I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim! (new sketches up!)

Mon Feb 22, 2010 3:47 pm

Zairal

♡ ♡ ♡

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:48 am

Posts: 18

...Anyways, I'd appreciate some feedback?

This is a work in progress. You can see more at http://jellyprince.com or http://zairal.deviantart.com

Sketches:

(mild spoilers- don't read the text XD)

More art like my avatar at http://jellyprince.com~~

Last edited by Zairal on Sat Feb 27, 2010 7:02 am, edited 2 times in total.

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Mon Feb 22, 2010 4:46 pm

bonjourpanda

Asian

Gender: Female

Location: Somewhere in Canada

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Wed Feb 03, 2010 7:40 am

Posts: 45

That's absolutely amazing.
You captured Edgeworth's amazingness.

I ship Phoenix and Edgeworth and Phoenix and Iris.

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Mon Feb 22, 2010 5:50 pm

Perrydotto

What do you see behind the mask?

Gender: Female

Location: Germany

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Mar 13, 2008 11:09 pm

Posts: 2431

Excellent work there, especially on the face! That expression just screams awesomeness. Wonderful job!

I has art! - I has graphics! - EBA Fanmeme!! Check it out! - One of Arkillian's kids :)

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Mon Feb 22, 2010 6:00 pm

Zairal

♡ ♡ ♡

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:48 am

Posts: 18

Hahaha, thanks so much! I had so much trouble with the face, you wouldn't believe... he went from having a Dahlia Hawthorne "who, meee?" expression to looking like Manfred and Gant's demonspawn. Not cool.

Er, anyways, I'm glad you like it! um, if you have any critique... that is to say... :yuusaku:

More art like my avatar at http://jellyprince.com~~

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Mon Feb 22, 2010 7:32 pm

Tap

Gender: Male

Location: Melbourne, Australia

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Oct 08, 2009 10:56 am

Posts: 1371

Your art is amazing. I love how you've captured Edgeworth and took it a step forward by drawing Bratworth :karma:

I'm checked your D.A account and wow...your art is even more amazing there!

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Mon Feb 22, 2010 7:42 pm

BSX

The member who doesn't swear much

Gender: Male

Location: I'm Scotland and I live in Scottish. Wait...

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Fri Jul 03, 2009 10:15 am

Posts: 970

Wow. Your Edgey is just... amazing.

Married to KSAT~. Super Cammy (known as Cammyflage) sprite in avvie by Looby.

I Do LPs. Here's a link to watch them on my channel on YouTube.

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:00 pm

Zairal

♡ ♡ ♡

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:48 am

Posts: 18

HAH that's the first time I've heard someone say "Bratworth". What an accurate nickname.

Thanks, you guys! *blush*

More art like my avatar at http://jellyprince.com~~

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:43 pm

Arkillian

Waiting on Godot...

Gender: Female

Location: New Zealand

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Mon Jul 21, 2008 9:23 am

Posts: 2404

Left a comment on your DA site :) I think Bratworth is a CR only thing ^^; not sure. IT's like Jacques Portsman Who should rot in a jail cell forever cause I hate himis nick named Prince of Tennis since like... forever. When his official art came out and we didn't know his name. It was an easier way to tell young Miles from normal Miles though so it stuck :) That's how I see it anyways ^^

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Mon Feb 22, 2010 9:04 pm

Zairal

♡ ♡ ♡

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:48 am

Posts: 18

Oh my goodness. I'm glad I wasn't the only one who wanted to chuck one of those files at his head by the fifteen-millionth time he spun around with his stupid jacket. (Just as long as Brushel doesn't make a comeback, though, I really can't complain...)

Thanks for the comment! I'll go read it. : 3

More art like my avatar at http://jellyprince.com~~

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Mon Feb 22, 2010 9:22 pm

Arkillian

Waiting on Godot...

Gender: Female

Location: New Zealand

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Mon Jul 21, 2008 9:23 am

Posts: 2404

There's not many Ace Attorney chacters I actually hate character-wise. See, I tolerate Payne cause at lest he sounded like he COULD be better as a prosecutor given a guilty case, or a weaker opponent. I could see Jacques getting walked over by Pess he's such and irritating dolt T.T This isn't a hate thread though, so my frustrations stop there...

