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Re: Turnabout Blackboard (AU, NickxMaya, longfic)Topic%20Title
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This is great so far. So, Maya's 'sheltered' upbringing means she needs 'extra tuition' from Phoenix, right? :nick-heart:

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Oh crap, I just got pwned.
Icer! How can you think like that??

Oh, but I didn't explicitly imply anything. Any double meanings have to occur in the readers' own head. 'Sheltered' is just a quote from the fic itself, and how do we know it's not just some innocent extra tuition. 'Mr Wright, we didn't get taught any Biology with all the the spirit channelling theory classes so I'm behind" Etc.
(*has been a Biology tutor, in the totally innocent sense.*)

I understand IM-style conversations on your fic are annoying, but if you get more replies, people think your fic is better since it looks like you got a million adoring reviews.
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Re: Turnabout Blackboard (AU, NickxMaya, longfic)Topic%20Title

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icer wrote:
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This is great so far. So, Maya's 'sheltered' upbringing means she needs 'extra tuition' from Phoenix, right? :nick-heart:

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Oh crap, I just got pwned.
Icer! How can you think like that??

Oh, but I didn't explicitly imply anything. Any double meanings have to occur in the readers' own head. 'Sheltered' is just a quote from the fic itself, and how do we know it's not just some innocent extra tuition. 'Mr Wright, we didn't get taught any Biology with all the the spirit channelling theory classes so I'm behind" Etc.
(*has been a Biology tutor, in the totally innocent sense.*)

I understand IM-style conversations on your fic are annoying, but if you get more replies, people think your fic is better since it looks like you got a million adoring reviews.


Oh come on icer, I think that Phoenix Love emoticon makes it pretty straightforward on what it is you meant.

I wonder what Maya will act like when she realizes Nick is her teacher. Should be pretty amusing.
Re: Turnabout Blackboard (AU, NickxMaya, longfic) - updated 8/23Topic%20Title

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CR was being stupid so it took me forever to edit the first post, and now it's acting like I edited it 7 times when it was really like 3 or 4. DX ugh whatever.

anyways, here's the next chapter as promised! sorry things are moving so slowly, haha. I just don't want to rush it. I'm sure they'll pick up soon. also, I'm not a copycat, I swear--I know in Shiki's fic Nick is a science teacher also, but I did it based on the lab coat in the fanart, which I'm sure is what Shiki was thinking also. So I didn't intentionally steal her idea, promise~

@icer - I see your point but I personally I always get disappointed when I click on a topic with lots of replies and find that it's mostly chat :( plus then it gets my own hopes up when I see my topic with lots of replies and then I find that none of them are comments on the fic DX so, um, try to hold back for my sake, alright, guys and gals? 8D
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Yeah, I had that same problem once.
Lol, leave it to Maya to ask her teacher out on a date. And just when I thought I couldn't possibly love this fic any more. "Avid reader can't wait to see what happens next," end quote!
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I flash her my best encouraging teacher smile (I practiced in the mirror for an hour last night)

Phoenix trying to be a teacher is adorable.
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Re: Turnabout Blackboard (AU, NickxMaya, longfic) - updated 8/23Topic%20Title
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He needs to yell 'Objection!' at some point though.

It's still really cute though.
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Re: Turnabout Blackboard (AU, NickxMaya, longfic) - updated 8/23Topic%20Title
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gah! awesome! i get how the sudden nickname fits now! :D
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justis76 wrote:
Yeah, I had that same problem once.
Lol, leave it to Maya to ask her teacher out on a date. And just when I thought I couldn't possibly love this fic any more. "Avid reader can't wait to see what happens next," end quote!


wahh, thanks ;_; you make me feel all special and stuff~ <3 really happy you like it so far :D

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I flash her my best encouraging teacher smile (I practiced in the mirror for an hour last night)

Phoenix trying to be a teacher is adorable.


lol right? he was kind of a dork when he first became a lawyer, so I figure that he'd still the same if he was a teacher instead X3;

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He needs to yell 'Objection!' at some point though.

It's still really cute though.


haha, I was thinking the same thing, actually XD; I'll see if I can fit it in without being awkward. thanks ^_^

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gah! awesome! i get how the sudden nickname fits now! :D


aww, thank you :keiko: phew, that's a relief ^^;
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Re: Turnabout Blackboard (AU, NickxMaya, longfic) - updated 8/23Topic%20Title
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[...] So I didn't intentionally steal her idea, promise~ [...]
'Cept for the fact that the Shiki you all know and love just so happens to be a male.



On second thought, lemme just check inside my pants and get back to ya...






