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I was just now wondering what Makoto did in her spare time. Maybe she works as part of a community service group, the kind that provides activities for high-school kids? After graduating, Makoto decided to lead little art projects for her alma mater, or somesuch. (This could give some social context for her meeting Minuki, and possibly Pearl or Urami).
On that note, I don't think Pearl or Urami actually attend school. Pearl's entire life revolves around being the Pink Princess, so when she's out of the suit she's usually training (hey, there's that weird girl again, doing laps around the campus...). Urami, being an immortal witch, concerns herself only with expanding her knowledge of the dark arts, though she might look for... volunteers on the campus (hey, there's that weird girl again, hanging around the campus...)
On that note, I don't think Pearl or Urami actually attend school. Pearl's entire life revolves around being the Pink Princess, so when she's out of the suit she's usually training (hey, there's that weird girl again, doing laps around the campus...). Urami, being an immortal witch, concerns herself only with expanding her knowledge of the dark arts, though she might look for... volunteers on the campus (hey, there's that weird girl again, hanging around the campus...)
I posted this up earlier in the thread, though I guess it wasn't so clear as to what Makoto's educational status was.
Just so everyone can see it again. XP
Also, Silver, you know why I totally object to you being Ema ;)
No EmaxMiles plx ;( I can put some one-sided Ema->Miles in there for you and some Ema+Miles when she's trying to find the cure for the furz...But let's not put too many pairings in this, kay? I don't want everyone to start arguing over "this pairing, no that pairing, no this pairing," as opposed to say, TakitaxMakoto which seems to be generally accepted.
URBSYURBS, THAT ART IS KYOOT~<3
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Besides, who better to pair the angsty werewolf man with than the unassuming science geek who helps him with his problems? That nervous, tenuous bond that comes from a professional relationship, not only as their daytime roles as forensic investigator and prosecutor, working side-by-side on court cases, but also controlling his accursed werewolf form through the power of science (and maybe love?). Besides, what with him having to visit her house just about every night to drop off Pesu (and get his anti-silver serums and what-have-you) there's bound to be rumors.
"Miles, honey, could you tell these people the truth?"
"They're rumors, nothing more."
"Yeah... whatever we do is none of your beeswax."
(Do I detect a contradiction?)
"No, you don't."
"Why is everyone psychic but meee?"I think a very important detail to lay down here is that we're not really doing this to earn brownie points from the community or the fandom. We're just here to have our own wacky brand of fun. Super Makoto is part magical girl, part comic books, part crack, and PURE EPIC. It's a twisted, upside-down universe where you have interdimensional lesbians, megalomaniacal mastermind kittens, coffee barons, Spartans, transgender babes, and a hobo. Oh, and don't forget NINJA PIRATES. It's safe to say we've thrown a better part of sensibility out the window.
So before we start any more arguments, I think we should all just let our inhibitions go a tad and let this universe evolve as it will, rather than as it should.
As a parting positive note before the art dump, I'd like to say that whoever makes the 300th REPLY in this topic gets a SPECIAL picture from me featuring our favorite Spartan, Apollo Justice! You may make a request as to what/who else you want in it.
Spoiler: EPIC BETRAYAL: Kirihito vs Urami
Spoiler: Sadistress strikes again!
Spoiler: Fun with Naked Henshin Sequences
Spoiler: Takita Bugs Makoto and Gets It
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...And make her draw yaoi?
I thought I could trust you people to behave while I was gone, dammit!
In other news, Urby is at the other house for the weekend, boo. That means one laptop for seven people. ...Not good for long Paintchat discussions.
OH YEAH AND YESTERDAY I GOT POKEMON DIAMOND HOOOOOOAAAAARGH IT'S SO AWESOME I CAN'T BEGIN TO DESCRIBE HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS THING AND AAAAAAARRRRRRGGGH
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Urby wrote:
I thought I could trust you people to behave while I was gone, dammit!
With all due respect, Boss, it was purely my doing.
