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I'm new to spriting but I hope you guys will like them.
Don't be easy on me because of this, any critisism or compliments are welcome.
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A forward facing phoenix (my first edit ever). Kristoph Gavin body Phoenix's profile picture's eyes and mouth on young phoenix' head, Grossbergs tie and Phoenix's body for the jacket and tie's colours. The shirt's anoyingly bad :larry: .
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I've Improved the Phoenix with Turner Greys shirt, shirt collar and tie base.
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A serious Deigo. Not hard to make. Can't be bothered to say how to make it, just figure it out for yourself. :chinami: Image


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The shirt and tie look a bit off, but overall, good sprite.
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the tie looked good before I did the colouring for the sprite.
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Interesting sprite! I like it. Good job! :pearly:
Although I would fix the shirt and tie.
The tie doesn't seem to be straight and the shirt collar doesn't look right. Plus it's too high. Also, Pheonix's neck is way too long.

Other than that, it's a good sprite! Keep it up! :pearly:
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DJ-Sticky wrote:
I'm new to spriting but I hope you guys will like them.
Don't be easy on me because of this, any critisism or compliments are welcome.
Spoiler:
A forward facing phoenix (my first edit ever). Kristoph Gavin body Phoenix's profile picture's eyes and mouth on young phoenix' head, Grossbergs tie and Phoenix's body for the jacket and tie's colours. The shirt's anoyingly bad :larry: .
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Ok well apart from the shirt and tie being a bit messed up, Kristoph's suit is double breasted whereas Nick's... isn't. Nor does he have a waistcoat under it.

For the shirt collar you're probably best copying Grey's, or even Grossberg's if you shrunk it a little.

It's not bad for a first try though =D

Oh and nice Diego.
Imagesee how it withers before my flower of justiceImage

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Ok well apart from the shirt and tie being a bit messed up, Kristoph's suit is double breasted whereas Nick's... isn't. Nor does he have a waistcoat under it.

For the shirt collar you're probably best copying Grey's, or even Grossberg's if you shrunk it a little.

It's not bad for a first try though =D

Oh and nice Diego.

I did try grossberg's collar but didn't use it in the end because I couldn't shrink it properly
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On the Phoenix sprite, may I ask why you took all of his profile picture's facial features and plonked them onto Young Phoenix's head? You could have just used the profile picture itself, and clean around the parts that don't blend in with the neck and body...
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Click above... please?
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On the Phoenix sprite, may I ask why you took all of his profile picture's facial features and plonked them onto Young Phoenix's head? You could have just used the profile picture itself, and clean around the parts that don't blend in with the neck and body...

I know. At first I thought that his profile picture's head was too small but then I found out otherwise and couldn't be bothered to scrap young Phoenix's head.
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Hi, Sorry for not posting often and for this double post but here's another sprite


Spoiler: older pearl (Space saver)
Image do you like it? :oops:
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