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ShiroForever wrote:
Thanks Miju! :edgey: I use gimp :payne: hahaha, is there any shortcuts for gimp? :yogi:

I haven't actually used gimp before, but if you have an option called "Decrease colour depth", use it to reduce colours automatically, then just clean up the outline of the sprite.
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Mijumaru wrote:
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Thanks Miju! :edgey: I use gimp :payne: hahaha, is there any shortcuts for gimp? :yogi:

I haven't actually used gimp before, but if you have an option called "Decrease colour depth", use it to reduce colours automatically, then just clean up the outline of the sprite.


Oh yes! There's something to reduce the amount of colours, what do you mean by cleaning up the outline?
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Thanks Miju! :edgey: I use gimp :payne: hahaha, is there any shortcuts for gimp? :yogi:

I haven't actually used gimp before, but if you have an option called "Decrease colour depth", use it to reduce colours automatically, then just clean up the outline of the sprite.


Oh yes! There's something to reduce the amount of colours, what do you mean by cleaning up the outline?

Literally pixel by pixel redraw the outline using appropriate colours. There should be visible outline around each sprite with no anti-aliasing around it (Some inside the sprite is fine).

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How Gumshoe's got a clear 1px width outline of the same colour around his coat, then one around his hair etc.
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Mijumaru wrote:
Literally pixel by pixel redraw the outline using appropriate colours. There should be visible outline around each sprite with no anti-aliasing around it (Some inside the sprite is fine).

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How Gumshoe's got a clear 1px width outline of the same colour around his coat, then one around his hair etc.

Alright! I got it! Thanks for the tip, really appreciate it :butzthumbs:

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My first try on an OC! Her name is Clemmy :edgey: she was meant to be a psychologist, but it ended up looking more like a detective in my opinion, so her occupation shall be decided next time :sadshoe:
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That look realy good! I love the (1980's was it?) L.A Noire look to her. It fits well.
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I agree with Backburner, it looks great, but the tie looks flat and there's almost no shading for the hair. If you fix that it will look awesome ! :phoenix:
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I think it's looking really good! The first thing I saw was you made it more pixelated. It instantly looks more AA styled! I also love the design and colour choices!
Her shoulders are a little uneven though (Her left shoulder's a bit higher)
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I agree with Backburner, it looks great, but the tie looks flat and there's almost no shading for the hair. If you fix that it will look awesome ! :phoenix:

Got it! I will make the changes when I can! I'm not too sure on where to start for shading the hair though... Any tips silver? :oops:
Thanks for the criticism! :acro:
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I think it's looking really good! The first thing I saw was you made it more pixelated. It instantly looks more AA styled! I also love the design and colour choices!
Her shoulders are a little uneven though (Her left shoulder's a bit higher)

Yes! That's because I followed what you said :godot: thanks Miju!
Alright! I will correct the shoulders asap :phoenix:
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I agree with Backburner, it looks great, but the tie looks flat and there's almost no shading for the hair. If you fix that it will look awesome ! :phoenix:

Got it! I will make the changes when I can! I'm not too sure on where to start for shading the hair though... Any tips silver? :oops:
Thanks for the criticism! :acro:
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I think it's looking really good! The first thing I saw was you made it more pixelated. It instantly looks more AA styled! I also love the design and colour choices!
Her shoulders are a little uneven though (Her left shoulder's a bit higher)

Yes! That's because I followed what you said :godot: thanks Miju!
Alright! I will correct the shoulders asap :phoenix:

For a start, your character's hat would cast a shadow across the top of the hair. Try looking at photos of real hair and seeing where/how the lights and darks appear to get a better idea of how it'll work. Good luck.
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For a start, your character's hat would cast a shadow across the top of the hair. Try looking at photos of real hair and seeing where/how the lights and darks appear to get a better idea of how it'll work. Good luck.

Thanks for the tip! I'll work on it soon! :phoenix: appreciate it!
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I still can't not spend a minute staring at your avatar, Sleuth.

