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Is it weird to say I feel honoured having some of my fics sporked here? I'd like to look back and think I've improved as a writer though.
Hoping May's Justice is a vast improvement from Law Plus Chaos
Thought I recognized your username.
Just about anything would be an improvement over Law Plus Chaos, and I mean that in the nicest way possible, because that fic was and still is an endless source of mirth for me.
I almost wrote a sequel for Law Plus Chaos.
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You don't write much, do you?
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And yeah,one look at my signature proves how much I do supposedly write. (no that's not self promotion)
Why am I arguing about this again?
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And yeah,one look at my signature proves how much I do supposedly write. (no that's not self promotion)
Why am I arguing about this again?
I understood it as "I was about to write it, but then decided against."
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And yeah,one look at my signature proves how much I do supposedly write. (no that's not self promotion)
Why am I arguing about this again?
I understood it as "I was about to write it, but then decided against."
After writing Apollo was doomed, this is what happened.
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By the way, the fic I want to spork is this fic:
http://archiveofourown.org/works/4836635
It's not badly written, but I can't believe someone sick enough to write Phoenix and Trucy having sex
Avatars are for less anxious people.
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By the way, the fic I want to spork is this fic:
http://archiveofourown.org/works/4836635
It's not badly written, but I can't believe someone sick enough to write Phoenix and Trucy having sex
I'd say you should give it a shot anyway! Just get someone else to look it over before posting.
Note, though: unless things have changed while I was gone, explicit fics aren't actually allowed on this forum. We've definitely sporked fics that have explicit scenes in them before, but the sex scenes themselves were cut out and replaced with summaries, or otherwise censored. So as bad as porny oneshots/PWPs usually are, they're not good fodder for this thread.
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By the way, one of that fic reviewer said nothing wrong with incest as long as they don't have kids.
My head hurts....
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I'm not at all surprised (or even bothered at this point, I'm so desensitized
) that father/daughter incest fanfiction exists, but why Ace Attorney? What was it about the series that made that author say, "I want to write a fanfic where a dude has sex with his adopted child"?
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Maybe because fans see them as father and daughter?
But I can see their potential as a couple. Athena is legal too, however. I have found Phoenix x Athena fic, the title is : Turnabout Safe to Heaven, the writer is A.Joria and it's very, very, well written.
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I also read in previous page someone asked why I like sickfics. I'm not a doctor and not a nurse, but I work as tutor for children with terminal illness for 2 years. And most of my fics are inspired by the children I taught.
And, actually Phoenix's illness I wrote on my fics isn't lung cancer, it's a weird disease in Indonesia, but it's hard to translate it to English. So I made it as lung cancer.
As for Phoenix/Trucy fic that Sheva mention, maybe the author want to try something different. Still, it doesn't feel right. Phoenix is Trucy's father figure, however. And it's disturbing..
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Yeah, it was me. I was angry and extremely in bad mood when wrote that fic. Now when I look back at it again, i was kinda like....
"What the hell am I thinking for writing this?!"
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Well, at first I thought sporking someone fics are flames the author, just like I see in AO3 where the reviewer told the author to commit suicide, stop writing, burn yourself in hell, etc, but when I read it, I think it was hilarious, and including some constructive critics too. I like it. My favorite part is when Maya and Phoenix complain about ship-bait. And when Edgeworth feels so upset of how he become overcharged doctor.
The nickname 'Crya' and 'Stubborn Boy' also made me laughs my ass off like an insane person
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Well, at first I thought sporking someone fics are flames the author, just like I see in AO3 where the reviewer told the author to commit suicide, stop writing, burn yourself in hell, etc, but when I read it, I think it was hilarious, and including some constructive critics too. I like it. My favorite part is when Maya and Phoenix complain about ship-bait. And when Edgeworth feels so upset of how he become overcharged doctor.
The nickname 'Crya' and 'Stubborn Boy' also made me laughs my ass off like an insane person
Is that a good thing?
You could've seen that from MILES away.
I sure have a LOTTA guts for doing this.
Wow, I almost FEYNTED from all these!