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Mon Feb 22, 2010 9:44 pm

Zairal

♡ ♡ ♡

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:48 am

Posts: 18

I don't know about the rest of you, but I tolerate Payne because I fall out of my chair every single time he yells "OBJECTION!"

Makes me wonder how he talks normally.

More art like my avatar at http://jellyprince.com~~

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Mon Feb 22, 2010 10:09 pm

Arkillian

Waiting on Godot...

Gender: Female

Location: New Zealand

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Mon Jul 21, 2008 9:23 am

Posts: 2404

Payne is all about his defeated animations. IT's the hook for the n00bs, objecting the hair off Payne's head :) There's somethign very satisfying wining against him ^^

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Mon Feb 22, 2010 10:19 pm

Zairal

♡ ♡ ♡

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:48 am

Posts: 18

Well, I guess that explains a lot about the Judge...

More art like my avatar at http://jellyprince.com~~

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Wed Feb 24, 2010 4:29 am

LySs

Fabu♥

Gender: Female

Location: Concrete jungle where dreams are made of

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Wed Apr 18, 2007 5:18 pm

Posts: 807

Omigod, this is gorgeous! <33
I really love the painterly style you've got going on~
My only critiques are, to maybe fix up the textures a little bit on his clothing and add some darker shadows. But it IS a WIP, so I can't really judge anything until the final result. But it's coming along very nicely :3

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Wed Feb 24, 2010 5:52 am

Zairal

♡ ♡ ♡

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:48 am

Posts: 18

Thanks! : D

Yeah, I'll work on the shadows and textures a lot more. *mrrgh lazy*

More art like my avatar at http://jellyprince.com~~

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Wed Feb 24, 2010 7:01 am

LySs

Fabu♥

Gender: Female

Location: Concrete jungle where dreams are made of

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Wed Apr 18, 2007 5:18 pm

Posts: 807

Zairal wrote:

Thanks! : D

Yeah, I'll work on the shadows and textures a lot more. *mrrgh lazy*

Don't worry, I definitely know the feeling lol

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Wed Feb 24, 2010 7:12 am

ace_attorney_ali

The Magatama of Truth!

Gender: Female

Location: Somewhere over the rainbow.

Rank: Desk Jockey

Joined: Mon Oct 26, 2009 8:02 am

Posts: 134

This is brilliant! I love the way you have done the hair and ruffles! This is better than some of the stuff I see in art galleries! Well done and thank you so much for sharing your work!

Signature thanks to the brilliant SnowWright (thank you so much!)

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:41 pm

Zairal

♡ ♡ ♡

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:48 am

Posts: 18

OBJECTION!!!

....haha thanks! I really appreciate the sentiment even if you are ~~lying through your teeth~~ ...being very nice.

(seriously my ego is becoming huuuuge)

More art like my avatar at http://jellyprince.com~~

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Wed Feb 24, 2010 7:15 pm

Ice

I choose you!

Gender: Female

Location: London, Kent

Rank: Desk Jockey

Joined: Sun Jan 03, 2010 11:09 am

Posts: 88

Wow. All I can say is, this is awesome. The stuff on your DA account is really cool too. I faved this and phoenix's floating head :0

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Wed Feb 24, 2010 10:22 pm

ace_attorney_ali

The Magatama of Truth!

Gender: Female

Location: Somewhere over the rainbow.

Rank: Desk Jockey

Joined: Mon Oct 26, 2009 8:02 am

Posts: 134

Zairal wrote:

OBJECTION!!!

....haha thanks! I really appreciate the sentiment even if you are ~~lying through your teeth~~ ...being very nice.

I'M SERIOUS! It is fantastic! I'm not lying! (geez)

Signature thanks to the brilliant SnowWright (thank you so much!)

