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So are we about done establishing the Kitaki family?
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I think so... So here's what we got.

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"Big Wins"
Real Name: Winfred Kitaki
AKA: Big Wins, the boss, old man
Relatives: Kitaki family, father of Wocky
Height: Tall
Weight: Heavy
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Black with grey streaks
Affiliations: Kitaki family syndicate, rival of "Million-Dollar Man"
Abilities: VERY strong and controls a very dedicated group of thugs. Can also bake up an arsenal of deadly pies and has an eyebrow raise that can strike fear even into the bravest men.
Weapons: Guns, massive eyebrows, projectile pies, but usually uses his thugs unless the situation affects him personally.
Notes: His costume would be the same, but take away the apron and the headband. He'd be in the Villian category.

He is a Tweener.
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“PLUM”
Real Name: Plum Kitaki
A.K.A.: Little Plum
Relatives: Winfred Kitaki, Husband; Wocky Kitaki, Son
Height: Short
Weight: Heavy
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Black
Abilities: Ability to INTIMIDATE THE HECK out of people who annoy her.
Weapons: An array of knives, daggers and swords, but her favorite is her broom katana.
Notes: Her normal outfit is alright, not much needs to be changed

She is an Associate.

I'll attempt to do the final write-up for Wocky.

"Da G-Man"
Real Name: Wocky Kitaki
AKA: That Fox Boy, punk, kid, poser
Relatives: Kitaki family
Height: Tall
Weight: Average
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Brown/Yellow/Red
Affiliations: Kitaki family syndicate
Abilities: Very strong and his proficiency in gangsta talk is useful for confusing enemies. Also very good with weaponry. Mad skillz, fo sho.
Weapons: An assortment of smuggled guns and shivs. In desperate situations he can use his "bling" as projectiles.
Notes: He is practicaly the only one to see through Wing's disguise, despite him being the most oblivious person around.

He'd be a Tweener.

I'll get to making their wiki pages. ^_^
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Big Wins -> Villainous Tweener :3
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Gerkuman wrote:
Big Wins -> Villainous Tweener :3

WHY OF COURSE.

Ohhh man, I'm starting to think of storylines! ^_^ I'll get back to you guys on that.

Edit: I want to name the Kitaki Clan by their Japanese name "Kitakitsune" because it sounds cooler. :3
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This is a coloured scale where we can put all the characters on! (Yes, including associates, we put em in purple circles :3) However, only I or Ceres can alter this image, athough we can all discuss it and vote on it if neccisary. :3
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You mean a scale of how good and how evil? XD
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I'm having a problem with the Payne's Bio there.

"Then one day, suddenly, Citro returned quite a few pounds heavier. Payne finally met his idol and found out that Citro had vanished because he was ignored by the public. They had all turned to THE PAYNE and credited him with Citro's accomplishments. Jealous and disheartened, Citro retreated and drowned his worries with food. After a while, however, he convinced himself to fight crime once again."

Don't like it, make's Citro seem like sensitive fool.
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Edit it how you like then, Ceres.
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Can arch enemies be added to the hero and tweener stubs?
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Yeah, was getting around to that somewhere in the next trillion years.
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Yes, contrary to popular belief Gerkuman's is NOT a greasy English teenager but a Allknowing Trillion old mistical entity who spends it's current days behind the computer and eating Nacho's all day.
Then again, He could be the first, will we ever know? Probably not...
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THANK YOU GERK~

*editing ensues*
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I'll have you know I'm a greasy English YOUNG ADULT. :D I am 18's, and I cans legally drink here... not that I do.
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TEENager. Blah.
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Adult. :D

Voting Age = Adult over here :3
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"teen·ag·er
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A person between the ages of 13 and 19; an adolescent."

Ohohohohohohohohohoh....
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He's a teenaged young adult. There. :keiko:
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Shutup. XD

Ohohohohohohohohohoh....
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*shrugs* I don't see you being able to imbibe alcoholic drinks Ceres :D
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I'm from Belgium moron (BEER capital ), been drinking since i was 14. XD
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How come we always end up in a conversation about drinking ages? XD

Anyway, What should Redd's new supername be? Executive Bling?

I want to make his wiki. :redd:
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King Bling? Or is that too cheesy?
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Wocky Kitaki wrote:
King Bling? Or is that too cheesy?

uh..... yeah. XD

And calling him a king is just not corporate enough. :P
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King Bling is the Derogatary nickname Mia uses for him in her files :3
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Gerkuman wrote:
King Bling is the Derogatary nickname Mia uses for him in her files :3

Hurr hurr yes. :3

BUT WHAT SHOULD BE HIS NEW OFFICIAL NAME?
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Moar fanart!

Spoiler: Channeled Comet
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Could I make a suggestion? I don't if I can, it's just it's always the same people posting here, I'm not sure if can post here.

Spoiler:
I know the Kitakis are the mafia, but rather see them as Heroes than Tweeners, Winfred and Little Plum could actually be big villais before, but Wocky could almost die in a fight, so Winfred and Little Plum would decide to change sides to protect their family, Winfred could be a member of the Grey-Haired guild, using what he knows about the villains, to help the heroes and Little Plum could be a Hero, their powers could the ones you guys already created, but maybe to add Winfred's rivalry with the Million-Dollar Man ,Little Plum and Moneybags could be rivals as well, and Little Plum could have this "sharp eye" power(in the game she mentions that she can see darkness in people), that could identify Moneybags, anywhere, making her ability to blend with the crowd usless against Little Plum.

