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Requests are currently: ON~
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I love to draw in my spare time, and most of the things I draw are doodles~
However I would like to get better at drawing, so I am trying new art styles...and looking for criticism.
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Okay, I was messing about with some art syles, and I stumbled across Caricatures. I loved them striaght away and decided to do some of my own Phoenix Wright Caricatures for fun.
Then I realised how fun and simple it was to make them, so MY latest project s to do the whole cast of PW, AJ and AAI in the caricature style.
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You should also keep your lines in one piece so they don't look like split ends and maybe colour in your drawings to give it more expression (If colour is your thing, though I don't colour my drawings). Another thing is detail. Try to add more detail to Ron's coat and add tone to your artwork (try to shade more neatly with no white gaps). Sorry if I'm sounding mean but that's the constructive criticism I have to offer. Oh, and ONE LAST thing: try not to press too hard on your pencil, because you can see where you've rubbed out (e.g- under dessie's eyes). But on top of all that, you're drawing's cute and original. I adore the cute person you drew on the bottom :3 . Great job!
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You should also keep your lines in one piece so they don't look like split ends and maybe colour in your drawings to give it more expression (If colour is your thing, though I don't colour my drawings). Another thing is detail. Try to add more detail to Ron's coat and add tone to your artwork (try to shade more neatly with no white gaps). Sorry if I'm sounding mean but that's the constructive criticism I have to offer. Oh, and ONE LAST thing: try not to press too hard on your pencil, because you can see where you've rubbed out (e.g- under dessie's eyes). But on top of all that, you're drawing's cute and original. I adore the cute person you drew on the bottom :3 . Great job!
No, you dont sound mean at all.
I know I press quite hard, thats my biggest fault, and they do seem a bit stiff.
I've been drawing manga for less than a year, so yeah its not that great~
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Improvement is always good, but don't press yourself. Improve in a pace that's suitable for you.
Well, what exactly do you need? Tutorials? General crits?
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- Start off your sketches by drawing really lightly. Then progressively start drawing darker.
- Like SnowWright said, add some more curves to your characters. They do look a bit stiff in that pic.
- Detail wouldn't hurt either. You don't have to try and draw every little detail, but at least showing that the details are there is good. Like kinda scribbling certain parts that'll show it.
- Check out other images and see how the eyes or other facial features are drawn. Even if they aren't exactly your style, it still helps to see different types of expressions and how they're drawn.
Other than that, it looks good considering the little experience you have with the style. Keep it up!
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Please come and check my new art out!
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That Franziska one is adorable. <3
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My question still stands! I want to help, but I need to know what you are interested in :)
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My question still stands! I want to help, but I need to know what you are interested in :)
I have a crit thread under the sticky topics if you're wanting me to crit you. If you post your pic and how much crit you want I can give pointers there. I'm always open for giving it- even on no PW art :)
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Actually, tell me what the best thing about the pic is, and the worst thing. That way, I'll know what I need to spend more time on~
((off topic: I'm away for 3 days and the whole website is re-designed?? Whoah mama))
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Ben a while, hasn't it? Well, I got much better. Ignore the old stuff, check out the newer pics. You can expect me to be updating a bit more often now.
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Just couldn't resist posting here again could ya? :3
And the regular updates? Well I need more time, to be honest, but I will get right on that, Let's se, Who should I draw...?
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Thought I might let you know.
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I love it so. Really!
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@Snowy- Thank You, snowy! Nice to get feedback froma good friend like you :)
@Panda- Good ol' Microsoft Paint, with a mouse. It was difficult but fun.
@alynnyang- Thank you! I liked maya the best too.
Next up Pearls, Franzy and godot. If you want to request a caricature before I decide to do it, say so!
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...and since you said requests, could I request Trucy and Mr.Hat ...If you have time after those?
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...and since you said requests, could I request Trucy and Mr.Hat ...If you have time after those?
Alright. Iv'e done Franziska and Godot already, but am doing pearls atm. Once im done with her I'll do Trucy with mr hat.
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Franziska, Godot, Pearls, Trucy and Mr. Hat are added to the collection
Hope this is up to your standard, alynnyang. Want anything changed and I'll say soAlso the news that i'll be splitting the caricatures section into 5. thats
Main characters and regulars
Ace attorney
Justice For All
Trials and Tribulations
Apollo Justice
Investigations
Basically how the sprite rips section is laid out
ANyway, have fun looking and dont be afraid to request!!
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Oh, and I decided you can request OC's too, so I'll be adding that section.
The Hoosiers :) Just too cool.
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REQUESTT!
well im not adsacly a oc buuutttt
could you do me?
:3 you know what i look like so if ya do, thx ;D
(click the pic for pandas graphics~)
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REQUESTT!
well im not adsacly a oc buuutttt
could you do me?
:3 you know what i look like so if ya do, thx ;D
Definetley. You're on the list.
The Hoosiers :) Just too cool.
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REQUESTT!
well im not adsacly a oc buuutttt
could you do me?
:3 you know what i look like so if ya do, thx ;D
Definetley. You're on the list.
BBOOCHHAA
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I request a pic from Ema, Apollo and Klavier (:
When you don't draw this..
Thanks anytime, you're the best, and your drawings are SO awesome :D
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I guess you mean AJ Ema, sooooo yeah.
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I hope you like them! Wocky was very difficult to do so I hope it was worth my effort~
The Hoosiers :) Just too cool.
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I hope you like them! Wocky was very difficult to do so I hope it was worth my effort~
oh woah thats good ;) keep 'em upp
(click the pic for pandas graphics~)
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I might do another request later on... If I can think of anything by then.
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Thanks Luxxy :D Comments and crits are welcome, so please leave one? That'd be nice! And dont be afraid to request, just not over 3 characters per request, okay?
I'm glad people are enjoying my work.
Oh, and the requests are yours to use so long as you give credit.
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Haha, okay, I'll add her to the list. And shes adorable, of course shes getting around! I consider her canon in my eyes. (And that last part isnt a joke. I do forget sometimes she doesnt exsist in the games)
The Hoosiers :) Just too cool.
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I must be really good at character designing if I can make them fit into canon THAT well XD
And plus, I've been doing it since my Crash Bandicoot fandom days. :D
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OKAAAYYY straying off topic here this is lovely but maybe not suited for an art thread.
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... Sorry for making everyone go off topic >_>
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