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Okay...so I finally mustered up the courage and posted some sprites. I'm new at making sprites and animation...so I hope it's okay...:yuusaku:

REQUESTS ARE OPEN. I'll do my best on them. :pearly:
But I would like a visual reference for the sprite you want me to make. I suck with descriptions.:sadshoe: But if you are unable to give a visual reference, you can just type me a description and I'll do the best I can.
And please, nothing with Yoai or Yuri.

Spoiler: Canon Character Edits
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You have to admit, it's kinda cute-*brick'd*

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I have no clue if this was done before or not...but Max without his make-up. Does he look more manly now? :gant:

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Young Phoenix Without his mask/cold.
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Lana Skye without her bandage and scarf/muffler
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Franziska cosplaying as Alita/Casual clothes.
She doesn't look too happy about it...:nick-sweat:


Also, I wanted to let everyone know, even though my username is almost the same as my OC's name, my OC is NOT me and is not representing me in anyway. Just wanted to make sure everyone knew that. :gant:
Spoiler: OC: Mio Nakamura
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Spoiler: Mio's Bio:
Japanese Name: Mio Nakamura
English Name: Mio Cross

Age: (AA) 19, (JFA) 20, (T&T) 21, (AAI) 22, (AJ) 28.

Family: Mother (whereabouts unknown), Father (whereabouts unknown), Younger Sister: Maki Nakamura (Maki Cross) (deceased at age: 11)

Occupation: Detective

Height: 162 cm / 5'4''

Weight: 53kg / 117lb

History/Background info: When Mio was 8 years old, her parents abandoned her and her little sister, Maki. With no where to go, they ended up living at their aunt's house. Angry at what her parents did to her and her little sister, Mio gained an inner rage. She started getting into fights in the streets at the age of 12. At age 13, she was caught by the police for fighting. Because of this, her aunt found out about Mio's secret life. Enraged, Mio and Maki's aunt gave them money to rent an apartment home and kicked them out. Her aunt stated that she simply would not house a thug.
This only caused Mio's inner rage to grow.
Having to quit school and not being old enough to get a job, Mio would go out to the streets, fight thugs and gangsters and steal their money so she could support herself and Maki.
Because of this life Mio was living, she started to get a name for herself on the streets. Gang members and street thugs called her "The Black Iris". To match her nickname, Mio got a tattoo on her upper left arm of a black iris.
Maki often protested to Mio's thug life, but Mio ignored her, saying that she was doing it to support the both of them.

Mio ended up being a part of a case that Gumshoe and Edgeworth worked on when she was 15 (Edgeworth was 20). Because of them she stopped hating law enforcement and became a detective.

Personality: When she was younger, she had a rude and rough personality. She had a short temper, was anti-social and hated law enforcement. But deep down she was soft. Mio never let anyone see that side, though.
When she grew up and became a detective, she became more polite, kind, outgoing and a bit of a ditz. She shed off her younger self and only pulled out her rough side when it came to dealing with criminals.

Other: She has some romantic feelings for Miles Edgeworth, but she hides them.
Because of her lifestyle before she became a detective, she has amazing physical strength.
She tends to team up with Edgeworth and Gumshoe once in a while.


Spoiler: History (I may make a fangame, so this is under a spoiler and a lot of things are cut out, but you're still welcome to read. Because I'm still unsure about making a fangame.)
Two years later, when Mio turned 15, a tragedy occurred. One rainy night, when Mio was grocery shopping, Maki left to go find her older sister, thinking that she had left to go fight in the streets again.
Maki ended up going to Hina Takahashi/Hina Redbay's house. Hina was Mio's best friend and was a bit of a thug like Mio.

Maki asked Hina where Mio was. When Hina claimed she didn't know, Maki ran off to continue her search.
Realizing that it wasn't a good idea for Maki to be running around the city at night, and when it was raining no less, Hina called Mio and alerted her that Maki was running the streets alone.

Alarmed, Mio and Hina immediately went off to search for her, separately. After 20 minutes of searching the two girls ran into each other and continued the search together.
They split up to search a few alleyways; and that's when Mio stumbled upon a horrifying scene.