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I had another go with Sissel's sprite! This is the result
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Not sure if it's any better... but i had fun trying to make him sassy xD

Nice. I like it. Maybe it could be more tilted but he looks like a bench sprite and if he stood more tilted his hair would hit the gallery XD

With Clemmy... I'm wondering, do you flip the canvas when you're drawing?
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The sprites look good. There's definitely a lot of potential here. I'd suggest maybe working on the shading a bit and the shape of some of the custom faces, but overall they look nice.
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I still can't not spend a minute staring at your avatar, Sleuth.

ShiroForever wrote:
I had another go with Sissel's sprite! This is the result
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Not sure if it's any better... but i had fun trying to make him sassy xD

Nice. I like it. Maybe it could be more tilted but he looks like a bench sprite and if he stood more tilted his hair would hit the gallery XD

With Clemmy... I'm wondering, do you flip the canvas when you're drawing?

Hahaha! Hair hitting the gallery... maybe that could be his wall/desk bang animation :hotti:
Ah... no i don't :oops: :oops: :oops:

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The sprites look good. There's definitely a lot of potential here. I'd suggest maybe working on the shading a bit and the shape of some of the custom faces, but overall they look nice.

Thanks Ropfa! I'll try my best to get better :edgey:


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Corrected Clemmy's shoulders a little, and added talking and blinking animations
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That's looking really good! With the tie, I think it needs a little shape.
Under the knot, there's a tear-shaped indent in the fabric, and is more pinched in at that spot. But if that's your design choice, then ignore this :bellboy:
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If I'm not very much in error, I don't believe clip-on ties have that indentation, so if that's what you're going for, it should be fine.
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Mijumaru wrote:
That's looking really good! With the tie, I think it needs a little shape.
Under the knot, there's a tear-shaped indent in the fabric, and is more pinched in at that spot. But if that's your design choice, then ignore this :bellboy:
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I personally think that tie is a good improvement.
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I think the tie looks better! It has a nicer shape to it. :basil:
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Update:
Updated the tie for the Clemmy's current animations
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Also added a new pose for Clemmy! xD
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That pose is so cute!
Looking really good! :basil:
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I dont know weather its just me because i have watched too many anime's but the hand pose looks evil. like she is waving goodbye to someone's demise. Thats just me though. Looks great!
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Really like the hand pose, good work :godot:
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ShiroForever wrote:
Ah... no i don't :oops: :oops: :oops:

Looks like you kind of guessed what I was thinking, lol XD
Yeah, flipping and rotating is a good habit, it would have been easier to see if things like shoulders and stuff are uneven. Still if you look at the one with the corrected shoulders, try find where the spine is and see if you can see anything. Don't forget people have a skeleton. :)

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I dont know weather its just me because i have watched too many anime's but the hand pose looks evil. like she is waving goodbye to someone's demise. Thats just me though. Looks great!

It's the shadow of the hat. Her head is tilted up more but the shadow got lower instead, so it's like a glare XD
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Ah... no i don't :oops: :oops: :oops:

Looks like you kind of guessed what I was thinking, lol XD
Yeah, flipping and rotating is a good habit, it would have been easier to see if things like shoulders and stuff are uneven. Still if you look at the one with the corrected shoulders, try find where the spine is and see if you can see anything. Don't forget people have a skeleton. :)

Ok! I shall do that from now on!' :gant: hmm... I'm not sure if I see anything :payne:

Update:
Made a sprite of Susato Mikotoba from DGS!(she looks so prettyyy :bellboy: )
It's not really finished... But I'll leave it as such for now. (Army loves killing my weekends)
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This is so awesome o_o
I think the face could benefit from a little more contrast, but still, it's so clean, great job !
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That's very nice. I'll definitely be lurking here to see what else you turn out.
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So does that mean you are going to create an AA fancase later? :yogi:
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The lighting on the 3D models removes some of the facial features drawn, so I guess either leaving it as is, or adding your own is both fine. (I left them with my Ryu sprites).
That Susato sprite looks really good! Really nice work with the details!
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Thanks people! Tracing is pretty fun :edgey:
I shall do more when I actually have a proper and full weekend(which I hope is soon :larry: )
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So does that mean you are going to create an AA fancase later? :yogi:

Eh? Nope! I just create these for fun! I can't write :payne:

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The lighting on the 3D models removes some of the facial features drawn, so I guess either leaving it as is, or adding your own is both fine. (I left them with my Ryu sprites).
That Susato sprite looks really good! Really nice work with the details!