And yes, morning flight was a no-go. Trying for the next one after lunch.
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Things I missed out the first time:
Re: 300-post prize
There are two ways to gauge post count on a thread: Scrolling down to the bottom and seeing how many posts it has, or looking at it through the category and seeing how many replies it has (since it doesn't count the initial post, it's one less)
So which one is it?
...And if my project gets overrun by pairingwars I will have to bust a cap in someone's nose, okay
If everything goes the way I think it's going and we use the roleplay to establish a few things we haven't already, we'll just have to see where it goes, m'say?Here's hoping whoever plays Takita is a charmer, hurr hurr
I hope you (finally) get a flight, man :<
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hm.
Boss I don't think many pairingwars will start~ I mean the basic pairings have been approved and all....any stipulations from outsiders and the like best be kept to themselves.
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Though my stormy brain has considered that compromise of Sil's, but like I said we'll see what happens in the RP. You see, the voicing of any opinion can fuel a train of thought. Always ask What if...?
On that note, I call Miles.
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Shannon: Kiri. Sadistress did that of her own will, didn't she?
Kirihito: [Awkward mumbling/dialogue I haven't thought of yet]
Shannon: Please thank her for me...
*sudden switch* Sadi: No problem, hun~ *boob crush GACK hug*
And no, that isn't disregarding the "negative impulse" rule. The thought process is a bit like this: "Thanks for accepting all of me BUT YOU DON'T JUST BREAK MY HEART AND THEN COME BACK UNSCATHED!" You see, Sadistress is Kirihito's id or something like that, and blah blahblahblahblah *brick'd*
*ahem* Sorry, I get wordy when I'm inspired. Any questions? [/buzzkill/readingintoittoomuch/rulebend]
If I'm being a story/idea/whatever hog, please tell me and I'll shut up.
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Lacy things, the wife is missin'
Didn't ask, her permission
I'm wearin' her clothes
Her silk pantyhose
Walkin' 'round in women's underwear
In the store, there's a teddy
Little straps, like spaghetti
It holds me so tight
Like handcuffs at night
Walkin' 'round in women's underwear
In the office there's a guy named Melvin,
He pretends that I am Murphy Brown
He'll say, "Are you ready?" I'll say, "Whoa Man!"
"Let's wait until our wives are out of town!"
Later on, if you wanna
We can dress, like Madonna
Put on some eyeshade
And join the parade
Walkin' 'round in women's underwear
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But as I said Sami, I'm handing Kiri/Sadi over to you~ so you can make the cohesive decisions regarding his/her fate and whatnot.
What I'm interested to see is what form Kiri will take should this be all said and done in the end...or if both personalities will kinda fuse together somehow.
and WTF xD MSOB. It would have to uhm....be pretty big size, no?
LIKE GRANNY PANTIES ROFL.
With that said, I'm voting for *poofsexynojutsu*
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I DO NOT NEED THAT KIND OF TRAUMA WITH MY TOAST! DD: And besides, it's cleaner for when Sadi blips in and out, like in the scene I just spat out.
By the way, Yuu, are you handling Rocktra? Just double-double-checking.
Spoiler: My Super Makoto spoilers/ideavomit LAWLZ
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And it's perfectly fine to plot the ending of a story. That is, after all, the first part of starting a journey: knowing the destination.
Though with that in mind, I wonder where Super Makoto herself will be heading?
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Here's the info on Lyss
Lyss is a secret agent that works for the Government. She's been asked to investigate the occurrences that revolve around Super Makoto. Whenever she finds her however, she seems to get stuck in the situation herself. She is skilled in the art in kick-boxing. Rumors say she has a kick so fierce that can break through stone. Lyss has a one-track mind when it comes to the things she's interested in. Once she sets her mind on something, that's the only thing she'll be focusing on until she's satisfied. Such as capturing a criminal, investigating mysterious situations, etc. Her past and how she began to work for the Government is a mystery. However she is loyal and looks up to Hobocop. She believes what she does as an agent for the Govt is "righteous" in his honor. Now why could that be?