Maki, her little sister, was dead in the alleyway, beaten to death. Her killer was just leaving the scene. When Mio screamed Maki's name, the killer turned to look at Mio before running away.
Hina arrived after hearing Mio scream and quickly called the police.

Hina had to try and keep Mio from touching Maki as the police arrived. With the police was Dick Gumshoe, who was still a new detective at the time. Since Mio was refusing to say anything to the police, Hina told everything she knew to them.
After receiving the information from Hina, they asked Mio to come with them, for she was to be the witness of the case. (Since she saw the silhouette of the killer.)
Mio hated the police and anything to do with law enforcement, so she disobeyed the police and ran away from them. They was unable to catch her that night. Mio ended up wandering the streets the whole night, avoiding the police and trying to figure out who the killer was. She had recognized the man as a gangster she had seen before in one of her fights. But she didn't know who he was, nor did she really remember what he looked like.

With no suspect and the witness missing, the police and Gumshoe started their investigation of the crime scene immediately. Hina was brought to Criminal Affairs for questioning.
Shortly after the investigation started, Mile Edgeworth (who was still a new prosecutor; age 20) arrived. Gumshoe reported everything that had happened and Edgeworth decided that him and Gumshoe were going to seek out the witness, starting at her home, the next day.

The next morning, Mio returned to her apartment and changed clothes before leaving to go find her sister's murderer.
Right as she was leaving, she spotted Gumshoe and Edgeworth approaching the apartment complex. Recognizing Detective Gumshoe, she immediately fled. Unfortunately for her, Gumshoe spotted her and the two men chased after her.
Mio, knowing her way around the city, avoided the Detective and Prosecutor for almost half the day, almost getting caught twice. One of times she was almost caught, she ended up kicking Edgeworth in the face, knocking him down, before running off and calling back to the two, that she hated the police and that she would find her sister's murderer by herself.
Before noon, Gumshoe and Edgeworth finally caught her, put her in handcuffs and took her to Criminal Affairs to question her and her actions.

Mio ended up bursting into tears and yelled at the two, accusing them of not knowing what it was like to lose the only family you had left.
Edgeworth, remembering the loss of his own father said he understood. After a bit more convincing and talking, Mio finally agreed to help them and be their witness.
On a condition of course. That she would be allowed to help in the investigation. The two men weren't pleased with that term, but they agreed. She would be allowed to investigate only under their supervision.

After investigating for a couple of days, they finally found the killer and arrested him. During the investigations and after the killer was arrested, Mio had a change of heart about the police and law enforcement. She declared that she was going to stop being a thug and join law enforcement so she could, one day, help Edgeworth and Gumshoe. And also to lock all murderer's behind bars.
She moved away to follow her dream and returned four years later as a detective. Edgeworth and Gumshoe almost didn't recognize her at first, until they saw her Black Iris tattoo.

I may end up changing things in Mio's bio. I tend to do that when I'm building up a new character. :yuusaku:

Spoiler: Young Mio
She's 15 in these sprites. She dyed her hair she was 15. :yogi:
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She was a thug at 15. And I hope she looks like a 15 year old girl. :nick-sweat:
These are only a few sprites. I still have a lot more to make of her.



Not a lot, but I hope they're okay...OkIknowtheysuuuucccck! :ron-jazz:

Please, please, PLEASE ask before using any of the sprites. Thanks! :edgy:
And I'd love to know what you guys think. And/or if there's anything I need to improve on and such. :pearl-blush:
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Your sprites are great~! Only thing is for your OC there is a kind of white outline around her. But it's better than what I can do :larry2:

Btw, I love your avatar and sig ^^
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Wow, those actually looks pretty good. But I, too, must also point out the white outlines on that OC character you have there.

