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My Soul and Heart (Heart's Soul sprites)Topic%20Title

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I'm new to spriting, but I made the following out of Klavier... and soon Kristoph. :hotti: This is made for my sprite comic only. Also, this is the only attorney without a badge who is the defense.

Spoiler: Neo idle
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Neck was deformed.

Spoiler: Neo sweating
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No comments here.

Spoiler: Neo objecting
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Those rings threw me off.

Spoiler: Neo weakened
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Laugh little boy, I see your sweat.


My sprite comic is still being developed and will be released ASAP. I need help with creating more versions of Neo and other characters, though. This is just my test work. :gregory:

Estimated release date for the sprite comic is the day after AAI:ME is released.
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There are some white(?) bits around the arm and stuff.
The neck on the idle sprite is really thin.
The shirt is a little messy.

Apart from that, yes, it is a sprite.
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The first Neo's neck is too thin and... deformed. It looks like some sort of alien neck.

But otherwise it's not that bad for a Klavier-without-the-drill-hair-and-without-the-grin recolor.
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DeMatador wrote:
The first Neo's neck is too thin and... deformed. It looks like some sort of alien neck.

But otherwise it's not that bad for a Klavier-without-the-drill-hair-and-without-the-grin recolor.


The shading for Neo's first sprite on the shirt isn't that good. It conflicts with the rest of the sprite. Try using a darker variant to give it a nice overall colour.

Are these meant to be sprites of Neo for your fan game? What was he called...noseda, or something like that.
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I like the hair, but the shading on the shirt is weird. He reminds me of some dude from Yugioh.
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Ptapcc wrote:
DeMatador wrote:
The first Neo's neck is too thin and... deformed. It looks like some sort of alien neck.

But otherwise it's not that bad for a Klavier-without-the-drill-hair-and-without-the-grin recolor.


You are also forgetting in the first sprite, the shading is horrible on the shirt. Fix it immediately.

Are these meant to be sprites of Neo for your fan game? What was he called...noseda, or something like that.

P.S: That's a bad pun for your thread.


Easy, Ptapcc. You're not sprite God. You have to suggest people what to do with their sprites, not ORDER them. They can do whatever shit they want with them. You should know better.
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DeMatador wrote:
Ptapcc wrote:
DeMatador wrote:
The first Neo's neck is too thin and... deformed. It looks like some sort of alien neck.

But otherwise it's not that bad for a Klavier-without-the-drill-hair-and-without-the-grin recolor.


You are also forgetting in the first sprite, the shading is horrible on the shirt. Fix it immediately.

Are these meant to be sprites of Neo for your fan game? What was he called...noseda, or something like that.

P.S: That's a bad pun for your thread.


Easy, Ptapcc. You're not sprite God. You have to suggest people what to do with their sprites, not ORDER them. They can do whatever shit they want with them. You should know better.


Sorry. I didn't phrase that correctly. What I mean is the shading isn't great on the shirt. It sort of conflicts with the rest of the image. And DeMat- I know my sprites are crap. I edited my post above to show what I meant. Sorry for the misconception.
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Looks good. As far as I can see, there is a couple white pixels but I'm not sure, and you can widen the neck a bit. But other than that, you're pretty good so far.
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Ptapcc wrote:
DeMatador wrote:
The first Neo's neck is too thin and... deformed. It looks like some sort of alien neck.

But otherwise it's not that bad for a Klavier-without-the-drill-hair-and-without-the-grin recolor.


The shading for Neo's first sprite on the shirt isn't that good. It conflicts with the rest of the sprite. Try using a darker variant to give it a nice overall colour.

Are these meant to be sprites of Neo for your fan game? What was he called...noseda, or something like that.


That's quite better. Seriously, ordering people around is NEVER cool, and less when you're medling with their creations.
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DeMatador wrote:
Ptapcc wrote:
DeMatador wrote:
The first Neo's neck is too thin and... deformed. It looks like some sort of alien neck.

But otherwise it's not that bad for a Klavier-without-the-drill-hair-and-without-the-grin recolor.


The shading for Neo's first sprite on the shirt isn't that good. It conflicts with the rest of the sprite. Try using a darker variant to give it a nice overall colour.

Are these meant to be sprites of Neo for your fan game? What was he called...noseda, or something like that.


That's quite better. Seriously, ordering people around is NEVER cool, and less when you're medling with their creations.


Yeah, that was my fault for phrasing my statement incorrectly. Apologies to Heart Soul and anyone else insulted :sadshoe:
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Not insulted. Anyway, I know the neck is deformed, I'll try fixing it. Most of it is custom and the white dots are from Photoshop. Besides, you apologized before I showed up.

