying to kill me?”

“Maya! It’s Nick!”

“Nick?”

“Eat this! Please! It’ll make you feel better!”

With a flash of lucidity, Maya gulped the pill, then again impaled herself against the bedhead, her eyes manic and unseeing.

“You’re only dreaming,” Phoenix attempted to explain, but Maya did not appear to notice him. Seized with concern at her evidently petrified figure, he laid his hand calmingly against her back.

Maya turned her head, evidently recognized him, and lurched toward him in frenzied relief.

“Nick! Nick, is that you? She’s trying to stab me! No! Run away! She might try and stab you too!”

Maya thrashed away from him and shook frenetically as she collapsed against the edge of the bed, exhausted.

“Maya.. Maya.. It’s over now..” Gently but firmly his hands moved to catch her and avert her sliding off the bed.

“But it’s real!” demanded Maya, her body a mass of tension. Then as if signalled by the touch of his hand again on her back, she ceased resistance and sank limply into him.

“She died, didn’t she,” gulped Maya, subdued, barely a whisper. “My mother died. Why.. why didn’t I know her when I saw her? And I saw… I saw…” She trailed off, incapacitated, her body again wracked with shivering. Phoenix gulped back nausea. First Mia, now her mother… He enfolded Maya tightly to him, uncaring that it was by far the most intimate altercation they had ever had, and stroked her quivering body till it finally stilled.

“You should get some rest,” he directed, noting the manic eyes and burning of fever had begun to leave her.

“Don’t leave me,” she pleaded.

“I won’t. Ever.” Phoenix gulped his conviction without conscious thought. Still with Maya in his arms, he slid down against the bed, guiding her head to the pillow.

“I’m sorry, Nick. I was supposed to try to be strong…”

“We’re partners,” corrected Phoenix. “I’m supposed to help you so you can be strong to everyone else..”

“We’re still partners? I thought Sis left..”

“Of course.”

“But I didn’t help you. I just made a problem again…"

“You helped me more than you’ll ever know,” muttered Phoenix.

“Huh?”

“Get some sleep. You’ll feel better after.” He wrapped his arms more firmly around her. Maya inclined her head closer toward him and obeyed in closing her eyes.

“And I just made that Iris go to jail,” she murmured a few minutes later without opening her eyes. “I’m sorry, Nick. I thought..” She ceased ability of continuation.

“Maya, I said we were partners. That’s your answer.. on that one…” Here it was Phoenix who couldn’t continue.

But no verbal response from Maya was necessary. Phoenix felt the body in his arms relax in entirety and drift into unhindered slumber.

I can never have enough of Nick taking care of Maya. Needless to say, still, your fanfic is well written as ever. Comfort fics FTW. :phoenix: This one was kinda different from the ones I have read up to now, that made it even better. :phoenix:

I got an album of pictures with P/M, although (not sure though) I thought Icer has lots of pics of P/M too.

Edit; whoops! double post, something went wrong... post reported already.
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Just found this little graph of Maya's expressions which made me chuckle. Check out the one on the bottom left.

http://zkl.biroudo.jp/gs_76_mayoi_hyouj ... uhtml.html
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Just found this little graph of Maya's expressions which made me chuckle. Check out the one on the bottom left.

http://zkl.biroudo.jp/gs_76_mayoi_hyouj ... uhtml.html



thats funny. any idea what it says though for us non reading kanji peaple :sadshoe:
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「これが、モノを殺すと言うことだ…!」

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Idiot_Lawyer wrote:
Toby Danger wrote:
Just found this little graph of Maya's expressions which made me chuckle. Check out the one on the bottom left.

http://zkl.biroudo.jp/gs_76_mayoi_hyouj ... uhtml.html



thats funny. any idea what it says though for us non reading kanji peaple :sadshoe:

Expressionless Face (Muhyoujou) | Smiling Face (Egao) | Angry Face (Ikari) | Sorrowful Face (Kanashimi)
Crying Face (Naku) | Shy/Embarrased Face (Tereru) | Impatient Face (Aseru) | Surprised Face (Odoroku)
Submissive Face (Uke) | Seductive Face (Seme) | Face in Front of the Person She Likes (Suki na XXX no Mae) | Face in Front of the Person She Hates (Kirai na XXX no Mae)
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thanks :redd:
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*skids into room* Guys, I'm Baaaaaaaaaaaack!!!
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Nobody missed me? :larry: I feel like a particular loser who goes by the name of Butz.
Anyhow, How's everything been going? :D
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Nobody missed me? :larry: I feel like a particular loser who goes by the name of Butz.

Of course we missed you. But you told us you'd be back in 3 weeks, so we knew you were away instead of wondering where you were :franny:
Hmm.. 3 weeks is up already then...

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This one was kinda different from the ones I have read up to now, that made it even better.


Aww, thanks for liking my fic, people... it was different? good, maybe it wasn't too cliche... I thought the plot direction was slightly forced, but uh, I guess I wanted to write the sickfic and it wasn't too implausible a situation for it...

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I got an album of pictures with P/M, although (not sure though) I thought Icer has lots of pics of P/M too.

I have them, but they're sitting here on my computer. I suppose I can make a huge zip file and upload them sometime.. I can't make my Photobucket album public because it has every random graphic I ever used for anything in it... and you can't have public albums inside a private one, not when I last checked anyway.
We should make a list of those fanart sites' links too. Though they disappear regularly :larry:
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Yeah, most of the pics in the first 30 pages are invalid. Which sucks. And I'm glad you're back, Hikari! :godot:
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Aww :D I feel loved! :will:
Some of those pictures on the Japanese sites are awesome. Would it be legal to put them on Photobucket and then link them here?
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HEY! Hikari is alive! Nice ta see ya!
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YAY. YAY.YAY.
I have...
(Wait for it, wait for it...)
118 pictures of MayaXNick on my computer.
YAY.
Well, I could've get like 300 pictures, but I chose the best pictures. Even though the other pictures were cute, Phoenix and Maya were not sketched very well... so I gave up on them.
I finished 3-4, and now I'm on 3-5. YAY.
Spoiler:
Egdeworth and Gumshoe <3

But DAMNNNNNNN. That case is too much for me.
Maya is frikin stuck in this temple, and Phoenix tried to save her, and risked his life. That was awesome.Maya TT

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Yeah, that scene in 3-5 is awesome. Ah, what Nick wouldn't do for Maya...

Oh. Crap. It's Friday, and I haven't even started my fic. XD. Oh well, I've been in worse situations.
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WE NEED POSTAGE
Of the Nick/Maya pictures! I wish we could see all of Icer's and BlackWiddow's T_T

Hi Chaple! :D I thought of a new idea for your fanfic section while away~
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WE NEED POSTAGE
Of the Nick/Maya pictures! I wish we could see all of Icer's and BlackWiddow's T_T

Fine, I'll make that ZIP file eventually...
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