Other than that, she'd be purrrrrfect.
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Spoiler: OC: Mio Shugyoku
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I have a profile and a background for her, but I haven't finished writing it yet. Plus I'm not finished with her poses yet. Once I finish the profile and the other sprites of her, I'll post them. :yuusaku:


These are really good, I have been looking for something like this for a long while, could I possibly use these in my fangame, I'm in desperate need for a case 1 defendant, I'll give full credit of course.
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baaaaaaaaw
My oc has the same hairstile. (Except for lana's hair)
Anyway. good job.
About the white pixels, did you used brush?
That might be the problem.
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Cons
Maybe it's just me but the OC's arms look a bit...
too flabby for the body?

Please correct me if I'm wrong. :payne:
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Pros
I think there amazing! Max looks like a child without his makeup! :pearl-blush:
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Thanks everyone! :pearly:

DefenceLawyer wrote:
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Spoiler: OC: Mio Shugyoku
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I have a profile and a background for her, but I haven't finished writing it yet. Plus I'm not finished with her poses yet. Once I finish the profile and the other sprites of her, I'll post them. :yuusaku:


These are really good, I have been looking for something like this for a long while, could I possibly use these in my fangame, I'm in desperate need for a case 1 defendant, I'll give full credit of course.


Sure. I don't mind if you use her for your case. :D
Although you'll probably want to look through her profile (when its done) to make sure she's the kind of character you want. I think I may try to finish her profile today and post it.

Auraion wrote:
baaaaaaaaw
My oc has the same hairstile. (Except for lana's hair)
Anyway. good job.
About the white pixels, did you used brush?
That might be the problem.


Do they? I'm sorry, I didn't know! :beef:

Hmm...nope I didn't use brush... :yogi: But I think I may understand what happened now that you mention it. I should try and go fix it now.

adart wrote:
Cons
Maybe it's just me but the OC's arms look a bit...
too flabby for the body?

Please correct me if I'm wrong. :payne:
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I think there amazing! Max looks like a child without his makeup! :pearl-blush:


I don't know. The arms seemed find to me...but I could be wrong about that...I'm not sure... :yuusaku:

Ha, ha, now that you mention it, he does look younger! :gant:
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Update! :pearly:

Spoiler: New Canon Sprites!
These have probably been done before but:
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Young Phoenix Without his mask/cold.
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Lana Skye without her bandage and scarf/muffler

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Update!

(I feel bad for triple posting, but no one has posted since my last update... :beef:)

Spoiler: Franny cosplaying Alita/Casual
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Spoiler: Young Mio
She's 15 in these sprites. She also dyed her hair when she was 15. :yogi:
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She was a thug at 15. And I hope she looks like a 15 year old girl. :nick-sweat:
These are only a few sprites. I still have a lot more to make of her.

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Mio Shugyoku wrote:
Update! :pearly:

Spoiler: New Canon Sprites!
These have probably been done before but:
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Young Phoenix Without his mask/cold.
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Lana Skye without her bandage and scarf/muffler


Haha, Lana looks like she has one damn long neck.
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Yeah. I probably should fix that sometime...
But that seems to be what her neck looks like without the muffler/scarf... :yuusaku:
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Woah, those look really great! :gant:
I love your work on your OC and her tennage self looks pretty good too. (very teen-thug-ish)
I can't help but think that Max looks cool without his makeup. If his hair wasn't so bright and pink (and not so Amy Winehouse) I'd be all over him! :godot:

Keep up the great work!
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Mio Shugyoku wrote:
Yeah. I probably should fix that sometime...
But that seems to be what her neck looks like without the muffler/scarf... :yuusaku:


I had the same problem with Rhoda, I took her scarf off and she has this weird swan neck D=


By the way, I like your Mio sprites. I wish I could be arsed to do full animations XD
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I really like your canon edits and OC sprites! :tennis:
The animations flow really nicely. Her younger self is done really well also.
Got that teen rebellion thing going on. XD
Keep up the good work!

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Demeter Sabre wrote:
Woah, those look really great! :gant:
I love your work on your OC and her tennage self looks pretty good too. (very teen-thug-ish)
I can't help but think that Max looks cool without his makeup. If his hair wasn't so bright and pink (and not so Amy Winehouse) I'd be all over him! :godot:

Keep up the great work!


