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(Zinle sprite de hand, not me xD)
Please, don't hit me ^^U
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but there are some basic mistakes.
1. The suit is too dark. There is a difference between black black and light gray black.
2. The lines [especially at the part where his hair meets his head] need cleaning, so it won't be so blocky.
3. Since you used Paynes 2nd darkest color to make the suits color, it ended up "deleting" some of his suits lines. Zoom in, and you see that many pixels have 'disappeared' since they're same color as the light part of the suit.
4. Which leads to; The lines that need to be dark are far too light.
Since I'm not that great explaining what I mean, I guess the old "here's an example" -have to do the trick this time.
Compare your work on the left to my edit on the right and try to learn from it.
There's no better method than examining it yourself, realizing the mistakes yourself and then working on with those yourself.
And FYI; I'm not trying to be "The Rookie [Spriter] Killer" here.
Just always thought that...Well let me put it this way;
If there's critic to give, might as well say it straight out, no?
Just wanted to mention so you don't think me as a complete @-hole.
...BTW...What program ya use?
Keep posting more.
Only then ya'll learn, right?
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Eugh.
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Them Paynes sure have some good hair, eh?
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Them Paynes sure have some good hair, eh?
They have the funkiest of hair
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1; The side of his head...Why the color difference? Use the shade on his chin (f.e) for the rest of the side of the head too, not darker.
2.; ...That's...That nose is bit long.
Ta-ta
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Name: Luke Atyew
Is a member of borginian mafia, an assasin, and... ok, i think that's all. I'll think in his story later x3
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Another random sprite.
There are a lot of mistakes, I know. Like that line on the arm, is blue. Well, is the first version.
And a Byrne Faraday edit
I can see a mistake, but i don't know how to say in english, so... let's talk spannish!
Don't read if you don't want to do it.
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what!! it has 3 hand!!
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Well, I didn't see that mistake, I'm so sorry. Here is the 2nd version of that one:
Added this one:
I know is a sh**, don't be so cruel when you talk of this sprite, please xD
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I know is a sh**, don't be so cruel when you talk of this sprite, please xD
do not insult the work of your own hands is not good. You have to be confident in the work that you do... that the key to make your work success..
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That's pretty common here as I've seen...People don't really feel confident with their works
and sometimes they do it just to make people come in and see their works.
...It was cute ate first but...After like 10.000 of that same kinda thing it gets...tiresome...
Meh, dunno....
The sprite itself is pretty good, but edit the lines on his coat...the lef side (his)
...it...well it should bend bit different.
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I Love it! I know it has many mistakes, but i like it so much
But maybe is because It's mine.And a Badger's duel!
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...Badger's duel!
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Another forward byrne sprite, better than the other one:
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I Wanted to do a remake of one of my firsts works (Yes, Linston one) And an extra pose of linston.
Hair-shading is dificult D: But it's better than the old one ;D
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