I hate Klaviema >_>
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well um
the fact that you really cant draw eyes
you probably should learn if you want to make totally from scratch sprites
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and for the eyes like dekuran said give the eyes enough space where there visible enough...those kinda glasses hes wearing probably wouldnt be directly next to the eyes.
and finally fix the grey area between the collar and cravat.
hope this helps :P
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i think that is wrong...
look you of his head, and of this you can see it...
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Means to say that there's something wrong with his eyes.
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I might steal Klavier's instead of trying to draw them :P
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What do you see behind the mask?
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THE HAIR IS WRONG AROUND!!
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No. No, it's not.
Unless you mean something else right now and I can't grasp it ...
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and of that 
Can you see it now?
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i think her point is: 1. the.. tail.. or whatever, is too long.2. his.. forehead-hair thing points to the right, not to the left like it should be.
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Your sprites are very good except for the small flaws which can be improved over time. What I talk about is obviously, as you can guess from the previous posts' Eyes. Kristoph's eyes are really...unique. I'm sure that they can be improved. On the other hand basically everything else is good, except for those Custom Prosecutor and Happy Kid. Were they drawn in paint or something like that? They have a base, which is good but there is definitely room for improvement.
Now the GS4 Edgeworth sprite. There's only one word to describe it. Amazing. Every time I look at it, the colours, the glasses, the small minor details, it just looks like a professional Capcom created sprite. It's brilliant. (Was it created by any chance with a shrunken Edgey artwork?)
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Edgey's court pose was made with shrunken art, and the front pose has a custom body, a heavily revamped cravat and a normal Edgey head that I messed with a lot.
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I suppose that's good then if the only criticism is for custom sprites/bits then. That obviously means all your other sprites are good enough to not warrant constructive criticism.
I knew it was with shrunken art! The body pose just reminded me of that character art but are you saying you based the body on that art? If so, well done. That's a great job. Heavily revamped cravat? I won't bother asking about that because as farm as I am aware, Edgeworth's cravats are very hard to sprite custom or editing them.
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...is he confused what side he is on... maybe both
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Looks good so far!
I am looking forward for more!
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Looks strangely... but too good!
Can i us him for my originalchara?
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i was thinking where i reconized the face...then it hit me
I dont know if it was intentional or not jibs...but the resemblence it close to sammies oc xD
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I dunno, it's really nifty as is (srsly, nice franken), but I think you could do a bit more with it to really make it stand out.
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i was thinking where i reconized the face...then it hit me
I dont know if it was intentional or not jibs...but the resemblence it close to sammies oc xD
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Wow, that wasn't intentional but I see the resemblance
@Christoph: I know, it's pretty boring and unoriginal, I might modify it sometime, but It was meant to be simple as i'm really not used to the GIMP for spriting :P
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