Thank you very much! :pearly:

I considered changing Max's hair color. Perhaps that should be my next subject. :think-pw:

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Yeah. I probably should fix that sometime...
But that seems to be what her neck looks like without the muffler/scarf... :yuusaku:


I had the same problem with Rhoda, I took her scarf off and she has this weird swan neck D=


By the way, I like your Mio sprites. I wish I could be arsed to do full animations XD


That seems to happen with a lot of things when you try to take out a scarf or turtleneck of off a character of any kind...:yogi: It's weird. :C

Thank you very much!
You should try animations someday. With your sprites, they'd look magnificent! :edgy:

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I really like your canon edits and OC sprites! :tennis:
The animations flow really nicely. Her younger self is done really well also.
Got that teen rebellion thing going on. XD
Keep up the good work!


Hehe, thank you very much! :pearly:

I was hoping young Mio would put off that vibe. ^_^
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Hehe. Well, she is adorable in her own right.
I like that tattoo on her arm too. Well done. :tennis:

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Ha, ha, thanks! :will:

The tattoo...I just randomly scribbled it on her arm without any idea of what it was going to come out like. :nick-sweat:
But when I added a second side on it so it would be a front view, it looked like an Iris. So I went with that. :gant:
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I like that!! Really creative! x3

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Hehe, thank you! ^_^
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My pleasure! ^^
Looking forward to more!

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A few new sprites.

Spoiler: Fixed Mio Courtroom Sprite
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She was missing her arm...things. :payne:


Spoiler: ATTACK OF THE MINIS!(AAI)
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Yeah, there's not so many. I'm still working on the rest.


And...

Spoiler: Young Mio's mugshot/profile shot
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Nothing too special.


I had a young Mio courtroom sprite, but I accidentally deleted it! :beef:
And it was really hard to make too! :headbang:
Oh well...I'll remake it soon.

I've also changed Mio's occupation in the Bio. I had to do a little more research on legal jobs. :gant:

EDIT:
Oh, and for those who are curious as to what Mio's tattoo completely looks like, here it is.
Spoiler: Mio's tattoo
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I seriously just doodled randomly and somehow, it came out looking like a black iris. So I went along with that. :gant:

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Oooh! Minis!! I like those a lot. 8D
And that tattoo looks pretty spiffy up close. Awesome how it turned out like that! x3
Can't wait for more. ♥
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Wow, these are really good sprites, I don't know why but I really like the Young Phoenix one.

Keep up the great work! :godot:
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Kaoru_Yuuka wrote:
Oooh! Minis!! I like those a lot. 8D
And that tattoo looks pretty spiffy up close. Awesome how it turned out like that! x3
Can't wait for more. ♥


Hehe, thank you very much!:pearly:
Yeah, I'm happy with how it turned out. Even if it was a random doodle.:gant:

(By the way, I love your new avatar. Your OC is so pretty! :pearly:)

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Wow, these are really good sprites, I don't know why but I really like the Young Phoenix one.

Keep up the great work! :godot:


Thank you very much! I'm so happy you like them! :will:
The Young Phoenix one was hard...:yogi: But fun! :jazzsneeze:
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Hmm...It appears I haven't commented here...so I suppose ill do so :eh?:

canon character edits:
nicely done though is it me or does max still have eye liner >_>;;;
ehh either way good work

Mio:
I really like the characters design and the top portion looks well made...but the bottom looks a bit flat...it needs a bit more shading below and the tattoo needs to be blended a bit...

good work on the animations though ( I really like the crying animation :godot: )

young mio:
abit rough in a few areas but not bad at all...though the eyes for the first two shown
(normal pose) seem off somehow...dont know how to put it but the last two there
(angry pose) seems to fit very nicely.

minis:
well done :D

anywho I think your doing a nice job so far keep up the the good work and the best luck to you if you decide to make a fangame. :godot:
(its hard...I know this because im working on one myself) :grey:
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UPDATE~! :gant-jazz:

I made two more mini's. One of them seemed pretty funny to me.
Spoiler: Minisminisminis...
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I took a swing at an Objection pose. Mostly for fun.