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Wed Feb 24, 2010 11:42 pm

Zairal

♡ ♡ ♡

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:48 am

Posts: 18

MRRGH that phoenix was from forever ago. I'll redo it. XD;;;

Ali: PSHHH show me some evidence to support your claim or I cannot accept it! *wink*

More art like my avatar at http://jellyprince.com~~

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Thu Feb 25, 2010 8:55 am

ace_attorney_ali

The Magatama of Truth!

Gender: Female

Location: Somewhere over the rainbow.

Rank: Desk Jockey

Joined: Mon Oct 26, 2009 8:02 am

Posts: 134

Zairal wrote:

Ali: PSHHH show me some evidence to support your claim or I cannot accept it! *wink*

Here is a random piece of artwork.
http://www.gallery-worldwide.com/cmItem.jsp?id=16071
Yours is definately better than this one (in my opinion) This costs 845USD to buy, so just think of the worth of yours! (sorry I can't get better evidence, I fail at this) It's also heaps better than most abstract works, maybe that's because I hate abstracts though.
There, is that good enough proof? (probably not.)

Signature thanks to the brilliant SnowWright (thank you so much!)

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Fri Feb 26, 2010 12:12 am

Zairal

♡ ♡ ♡

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:48 am

Posts: 18

NOOOOOOO!

Hahaha, you win! XDDDD

More art like my avatar at http://jellyprince.com~~

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Fri Feb 26, 2010 7:28 am

ace_attorney_ali

The Magatama of Truth!

Gender: Female

Location: Somewhere over the rainbow.

Rank: Desk Jockey

Joined: Mon Oct 26, 2009 8:02 am

Posts: 134

Zairal wrote:

NOOOOOOO!

Hahaha, you win! XDDDD

Yay! Thanks! You now can't deny it, your work is brilliant! :edgy:

I wish I could paint or even draw. I am hopeless at art. :sadshoe:

Signature thanks to the brilliant SnowWright (thank you so much!)

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Fri Feb 26, 2010 9:49 am

Essa_L_M.E

What the Devil is going on here?

Gender: Female

Location: Sydney, Australia

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Mon Jun 01, 2009 10:18 am

Posts: 905

You're art is absolutly amazing. I completly agree with ali. His expression is perfect. He looks ruthless. I love how you did the ruffles too.

~

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Fri Feb 26, 2010 4:05 pm

~Sharon~

I want to know

Gender: None specified

Location: In the darkness shadows talking manipulator

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Fri Feb 26, 2010 3:32 pm

Posts: 12

This very well done, incredible I love it! = D O_O OMG!!

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Fri Feb 26, 2010 7:46 pm

Bad Player

1000% Knight

Gender: Male

Rank: Moderators

Joined: Tue Jun 17, 2008 2:06 pm

Posts: 6932

I can't believe you'd go and compare yourself to Larry! I mean, he doesn't hold a candle next to you...

Credit to Evolina for the sig+avatar!

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim!

Sat Feb 27, 2010 7:02 am

Zairal

♡ ♡ ♡

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:48 am

Posts: 18

Essa: D'aww, thanks! I'm glad you like his expression, lol. I had trouble with it... XD;;;
Sharon: Thank you!
Bananamana: HAHA maybe I'm just hoping someone will offer me a career as the Steel Samurai hot dog seller. *wink wink*

More art like my avatar at http://jellyprince.com~~

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim! (new sketches up!)

Sun Feb 28, 2010 2:54 pm

Zairal

♡ ♡ ♡

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:48 am

Posts: 18

New sketches up~~!

More art like my avatar at http://jellyprince.com~~

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim! (new sketches up!)

Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:55 am

ace_attorney_ali

The Magatama of Truth!

Gender: Female

Location: Somewhere over the rainbow.

Rank: Desk Jockey

Joined: Mon Oct 26, 2009 8:02 am

Posts: 134

Once again, these are brilliant! I love the first one of Edgy and Franziska! The ice skating one is fantasic aswell. Damn! Why are you so good?! *wink* Keep up the good work!

Signature thanks to the brilliant SnowWright (thank you so much!)

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim! (new sketches up!)