Yes! I was a little concerned about the lack of details... But I guess I'll leave it as it. :phoenix:
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Seeing you have created an OC has made me think that you'll also create an AA Fancase like all the other people with spriting talents (For example, mercurialSK, Ropfa, TheDoctor, etc, etc...) :maya:

Speaking of OC's, the girl you made... Clemmy- She kinda looks like an explorer sometimes in my vision. :damon:

I need to ask Mij if he's also going to create an AA Fancase later... :pearl:
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Seeing you have created an OC has made me think that you'll also create an AA Fancase like all the other people with spriting talents (For example, mercurialSK, Ropfa, TheDoctor, etc, etc...) :maya:

Speaking of OC's, the girl you made... Clemmy- She kinda looks like an explorer sometimes in my vision. :damon:

I need to ask Mij if he's also going to create an AA Fancase later... :pearl:

Susato is an official character from the new "Great Ace Attorney".

And I am making a fancase! Haven't updated it in years, but most of its sprites are posted in my thread.
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Susato is an official character from the new "Great Ace Attorney".


Mij, I don't think I asked about the new (Perky?) Assistant Ryn will have on DGS But thanks anyways... :klavier:

I was talking about a new sprite he made. One spriter here claimed that one of her poses are quite rude. :yogi:
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Update:
Added a new sprite of Susato from DGS (OMG SHES SO CUTE :edgey: :edgey: :edgey: )
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Had to make this after seeing the new trailer, it's so... beautiful :acro:
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Wow! That is very well done!
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Awesome! I love Susato's design! She's my favourite of the characters so far! (Probably because Maya's my favourite character of all and she resembles her a bit)
Really nice detailing with this too! Such clean lines!
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Looks good but you are forgetting the MAJOR PART of the sprite - Talking. Without that one, there is a very low chance anyone will use your sprite.

Sorry if I became insensitive or rude. I wanted to give you some tips. :basil:
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Looks good but you are forgetting the MAJOR PART of the sprite - Talking. Without that one, there is a very low chance anyone will use your sprite.

Sorry if I became insensitive or rude. I wanted to give you some tips. :basil:

I think it's more fanart rather than a constructive sprite set. I'm like that too. I'll just make character poses I like because I like 'em :shoe: (I probably shouldn't be speaking on behalf of others, sorry if I'm wrong :sadshoe: )
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Looks good but you are forgetting the MAJOR PART of the sprite - Talking. Without that one, there is a very low chance anyone will use your sprite.

Sorry if I became insensitive or rude. I wanted to give you some tips. :basil:

I think it's more fanart rather than a constructive sprite set. I'm like that too. I'll just make character poses I like because I like 'em :shoe: (I probably shouldn't be speaking on behalf of others, sorry if I'm wrong :sadshoe: )


Agreed. They sorta look like fanarts without those blinking animations. I wonder when will he do the talking sprites of them as well... :yogi:
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Looks good but you are forgetting the MAJOR PART of the sprite - Talking. Without that one, there is a very low chance anyone will use your sprite.

Sorry if I became insensitive or rude. I wanted to give you some tips. :basil:

I think it's more fanart rather than a constructive sprite set. I'm like that too. I'll just make character poses I like because I like 'em :shoe: (I probably shouldn't be speaking on behalf of others, sorry if I'm wrong :sadshoe: )

You're right! xD I made the Susato's sprite because i think she looks really cute cheering Ryu on :edgey: I'm not making it for anyone to use, I'm not making a fangame either... So i don't really see a need to include animations. (And also because it's really tedious to do :payne: )

I only do animation when I have a lot of time to burn, and when i have no new sprite in mind to make.

Speaking of having a lot of time to burn...
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Ryu's objection pose! (with blinking animation lol)
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I think I'm getting a little addicted to tracing :oops:
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That looks awesome! Great detailing and shading work too!
(Don't worry, I enjoy my tracing too XD :basil: )
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