Anyway, the shading isn't half bad, I think (for the jacket, the shirt is crap, I know. I can't see properly.). I just changed all of the colors. (Oh, and the first sprite is a near-complete edit. Took me about an hour.)

Oh, and Neo Nossida is his name. I wanted him to be a prosecutor, but he's more awesome as a D.A. I'm still working on a few customs, though. If anyone wants to help :gant: me, go ahead.

And Ptapcc... YOU DREW THAT!? I thought it was somebody else!
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Updated with fixed sprites. Better than before, and Neo is shorter again. XD
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Maybe this is just a point of view thing but on the first two sprites of him just standing....the strand of hair that goes between his eyes when in his other 2 eyes isn't present. Is it supposed to be that way and I'm just mis-seeing it.
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I see it. I look into the monitor and see that strand of hair. It's really difficult, but it's just a positioning trick. Enough said.

EDIT: The sprites are, yet again, outdated. Why? My sprite comic will feature a GK-styled investigation system. Why? Because it's more fun.
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Not insulted. Anyway, I know the neck is deformed, I'll try fixing it. Most of it is custom and the white dots are from Photoshop. Besides, you apologized before I showed up.

Anyway, the shading isn't half bad, I think (for the jacket, the shirt is crap, I know. I can't see properly.). I just changed all of the colors. (Oh, and the first sprite is a near-complete edit. Took me about an hour.)

Oh, and Neo Nossida is his name. I wanted him to be a prosecutor, but he's more awesome as a D.A. I'm still working on a few customs, though. If anyone wants to help :gant: me, go ahead.

And Ptapcc... YOU DREW THAT!? I thought it was somebody else!


Neo Nossida? That's the one. I thought it was going to be a fan game though?

You should try 'frakenspriting' different parts of reflected Prosecutor's or Defense Attorneys for Neo. Take a look at the face- it screams Klavier to me. A unique face should make him look different.

Aha...that was me who drew that...though I feel like a jackass now as that was my first sprite edit and this is yours...
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Ptapcc wrote:
Heart's Soul wrote:
Not insulted. Anyway, I know the neck is deformed, I'll try fixing it. Most of it is custom and the white dots are from Photoshop. Besides, you apologized before I showed up.

Anyway, the shading isn't half bad, I think (for the jacket, the shirt is crap, I know. I can't see properly.). I just changed all of the colors. (Oh, and the first sprite is a near-complete edit. Took me about an hour.)

Oh, and Neo Nossida is his name. I wanted him to be a prosecutor, but he's more awesome as a D.A. I'm still working on a few customs, though. If anyone wants to help :gant: me, go ahead.

And Ptapcc... YOU DREW THAT!? I thought it was somebody else!


Neo Nossida? That's the one. I thought it was going to be a fan game though?

You should try 'frakenspriting' different parts of reflected Prosecutor's or Defense Attorneys for Neo. Take a look at the face- it screams Klavier to me. A unique face should make him look different.

Aha...that was me who drew that...though I feel like a jackass now as that was my first sprite edit and this is yours...


I never sprited before, just an FYI. And I know he's Klavier, he supposed to be made off of him. I'm just too damn lazy to edit him, his idol is KRISTOPH and he got his hair to be that way. The face is mainly edits and I'm too lazy to edit his clothes.
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Well, um... a pretty good start. A bit of recolor-cut, yes. As for the problems, the chest areas of the shirts look kinda strange, since you removed the Gavinners's symbol, so, that's one thing I think you should try to fix. Besides that, I haven't found major issues with the sprites.
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I fixed that in my own version, still unreleased.

Just when Klavier Neo laughs, it's the only one that's glitched up.
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Sorry for double-posting... again... but I'll be out with mini versions of Neo. They include GK spoilers, of course, as he is based of Edgeworth in the game.
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You do know you an edit posts... right?
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The bump button is gone. And I know that, I was just updating.
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The bump button appears when a thread hasn't had a week of inactivity or more. Since this is relatively new, you can just edit your last post for new sprites. We will check it.
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Awwww! Love the Neo objecting! He's cute! And also kind of hot...
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Thanks Ptapcc.

Oh, and here is a gift for everyone! The first ever part in my sprite comic!

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Okay, I know the text is way off (but when you're at 400%, you don't notice) and I fixed it. I'm using the fonts on PWLib's site. And I redid the first picture. Same alignment, different text.

I just redid the part, and I transferred to an OLDER computer. I can't have music, Photoshop, and Chrome all at once, it'll shut down again. Now, I'm looking at the CPU temperature. It's boring.

Anyway, my sprite comic is underway, and I'll need help with the backgrounds and such. :wellington: If anyone is interested, PM me. I'm doing the project solo at the moment.
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