...Yup, male alright. =p
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Re: Turnabout Blackboard (AU, NickxMaya, longfic) - updated 8/23Topic%20Title

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oh dang, sorry about that XD;; I just assumed...agh! I'm really sorry. >_>
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This is a pretty interesting AU. I think I like Phoenix as a teacher!
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Re: Turnabout Blackboard (AU, NickxMaya, longfic) - updated 8/23Topic%20Title
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MOAR.
..That's not very helpful, is it...
I love Teacher!Nick and Student!Maya. Hope they don't get gossipped about too much.
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Re: Turnabout Blackboard (AU, NickxMaya, longfic) - updated 8/23Topic%20Title

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I do hope they get gossiped about too much. Because it'd be cute to see Maya's reaction to all the gossip.
Re: Puppy Love [NickxMaya] prompt 4 out of 30 - evidence (8/19)Topic%20Title
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Aaahw the Valentine's one is very cute. ^^
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Re: Married Life (AU oneshots, NickxMaya, fluff) updated 8/13Topic%20Title

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:sadshoe: Hmm...it's almost been 2 weeks...
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agh, sorry dudes but school is kicking my butt so I couldn't get the sentences finished in time. :( I've only got four left, so it should be soon. sorryyy.
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I know, I know, I'm sorry. I'll write something for P/M day. I just need someone to put the brakes on school for me. In fact, if you could make it so I never have to do pre cal homework, I will write P/M fluff every day for the rest of my life. :)
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AWWWWWWWWWWW XD

So cute!!

So cute I might die from the fluff!

Seriously, I love reading stuff where they are happy and cute <3

Well done and I can't wait for more!!
Re: Puppy Love [NickxMaya] prompt 4 out of 30 - evidence (8/19)Topic%20Title
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These are really great!! I can't wait to read more!
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LOL How could you not realise Shiki is a boy? He's such a perve!!

This is great so far by the way. Phoenix is such a dork its heartbreaking that I can't marry him right now.

More soon please!
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Teh ILPWXD wants more.
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Re: The Phoenix and the Flower [NickxIris] #31-#40 posted! 8/18Topic%20Title
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I just want to say that I would hurt a mosquito given the chance.

OK, I love this so much. We totally need to feature this for P/I day. Of course...*ahem* with your permission, Tozz.
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It's Wednesday already?! S-Seriously?

How did that happen? >_>

anyways, next prompt is up guys. thanks for all the nice comments as always~

I feel like this oneshot is more appropriate for P/M day than my next planned update, lol. because this one's all serious and the next one is like the complete opposite. un-serious and humorous (at least to me, haha). the prompt will be "fantasy." ;D
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That was such a good chapter. Especially the last paragraph, it just made it seem so real.
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Man, this was really good. Very sweet. The thought never occured to me that it'd be Mia's funeral. Certainly different than the other one-shots, it was pretty awesome.
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Your writing made me cry! :larry: :larry: :larry:
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wow ! despite the decressed fluffiness i tink this is my favourit prompt thing so far!! and yes, it was very,very sad. i feel like crying! :beef: :acro:
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Aww, that was quite touching, actually. I love all these.
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Everyone who adores all of these prompts, say aye!
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Can't believe I haven't read your stuff until now. Your stories are excellent, youreally know how to capture the dynamic between Phoenix and Maya. The way you potray their conversations with each other is spot on.
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Ahh, thanks everybody who said that the latest update was touching! :edgy: I'm happy to hear it, even if I made you cry. XD;

And also, thank you, Toby Danger! I'm always glad to have a new reader :keiko:

Btw guys, for those of you that are curious--with the new two topic rule, I've decided to separate my fics into "one shots" and "multichapter fics." This fic will be put in the multichapter fic topic. Even though it's not a continuous story, it's going to eventually have 30 parts, so it's not really a oneshot anymore. :P
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Thanks to the putting together thing I've now read your school fanfic, and I luuurve it. :edgy: I really want to read more! And could you give me a link of the fanart you based it on?
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woo, awesome! I was afraid the gigantic cluttered first post would be a turnoff to people but I'm glad you found another fic by me and liked it :D

and yeah, I should probably add the link in my first post. >_> anyways, it's here.
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Awewww...so cute...it no longer deserves to be called fluff...
It should be called: SUPER FLUFF!
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Anybody like BUMPer cars???

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lol, thanks for the bump :D

I promise I'll try to write something tonight! because I want to be able to update Puppy Love instead of waiting til the 5th just so I'll have something for P/M day. :P
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sorry for the double post. Puppy Love has been updated :)
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That was awesome! The last bit really made the "Maybe you should quit being a spirit medium" line really hit the spot nicely. Wow, you made that line so much better!
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"Awesome" is the only word I have to describe this chapter. Oh, and "you rock" works pretty well too. Nick's description of Maya's outfit was perfect in a perverted kind of way (which I loved), and even though it was short, it's definitely one of my favourites.
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