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I fell in love with this one once I finished it. It was a lot of fun to make. :gant:



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Hmm...It appears I haven't commented here...so I suppose ill do so :eh?:

canon character edits:
nicely done though is it me or does max still have eye liner >_>;;;
ehh either way good work

Mio:
I really like the characters design and the top portion looks well made...but the bottom looks a bit flat...it needs a bit more shading below and the tattoo needs to be blended a bit...

good work on the animations though ( I really like the crying animation :godot: )

young mio:
abit rough in a few areas but not bad at all...though the eyes for the first two shown
(normal pose) seem off somehow...dont know how to put it but the last two there
(angry pose) seems to fit very nicely.

minis:
well done :D

anywho I think your doing a nice job so far keep up the the good work and the best luck to you if you decide to make a fangame. :godot:
(its hard...I know this because im working on one myself) :grey:


I could never tell with Max. I knew he had eyeliner, but I couldn't really see it much and I was afraid of messing up so I left it alone. <_<;;
Perhaps I'll have to experiment and see what I can do with his eyeliner.

Thanks!
I think she looks flat mainly because of the lack of clothes wrinkles and, like you said, shading; which sadly, I'm really not that great at that. (Still learning) :yogi:
But it's something I'll work on. Thanks for letting me know! :phoenix:

Huh...I never noticed that...but I do now, now that you mention it...
Young Mio's eye does look off. I need to fix that.
I'm glad you like the angry pose. It took forever to get that one done. :gant:

Thank you very much! :will:
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UPDATE!:

It's nothing special though...I'm working on a couple of new sprites, but they're not finished yet. My update is mostly touch-ups and fixing mistakes.

Oh, and sorry I fell off the face of the earth for a long time. Lol :P
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UPDATE! :gant:

Again, it feels really weird to triple post...:payne:

This time I have sprites.
I did a couple just a minute ago.

Here's, Mad Mio!:

Spoiler: Mad Mio
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Ugh...those took forever...X_X
I hope you all like them!

EDIT: Also, some OC information has been changed.
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Very nice sprites overall. I especially like the MaxXRegina one. :will:

If I may though there's a few things I can suggest to make little Miss Mio look a little bit better.
Now, I'm no master of shading what-so-ever. But for the body I would suggest adding another, darker shade to the clothing. 2 shades (A light and a dark) is still fine however personally I just like 3 (Light, dark and darker). XD
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Now, that's just a few minute job to show what I meant. I'm sure you could do better. Also, my appologies for not asking for permission to edit your sprites. I hope I wasn't being rude.

The second thing is the tatoo, it looks a tad just stuck on. I'm not entirely sure how you'd fix it. But adding a color midway between the tatoo and skin colour might help.
Since I'm not entirely happy with how I put that last part I meant this. The color for the tat is R4, G2, B2 and (Just looking at one of the 3 colors the tatoo sits on) the skin colour next to it is R-246, G-180, B-139. Now the mid-point between those 2 colours is R-125, G-91, B-71(Rounding from 70.5). Then take this mid point colour and add it around the tatoo part to make them blend a bit more.

Wall of text end. I hope it helps. ^_^
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May I make a request?

Could you do Randi or Lenali, or both, I have a visual reference for them:

Randi:
http://i789.photobucket.com/albums/yy172/mycatbizzy/randilenali-2.jpg

Lenali:
http://i789.photobucket.com/albums/yy172/mycatbizzy/randilenali-3-1.jpg

I love your sprites by the way, adorable design, nice shading, and the expressions really stand out.
Make more when you can, I'd love to see them!
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She looks a bit like Adrian Andrews
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Arvron wrote:
Very nice sprites overall. I especially like the MaxXRegina one. :will:

If I may though there's a few things I can suggest to make little Miss Mio look a little bit better.
Now, I'm no master of shading what-so-ever. But for the body I would suggest adding another, darker shade to the clothing. 2 shades (A light and a dark) is still fine however personally I just like 3 (Light, dark and darker). XD
Quick Example: Image Image
Now, that's just a few minute job to show what I meant. I'm sure you could do better. Also, my appologies for not asking for permission to edit your sprites. I hope I wasn't being rude.