Man, That detective sure is a FOOL to be so BRIGHT!
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Sporkers:
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"Seven more... we're in for a treat."Miles Edgeworth
"Am I even in this story?!"Simon Blackquill
"You mean to tell me that I kidnapped Justice-dono?"Apollo Justice
"Why do I have to be the main character...?"[We open on the sporking theater. Phoenix, Edgeworth, Apollo, and Blackquill are already seated.]
Edgeworth: ...and apparently, Professor Layton and Luke Triton live at 'basequill'.
Blackquill: This story seems worse than the food in the clink.
Edgeworth: It is.
[The sporking begins.]
[The lights come back on.]
Blackquill: I sincerely hope that I am not forced to endure this torturous nonsense again.
Edgeworth: We all wish that.
Apollo: Knowing the Management, they'll probably drag this Sebastian guy here next.
Phoenix: I just hope they don't bring Ahlbi here... the poor kid's seen enough for one lifetime.
Apollo: Stop jinxing it.
[End sporking.]
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While writing this sporking, I learned the importance of having one of the various assistants among the sporkers. I was already most of the way through the sporking when I realized that a lot of jokes would've been easier to make with Athena or Maya around, but I didn't want to have to rewrite most of it. It's amazing how much having somebody who can throw silly nonsense out at the drop of a hat helps when writing comedy.
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I've felt worse.
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) that father/daughter incest fanfiction exists, but why Ace Attorney? What was it about the series that made that author say, "I want to write a fanfic where a dude has sex with his adopted child"?Every fandom has these kinds of fics. I bet I won't even have to leave C-R to find one.
... I was hoping I wouldn't find one.
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) that father/daughter incest fanfiction exists, but why Ace Attorney? What was it about the series that made that author say, "I want to write a fanfic where a dude has sex with his adopted child"?Every fandom has these kinds of fics. I bet I won't even have to leave C-R to find one.
... I was hoping I wouldn't find one.
I know. I just wish I knew why.
Don't we have a rule against not sporking fics written by forum members?
Eh, it's a silly rule anyway, considering how many people we have in this thread who have had their fics sporked. Me included.
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The characters are OOC and the story makes no sense. The ending would've also ended differently if it happened in the AA universe.
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You...
YOU...
SOUTHERN COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...
Welp, that was an over-the-top reaction, but still. Why does it exist? They are 3 GAMES apart? We need to spork this!
Edit: since it's a little short, how about a double feature? We need to torture, not to relieve. ( I am finally realizing who I truly am...a messed up person)
You could've seen that from MILES away.
I sure have a LOTTA guts for doing this.
Wow, I almost FEYNTED from all these!
Man, That detective sure is a FOOL to be so BRIGHT!
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You're too slow!
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Eh, its probably nothing.
You could've seen that from MILES away.
I sure have a LOTTA guts for doing this.
Wow, I almost FEYNTED from all these!
Man, That detective sure is a FOOL to be so BRIGHT!
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Little baby sadists.
We need another Breathing Is A Necessity up in here. No, wait, another Stiff.
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Also,I feel that the sporkers are us when initially reading the story and the Management is us when we're writing the sporking. It's kinda meta actually
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Yeah, pretty much.
On a slightly different but still related note, while I haven't yet been able to re-read the thread (been busy) and a new sporking from me is still somewhat far off, I've decided to not do that creepy child molester Gant fic I've been making jokes about for over two years. I have a reason for ruling it out - it's in the author's note for the fic, actually - but AO3 is down right now so I'll go back and edit it into this post/share it with the class if someone else responds when it goes back online.
Just a heads up.
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Make it even creepier!
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I don't really think I can spork it after an introduction like that - especially since, as I recall, it's actually very well-written. Its core problem is that it has absolutely no place in the Ace Attorney universe, since as dark as the games sometimes get it's never anything even remotely like this... but given the author's rationale here, I think I can forgive the fic of that.
Which leaves me with no actual reason to spork it outside of tormenting the sporkers, but there's plenty of other fics to do that with. I'll pick a different fic for my eventual comeback.
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