What do you see behind the mask?
Gender: Female
Location: Germany
Rank: Ace Attorney
Joined: Thu Mar 13, 2008 11:09 pm
Posts: 2431
First of all, don't put yourself down so much. To progress in art, it's important to know your strengths and weaknesses - Don't call everything you do a fail, it's definitely not true and being too harsh to yourself just cloaks your own view!
I like your female Lang quite a bit, you did well on the face and the clothing! And the colors are neat, I'm worse when it comes to coloring.
If you want to hear some pointers though, I'd suggest being more bold about making Lang a female - There's more you can do when it comes to genderbenders. Play around with the hairstyle and try to find something that both looks feminine and unique, but also still like the original character; adjust the clothing with the question "What would a female version of him wear?"; and don't forget about little details like the pose, the face and the like. Why not add some makeup, or maybe earrings? Experiment and combine elements.
I'd love to see more of your art :)