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Luke Atmey: Ace Detective (and other stuff).Topic%20Title

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After finishing T&T, I felt something like this had to be done.
This afternoon, I was pretty bored and made this:
Spoiler: Luke Atmey: Ace Detective
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Since I had recently discovered this forum, I figured I had to share it here.

I might make a logo soon, and maybe more poses.

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This here is the latest sprite I made. I decided to put a spin on Gumshoe.
Spoiler: Prosecutor Dick Gumshoe
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Last edited by Knife Wielder on Mon Dec 14, 2009 8:52 pm, edited 5 times in total.
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Did you make that sprite? Because if you did, it is amazing. One of the best spriting jobs I've seen.
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I guess you're being sarcastic, but I'll give you a serious answer.

For the Luke Atmey sprite, I used Luke's laughing sprite as a base, and then started to edit it using Phoenix's pointing arm and some other Luke Atmey poses.

The "Zvarri!" bubble is an edit of the "Take That!" bubble. I based the word on different letters from different PW exclamation bubbles in various languages.
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Knife Wielder wrote:
I guess you're being sarcastic, but I'll give you a serious answer.

For the Luke Atmey sprite, I used Luke's laughing sprite as a base, and then started to edit it using Phoenix's pointing arm and some other Luke Atmey poses.

The "Zvarri!" bubble is an edit of the "Take That!" bubble. I based the word on different letters from different PW exclamation bubbles in various languages.


No I think he was being serious, as that Luke Atmey edit is simply amazing. I would have never guessed what sprites you used to make it, so well done. :karma:

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Knife Wielder wrote:
After finishing T&T, I felt something like this had to be done.
This afternoon, I was pretty bored and made this:

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Since I had recently discovered this forum, I figured I had to share it here.

I might make a logo soon, and maybe more poses.

Heh,you stole my idea XD
I DID want to make a game.
and I will.
If you want you can join.
BTW i'm making hd sprites of luke
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Thanks me for the sig XD
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A very clever idea, and a great sprite too.
Well done!
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As i said, yup, it is.
Kudos for getting the credit first.
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Thanks me for the sig XD
"Shoy was here, and you know it, because he ate some of your pie."
http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1257521476
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I edited the first post to fix an imperfecton in the "Zvarri!" bubble (the top of the exclamation mark was cut out)

@RoundedEdge: I'm sorry if you weren't being sarcastic. I usually make that mistake on the internet.

@ShoySlayer: An Ace Detective game? I'd be probably glad to help. Could you give me some more info?

@Everyone: Thanks for the compliments
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@Knife Wielder: Of course, i'll pm you with details
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Thanks me for the sig XD
"Shoy was here, and you know it, because he ate some of your pie."
http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1257521476
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New sprite. I'm not sure why I did it.

Meet Prosecutor Gumshoe
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Knife Wielder wrote:
New sprite. I'm not sure why I did it.

Meet Prosecutor Gumshoe
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that's quite a good mix, but I'm sure I've seen it before :will:
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DefenceLawyer wrote:
Knife Wielder wrote:
New sprite. I'm not sure why I did it.

Meet Prosecutor Gumshoe
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that's quite a good mix, but I'm sure I've seen it before :will:


http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/sammie-new-and-improved-sprites-t11818.html

Sammie did some animated Prosecutor Gumshoe sprites, exactly like this, with a few small changes.
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The Luke Atmey one is AMAZING
and the Gumshoe-one . . .since you are new I think we all can excuse him (or her?Always those peopel wh doesn´t edit their profile)
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Ptapcc wrote:
DefenceLawyer wrote:
Knife Wielder wrote:
New sprite. I'm not sure why I did it.

Meet Prosecutor Gumshoe
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that's quite a good mix, but I'm sure I've seen it before :will:


http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/sammie-new-and-improved-sprites-t11818.html

Sammie did some animated Prosecutor Gumshoe sprites, exactly like this, with a few small changes.
Ptapcc


I swear I hadn't seen those, Your Honor! :larry:

@Coffee Prosecutor: I'm male. I'll edit my profile right now.
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Ah don't worry about it. Sammie's sprites are a few pages back in the Sprites thread. I've only seen them once before and that was only a quick glance.

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Oh it's just a coincidental frankensprite. I doubt he did it on purpose.

Anyway, the Atmey one looks great.
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FWIW, something that's bugging me about the Atmey sprite: the pointer hand is way big, because it's made for Phoenix's arm that's pointing out of the screen (i.e., it's foreshortened). I would recommend either having Atmey's arm extend out further or possibly replacing Phoenix's hand with a smaller one from another sprite. Also, I think I see a residual fingernail on the thumb.
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Lynx wrote:
FWIW, something that's bugging me about the Atmey sprite: the pointer hand is way big, because it's made for Phoenix's arm that's pointing out of the screen (i.e., it's foreshortened). I would recommend either having Atmey's arm extend out further or possibly replacing Phoenix's hand with a smaller one from another sprite. Also, I think I see a residual fingernail on the thumb.


Yeah, you're right about the hand being too big. I thought it wouldn't be very noticeable.
I'll see what I can do. And yes, you're right about the fingernail. I don't know how I missed it.
I'll fix that too.
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I was serious when I said that your spriting was amazing. You're one of the best spriter's I've ever seen.
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the sprites are good :redd:
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UPDATE:

Here's a revised version of the Luke Atmey sprite.
What do you think?

Spoiler: Luke Atmey pointing, V2.0
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Is Luke an ace aide or prosecutor now? Besides that comment, the revised version looks great.

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It's still the best spriting I've ever seen. I'm not being sarcastic.

Just a point - I always imagined him skinnier, Phoenix and Edgeworth at a little more... I dunno the word for it. Bulky?
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Knife Wielder wrote:
UPDATE:

Here's a revised version of the Luke Atmey sprite.
What do you think?

Spoiler: Luke Atmey pointing, V2.0
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Its pretty good...but you need to change the size of the body...its fat and bulbus...

on the right side push back the side of the body to reduce fatness and straighten out that arm more ( a sleeve shouldn't be curving in on itself )

on the left side the body's odd this is because you make the line completely straight...i suggest adding a small line in between the armpit and down a few pixels would be good but don't go from the armpit all the way down stop move 4 pixels and restart the line until the bottom...this will make it curve like it should (take a look at phoenix's basic pose...maybe you'll see what I mean) finally the other arm...it curves and yet there's no trace of creases in the shirt (also bring down the lightest shade of the place on the sleeve more)

finally the body just fix up that straight line you have (pacifically the waist...just add a small line above it...and don't connect this line from one side of the body to the other)

I know I'm picking at this one a lot...but I usually only do that when I see someone has done good but can still do better...again good work and good luck on future sprites :godot:
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