Also, Lyss has an addiction to frappuccinos and any other type of sugary iced coffee. Usually calm, cool and laid back, she acts like a crazed maniac when it comes to fighting, having her mind set on something, or when she's craving her sugary caffeinated drink.
I'll try to work more on her character later on.
In the meantime, what about Cody? Is he gonna be just a normal character as Pearl's classmate, or does he have some super special awesome secret samurai moves as well? What if Cody and Pearl were both made as Will's successors, but didn't know each other because Will trained them both seperately? Pearl and Cody can have some rivaly thing going on like "Powers' made me his successor! Not you!"
And as for Hobocop, I had this idea that he was a cyborg because his name sounded like "Robocop" XD Good idea or bad idea?
"Go go Hobo Copter!"
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MoronSonOfBoron wrote:
I dunno, I just figured Kiri to be a BIG CHESTED guy.
And it's perfectly fine to plot the ending of a story. That is, after all, the first part of starting a journey: knowing the destination.
Though with that in mind, I wonder where Super Makoto herself will be heading?
And it's perfectly fine to plot the ending of a story. That is, after all, the first part of starting a journey: knowing the destination.
Though with that in mind, I wonder where Super Makoto herself will be heading?
Actually, you're kind of right about Kiri... if you look at him, he's kinda got a broad chest, especially in his in-game sprites.
And sure, knowing the destination is all fine and dandy, but thinking of the 20 YEARS LATER sequel is probably going too far X_X
And as for Makoto... I think we need to get the people who know the most about her main storyline and finish that off before finding an epilogue for her. Maybe she becomes the new Princess of the Universe (Manfred IS the main villian and is therefore dethroned, right) and there's some dealie with that?
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HOWEVER--I have a very simple reason for not wanting EmaxMiles. And it's not even that I don't LIKE the pairing. I mean, I don't like loli!EmaxMiles, but I'm interested in the idea of Older!EmaxMiles, which is what this is, so I'm not trying to be all "I NO LIKE PAIRING KTHNX D<"
But here's the thing--I'd VERY much like to play the part of Ema in this RP.
And, well...I don't do romance. I CAN'T do romance. I wouldn't know the first thing about it. So if we insisted upon EmaxMiles, then either it'd end up fake and contrived and make me feel awkward and probably make everyone else feel awkward too since I'd do it so BADLY...Or I wouldn't get to do the character I want to do. Which, you know, wouldn't be the end of the world. It's all just for fun. If we REALLY want this pairing then I'll just give the role of Ema to someone else. My intention is not to be selfish, I'm just saying that's my opinion on the issue. I'm sure we can come up with some sort of compromise--for instance, I'd be willing to have the two be close in the situation that MSOB described and I'd be willing to, as Ema, fangirl over Miles and angst over furries and blah.
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And before I forget, here's some names just for official reference or whatnot:
Shannon's Super Name: Crimson Monarch (Urami gave her this title, but she refers to Shannon by a much less grandiose epithet: Red Moth.)
ShanKiri Pairing Name: Of Angels and Demons (The funny thing is, you can't tell who's supposed to be the angel or the demon. XP It comes from a little monologue I wrote from Kiri's point of view. I'd post it here, but it's a bit... steamy... and probably irrelevant to boot. Some of you have already read it, though.)
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Spoiler: Rocktra in the end
Aaaaand like Sami, I've kinda planned a few things..
Spoiler: Magical Chemistry
I also thought of something during the Eccentrist/Kiddy Fiddler/MA fight.
Spoiler: Kiddy Fiddler and HOTARU
Spoiler: Yuu's artillery
AND I'LL SHUSH NOW.
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Perhaps we were all a tad harsh, but we don't want the real detractors cropping up any time soon. They know we got fire and vitriol, eh? I had an inkling that you'd taken the time to think this out when you first opposed it in Paintchat, but I never pounced on that particular notion until now. Your opinions will be valued, Sil.