Mon Mar 01, 2010 8:21 am

RoundedEdge

Ace Fangirl

Gender: Female

Location: Under your porch, because I love you

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Sat Sep 26, 2009 6:00 am

Posts: 920

Is that Edgeworth... figure-skating? I think I love you for that.

My Fanart

My DeviantART

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim! (new sketches up!)

Mon Mar 01, 2010 11:03 am

Essa_L_M.E

What the Devil is going on here?

Gender: Female

Location: Sydney, Australia

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Mon Jun 01, 2009 10:18 am

Posts: 905

ZOMG Edgey figure skating. Winter Olympics inspired?
Bratsworth and Mini-Franny are cute. Ill say it again. Your work is amazing. ^^

~

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim! (new sketches up!)

Mon Mar 01, 2010 3:00 pm

Zairal

♡ ♡ ♡

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:48 am

Posts: 18

Yeah, hahaha. It was originally for someone on LJ, but it was so fitting I thought I'd post it here too. I'm working on the colored version right now. XD

Thanks for all the nice compliments, you guys! <3 <3 <3

More art like my avatar at http://jellyprince.com~~

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim! (new sketches up!)

Thu Mar 04, 2010 7:42 pm

Suppi

Ace Procastinator

Gender: Female

Location: U.K

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Wed Mar 03, 2010 11:11 am

Posts: 4

I'm in love with your artstyle ^_^
You paint wonderfully and your sketches have really cool poses and alot of character.
OOh skating Edgey lol

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim! (new sketches up!)

Sun Mar 07, 2010 1:11 am

Zairal

♡ ♡ ♡

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:48 am

Posts: 18

Thank you~~! <3

Haha, yeah! I'm glad you could tell who he was, though, without seeing his face/hair. I guess the cravat kinda gives it away... XD

More art like my avatar at http://jellyprince.com~~

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim! (new sketches up!)

Sun Mar 07, 2010 5:21 pm

Perrydotto

What do you see behind the mask?

Gender: Female

Location: Germany

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Mar 13, 2008 11:09 pm

Posts: 2431

Figureskating Edgeworth rocks my socks. XD

I has art! - I has graphics! - EBA Fanmeme!! Check it out! - One of Arkillian's kids :)

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim! (new sketches up!)

Sun Mar 07, 2010 5:35 pm

Neko paul

Ace otkau

Gender: Male

Location: Scotland

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Tue Mar 02, 2010 9:56 am

Posts: 34

your relay good :godot:

me: I'm board
My Dad: Your the chairman of the board
me: oh haha

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim! (new sketches up!)

Sun Mar 07, 2010 10:28 pm

MoronSonOfBoron

e × e = e²

Gender: Male

Location: God Less America

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 8:17 pm

Posts: 2289

But where are the flying nuns?

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim! (new sketches up!)

Tue Mar 09, 2010 3:30 am

arcane-phoenix

Meep? :<

Gender: Female

Location: The middle of nowhere

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Sun Jan 24, 2010 6:37 pm

Posts: 170

Oh my. Your art is absolutely gorgeous! <3

You're incredibly good with both anatomy and poses in your work. I'm in love with figure skating Edgey just for how amazing the pose is. XD Great work with the details, too; I like what you did with Edgeworth and Franziska's outfits in the picture of them when they were younger.

Gotta love Cammy, too. You pulled off her expressions really well. :shoe:

deviantART

Re: I'm the next Laurice Deauxnim! (new sketches up!)

Sat Mar 13, 2010 12:23 am

Leesers

Gender: Female

Location: Pittsburgh

Rank: Medium-in-training

Joined: Tue Sep 30, 2008 10:50 pm

Posts: 405

Your style is absolutely stunning *_* There's such fluidity and motion in all of the figures you draw; it makes seeing your pencil work a delight. I also can't stop giggling at Miles ice skating X3 Maybe it's because I played ice hockey growing up, but him skating is just a wonderful thought. Beautiful, beautiful work. I can't wait to see more from you.

.: Illustration Portfolio | Cosplay Account | Fanart Blog :.