Please read my fic, trust me you will like it, if you read until the latest chapter. Forgive my bad grammar, I'm brazilian, so it may hard to read in the beginning, but it get better in later chapters.
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Of course you can post. :3 It's a collaborative project, everyone can contribute ideas ^_^

However, I don't think that the Kitaki's need to reform. We'd lose our balance between the heroes, villains and tweeners, and we need dark characters. Thanks for the idea though and The rest of the guys here might disagree with my thoughts on this.
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Thanks, I know the story needs more evil characters, but the Kitakis seem like nices guys to me, while at it can I make another suggestion?

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It's about Vera Mente, I can think of a good story about her, when she was just a baby, she was was kidnapped by Atroquine, who discovered her ability to draw things into life, and then use her powers to create a personal army for him, she would be forced to live in a isolated studio for 19 years, she never leaved the studio, ever, until Laywerman, during a "secret mission", discovers her, and orders Lawboy and Magician to save her, after that she slowly discovers the outside world, she could be nervous around most people, even the heroes, but she feels more comfortable around Lawboy and Magician, but Riff terrifies her, due his similarity to Atroquine, her clothes would be very old straps and have lots of patches on it, symbolizing her isolation she could also have the ability of drawing the "truth", it means that when she draws someone she draws their true self and their feelings, for example, when she draws Two-face, she draws the real Two-face or when she draws Shatter, she draws Seraphie by her side.

Please read my fic, trust me you will like it, if you read until the latest chapter. Forgive my bad grammar, I'm brazilian, so it may hard to read in the beginning, but it get better in later chapters.
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Well, switching sides is nearly the namesake of a "Tweener", and Wocky and Winfred are Tweeners. We made Plum an Associate because she has no real superpowers. I like the idea of Plum and Madame Moneybags being rivals, though. :D

Spoiler: Storyline ideas
I'm thinking that Wocky is provoked into attacking The Million Dollar Man, and is captured. Some of the heroes are already planning to take down Bruto and Big Wins lends them his temporary support, partly for vengeance against Bruto and partly to rescue Wocky.

Unlike "The Family", Kitakitsune has a sense of morality. They will stay neutral and will occasionally aid the heroes if the situation affects them. However, becuase they are an organization of organized crime, they can never truly become "heroes".


I like the Vera Mente idea, however we've been developing her more lately and have changed her powers because it was deemed to be too close to Super Makoto's powers. So that might have to be changed slightly...

Edit: Did you guys like my new artz? :P
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New arts are loved, FF~. The accuracy of the boobs is amazing :'D

Speaking of which, I want to update the Concept Art gallery, because it needs updating. Also, on the topic of the storylines, I like the idea of Kitakitsune vs. The Million Dollar Man simply because it sounds awesome as hell. :3 (Annnnnnnd calling the Kitakis the Kitakitsunes is cool too.)

ALSO, how ARE we going to fit Vera into this? Fey's idea is pretty good, and FF is right about having to tweak it, but we haven't thought of a way to really integrate her into a story line yet. So far, Fey's is the only idea we have, so this obviously calls for MORE DISCUSSION. :ka-whip:
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Mezzo, about the concept art go ahead, but try to name the files in the same style as the previous uploaded ones and don't forget to do both characters AND the concept art page as well.
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HOLY CRAP

I just went to the Wiki and I can't access it. I mean, the page opens up, but it's taking an ETERNITY to get anyother page besides the jmain page to open up.
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MezzoForte wrote:
HOLY CRAP

I just went to the Wiki and I can't access it. I mean, the page opens up, but it's taking an ETERNITY to get anyother page besides the jmain page to open up.

That happens to me sometimes. :/ Try it again in another window and it should be okay.
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MezzoForte wrote:
New arts are loved, FF~. The accuracy of the boobs is amazing :'D

Speaking of which, I want to update the Concept Art gallery, because it needs updating. Also, on the topic of the storylines, I like the idea of Kitakitsune vs. The Million Dollar Man simply because it sounds awesome as hell. :3 (Annnnnnnd calling the Kitakis the Kitakitsunes is cool too.)

ALSO, how ARE we going to fit Vera into this? Fey's idea is pretty good, and FF is right about having to tweak it, but we haven't thought of a way to really integrate her into a story line yet. So far, Fey's is the only idea we have, so this obviously calls for MORE DISCUSSION. :ka-whip:


Since we are talking about Vera, while not create something for Drew as well? In the game, he mentions that he is good landscapes, so maybe he could have have a special empty screen, that when he painted on it, it would change the scenery that the was in the screen.
Oh, and he would be a Tweener.
Please read my fic, trust me you will like it, if you read until the latest chapter. Forgive my bad grammar, I'm brazilian, so it may hard to read in the beginning, but it get better in later chapters.
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Enough with the superpowered side characters already! XD
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I don't think Drew should be a super but that's a pretty cool idea. :)

Also, on the Organization stub can there be a section for members as well as leaders?
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Maybe he doesn't need to be super, but maybe Vera could inherit her paitbrush from him?
Please read my fic, trust me you will like it, if you read until the latest chapter. Forgive my bad grammar, I'm brazilian, so it may hard to read in the beginning, but it get better in later chapters.
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