And if you like the more one-sided Ema more, all the better, since I myself consider Miles to be a more-or-less closed off person, the stereotypical man who has trouble expressing himself and by today's standards would be earmarked for sensitivity training. Especially throwing in the werewolf aspect, this will force him to (violently?) cover himself up in front of Ema, who, even though she may not be the best set of eyes for it, is the sole witness to his inner conflicts as a human being, as well as a prosecutor.
Sami, moar steam is gud.
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So, as a consolation prize, you get to read my steam bubble. [/braggart]
Spoiler: Warning: Suggestive.
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Okay maybe not but still.
FATALITY.
Boss gonna be mad yo.
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Yuu-chan wrote:
Instead it turned into a BLOODY BRAWWWWWLLL.
Okay maybe not but still.
FATALITY.
Boss gonna be mad yo.
Okay maybe not but still.
FATALITY.
Boss gonna be mad yo.
Ummm... crap. >>; If the boss wants it, I'll surrender my prize. MSOB's drawn 3(00) or so pictures for me, but has he drawn any for you people? I don't know. Have a party with it. ^^
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Okay, not really, but Mu, I think you said something that I've been wanting to say for a while but avoiding because alternate or negative opinions seem to be jumped on in this thread o.O;
I, personally, haven't read any indication in this thread that this project is supposed to turn into something for the general public, which is part of why I stayed silent about the OCs and in-jokes and such running rampant. If we're not like...writing epic Gyakumech type fanfiction, and OCs and in-jokes make everything more fun for us involved in the project, then by all means we can include them and have a ball. It's been massive fun for us so far.
But...I think there's a certain level of OOCness where I have to draw the line.
Since Mu brought up the Kawadzu issue, I'll use that. If we think that panty thieves are fun, then by all means, insert a panty thief. But if Kawadzu isn't actually particularly perverted, then we don't NEED to make him perverted because we already HAVE canonly perverted characters. Hotti, for a start. It's like when we were putting Matt in a love triangle with Makita, but we made it be Nice!Matt...there just isn't a reason to turn a sociopath into a nice guy when we already HAVE several nice characters.
So here's the thing. I want to be random and have fun and be crazy just as much as the next person. Heck, we are TURNING MAKOTO INTO A SUPERHERO HERE, I think crack is warranted. I don't want to appear the negative nancy, but I just...don't get why we have to put certain things in here or characterize certain characters certain ways, and I feel like if I say anything against anybody's ideas I'm going to end up with a hoard of people telling me to STOP RUINING THE LOVE AND PEACE and HOW DARE I NOT LIKE THEIR IDEAS and BUT /I/ LIKE IT. And I just don't think any of that is helping this to turn into a healthy project that everyone can agree on.
...Actually, speaking of characterization, let me throw another idea out here and I apologize if I'm just stating the obvious: Makoto is a very shy and scared girl, and we're turning her into a superhero. SO, I think we can do a lot of fun things with that concept. For instance: Makoto is shy and withdrawn and shaky when somebody approaches her to casually talk in school--and then OH NO THE SADISTRESS IS TERRORIZING PEOPLE QUICK TO THE BAT MOBILE. That's actually something that I think we can play up to be amusing while adding subtle things into her character that make it believable. For instance--what is her motivation? Is she ever scared while SAVING THE GALAXY? You bet. I think it's these types of things that can really bring this project to life while still leaving a lot of room for adding humor and craziness into the mix.
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Makoto is a very shy and scared girl, and we're turning her into a superhero. SO, I think we can do a lot of fun things with that concept. For instance: Makoto is shy and withdrawn and shaky when somebody approaches her to casually talk in school--and then OH NO THE SADISTRESS IS TERRORIZING PEOPLE QUICK TO THE BAT MOBILE.
