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Not sure; that one sentence just sounded awkward... too wordy or something. (Please pardon the analyzing. I just got off the "write a short story" train for English and I'm still in editing mode.) Everything else was great though!
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Here's mine, though it's not nearly as good:
Case 1-3, Scene 1
(Maya is watching TV excitedly. Phoenix enters, looking somewhat tired.)
MAYA
Steel Samurai! Steel Samurai!
PHOENIX
Maya, what's going on?
TV (Steel Samurai)
This will be the last moon you ever see, Evil Magistrate!
MAYA
Get him, Steel Samurai!
TV (Evil Magistrate)
You are mistaken! This shall be your last fight, Steel Samurai!
MAYA (beating Phoenix with a broom)
Get him! Get him! Get him! Get him!
PHOENIX
Maya, stop it! Ow! What are you doing?!
TV
Who has fallen in the epic battle between the Steel Samurai and
the Evil Magistate?! Only the moon knows! Tune in next time on
"The Steel Samurai"!
MAYA (finally puts down broom)
Awwww, it's over! What a ripoff!
PHOENIX
What was that, anyway?
MAYA
Only the best TV show in the world! The Steel Samu-
Wait, don't tell me. You don't know about it?!
PHOENIX
No, of course not! It's a kids' show, right?
MAYA
For ten year old kids, I think?
PHOENIX
Exactly my point.
MAYA
Hey, don't treat me like a little kid! I'm seventeen, not seven!
PHOENIX (teasing)
Then why are you watching a kids' show?
MAYA
'Cause it's cool! You're so...old.
PHOENIX
I'm only 24! That's not old!
(They continue to argue. Suddenly, the TV starts up again.)
TV
We interrupt this program to bring you breaking news. Just this
morning, the actor Will Powers, star of the popular television show "The Steel Samurai: Warrior Of Neo Olde Tokyo" was arrested this morning on suspicion of murder.
(Phoenix and Maya are halted in their fighting, heads turned toward the TV.)
TV
The victim was Jack Hammer, who plays the villian on the show, the Evil Magistrate. He was impaled with the Samurai Spear, and was found still inside his costume.
(The TV keeps on going, saying things like where he was found, time of death, etc.)
MAYA
Oh my God! How could this happen?!
PHOENIX
Well, at least you know who won the battle, right?
MAYA
That's not funny, Phoenix. This is serious: a murder case!
PHOENIX
Yeah, you're right. We haven't had a good client in a while...
MAYA
Phoenix, I know what you're thinking.
TV
Right now Powers is being held in detention in the Los Angeles Police Department's Detention Center...
MAYA
Let's go! (rushes offstage)
PHOENIX
Maya, wait! (sighs, turns to audience) We haven't had a case in so long; we're getting kind of desperate. At least I can pay for the rent this month. (exit)
I dunno, I think it needs to be more poetic. :/
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I think after the whole thing's done we're going to need a couple of people to do some heavy editing, to even out the difference in style between the writers and get some consistency in the humor.
But it's cool to see stuff getting done! Way to go, writers.
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Ah, that totally slipped by me. :O I'll fix that ASAP.
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Gosh, you really need to calm down. Everything is in hand. And to prove it, here is my second scene, which has Edgey in it AND a place where his song will go :3
(Detention Centre)
Maya: You know, It seems we’ve all been here one time or another…
Nick: It comes with the territory Maya; we always live and work on the edge.
Maya: Well, we shouldn’t worry Edgeworth while he’s here. Put on your happy face. (He does, and Edgeworth appears in window)
Edgeworth: Oh, it’s you. I’m very busy Mr. Wright, If you’ll excuse me… (He leaves)
Nick: (Pause) Is my happy face really that frightening?
Maya: (Like Navi from Legend of Zelda) Hey! Listen!
Edgeworth: (Comes Back) So you’ve come to laugh at the falled Attorney. Don’t lie, you’ve got plenty of time to. Go on then, Laugh! LAUGH! (Sad) Why aren’t you laughing…
Maya: Should we be?