The second thing is the tatoo, it looks a tad just stuck on. I'm not entirely sure how you'd fix it. But adding a color midway between the tatoo and skin colour might help.
Since I'm not entirely happy with how I put that last part I meant this. The color for the tat is R4, G2, B2 and (Just looking at one of the 3 colors the tatoo sits on) the skin colour next to it is R-246, G-180, B-139. Now the mid-point between those 2 colours is R-125, G-91, B-71(Rounding from 70.5). Then take this mid point colour and add it around the tatoo part to make them blend a bit more.

Wall of text end. I hope it helps. ^_^


Thanks! :edgy:

Hmm...you know I'll have to try that. She does look better with a darker shade.
And don't worry, I don't mind. You didn't steal her or claim my sprites as your own, so it's okay. :gant:
I work better with visual references anyways. :)

As for the tattoo...I'm afraid I don't quite understand. :payne:
You seem to be very educated with colors...I'm really not as good with those... :nick-sweat:

I'll see if I can try some experiments though... :yogi:

Thank you very much for the advice! :pearly:

Bakatotesta wrote:
May I make a request?

Could you do Randi or Lenali, or both, I have a visual reference for them:

Randi:
http://i789.photobucket.com/albums/yy172/mycatbizzy/randilenali-2.jpg

Lenali:
http://i789.photobucket.com/albums/yy172/mycatbizzy/randilenali-3-1.jpg

I love your sprites by the way, adorable design, nice shading, and the expressions really stand out.
Make more when you can, I'd love to see them!


Sure! I'll try to have the request done as soon as possible. Thanks for sending me a reference. :pearly:

Hehe, thank you very much. :edgy: I'm flattered.

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She looks a bit like Adrian Andrews


Yeah, she kind of does huh...but not TOO much like her, I hope. :nick-sweat: I don't want Mio looking, at least, too much like other characters.
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UPDATE! :gant-jazz:

...Okay, it's only KIND OF an update... :sadshoe:

I followed some of Arvron's advice and added a little more shading detail to Mio. So I updated and cleaned up all of her sprites. Hopefully they look better.
I'll have to look into the younger Mio sprites later though. :payne:
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Wow. Your sprites are definitely some of the best I've seen, Not that I could probably do any better than anyone here. I love your OC aswell nice job. I especially liked the sprite where your OC objects to Edgeworth's face.
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Aw, thank you very much Gyakutenkenji! :edgy:
I'm flattered that you like my sprites and OC! :pearly:

Lol, yeah. I really loved Mio objecting to Edgeworth's face, nearly hitting him in the process. It was a lot of fun to make! :pearly:
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These look wonderful :pearly: You made your OC look great.
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Eh-hehe. Thank you very much! I'm glad you like her. :pearl-blush:
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You're awesome! Andd you do requests! *glomps*

I has a request! You think you can do my character, Emily? (see my sig) she has dark brown hair, brown eyes (although they turn blue) and wears a red t-shirt underneath a.... jacket... thing. It's not a jacket, but... XD She also has bandages on her hands and wears dark red glasses. Her hair is pulled up partially into a ponytail (similar to Ema's, but it's longer)

If you need a better picture, you can click here.http://mattsykun.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2te74f It's not all that better, but... you can get a better idea of the sweater/jacket/trenchcoat/thing

I only would like three poses: one of her objecting (prosecutor side, since she's a prosecutor), A front sprite of her happy, and a front sprite of her depressed. You can do whatever you like with the front sprites.

I can't sprite worth a damn. I should take lessons from you and your awesomeness.

Thanks for your consideration...? XD :will:
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Very good start! better as me too :acro: and you do requests! =D can I somthing request? :yuusaku:
can you make this charackter
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like seen this
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in court and out court sprite?(without the glasses :grey: ) well one sprite I need In court and outside the court, Ill can then draw more of these.... I hope you can do it :pearl: if not... then its not bad^^
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