This is what I want to hear: ideas. Makoto herself has not even been finalized at this point in the project, and being the crux of the entire universe (literally and... well, literally), maintaining her essence (and perhaps fine-tuning it) should/is a primary directive around these parts. I want people to think about Sil's bit here and expand on it - if we can't get the Design Meeting done in one day, then we will have it stretched out over a series of posts.
- -
Have we all gotten lost somewhere along the way? I'm not afraid to admit it. The fine-tuning will always come after laying the foundations - or are we building the castles in the clouds first? I think we're reaching that point where the overdrive has started to wear out and we've got more sober voices chiming in before we careen further down the freeway of PURE EPIC (though I'm not of any mind to stop). I suppose it's a good time to start discussing these fine points, so have at it...
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RE:musuoka
Speaking entirely for myself on all points.
Spoiler: Characterization
Confession Time: I think we're cheapskates or spoiler-phobic pansies. So really, it's somewhat inflexible on this particular note, but I do know that if I want someone doing our homework for us, it'd be you.
Spoiler: All-Inclusive
I had never thought of this as a "members-only" thing, but neither have I considered it something that must satisfy the public in general. I've stated before that the main drive for including most anything is making it work. I'm more worried about cohesion than I am about integrity - the latter is somewhat subjective for my tastes.
Spoiler: Intent
I would love to do so - there's no sense in keeping it to ourselves. As lampooned or battered as I am destined to become by being the "hardline" on this project, it's a choice I've made many times for other causes and am willing to do so again.
Spoiler: RE: The Public At Large
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...Metaphors aside, I agree that we need to flesch out Makoto's character properly and then decide what the other character's roles are and how it all fits in with both their canon personalities and the structure of our AU. I must admit that, not speaking Japanese, I only know the bare basics of the GS3 and 4 characters...and, not to try to ask anything of you unfairly Mu, but I think you're excellent at telling us when we're off-track with one of the characters and I'd highly appreciate it if you'd let us use you as a resource.
Also, we've come up with roles for many characters and ways they relate to other characters roles, but I don't think we've come up with much in the way of a plot structure as a whole. An RP would be a great place to explore this, but I'd like to come up with a few plot basics--a sort of chronology of basic events...I guess sort of a timeline and a vague idea of what happens when Makoto and *insert other superhero here* goes up against this villain or that villain.
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...Speaking of Apollo Justice and Sadistress [/badsegue], what info do we have on their conflicts? Do we have an a established reason, or does Kiri/Sadi just like to use Apollo as a stress ball? XP
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Too much of a good thing is never a good idea.
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Spoiler: RE: her shyness
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That's a good idea of what to figure out, Sami--Conflicts. Motivations. We have our heroes and villains, now WHY are they are heroes and our villains?
If we want to draw from GS4 as much as possible, we could just have it as such:
Spoiler: GS4 LOL
...And that was all incredibly cheesily phrased, but you get the idea.
That route would be canical, easy to pull off, and probably not get a whole lot of opposition. It would also provide motive for both of them and lots of opportunity for subplotty angst and perhaps some nice Odoroki+Minuki character development in a scene with him telling her about his angst and her cheering him on.
HOWEVER, we can, of course, take any other route we want. This is open to fun and creativity, so if anyone else has any suggestions, by all means give them.
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But using sprites Misaki has made~
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Hm. Quick question.
Spoiler: sprites
...Actually, the concept of Makoto having to battle her shyness so she can battle her enemies is something that's appealing to me more and more as we talk about it. She doesn't want to have to do it, but with urging from her parents, she realizes it's just something she HAS to do so with help she pulls through. As she accepts her duties, she also grows more as a person and comes to realize things about herself and the world around her as she starts to come out of her shell a bit--both while battling evildoers, and while being invited to sleepovers by Minuki and Pearl and to the movies by Takita.
......I am LOVING the sound of this x3
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SilverZephyr wrote:
That's a good idea of what to figure out, Sami--Conflicts. Motivations. We have our heroes and villains, now WHY are they are heroes and our villains?