Nick: Nah, he’ll probably start crying…
Edgey: I didn’t want you to see me Wright, not like this.
Nick: Then tell me what you know so I can help!
Edgey: You…. YOU! HA! I’m really going to trust a wet behind the ears lawyer who hasn’t been more than three trials?
Maya: He won them all though!
Edgey: And how long will that last? My position is impossible; every single Defence Attorney I’ve approached has turned me down! They know they’re going to lose!
Nick: That’s crazy! Can’t you even tell me whether you did it or not!
Edgey: I don’t want your help or your Pity Wright. Stay out of this case. (He stomps off)
Maya: Do…do you think he did it?
Nick: Let’s go Maya… (Leaves)
Maya: Nick? Are you alright…. (Leaves)
(The Detention window opens up, and we can see Edgeworth sitting on a Chair)
[Song- ‘Don’t wait up for me’]
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"A slowed progress is better than a ceased one".
Yeah, maybe I could calm down... or I could rehearse, and the latter would benefit more.
I have a question, for this, will ALL characters from PW 1-3 be in it? Because if so, what about whenever a song is about to be played around Furio Tigre, he yells, then the song immediately stops. Because Furio singing sounds... pretty unusual.
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Gerkuman, dude, I <3 you - I've got THE song written for this right in my head. I just need more lyrics... You'll love it.
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So honestly, I don't remember if I needed to send you anything still Ethed. Did I have anything I needed to do for ya? I'd rather ask now, then be reminded of it 2 months after the fact.
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Hey! Glad to see you in the thread again. Remember that we're not building scenes from scratch either; they're closely built on the original game script (available on CR). Our biggest issue at the moment is getting all the scenes drafted - they can always be edited later on, we just need a large chunk of script at the moment. ^^ Should you be interested, Gerkuman and atomicscribble are my Script Supervisors (sounds hardcore cool doesn't it). Contact them and they'll assign you something if you're interested =D But either way I'm happy we can count on you for extra help, editing is really important as well.
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Ooo, I see. Very good, then. It would be more awesome brand-new and not filked, and all. :D
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So honestly, I don't remember if I needed to send you anything still Ethed. Did I have anything I needed to do for ya? I'd rather ask now, then be reminded of it 2 months after the fact.
Don't think I got answered, and I want to make sure I'm caught up with you and stuff.
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I thought I'd share those recordings with you guys as well to get your feedback.
Here's the samples in mp3 format :)
Introduction with quick scales
Voice Samples- With these, I picked 2 quick scripted sections where that character was a major part and went with it. Included are the script sections I selected in text format.
Me as ...
Phoenix Wright - Clip 1 - Clip 2 - Script
Miles Edgeworth - Clip 1 - Clip 2 - Script
Dick Gumshoe - Clip 1 - Clip 2 - Script
Larry Butz - Clip 1 - Clip 2 - Script
And here's two songs I sang ...
Song 1 - Song 2
Thanks for considering me, and let me know what you think :)
-Shinkinrui
P.S. When my sisters saw me messing with this and read the thread, they became interested, too, so they're probably going to offer to be a part of it, too.
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Me as Maya 1
Me as Maya 2
Me as April May
As a drooling fangirl, I would like to dedicate both of these songs to Edgeworth. I hope he appreciates how well-suited these songs are for alto voices. ^_~
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No comments? Fine, I'll comment :P
I thought I made a pretty good Gumshoe, and I sounded pretty good as Edgeworth, too.
ff3girl made a good April May, I think.
What was the update today? I looks in the news, but didn't see anything >.>
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Also, take out the "Well,..." before sentences. It will read smoother that way.
I hope you don't think I'm a jerk for such criticism, though.
I just want to be helpful!
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It's solid!
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So, it's has been decided that this is going to be a digital musical, correct? How're you guys that're heading this going to be splicing this all together? Obviously, there isn't going to be that much a problem with just simple line exchanges but when it comes to harmonizing and such I'm confused. Do you guys have awesome mixing software? Oh yeah, another question; Is there going to be a Chorus for backup and stuff? Um... Maybe the Jury ...?
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