If we want to draw from GS4 as much as possible, we could just have it as such:
If we want to draw from GS4 as much as possible, we could just have it as such:
Spoiler: GS4 LOL
Hmm... sounds good to me, except that Sadistress and Apollo Justice seem to be more lighthearted characters than this little blurb paints them to be. I think Sadi just likes seeing Apollo flip out when she's around. XP Oh, and while I'm at it, who is Apollo Justice in relation to his "normal" self? Is he an alternate persona fueled by an impulse like Sadistress is to Kiri, or is he ACTUALLY Apollo Justice?
Oh, and your Makoto blurb is also great. A little internal strife makes for good plotfeed.
Yuu, where are the original sprites used in those pictures? I wanna see them. >>
Ahih=makyan; Avatar art by LunaOfWater on DeviantArt.
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I've had to rewrite this post about FOUR TIMES because what everyone's been adding!
You are ruining loli's day, people!!
Spoiler: Post I made before but wasn't posted because Bee said "NO BOSS DON'T POST" and then Papa 'needed' the comp.
Since then practically everything in above post has been debunked. (I managed to freaking...ARUGH this is the second time I've missed an important postmark. Words cannot describe how upset I am.)
I really want to ask everyone to SLOW DOWN but that's impossible. But please remember that I CANNOT BE ONLINE often right now. Please don't make this weekend a stressful one. loli is very upset right now.
Mu is right. She brings up a very good point that I've had with me but I haven't been able to bring up.
How are we presenting Makoto? I've never said it out loud (if I have, not loud enough) but a lot of how we (Bee?) are currently presenting her is really upsetting me. I kept re-checking 4-4 just to make sure I wasn't wrong.
I wasn't. She's supposed to be this shy girl who looks out the window and goes OH GOD THEY'RE ALL GOING TO EAT ME.
And...not what I was seeing.
As for the other problems I don't know and can't care at the moment (TIME RESTRAINTS), I'm just all ACK ACK ARUGH right now but yes there is some very real with problemage with Makoto at the moment so right now can we PLEASE FIX THAT, however subtly.
I don't know how. Just...could we find a way to make it happen. I could suggest a way to do so, but the only thing right now that's in my brain is just a bunch of ACKACKACKACKACK.
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YES YOU ARE RIGHT THAT WAS PRETTY MUCH EXACTLY WHAT I WAS GOING TO SAY.
NOW WHY COULDN'T EVERYONE JUST WAIT TIL I SAID IT SO THEN I WOULD SOUND LIKE I KNOW WHAT I'M DOING
I can't work this weekend. Come Monday I'll probably be more sensible and have thought about it. And most importantly I'll have time.
Okay never mind guys I'm not okay right now. Please, please could we slow down so I don't have to freaking REPLY TO SEVEN BILLION THINGS AT ONCE.
I don't believe I am asking for much. I'm actually begging you people to take a break.
Because I REALLY NEED ONE, PEOPLE.
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And I didn't mean to make Sadistress sound serious, either. I totally see her as a "giggle as they squirm" sort of villain--but of course, she IS a villain, and villains do evil deeds, and her name DOES imply sadisticness that I think complements her character well.
Edit: @Mu: Ah, thanks for the info, I believe that's what we'll go with ^.^ In that case, it'd prolly be good to start the project off with end-of-GS4 Makoto as a springboard of her character development.
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Where's Maya?
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We're working on it.
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I don't know, with the exception of the villains we've been sticking with the GS4 timeline, so it would be and older Maya. That might be interesting. We could go the obvious route and have her be a steel samurai fan...Actually, it might be interesting to have her fangirling over the Pink Princess/next gen Steel Samurai to Pearly/Cody xD; We could have her use her psychic powers somehow as a hero, but right now I'm not sure if we need any other heroes and we have a couple people as superpowerless characters already so it wouldn't be a stretch to have her as one of them as well. Or she could be the master of Kurain and be consulted by the heroes to channel a few spirits...hrm
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